2018浙江高考讀后續(xù)寫構(gòu)思研討(第三課時(shí)新)

2018浙江高考讀后續(xù)寫研究1.研讀350詞短文（一節(jié)課）2.研讀范文相關(guān)素材（一節(jié)課）3.研討兩段的內(nèi)容（一節(jié)課）（馬兒受驚后）1.馬兒受驚，會(huì)做出什么動(dòng)作？受驚嘶鳴Version3.Para1shoutinterror/frightletoutaterrified/frightened/scaredshout狂奔runlikecrazy/madrunwildly馬兒發(fā)出受驚的叫聲，狂奔起來(lái)。Myhorseshoutedinfright,_______

wildly.running

運(yùn)用非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞2.馬兒狂奔，我會(huì)做什么？心情如何？Ihuggeditsnecktightly,lookedbackatmydadrepeatedlyandscreamedforhelpdesperately.Version3.Para11)抱住馬脖子hugtheneckofthehorse抱緊馬脖子hugitsneck

tightly2)回頭看爸爸lookbackatmydad頻頻地回頭看爸爸lookbackatmydadrepeatedly3)大聲呼救scream/yell/cry/shoutforhelp我抱緊馬脖子，頻頻地回頭看爸爸，拼命地大聲呼救。拼命地大聲呼救scream

forhelpdesperately描寫具體動(dòng)作及心情3.我被受驚的馬帶著跑，父親會(huì)做什么？說(shuō)什么？怎么說(shuō)?快速追趕Version3.Para1“抓緊繩子！保持冷靜！”爸爸大聲喊道，并快速追趕我。speed/racetocatchupwithme抓緊繩子！Holdonto/Grasptherope!Don’tletgooftherope!保持冷靜！Keep/Stay/Remaincalm!Calm/Cooldown!大聲喊道shout/cry/yell/“Grasptherope!Staycalm!”mydadyelledandracedtocatchupwithme.有簡(jiǎn)短的對(duì)話4.聽(tīng)到爸爸的吩咐，我會(huì)怎么做？Ifollowedwhathetoldmetodo.Ididashetoldmeto.Version3.Para1

我按照爸爸說(shuō)的做。Ifollowedhisinstructions.一句多譯讓我松了一口氣的是，馬兒放慢了速度，最終停了下來(lái)。Tomyrelief,thehorsesloweddownandfinallycametoastop.Version3.Para15.馬兒最終會(huì)怎么做？我什么心情？放慢速度，最終停下來(lái)slowdownandfinallycometoastop松了一口氣toone'srelief有心理活動(dòng)描寫6.我和爸爸團(tuán)聚時(shí)，發(fā)現(xiàn)什么問(wèn)題？OnlywhenDadandIgotreuniteddidwerealizewehadgotoffthetrack.NotuntilDadandIgotreuniteddidwerealizewehadgotoffthetrack.ItwasnotuntilDadandIgotreunitedthatwerealizedwegotoffthetrack.Version3.Para1偏離路線run/get/go/rideoffthetrack我和爸爸團(tuán)聚時(shí)，才發(fā)現(xiàn)我們已經(jīng)偏離了路線。(Only...,Notuntil...,Itwasnotuntil..)一句多譯；套用句型團(tuán)聚gettogether/getreunited/gatherSuddenlyalittlerabbitjumpedoutinfrontofmyhorse.Myhorseletoutascaredshout,runninglikecrazy.Ihuggeditsnecktightly,lookedbackatmydadrepeatedlyandscreamedforhelpdesperately.“Grasptherope!Staycalm!”mydadyelledandracedtocatchupwithme.Ididashetoldmeto.Tomyrelief,thehorsesloweddownandfinallycametoastop.NotuntilDadandIgotreuniteddidwerealizewehadrunoffthetrack.（77詞）Version3Para1A.Bythedimmoonlight,thetreesinsightwereghostly

figures,withleaveswavinglikehundredsoftinyhands.B.Thenightcamequietlywithcoolnessandsilence.C.Themoonwatchedfromtheskybehindthecloudsasthestarstwinkledtheireyeswithcuriosity.D.Whenthedarknessenvelopedthemountain,thecoldwindbegantocreepintomybones.E.Isawthatthesnowwasfalling,flakesdancinginthewind.F.Theforestwasadarkmazewhereitseemedimpossibletofindawayout.選取適合的環(huán)境描寫Version3.Para2Mythroattightenedandmykneesweakened.Version3.Para2我喉頭發(fā)緊，膝蓋發(fā)軟。描述而非告訴有心理活動(dòng)描寫Myheartbeatviolentlyandmybloodfroze.我心跳加快，全身冰涼。Mybodystiffenedandmythroattightened.我身體僵硬，喉頭發(fā)緊。Iwasscared.3.我害怕，爸爸會(huì)做些什么，說(shuō)些什么？Version3.Para2察覺(jué)到我的害怕(senseone'sfear)，爸爸堅(jiān)定地說(shuō)道：“我們會(huì)找到一條回去的路！”。Sensingmyfear,mydadsaidfirmly,“Wewillfindawayback!”有簡(jiǎn)短的對(duì)話4.我們琢磨往哪里走，我們聽(tīng)到了什么？Wewerewonderingwheretogowhenaslightsoundofflowingwatercaughtourattention.Version3.Para2我們正在琢磨往哪里走，突然微弱的流水聲(a______soundofflowingwater)引起了我們的注意。套用句型slight5.聽(tīng)到水聲，我們會(huì)想到什么？我們突然想到保羅叔叔農(nóng)莊旁邊有條小河。Version3.Para2套用句型Itoccurredto/struck/hitusthattherelayarivernearUnclePaul'sfarmhouse.6.我們會(huì)怎么做，結(jié)果怎樣？

Wespedinthedirectionofthesound,andfoundtheriver,whichfinallyledushome.Version3.Para2高級(jí)語(yǔ)法：定語(yǔ)從句我們朝聲音的方向疾馳，找到了那條河，它最終帶我們回到了家。雖然我又累又餓，我覺(jué)著這次騎行給人印象深刻的。ExhaustedandstarvedasIwas,Ifoundtherideimpressive.Version3.Para2套用句型7.回到農(nóng)場(chǎng)，我什么感覺(jué)？我覺(jué)著這次騎行怎么樣？Wehadnoideawherewewereanditgotdark.Thetreesinsightwereghostlyfigures,withleaveswavingliketinyhands.Myheartbeatviolentlyandmybloodfroze.Sensingmyfear,mydadsaidfirmly,“Wewillfindawayback!”Wewerewonderingwheretogowhenaslightsoundofflowingwatercaughtourattention.Itstruckusthatt