2025屆高考英語二輪復(fù)習(xí)專項解密23書面表達之應(yīng)用文含解析VIP

解密23書面表達之應(yīng)用文序號題型真題Part1解密高考考點綜述備考建議Part2對點解密考點精準說1...真題對點析1...對點模擬練1...Part3強化集訓(xùn)真題模測、典題模測Part1解密高考【考點綜述】書面表達應(yīng)用文是歷年高考英語的重點主觀測試題之一，它有利于考查學(xué)生運用英語語言學(xué)問的綜合實力，這種綜合實力包括從單詞拼法、詞語搭配、詞法結(jié)構(gòu)到語法，從遣詞造句、把握要領(lǐng)、謀篇布局到修辭風格等。該題在英語卷中占25分，約占全卷分值17%，是重要題型。而在聽、說、讀、寫四項技能中，“寫”是最令學(xué)生頭疼的，有些學(xué)生對書面表達題手足無措，無從下手。因此，在中學(xué)階段尤其是在高三備考階段的英語教學(xué)中，如何進行有針對性的強化訓(xùn)練和學(xué)法指導(dǎo)，培育學(xué)生的英語書面表達實力是極為重要的。【備考建議】1．審題 動筆之前，必需細致審題，分析命題意圖。有的考生生怕時間不夠，急于成文，不細致審題，結(jié)果寫出的文章抓不住重點，雜亂無章，缺乏邏輯性。其實審題的過程是一個思索加工的過程，并不是奢侈時間。在審題的過程中，考生可以依據(jù)題目確定文章體裁，考慮文章結(jié)構(gòu)，內(nèi)容。把與題目有關(guān)的材料分析、整理加以取舍，這樣初步形成這篇文章的大致框架，這在很大程度上關(guān)系到整篇文章的成敗。2．擬提綱抓要點，列提綱。依據(jù)格式要求和內(nèi)容提示，分清主次，理順關(guān)系，抓住要點，列出提綱。因考試時間有限，宜用簡易英文提綱。(1)文章的主要要點要有邏輯地結(jié)合起來，使其結(jié)構(gòu)嚴謹，內(nèi)容連貫，層次分明，分好段落，設(shè)計好文章的開頭和結(jié)尾。同時要有意在句子之間運用一些過渡性詞語(比如表示因果、條件、時間等邏輯關(guān)系的詞匯或結(jié)構(gòu))。高考高分作文的共性就是有效地運用了語句間的連接成分，使全文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，意思連貫，給人以一揮而就之感。恰當?shù)剡\用過渡詞可以使文章結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，過渡自然，避負脫節(jié)現(xiàn)象。(2)語言表達。新的評分標準激勵學(xué)生盡量運用較困難的結(jié)構(gòu)和高級詞匯。語言要精確，長短句結(jié)合。學(xué)著運用一些高級詞匯，為文章增色。評價一篇文章的好壞，一條重要的原則就是“上下文連貫”，要讓評卷者有一種通篇流暢、一揮而就的感覺?？刹杉{下列策略：①運用高級語法與句型，如：名詞性從句，分詞作狀語和定語，還有如不定式、強調(diào)句、感嘆句、倒裝句。常見詞的復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)，如“with+復(fù)合賓語結(jié)構(gòu)”等等，這些形式來提高文章的檔次，寫出亮點句子。②運用過渡性詞匯，增加文章的邏輯性與連貫性。因為過度詞可使文章結(jié)構(gòu)更緊湊，上下文更連貫，邏輯性、可讀性更強。比如常見的過渡性詞語有表列舉的first，second，third，next，then等等；表因果的becauseof，thanksto等。③為了避開重復(fù)和連接上下文，多用指代詞。對于出現(xiàn)過的非關(guān)鍵次和短語，常用指代詞來代替，保持文章的簡潔，使文章跟緊湊。3．修改 寫完之后，肯定要細致細致地修改。可遵循下列修改校對的方法：(1)檢查格式，內(nèi)容要點。(2)檢查句子時態(tài)、語態(tài)是否正確，結(jié)構(gòu)是否完整。(3)檢查大小寫、單詞拼法是否正確，書寫要工整細致。通過這樣的檢查過程，能夠最大程度的削減錯誤的發(fā)生，從而削減人為失分。Part2對點解密【真題對點析】1（2024?全國卷3）假定你是李華，你和同學(xué)依據(jù)英語課文改編了一個短劇。給外教MissEvans寫封郵件，請她幫忙指導(dǎo)。郵件內(nèi)容包括:1.劇情簡介；2.指導(dǎo)內(nèi)容；3.商定時間地點。留意:1.詞數(shù)100左右;2.結(jié)束語已為你寫好?！敬鸢浮緿earMissEvans,Howiseverythinggoing!Iamwritinginsinceritytoaskyouafavorregardingaplayweadaptedaccordingtothetextbook.We’dliketocombineyourculturewithoursbyadaptingtheclassicnovelTheSteamboatforashortEnglishplay.Theplayissetonabigstormaftermidnight,ontheraftdowntherivernavigation,weseeasteamboatthatisgoingtosink.Wesavedascaredboy.However,theadaptionisquiteachallenge.HavingwrittentheEnglishscript,wedon’twantanythinginappropriatetospoiltheplay.Sowouldyoupleasesparesometimetoreviewthedraftscriptattachedtothisemailandmakenecessarychanges?Ifitisconvenient,mayIpayyouavisitatyourofficenextTuesdaytogiveyoumoredetails?Givenyourbusyschedule,I’dbeveryappreciativeifyouoffertogivesomeprofessionaladvice.Lookforwardtoyourearlyreply.Bestregards!Yourstruly,LiHua【解析】本篇書面表達屬于應(yīng)用文，要求考生寫一封郵件，懇求外教MissEvans對于《theSteamboat》改編短劇的支持。【詳解】第一步：審題體裁：應(yīng)用文時態(tài)：依據(jù)提示，時態(tài)應(yīng)為一般現(xiàn)在時，一般過去時和一般將來時。結(jié)構(gòu)：總分總法第一段說明寫這封郵件目的；其次段具體說明英語戲劇的劇情介紹和指導(dǎo)內(nèi)容細微環(huán)節(jié)問題；第三段表達感謝，并期盼早日得到回復(fù)。其次步:列提綱（重點詞組）writeto；accordingto；combine；adaption；challenge；attachedto；convenient第三步：連詞成句依據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進行遣詞造句，留意主謂一樣和時態(tài)問題。第四步：連句成篇（連接詞）連句成文，留意運用恰當?shù)倪B詞進行句子之間的連接與過渡，書寫肯定要規(guī)范清楚。第五步：潤色修改【點睛】范文內(nèi)容完整，要點全面，語言規(guī)范，語篇連貫，詞數(shù)適當，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系。作者在范文中運用了較多主從復(fù)合句，如：Ifitisconvenient,mayIpayyouavisitatyourofficenextTuesdaytogiveyoumoredetails?這句話運用了if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語從句。全文中沒有中國式英語的句式，顯示了很高的駕馭英語的實力。另外，文章思路清楚、層次分明，上下句轉(zhuǎn)換自然，為文章增色添彩?！緦c模擬練】1你是李華，你校學(xué)生會即將組織一次徒步活動，已在校內(nèi)網(wǎng)發(fā)布方案，征求師生的修改看法。你須要寫一封郵件，包含以下兩點:1.提出你覺得須要改進的地方；2.須要改進的緣由。徒步活動主題:發(fā)覺重慶時間:5月1日下午2點路途:從人民大禮堂(theGreatHallofthePeople)到解放碑、(LiberationMonument),全程徒步。留意:1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.可適當增加細微環(huán)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3.開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。DearSir/Madam,_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourssincerely,LiHua【范文】DearSir/Madam,I’mreallyexcitedtohearthatahikingactivityfromtheGreatHallofthePeopletotheLiberationMonumentisgoingtobeheldontheLaborDayholiday.However,theremaybefurtherimprovementoftheschemeyou’vepostedonthecampuswebsite,asI’dliketopointout.Firstofall,thehikeneedstobeplannedinmoredetailsastheinformationreleasedonlineappearstobetoogeneral.Asparticipants,weneedtoknowhowlongthehikewilllast.Inthemeantime,wearewillingtohaveaclearerpictureofsecurityprecautionsandnecessarymedicalsupportfortheactivity.Onlybydoingsoareyoulikelytomakeitasuccess.What’smore,Isuggestthehikebemoresuitedtothetheme“DiscoverChongqing”throughadditionalactivities.IproposeanintroductionofthearchitectureonChaotianmenSquare.Byappreciatingtheartisticstyleofthelandmark,wecangainadeeperinsightintotheprosperityofourcity.Allinall,ifthehikeisorganizedinmoredetailsandinamoresupportiveway,itissuretosucceed.Ihopethatmyvoiceabovecanbeheardandconsideredandwishtheactivityagreatsuccess.Yourssincerely,LiHua【解析】【分析】本篇書面表達屬于應(yīng)用文，要求李華寫一封郵件，對徒步活動方案提出修改看法?！驹斀狻康谝徊剑簩忣}體裁：建議信人稱：第一人稱時態(tài)：一般將來時；一般現(xiàn)在時要點：1.聽說學(xué)校徒步方案，指出有待改進。2.需改進的地方和具體緣由。其次部列要點寫提綱Para.1beexcitedtohearthat…;isgoingtobeheld;furtherimprovement;postonthecampuswebsitePara.2planindetails;haveaclearerpictureofsth;securityprecautions;medicalsupport;proposeanintroductionofsth;gainadeeperinsightintosthPara.3inamoresupportiveway;besuretosucceed;第三步連詞成句1.I’mreallyexcitedtohearthatahikingactivityfromtheGreatHallofthePeopletotheLiberationMonumentisgoingtobeheldontheLaborDayholiday.2.Theremaybefurtherimprovementoftheschemeyou’vepostedonthecampuswebsite.3.Thehikeneedstobeplannedinmoredetailsastheinformationreleasedonlineappearstobetoogeneral.4.Weneedtoknowhowlongthehikewilllast.5.Wearewillingtohaveaclearerpictureofsecurityprecautionsandnecessarymedicalsupportfortheactivity.6.Isuggestthehikebemoresuitedtothetheme“DiscoverChongqing”throughadditionalactivities.IproposeanintroductionofthearchitectureonChaotianmenSquare.7.Whenweappreciatetheartisticstyleofthelandmark,wecangainadeeperinsightintotheprosperityofourcity.8.Ifthehikeisorganizedinmoredetailsandinamoresupportiveway,itissuretosucceed.9.Ihopethatmyvoiceabovecanbeheardandconsideredandwishtheactivityagreatsuccess.第四步潤色提高1.添加關(guān)聯(lián)表達However;Firstofall;Inthemeantime;What’smore;Allinall2.句式升級However,theremaybefurtherimprovementoftheschemeyou’vepostedonthecampuswebsite,asI’dliketopointout.Asparticipants,weneedtoknowhowlongthehikewilllast.Onlybydoingsoareyoulikelytomakeitasuccess.Byappreciatingtheartisticstyleofthelandmark,wecangainadeeperinsightintotheprosperityofourcity.第四步美麗書寫【點睛】范文內(nèi)容完整，要點全面，語言規(guī)范，語篇連貫，詞數(shù)適當，分段合理。本文句式運用敏捷，運用了種句式。比如運用了定語從句However,theremaybefurtherimprovementoftheschemeyou’vepostedonthecampuswebsite,asI’dliketopointout.運用了only的倒裝句作小結(jié)：Onlybydoingsoareyoulikelytomakeitasuccess.運用介詞短語，讓文章更加連貫簡潔：Byappreciatingtheartisticstyleofthelandmark,wecangainadeeperinsightintotheprosperityofourcity.【真題對點析】2【2024·浙江】假定你是李華，常常幫助你學(xué)習(xí)英語的摯友Alex即將返回自己的國家。請給他寫一封郵件，內(nèi)容包括:1.表示感謝；2.回顧Alex對你的幫助；3.臨別祝愿。留意:1.詞數(shù)80左右；2可適當增加細微環(huán)節(jié)，以使行文連貫?！緟⒖挤段摹緿earAlex,Hearingthatyouwillreturntoyourcountrysoon,Ifeelabitupset.Butmeanwhile,IwanttosendmysinceregratitudeforyourkindhelpwithmyEnglishlearning.IstillrememberwhatyouhavedevotedtoimprovemyoralEnglishandEnglishwriting.Besides,youalsofranklysharedyourlearningexperiencewithme.Additionally,withoutyourhelp,IwouldnothavebeenatopstudentinEnglishandwouldnothavewontheEnglishSpeechContest.Allinall,wordsfailtoexpressmythankfulnesstoyou.Idohopethatyouwillhaveabrightfutureandthatourfriendshipwilllastforever!Yours,LiHua【思路點撥】本文是郵件，主題是感謝信，依據(jù)寫作提示，考生應(yīng)用英語給Alex寫一封郵件，感謝他的幫助。寫作內(nèi)容主要包括三項：1．表達感謝；2．回顧Alex的幫助；3．臨別祝愿。這封郵件由三段組成：第一段陳述寫信的目的；其次段陳述寫信的理由；最終一段為結(jié)束語。 【對點模擬練】2假如你是李華，上周在外教Mr.Jackson的口語課上運用手機被老師發(fā)覺，手機被收走。請給外教寫一封致歉信，內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括以下要點：1.表示歉意；2.說明上課運用手機的緣由；3.提出自己的懇求并適當表態(tài)。留意：可適當添加細微環(huán)節(jié)使文章連貫；字數(shù)100左右；答案【參考范文】DearMr.Jackson,I’mreallysorryaboutmyusingthemobilephoneinyourlecturelastweek.Pleaseacceptmyheart-feltapologyforbeingsorudeastudent.Iknowanywordmightsoundamade-upexcuse.ButIdidn’tusethemobilephonefornoreason.IwastryingtoapplytosomeAmericanuniversitieslastweekandthatday,Igotanofferandtheyneededmyfurtherinformationimmediately.Therefore,IhadnootherchoicebuttotrysendingthematextmessageinclassandthatwasexactlywhatIwasdoingwhenyoudiscovered.Ipromiseitwillneverhappenagain.ButIdoneedmyphonebacktogetintouchwithothers.Willyoubekindenoughtogiveitbacktome?Isincerelyhopeyoucanacceptmyapologyandunderstandmysituation.Yours,LiHua【寫作指導(dǎo)】這是一篇應(yīng)用文，要求寫一封致歉信。寫作要求只給出了大體的框架，因此具有很大的開放性。致歉信主要是向收信人表明歉意，懇求對方諒解自己的過失。寫致歉信時要明確不是找借口為自己辯護，而是承認自己的過錯并提出彌補過錯的具體建議和方法。此類信件的關(guān)鍵是用詞精確，表達真誠。在寫作時可以依據(jù)提示的要求依據(jù)三段式的模式布局謀篇。首段：重述自己做錯的事，表示歉意。主體段：說明致歉的具體緣由，應(yīng)盡量具體描述做錯事的經(jīng)過。寫信時應(yīng)當留意在申述理由時要照看讀信人的感受，切忌強詞奪理。結(jié)尾段：再次表明承認錯誤的看法，懇求收信人的諒解。也可以提出補救的方法?！菊骖}對點析】3（2024·天津卷）假設(shè)你是晨光中學(xué)的機器人愛好小組組長李津，你的美國摯友Chris就讀于天津某國際學(xué)校，他普在機器人技能競賽中獲獎。你準備邀請他加入你的團隊，參與即將于7月底在天津?qū)嵭械氖澜缜嗌賹W(xué)機器人技能競賽。請依據(jù)以下提示代表愛好小組給他寫一封電子郵件。學(xué)科%網(wǎng)（1）競賽的時間、地點；（2）邀請他的緣由；（3）訓(xùn)練支配將發(fā)送其郵箱，請他提出建議。留意：（1）詞數(shù)不少于100；（2）可適當加入細微環(huán)節(jié)，使內(nèi)容充溢、行文連貫；（3）開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。參考詞匯：世界青少年機器人技能競賽theWorldAdolescentRoboticsCompetitionDearChris,Ihavegoodnewstotellyou.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________I’mlookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiJin【參考范文1】DearChris,

Ihavegoodnewstotellyou.TheWorldAdolescentRoboticscompetitionwillbeheldinTianjinattheendofJulysoastopromotethedevelopmentofrobotics.

WhatIwouldliketostressisthatitislookingfornewmembersatthismoment.Iwouldliketoinviteyoutotakepartinit,sinceIknowyou'vejustwonfirstprizeintheRoboticscompetitionheldinyourinstituteandhaveshowngreattalentindesigningrobotics.Therefore,youarethemostsuitableperson,Isuppose.Thetrainingschedule,inadditiontoregulartraining,includesjoininginavarietyofactivities,suchasparticipatinginsomenationalcompetitions.Iwillsenditsdetailstoyoubye-mail.Iwouldappreciateitifyougiveussomeadviceonhowtomakeitperfect.I'mlookingforwardtoyourreply.

Yours,LiJin

【參考范文2】DearChris,Ihavegoodnewstotellyou.TheWorldAdolescentRoboticsCompetitionwillbeheldinTianjinattheendofJuly.HearingthatyouoncetookpartinaRoboticsSkillsCompetitionandwonanaward,I,onbehalfoftheRoboticsHobbyGroup,intendtoinviteyoutojoinourteaminthecomingcompetition.Iamsurethatyourinvolvementwillnotonlyhelpusinwinningtheawardbutalsoenhancethefriendshipbetweenourtwoschools.WiththisemailIalsosendyouourtrainingplan,aboutwhichIwishtogetyouradvicebecauseyouaremoreexperiencedthanus.Wesincerelyhopethatwecanparticipateinthecompetitionasteampartners.I’mlookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiJin

【解析】試題分析：本篇書面要求寫一封電子郵件。寫作的時候要留意以下幾點：一、動筆前，肯定要細致分析要點，理解要點要表達的含義，不能遺漏要點，跑題偏題。內(nèi)容要點包括：1.代表愛好小組發(fā)出邀請；2.介紹競賽的時間、地點等支配；3.說明邀請他的緣由，包括Chris曾在機器人技能競賽中獲獎；4．告知他訓(xùn)練支配將發(fā)送其郵箱，請他提出建議。二、寫作時留意精確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量運用自己熟識的單詞句式，同時也要留意運用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次?！緦c模擬練】3假定你是李華，是某外語學(xué)校的學(xué)生會主席。你們學(xué)校的啦啦操社團(CheerleadingClub)正在招募(recruit)新成員。請你依據(jù)以下要點提示給交換生Lisa寫一封電子郵件，邀請她加入。內(nèi)容包括：1.擬開展的活動；2.報名方式和截止日期。留意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.可以適當增加細微環(huán)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。答案DearLisa,HaveyouheardthattheCheerleadingClubofourschoolisrecruitingnewmembers?Iknowyouareinterestedinit.Iamwritingtoinviteyoutojoinit.Thecluboffersavarietyofactivities.NotonlydothemembersreceiveprofessionaltraininginthegymeveryFriday,theywillalsoputonperformancesattheschoolsportsmeeting.Besides,theywillcompeteintheStudentTalentShowinourcityinNovember.Iamsureitwillbegreat.Ifyouwanttojoin,pleasesignupintheschoolofficeorsendyourapplicationtocheerleadingsociety@163beforenextSunday.Yours,【真題對點析】4【2024·全國I】假定你是李華，暑假在倫敦學(xué)習(xí)，得知當?shù)孛佬g(shù)館要劇版中國畫展。請寫一封信申請做志愿者，內(nèi)容包括:1.寫信目的:2.個人優(yōu)勢:3.能做的事情。留意:1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.可以適當增加細微環(huán)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3.結(jié)束語已為你寫好。答案【參考范文】DearSirorMadam,IamLiHua,a17-year-oldteenagerstudyinginLondon.LearningthatavolunteerisneededforanexhibitionofChinesetraditionalpainting,Iamwritingtoapplyforit.Ihavesomeadvantagesforthejob.Firstofall,havinglivedinChinaforyearsandlearntEnglishsinceIwasachild,IhaveagoodcommandofbothEnglishandChinese,whichisbeneficialwhenintroducingChinesepaintingstoforeignfriends.Besides,becauseofmyfamiliaritywithChinesepaintingculture,Icangetforeignersandthelocalstoknowmoreaboutit.Lastbutnotleast,throughmyefforts,Ibelieve,IcanstrengthenthefriendshipbetweenChinaandEngland.Iwouldappreciateitifthiswonderfulchancewouldbeofferedtome.Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.Yours,LiHua【解析】本篇書面表達屬于應(yīng)用文，申請信?！舅悸伏c撥】無論是在學(xué)校還是今后讀高校再到走上工作崗位，寫好一份申請都是你必不行少的一項技能。這種形式的寫作，學(xué)生需結(jié)合自身優(yōu)勢，考生成文時應(yīng)留意：1.要點要齊全：(1)提出寫信的目的——申請做這個志愿者；(2)提出個人優(yōu)勢；(3)表達出自己能做的事情；2.時態(tài)：以一般現(xiàn)在時為主；3.人稱：其次人稱為主；4.留意恰當運用一些連詞，使文章自然、流暢；5.適當運用一些高級句型和詞匯以提高作文檔次?！緦c模擬練】4假定你是李華，英國中學(xué)生Peter在中國研學(xué)時曾暫住你家。他回國后給你寄來禮物感謝你的款待，并在信中委婉表示對你家三世同堂感到驚異。請你寫一封回信，內(nèi)容包括：（1）感謝對方贈送的禮物；（2）簡要介紹中國人三世同堂的現(xiàn)象。留意：1.詞數(shù)120左右；2.可以適當增加細微環(huán)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【范文】DearPeter,I'msodelightedtoreceiveyourletterandknowyouaresafeback.Thankyouforsendingmethebook,whichisreallyafeastofwesternculture.Ienjoyreadingitverymuch.SinceyouseemtobesurprisedatthefactthatinChina,threegenerations—grandparents,parentsandchildren,oftenlivetogether,itwillbemypleasuretoexplainthisphenomenontoyou.Asourlivingconditionsimprove,it'sunnecessaryforseveralgenerationstolivetogetheranymore.However,manyChinesestilltendtolivetogetherbecausetheycanhelpandcareforeachother.Besides,bylivingtogether,allfamilymemberscandevelopastrongsenseofbelonging,aswellasstrengthentheiremotionalbonds.HopetoseeyouinChinaagain.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiHua【解析】【分析】本篇書面表達屬于應(yīng)用文，要求考生回一封感謝信，并介紹中國人三世同堂的現(xiàn)象。【詳解】第一步：審題結(jié)構(gòu)：三段式時態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時其次步：列提綱第一段：問候并表達感謝其次段：介紹三世同堂第三段：祝愿并期盼下次見面第三步：列舉重點短語和句型receiveyourletter；afeastofwesternculture；besurprisedat；astrongsenseofbelonging；aswellas；strengthentheiremotionalbonds第四步：連句成篇I'msodelightedtoreceiveyourletterandknowyouaresafeback.Thankyouforsendingmethebook,whichisreallyafeastofwesternculture.SinceyouseemtobesurprisedatthefactthatinChina,threegenerations—grandparents,parentsandchildren,oftenlivetogether.Asourlivingconditionsimprove,it'sunnecessaryforseveralgenerationstolivetogetheranymore.ManyChinesestilltendtolivetogetherbecausetheycanhelpandcareforeachother.Allfamilymemberscandevelopastrongsenseofbelonging,aswellasstrengthentheiremotionalbonds.連句成文，留意運用恰當?shù)倪B詞進行句子之間的連接與過渡，如however,besides等，書寫肯定要規(guī)范清楚，第五步：潤色修改【點睛】范文內(nèi)容完整，要點全面，語言規(guī)范，語篇連貫，詞數(shù)適當，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系。作者在范文中運用了較多主從復(fù)合句，如：Thankyouforsendingmethebook,whichisreallyafeastofwesternculture.此句為非限制性定語從句；However,manyChinesestilltendtolivetogetherbecausetheycanhelpandcareforeachother.這句話運用了because引導(dǎo)的狀語從句。全文中沒有中國式英語的句式，顯示了很高的駕馭英語的實力。另外，文章思路清楚、層次分明，上下句轉(zhuǎn)換自然，為文章增色添彩。Part3強化集訓(xùn)【真題模測】Passage1（2024?全國卷2）上周末，你和同學(xué)參與了一次采摘活動。請你為班級英語角寫一篇短文，介紹這次活動，內(nèi)容包括:1.農(nóng)場狀況；2.采摘過程；3.個人感受留意:1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.題目已為你寫好。題目:MyWeekend________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【范文】MyWeekendOrganizedbythestudentunion,agroupofvolunteerswenttoHopeFarmtohelpthefarmerspickpeacheslastweekend.Thefarmissituatedatthefootofamountain,theskyisblueandtheairisfresh.Wewereattractedbythebeautifulscenery.Therearedifferentkindsoffruittreesaswellasavarietyofanimals.Onarriving,wesawredripepeacheshangingonthetree.Usingbasketsandladders,

Wefirstpickedtheonesthatweremostbeautifulincolor,thenthosethatwereripeandsoft.

Icouldn’twaittotakeabite,andthesweetjuicewentdownmythroat.Iwasgratefulforthisopportunitytogetclosetonature.NotonlywouldIbeabletoexperiencefruitpicking,butIcouldalsofeastonthesweetness!【解析】【詳解】第一步：依據(jù)提示可知，上周末，你和同學(xué)參與了一次采摘活動。請你為班級英語角寫一篇短文，介紹這次活動。內(nèi)容包括：1.農(nóng)場狀況；2.采摘過程；3.個人感受。其次步：依據(jù)寫作要求確定關(guān)鍵詞（組），如：pickpeaches,issituated,beautifulscenery,fruittrees,avarietyofanimals,Usingbasketsandladders,

takeabite,begratefulfor,getclosetonature,feastonthesweetness.第三步：依據(jù)提示和關(guān)鍵詞（組）進行遣詞造句，留意主謂一樣和時態(tài)問題。本文用一般現(xiàn)在時和一般過去時。第四步：連句成文，留意運用恰當?shù)倪B詞進行句子之間的連接和過渡，書寫肯定要規(guī)范清楚，保持整齊美觀的卷面是特別重要的?！军c睛】范文內(nèi)容完整，語言規(guī)范，語篇連貫，詞數(shù)適當。作者在范文中運用了較多高級表達方式，如Organizedbythestudentunion,agroupofvolunteerswenttoHopeFarmtohelpthefarmerspickpeacheslastweekend.和Usingbasketsandladders運用了非謂語動詞；Wefirstpickedtheonesthatweremostbeautifulincolor,thenthosethatwereripeandsoft.

運用了定語從句；NotonlywouldIbeabletoexperiencefruitpicking,butIcouldalsofeastonthesweetness!運用了連詞notonly…but…和倒裝句。全文中沒有中國式英語的句式，顯示了很高的駕馭英語的實力。另外，文章思路清楚，層次分明，上下句轉(zhuǎn)換自然，為文章增色添彩。Passage2(2024·北京卷)假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三學(xué)生李華，你的英國摯友Jim在給你的郵件中提到他對中國文化感愛好，支配明年來北京上高校。他向你詢問相關(guān)信息。請給他回郵件，內(nèi)容包括：(1)表示歡迎；(2)舉薦他上哪所高校；(3)建議他做哪些準備工作。留意：(1).詞數(shù)不少于50；(2).開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。DearJim,____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【寫作指導(dǎo)】本文為提綱式作文，文章要求寫舉薦信，為英國摯友介紹北京的高校。首先可以介紹一下寫作背景（Jim對中國文化感愛好，要來中國學(xué)習(xí)），表達歡迎。然后舉薦一所高校，并簡要介紹舉薦的緣由（如高校的特色，可以學(xué)到什么等）。再次簡潔介紹應(yīng)當做哪方面的準備，如可以提前學(xué)習(xí)漢語，讀點有關(guān)中國傳統(tǒng)文化的書，了解中國的習(xí)俗，讓自己更好地適應(yīng)中國的生活。文章可采納一般現(xiàn)在時，人稱可以運用其次人稱?！痉段摹緿earJim,I’msogladtohearyourfutureeducationplaninBeijinginyourlastletter.FirstIwouldliketoexpressmywarmestwelcometoyouandIamsureyouwillhavethemostunforgettableexperienceduringyourcollegeinBeijing.LearningyourkeeninterestinChineseculture,IsuggestyouapplyforPekingUniversity,oneofthebestuniversitiesinChina.ItsChineseLiteraturemajorisperfectforyouwhereyoucanbecompletelysoakedinChineseprofoundhistoryandrichculture.Asforpreparation,somereadinginadvanceinneededlikeTheStoryoftheStonewhilesomeonlinecoursesofspokenChinesecanbehelpfulforyoutoadaptintotheChineselanguageenvironment.Isincerelyhopeyourdreamwillcometrueandit’smypleasuretoshowyouaroundinBeijingwhenthatdaycomes.Ifyouhavefurtherquestions,pleasefeelfreetoletmeknow.Yours,LiHua【亮點說明】文章中奇妙運用非謂語LearningyourkeeninterestinChineseculture,使句子結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊。運用定語從句ItsChineseLiteraturemajorisperfectforyouwhereyoucanbecompletelysoakedinChineseprofoundhistoryandrichculture.使句子表達更完備；奇妙運用連接詞while引出來中國前的準備，使句子結(jié)構(gòu)對稱。Passage3（2024·天津卷）假設(shè)你是李津，與你以前的外籍老師MrsGreen始終保持聯(lián)系。近日她來信詢問你的近況，請依據(jù)以下提示給她回復(fù)一封郵件。1．簡要介紹自己的學(xué)習(xí)和生活；2．告知你已成為八月底在津舉辦的第十三屆全運會的志愿者，并介紹為此所做的準備(如深化了解天津等)；3．希望她有機會重訪天津。留意：1.詞數(shù)不少于100；2．可適當加入細微環(huán)節(jié)，使內(nèi)容充溢、行文連貫；3．開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。參考詞匯：第十三屆全運會the13thNationalGamesDearMrsGreen，I'msogladtohearfromyou._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours，LiJin【解析】首先，內(nèi)容要點要全，三個要點都要包含：(1)介紹自己的學(xué)習(xí)和生活；(2)告知她你作為第十三屆全運會志愿者所做的準備；(3)希望她重訪天津。其次，要精確并恰當?shù)剡\用詞匯和各種復(fù)合句。留意運用定語從句，非謂語動詞等表達。在行文過程中要留意時態(tài)的正確運用。第三，要留意上下文的連貫和語言的得體。留意運用一些表示連接和轉(zhuǎn)折的詞。最終，要留意一下卷面整齊，書寫工整?！敬鸢浮緿earMrsGreen,__I'msogladtohearfromyou.Inyourlastletter,youaskedmeaboutmystudyandlife.I'mverypleasedtotellyouthatIhavemadegreatprogressinmyspokenEnglishsinceyouleft.Asformylife,Itakeexerciseregularlyanddomoreoutdooractivities,whichbuildsupmybodyandcharacteraswell.IhavegoodnewstotellyouthatIhavebeenchosentobeavolunteerinthecoming13thNationalGamestobeheldinTianjinattheendofAugust.Tobeaqualifiedvolunteer,Imadesomepreparations.Iinterviewedmanypeoplefromallwalksoflife,whichimprovedanddeepenedmyunderstandingofTianjin.IhopeyoucanrevisitTianjinifyouhaveachance.Lookingforwardtoseeingyouagain.Yours，LiJin【典題模測】Passage1假定你是李華，想邀請你的新西蘭摯友Kevin參與你校將要實行的“勞動周”相關(guān)活動。請給他寫封郵件，內(nèi)容包括：1.活動時間；2.活動內(nèi)容（如：校內(nèi)環(huán)境美化、校內(nèi)垃圾分類等）；3.活動意義.參考詞匯：LabourWeek勞動周留意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.可以適當增加細微環(huán)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【范文】DearKevin,IfeelextremelydelightedtoinformyouthatourschoolwillholdsomerelevantactivitiesduringtheupcomingLabourWeek.I’mwritingtoinviteyoutoexperiencethegreatactivities.TheLabourWeekwillstartonJune10thandlastforfivedays,whenwewillholdvariousactivities.Tobeautifyourschool,wewillplanttreesthataredefinitelygoodforourphysicalandmentalwell-being.Moreover,it’sawonderfulideatosortgarbageinaneco-friendlyway,makingourcampuscleanerandmorefascinating.Thereisalsoalaborknowledgecompetitionwhichissorewardingthatwecan’taffordtomissit.Asforthesignificance,wecanbenefitalotundoubtedly.Ourawarenessoflabourcanbedeveloped.Besides,wewilllearntocherishandrespectthefruitsofpeople’swork.Lookingforwardtoyourfavorablereply.Yourssincerely,LiHua【解析】【分析】本篇寫作屬于應(yīng)用文，主要是邀請新西蘭的摯友Kevin參與學(xué)校實行的勞動周活動?！驹斀狻康谝徊剑簩忣}體裁：應(yīng)用文時態(tài)：依據(jù)提示，時態(tài)應(yīng)為一般現(xiàn)在時和一般將來時。結(jié)構(gòu)：總分法?？偡址ㄖ赴阎黝}句作為總說，把支持句作為分說，并以這種方式支配所寫內(nèi)容。寫作要求：1.活動時間；（thetimeofthisactivity）2.活動內(nèi)容（如：校內(nèi)環(huán)境美化、校內(nèi)垃圾分類等）；（thecontentofthisactivity）3.活動意義。（thesignificanceofthisactivity）其次步：列提綱（重點詞組）inform;relevant;upcoming;various;beautify;definitely;physicalandmental;asforthesignificance;undoubtedly;cherish第三步：連詞成句IwanttoinformyouthatourschoolwillholdsomerelevantactivitiesduringtheupcomingLabourWeek.I’mwritingtoinviteyoutoexperiencethegreatactivities.Wewillplanttreesthataredefinitelygoodforourphysicalandmentalwell-being.WewillholdvariousactivitiestosupportourLabourWeek.It’sawonderfulideatosortgarbageinaneco-friendlyway.Sortinggarbagecanmakeourcampuscleanerandmorefascinating.Asforthesignificance,wecanbenefitalotundoubtedly.Ourawarenessoflabourcanbedeveloped.Wewilllearntocherishandrespectthefruitsofpeople’swork.在進行造句的時候肯定要留意時態(tài)和語態(tài)上面的問題。第四步：連句成篇（連接詞）1.文章的結(jié)構(gòu)依次：勞動周具體時間和地點；勞動周的活動內(nèi)容；勞動周的實際意義。2.表并列補充關(guān)系：Whatismore,Besides,Moreover,Furthermore,InadditionAswellas,notonly…but(also),including,連句成文，留意運用恰當?shù)倪B詞進行句子之間的連接與過渡，書寫肯定要規(guī)范清楚.第五步：潤色修改【點睛】范文內(nèi)容完整，要點全面，語言規(guī)范，語篇連貫，詞數(shù)適當，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系。范文開頭IfeelextremelydelightedtoinformyouthatourschoolwillholdsomerelevantactivitiesduringtheupcomingLabourWeek.既運用了一個賓語從句，又開宗明義的點出了寫作的主題和目的。此外范文中形容詞和副詞用得特殊好，比如extremely和definitely等，都能夠表達出作者的情感。還用到了非謂語結(jié)構(gòu)Moreover,it’sawonderfulideatosortgarbageinaneco-friendlyway,makingourcampuscleanerandmorefascinating.文章思路清楚，層次分明，上下句轉(zhuǎn)換自然。為文章增色添彩。Passage2假設(shè)你是某中學(xué)的學(xué)生謝飛，你校國際部將選拔一些學(xué)生志愿者，參與國際部接待學(xué)訪團等外事活動的策劃和組織。你欲參選，請依據(jù)以下提示，寫一篇競選演講稿。*個人優(yōu)勢介紹（如性格，特長等）；*接待學(xué)訪學(xué)生的活動支配（校內(nèi)，校外）；*表達當選的愿望。留意：1.詞數(shù)不少于100；2.請勿提及真實學(xué)校名稱；3.可適當加入細微環(huán)節(jié)，以使內(nèi)容充溢、行文連貫；4.開頭、結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。參考詞匯：競選runfor…;學(xué)訪學(xué)生studentsontheexchangeprogramGoodafternoon,mydearfriends,MynameisXieFei._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________