2025屆高考英語(yǔ)二輪復(fù)習(xí)專項(xiàng)解密23書(shū)面表達(dá)之應(yīng)用文含解析

解密23書(shū)面表達(dá)之應(yīng)用文序號(hào)題型真題Part1解密高考考點(diǎn)綜述備考建議Part2對(duì)點(diǎn)解密考點(diǎn)精準(zhǔn)說(shuō)1...真題對(duì)點(diǎn)析1...對(duì)點(diǎn)模擬練1...Part3強(qiáng)化集訓(xùn)真題模測(cè)、典題模測(cè)Part1解密高考【考點(diǎn)綜述】書(shū)面表達(dá)應(yīng)用文是歷年高考英語(yǔ)的重點(diǎn)主觀測(cè)試題之一，它有利于考查學(xué)生運(yùn)用英語(yǔ)語(yǔ)言學(xué)問(wèn)的綜合實(shí)力，這種綜合實(shí)力包括從單詞拼法、詞語(yǔ)搭配、詞法結(jié)構(gòu)到語(yǔ)法，從遣詞造句、把握要領(lǐng)、謀篇布局到修辭風(fēng)格等。該題在英語(yǔ)卷中占25分，約占全卷分值17%，是重要題型。而在聽(tīng)、說(shuō)、讀、寫(xiě)四項(xiàng)技能中，“寫(xiě)”是最令學(xué)生頭疼的，有些學(xué)生對(duì)書(shū)面表達(dá)題手足無(wú)措，無(wú)從下手。因此，在中學(xué)階段尤其是在高三備考階段的英語(yǔ)教學(xué)中，如何進(jìn)行有針對(duì)性的強(qiáng)化訓(xùn)練和學(xué)法指導(dǎo)，培育學(xué)生的英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達(dá)實(shí)力是極為重要的?！緜淇冀ㄗh】1．審題 動(dòng)筆之前，必需細(xì)致審題，分析命題意圖。有的考生生怕時(shí)間不夠，急于成文，不細(xì)致審題，結(jié)果寫(xiě)出的文章抓不住重點(diǎn)，雜亂無(wú)章，缺乏邏輯性。其實(shí)審題的過(guò)程是一個(gè)思索加工的過(guò)程，并不是奢侈時(shí)間。在審題的過(guò)程中，考生可以依據(jù)題目確定文章體裁，考慮文章結(jié)構(gòu)，內(nèi)容。把與題目有關(guān)的材料分析、整理加以取舍，這樣初步形成這篇文章的大致框架，這在很大程度上關(guān)系到整篇文章的成敗。2．?dāng)M提綱抓要點(diǎn)，列提綱。依據(jù)格式要求和內(nèi)容提示，分清主次，理順關(guān)系，抓住要點(diǎn)，列出提綱。因考試時(shí)間有限，宜用簡(jiǎn)易英文提綱。(1)文章的主要要點(diǎn)要有邏輯地結(jié)合起來(lái)，使其結(jié)構(gòu)嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)，內(nèi)容連貫，層次分明，分好段落，設(shè)計(jì)好文章的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾。同時(shí)要有意在句子之間運(yùn)用一些過(guò)渡性詞語(yǔ)(比如表示因果、條件、時(shí)間等邏輯關(guān)系的詞匯或結(jié)構(gòu))。高考高分作文的共性就是有效地運(yùn)用了語(yǔ)句間的連接成分，使全文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，意思連貫，給人以一揮而就之感。恰當(dāng)?shù)剡\(yùn)用過(guò)渡詞可以使文章結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，過(guò)渡自然，避負(fù)脫節(jié)現(xiàn)象。(2)語(yǔ)言表達(dá)。新的評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)激勵(lì)學(xué)生盡量運(yùn)用較困難的結(jié)構(gòu)和高級(jí)詞匯。語(yǔ)言要精確，長(zhǎng)短句結(jié)合。學(xué)著運(yùn)用一些高級(jí)詞匯，為文章增色。評(píng)價(jià)一篇文章的好壞，一條重要的原則就是“上下文連貫”，要讓評(píng)卷者有一種通篇流暢、一揮而就的感覺(jué)?？刹杉{下列策略：①運(yùn)用高級(jí)語(yǔ)法與句型，如：名詞性從句，分詞作狀語(yǔ)和定語(yǔ)，還有如不定式、強(qiáng)調(diào)句、感嘆句、倒裝句。常見(jiàn)詞的復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)，如“with+復(fù)合賓語(yǔ)結(jié)構(gòu)”等等，這些形式來(lái)提高文章的檔次，寫(xiě)出亮點(diǎn)句子。②運(yùn)用過(guò)渡性詞匯，增加文章的邏輯性與連貫性。因?yàn)檫^(guò)度詞可使文章結(jié)構(gòu)更緊湊，上下文更連貫，邏輯性、可讀性更強(qiáng)。比如常見(jiàn)的過(guò)渡性詞語(yǔ)有表列舉的first，second，third，next，then等等；表因果的becauseof，thanksto等。③為了避開(kāi)重復(fù)和連接上下文，多用指代詞。對(duì)于出現(xiàn)過(guò)的非關(guān)鍵次和短語(yǔ)，常用指代詞來(lái)代替，保持文章的簡(jiǎn)潔，使文章跟緊湊。3．修改 寫(xiě)完之后，肯定要細(xì)致細(xì)致地修改?？勺裱铝行薷男?duì)的方法：(1)檢查格式，內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)。(2)檢查句子時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)是否正確，結(jié)構(gòu)是否完整。(3)檢查大小寫(xiě)、單詞拼法是否正確，書(shū)寫(xiě)要工整細(xì)致。通過(guò)這樣的檢查過(guò)程，能夠最大程度的削減錯(cuò)誤的發(fā)生，從而削減人為失分。Part2對(duì)點(diǎn)解密【真題對(duì)點(diǎn)析】1（2024?全國(guó)卷3）假定你是李華，你和同學(xué)依據(jù)英語(yǔ)課文改編了一個(gè)短劇。給外教MissEvans寫(xiě)封郵件，請(qǐng)她幫忙指導(dǎo)。郵件內(nèi)容包括:1.劇情簡(jiǎn)介；2.指導(dǎo)內(nèi)容；3.商定時(shí)間地點(diǎn)。留意:1.詞數(shù)100左右;2.結(jié)束語(yǔ)已為你寫(xiě)好?！敬鸢浮緿earMissEvans,Howiseverythinggoing!Iamwritinginsinceritytoaskyouafavorregardingaplayweadaptedaccordingtothetextbook.We’dliketocombineyourculturewithoursbyadaptingtheclassicnovelTheSteamboatforashortEnglishplay.Theplayissetonabigstormaftermidnight,ontheraftdowntherivernavigation,weseeasteamboatthatisgoingtosink.Wesavedascaredboy.However,theadaptionisquiteachallenge.HavingwrittentheEnglishscript,wedon’twantanythinginappropriatetospoiltheplay.Sowouldyoupleasesparesometimetoreviewthedraftscriptattachedtothisemailandmakenecessarychanges?Ifitisconvenient,mayIpayyouavisitatyourofficenextTuesdaytogiveyoumoredetails?Givenyourbusyschedule,I’dbeveryappreciativeifyouoffertogivesomeprofessionaladvice.Lookforwardtoyourearlyreply.Bestregards!Yourstruly,LiHua【解析】本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文，要求考生寫(xiě)一封郵件，懇求外教MissEvans對(duì)于《theSteamboat》改編短劇的支持?！驹斀狻康谝徊剑簩忣}體裁：應(yīng)用文時(shí)態(tài)：依據(jù)提示，時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，一般過(guò)去時(shí)和一般將來(lái)時(shí)。結(jié)構(gòu)：總分總法第一段說(shuō)明寫(xiě)這封郵件目的；其次段具體說(shuō)明英語(yǔ)戲劇的劇情介紹和指導(dǎo)內(nèi)容細(xì)微環(huán)節(jié)問(wèn)題；第三段表達(dá)感謝，并期盼早日得到回復(fù)。其次步:列提綱（重點(diǎn)詞組）writeto；accordingto；combine；adaption；challenge；attachedto；convenient第三步：連詞成句依據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進(jìn)行遣詞造句，留意主謂一樣和時(shí)態(tài)問(wèn)題。第四步：連句成篇（連接詞）連句成文，留意運(yùn)用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的連接與過(guò)渡，書(shū)寫(xiě)肯定要規(guī)范清楚。第五步：潤(rùn)色修改【點(diǎn)睛】范文內(nèi)容完整，要點(diǎn)全面，語(yǔ)言規(guī)范，語(yǔ)篇連貫，詞數(shù)適當(dāng)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系。作者在范文中運(yùn)用了較多主從復(fù)合句，如：Ifitisconvenient,mayIpayyouavisitatyourofficenextTuesdaytogiveyoumoredetails?這句話運(yùn)用了if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語(yǔ)從句。全文中沒(méi)有中國(guó)式英語(yǔ)的句式，顯示了很高的駕馭英語(yǔ)的實(shí)力。另外，文章思路清楚、層次分明，上下句轉(zhuǎn)換自然，為文章增色添彩?！緦?duì)點(diǎn)模擬練】1你是李華，你校學(xué)生會(huì)即將組織一次徒步活動(dòng)，已在校內(nèi)網(wǎng)發(fā)布方案，征求師生的修改看法。你須要寫(xiě)一封郵件，包含以下兩點(diǎn):1.提出你覺(jué)得須要改進(jìn)的地方；2.須要改進(jìn)的緣由。徒步活動(dòng)主題:發(fā)覺(jué)重慶時(shí)間:5月1日下午2點(diǎn)路途:從人民大禮堂(theGreatHallofthePeople)到解放碑、(LiberationMonument),全程徒步。留意:1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)微環(huán)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3.開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。DearSir/Madam,_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourssincerely,LiHua【范文】DearSir/Madam,I’mreallyexcitedtohearthatahikingactivityfromtheGreatHallofthePeopletotheLiberationMonumentisgoingtobeheldontheLaborDayholiday.However,theremaybefurtherimprovementoftheschemeyou’vepostedonthecampuswebsite,asI’dliketopointout.Firstofall,thehikeneedstobeplannedinmoredetailsastheinformationreleasedonlineappearstobetoogeneral.Asparticipants,weneedtoknowhowlongthehikewilllast.Inthemeantime,wearewillingtohaveaclearerpictureofsecurityprecautionsandnecessarymedicalsupportfortheactivity.Onlybydoingsoareyoulikelytomakeitasuccess.What’smore,Isuggestthehikebemoresuitedtothetheme“DiscoverChongqing”throughadditionalactivities.IproposeanintroductionofthearchitectureonChaotianmenSquare.Byappreciatingtheartisticstyleofthelandmark,wecangainadeeperinsightintotheprosperityofourcity.Allinall,ifthehikeisorganizedinmoredetailsandinamoresupportiveway,itissuretosucceed.Ihopethatmyvoiceabovecanbeheardandconsideredandwishtheactivityagreatsuccess.Yourssincerely,LiHua【解析】【分析】本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文，要求李華寫(xiě)一封郵件，對(duì)徒步活動(dòng)方案提出修改看法?！驹斀狻康谝徊剑簩忣}體裁：建議信人稱：第一人稱時(shí)態(tài)：一般將來(lái)時(shí)；一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)要點(diǎn)：1.聽(tīng)說(shuō)學(xué)校徒步方案，指出有待改進(jìn)。2.需改進(jìn)的地方和具體緣由。其次部列要點(diǎn)寫(xiě)提綱Para.1beexcitedtohearthat…;isgoingtobeheld;furtherimprovement;postonthecampuswebsitePara.2planindetails;haveaclearerpictureofsth;securityprecautions;medicalsupport;proposeanintroductionofsth;gainadeeperinsightintosthPara.3inamoresupportiveway;besuretosucceed;第三步連詞成句1.I’mreallyexcitedtohearthatahikingactivityfromtheGreatHallofthePeopletotheLiberationMonumentisgoingtobeheldontheLaborDayholiday.2.Theremaybefurtherimprovementoftheschemeyou’vepostedonthecampuswebsite.3.Thehikeneedstobeplannedinmoredetailsastheinformationreleasedonlineappearstobetoogeneral.4.Weneedtoknowhowlongthehikewilllast.5.Wearewillingtohaveaclearerpictureofsecurityprecautionsandnecessarymedicalsupportfortheactivity.6.Isuggestthehikebemoresuitedtothetheme“DiscoverChongqing”throughadditionalactivities.IproposeanintroductionofthearchitectureonChaotianmenSquare.7.Whenweappreciatetheartisticstyleofthelandmark,wecangainadeeperinsightintotheprosperityofourcity.8.Ifthehikeisorganizedinmoredetailsandinamoresupportiveway,itissuretosucceed.9.Ihopethatmyvoiceabovecanbeheardandconsideredandwishtheactivityagreatsuccess.第四步潤(rùn)色提高1.添加關(guān)聯(lián)表達(dá)However;Firstofall;Inthemeantime;What’smore;Allinall2.句式升級(jí)However,theremaybefurtherimprovementoftheschemeyou’vepostedonthecampuswebsite,asI’dliketopointout.Asparticipants,weneedtoknowhowlongthehikewilllast.Onlybydoingsoareyoulikelytomakeitasuccess.Byappreciatingtheartisticstyleofthelandmark,wecangainadeeperinsightintotheprosperityofourcity.第四步美麗書(shū)寫(xiě)【點(diǎn)睛】范文內(nèi)容完整，要點(diǎn)全面，語(yǔ)言規(guī)范，語(yǔ)篇連貫，詞數(shù)適當(dāng)，分段合理。本文句式運(yùn)用敏捷，運(yùn)用了種句式。比如運(yùn)用了定語(yǔ)從句However,theremaybefurtherimprovementoftheschemeyou’vepostedonthecampuswebsite,asI’dliketopointout.運(yùn)用了only的倒裝句作小結(jié)：Onlybydoingsoareyoulikelytomakeitasuccess.運(yùn)用介詞短語(yǔ)，讓文章更加連貫簡(jiǎn)潔：Byappreciatingtheartisticstyleofthelandmark,wecangainadeeperinsightintotheprosperityofourcity.【真題對(duì)點(diǎn)析】2【2024·浙江】假定你是李華，常常幫助你學(xué)習(xí)英語(yǔ)的摯友Alex即將返回自己的國(guó)家。請(qǐng)給他寫(xiě)一封郵件，內(nèi)容包括:1.表示感謝；2.回顧Alex對(duì)你的幫助；3.臨別祝愿。留意:1.詞數(shù)80左右；2可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)微環(huán)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。【參考范文】DearAlex,Hearingthatyouwillreturntoyourcountrysoon,Ifeelabitupset.Butmeanwhile,IwanttosendmysinceregratitudeforyourkindhelpwithmyEnglishlearning.IstillrememberwhatyouhavedevotedtoimprovemyoralEnglishandEnglishwriting.Besides,youalsofranklysharedyourlearningexperiencewithme.Additionally,withoutyourhelp,IwouldnothavebeenatopstudentinEnglishandwouldnothavewontheEnglishSpeechContest.Allinall,wordsfailtoexpressmythankfulnesstoyou.Idohopethatyouwillhaveabrightfutureandthatourfriendshipwilllastforever!Yours,LiHua【思路點(diǎn)撥】本文是郵件，主題是感謝信，依據(jù)寫(xiě)作提示，考生應(yīng)用英語(yǔ)給Alex寫(xiě)一封郵件，感謝他的幫助。寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容主要包括三項(xiàng)：1．表達(dá)感謝；2．回顧Alex的幫助；3．臨別祝愿。這封郵件由三段組成：第一段陳述寫(xiě)信的目的；其次段陳述寫(xiě)信的理由；最終一段為結(jié)束語(yǔ)。 【對(duì)點(diǎn)模擬練】2假如你是李華，上周在外教Mr.Jackson的口語(yǔ)課上運(yùn)用手機(jī)被老師發(fā)覺(jué)，手機(jī)被收走。請(qǐng)給外教寫(xiě)一封致歉信，內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括以下要點(diǎn)：1.表示歉意；2.說(shuō)明上課運(yùn)用手機(jī)的緣由；3.提出自己的懇求并適當(dāng)表態(tài)。留意：可適當(dāng)添加細(xì)微環(huán)節(jié)使文章連貫；字?jǐn)?shù)100左右；答案【參考范文】DearMr.Jackson,I’mreallysorryaboutmyusingthemobilephoneinyourlecturelastweek.Pleaseacceptmyheart-feltapologyforbeingsorudeastudent.Iknowanywordmightsoundamade-upexcuse.ButIdidn’tusethemobilephonefornoreason.IwastryingtoapplytosomeAmericanuniversitieslastweekandthatday,Igotanofferandtheyneededmyfurtherinformationimmediately.Therefore,IhadnootherchoicebuttotrysendingthematextmessageinclassandthatwasexactlywhatIwasdoingwhenyoudiscovered.Ipromiseitwillneverhappenagain.ButIdoneedmyphonebacktogetintouchwithothers.Willyoubekindenoughtogiveitbacktome?Isincerelyhopeyoucanacceptmyapologyandunderstandmysituation.Yours,LiHua【寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)】這是一篇應(yīng)用文，要求寫(xiě)一封致歉信。寫(xiě)作要求只給出了大體的框架，因此具有很大的開(kāi)放性。致歉信主要是向收信人表明歉意，懇求對(duì)方諒解自己的過(guò)失。寫(xiě)致歉信時(shí)要明確不是找借口為自己辯護(hù)，而是承認(rèn)自己的過(guò)錯(cuò)并提出彌補(bǔ)過(guò)錯(cuò)的具體建議和方法。此類信件的關(guān)鍵是用詞精確，表達(dá)真誠(chéng)。在寫(xiě)作時(shí)可以依據(jù)提示的要求依據(jù)三段式的模式布局謀篇。首段：重述自己做錯(cuò)的事，表示歉意。主體段：說(shuō)明致歉的具體緣由，應(yīng)盡量具體描述做錯(cuò)事的經(jīng)過(guò)。寫(xiě)信時(shí)應(yīng)當(dāng)留意在申述理由時(shí)要照看讀信人的感受，切忌強(qiáng)詞奪理。結(jié)尾段：再次表明承認(rèn)錯(cuò)誤的看法，懇求收信人的諒解。也可以提出補(bǔ)救的方法?！菊骖}對(duì)點(diǎn)析】3（2024·天津卷）假設(shè)你是晨光中學(xué)的機(jī)器人愛(ài)好小組組長(zhǎng)李津，你的美國(guó)摯友Chris就讀于天津某國(guó)際學(xué)校，他普在機(jī)器人技能競(jìng)賽中獲獎(jiǎng)。你準(zhǔn)備邀請(qǐng)他加入你的團(tuán)隊(duì)，參與即將于7月底在天津?qū)嵭械氖澜缜嗌賹W(xué)機(jī)器人技能競(jìng)賽。請(qǐng)依據(jù)以下提示代表愛(ài)好小組給他寫(xiě)一封電子郵件。學(xué)科%網(wǎng)（1）競(jìng)賽的時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)；（2）邀請(qǐng)他的緣由；（3）訓(xùn)練支配將發(fā)送其郵箱，請(qǐng)他提出建議。留意：（1）詞數(shù)不少于100；（2）可適當(dāng)加入細(xì)微環(huán)節(jié)，使內(nèi)容充溢、行文連貫；（3）開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。參考詞匯：世界青少年機(jī)器人技能競(jìng)賽theWorldAdolescentRoboticsCompetitionDearChris,Ihavegoodnewstotellyou.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________I’mlookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiJin【參考范文1】DearChris,

Ihavegoodnewstotellyou.TheWorldAdolescentRoboticscompetitionwillbeheldinTianjinattheendofJulysoastopromotethedevelopmentofrobotics.

WhatIwouldliketostressisthatitislookingfornewmembersatthismoment.Iwouldliketoinviteyoutotakepartinit,sinceIknowyou'vejustwonfirstprizeintheRoboticscompetitionheldinyourinstituteandhaveshowngreattalentindesigningrobotics.Therefore,youarethemostsuitableperson,Isuppose.Thetrainingschedule,inadditiontoregulartraining,includesjoininginavarietyofactivities,suchasparticipatinginsomenationalcompetitions.Iwillsenditsdetailstoyoubye-mail.Iwouldappreciateitifyougiveussomeadviceonhowtomakeitperfect.I'mlookingforwardtoyourreply.

Yours,LiJin

【參考范文2】DearChris,Ihavegoodnewstotellyou.TheWorldAdolescentRoboticsCompetitionwillbeheldinTianjinattheendofJuly.HearingthatyouoncetookpartinaRoboticsSkillsCompetitionandwonanaward,I,onbehalfoftheRoboticsHobbyGroup,intendtoinviteyoutojoinourteaminthecomingcompetition.Iamsurethatyourinvolvementwillnotonlyhelpusinwinningtheawardbutalsoenhancethefriendshipbetweenourtwoschools.WiththisemailIalsosendyouourtrainingplan,aboutwhichIwishtogetyouradvicebecauseyouaremoreexperiencedthanus.Wesincerelyhopethatwecanparticipateinthecompetitionasteampartners.I’mlookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiJin

【解析】試題分析：本篇書(shū)面要求寫(xiě)一封電子郵件。寫(xiě)作的時(shí)候要留意以下幾點(diǎn)：一、動(dòng)筆前，肯定要細(xì)致分析要點(diǎn)，理解要點(diǎn)要表達(dá)的含義，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，跑題偏題。內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)包括：1.代表愛(ài)好小組發(fā)出邀請(qǐng)；2.介紹競(jìng)賽的時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)等支配；3.說(shuō)明邀請(qǐng)他的緣由，包括Chris曾在機(jī)器人技能競(jìng)賽中獲獎(jiǎng)；4．告知他訓(xùn)練支配將發(fā)送其郵箱，請(qǐng)他提出建議。二、寫(xiě)作時(shí)留意精確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量運(yùn)用自己熟識(shí)的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要留意運(yùn)用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次?！緦?duì)點(diǎn)模擬練】3假定你是李華，是某外語(yǔ)學(xué)校的學(xué)生會(huì)主席。你們學(xué)校的啦啦操社團(tuán)(CheerleadingClub)正在招募(recruit)新成員。請(qǐng)你依據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)提示給交換生Lisa寫(xiě)一封電子郵件，邀請(qǐng)她加入。內(nèi)容包括：1.擬開(kāi)展的活動(dòng)；2.報(bào)名方式和截止日期。留意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)微環(huán)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。答案DearLisa,HaveyouheardthattheCheerleadingClubofourschoolisrecruitingnewmembers?Iknowyouareinterestedinit.Iamwritingtoinviteyoutojoinit.Thecluboffersavarietyofactivities.NotonlydothemembersreceiveprofessionaltraininginthegymeveryFriday,theywillalsoputonperformancesattheschoolsportsmeeting.Besides,theywillcompeteintheStudentTalentShowinourcityinNovember.Iamsureitwillbegreat.Ifyouwanttojoin,pleasesignupintheschoolofficeorsendyourapplicationtocheerleadingsociety@163beforenextSunday.Yours,【真題對(duì)點(diǎn)析】4【2024·全國(guó)I】假定你是李華，暑假在倫敦學(xué)習(xí)，得知當(dāng)?shù)孛佬g(shù)館要?jiǎng)“嬷袊?guó)畫(huà)展。請(qǐng)寫(xiě)一封信申請(qǐng)做志愿者，內(nèi)容包括:1.寫(xiě)信目的:2.個(gè)人優(yōu)勢(shì):3.能做的事情。留意:1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)微環(huán)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3.結(jié)束語(yǔ)已為你寫(xiě)好。答案【參考范文】DearSirorMadam,IamLiHua,a17-year-oldteenagerstudyinginLondon.LearningthatavolunteerisneededforanexhibitionofChinesetraditionalpainting,Iamwritingtoapplyforit.Ihavesomeadvantagesforthejob.Firstofall,havinglivedinChinaforyearsandlearntEnglishsinceIwasachild,IhaveagoodcommandofbothEnglishandChinese,whichisbeneficialwhenintroducingChinesepaintingstoforeignfriends.Besides,becauseofmyfamiliaritywithChinesepaintingculture,Icangetforeignersandthelocalstoknowmoreaboutit.Lastbutnotleast,throughmyefforts,Ibelieve,IcanstrengthenthefriendshipbetweenChinaandEngland.Iwouldappreciateitifthiswonderfulchancewouldbeofferedtome.Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.Yours,LiHua【解析】本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文，申請(qǐng)信?！舅悸伏c(diǎn)撥】無(wú)論是在學(xué)校還是今后讀高校再到走上工作崗位，寫(xiě)好一份申請(qǐng)都是你必不行少的一項(xiàng)技能。這種形式的寫(xiě)作，學(xué)生需結(jié)合自身優(yōu)勢(shì)，考生成文時(shí)應(yīng)留意：1.要點(diǎn)要齊全：(1)提出寫(xiě)信的目的——申請(qǐng)做這個(gè)志愿者；(2)提出個(gè)人優(yōu)勢(shì)；(3)表達(dá)出自己能做的事情；2.時(shí)態(tài)：以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主；3.人稱：其次人稱為主；4.留意恰當(dāng)運(yùn)用一些連詞，使文章自然、流暢；5.適當(dāng)運(yùn)用一些高級(jí)句型和詞匯以提高作文檔次?！緦?duì)點(diǎn)模擬練】4假定你是李華，英國(guó)中學(xué)生Peter在中國(guó)研學(xué)時(shí)曾暫住你家。他回國(guó)后給你寄來(lái)禮物感謝你的款待，并在信中委婉表示對(duì)你家三世同堂感到驚異。請(qǐng)你寫(xiě)一封回信，內(nèi)容包括：（1）感謝對(duì)方贈(zèng)送的禮物；（2）簡(jiǎn)要介紹中國(guó)人三世同堂的現(xiàn)象。留意：1.詞數(shù)120左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)微環(huán)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【范文】DearPeter,I'msodelightedtoreceiveyourletterandknowyouaresafeback.Thankyouforsendingmethebook,whichisreallyafeastofwesternculture.Ienjoyreadingitverymuch.SinceyouseemtobesurprisedatthefactthatinChina,threegenerations—grandparents,parentsandchildren,oftenlivetogether,itwillbemypleasuretoexplainthisphenomenontoyou.Asourlivingconditionsimprove,it'sunnecessaryforseveralgenerationstolivetogetheranymore.However,manyChinesestilltendtolivetogetherbecausetheycanhelpandcareforeachother.Besides,bylivingtogether,allfamilymemberscandevelopastrongsenseofbelonging,aswellasstrengthentheiremotionalbonds.HopetoseeyouinChinaagain.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiHua【解析】【分析】本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文，要求考生回一封感謝信，并介紹中國(guó)人三世同堂的現(xiàn)象?！驹斀狻康谝徊剑簩忣}結(jié)構(gòu)：三段式時(shí)態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)其次步：列提綱第一段：?jiǎn)柡虿⒈磉_(dá)感謝其次段：介紹三世同堂第三段：祝愿并期盼下次見(jiàn)面第三步：列舉重點(diǎn)短語(yǔ)和句型receiveyourletter；afeastofwesternculture；besurprisedat；astrongsenseofbelonging；aswellas；strengthentheiremotionalbonds第四步：連句成篇I'msodelightedtoreceiveyourletterandknowyouaresafeback.Thankyouforsendingmethebook,whichisreallyafeastofwesternculture.SinceyouseemtobesurprisedatthefactthatinChina,threegenerations—grandparents,parentsandchildren,oftenlivetogether.Asourlivingconditionsimprove,it'sunnecessaryforseveralgenerationstolivetogetheranymore.ManyChinesestilltendtolivetogetherbecausetheycanhelpandcareforeachother.Allfamilymemberscandevelopastrongsenseofbelonging,aswellasstrengthentheiremotionalbonds.連句成文，留意運(yùn)用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的連接與過(guò)渡，如however,besides等，書(shū)寫(xiě)肯定要規(guī)范清楚，第五步：潤(rùn)色修改【點(diǎn)睛】范文內(nèi)容完整，要點(diǎn)全面，語(yǔ)言規(guī)范，語(yǔ)篇連貫，詞數(shù)適當(dāng)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系。作者在范文中運(yùn)用了較多主從復(fù)合句，如：Thankyouforsendingmethebook,whichisreallyafeastofwesternculture.此句為非限制性定語(yǔ)從句；However,manyChinesestilltendtolivetogetherbecausetheycanhelpandcareforeachother.這句話運(yùn)用了because引導(dǎo)的狀語(yǔ)從句。全文中沒(méi)有中國(guó)式英語(yǔ)的句式，顯示了很高的駕馭英語(yǔ)的實(shí)力。另外，文章思路清楚、層次分明，上下句轉(zhuǎn)換自然，為文章增色添彩。Part3強(qiáng)化集訓(xùn)【真題模測(cè)】Passage1（2024?全國(guó)卷2）上周末，你和同學(xué)參與了一次采摘活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)你為班級(jí)英語(yǔ)角寫(xiě)一篇短文，介紹這次活動(dòng)，內(nèi)容包括:1.農(nóng)場(chǎng)狀況；2.采摘過(guò)程；3.個(gè)人感受留意:1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.題目已為你寫(xiě)好。題目:MyWeekend________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【范文】MyWeekendOrganizedbythestudentunion,agroupofvolunteerswenttoHopeFarmtohelpthefarmerspickpeacheslastweekend.Thefarmissituatedatthefootofamountain,theskyisblueandtheairisfresh.Wewereattractedbythebeautifulscenery.Therearedifferentkindsoffruittreesaswellasavarietyofanimals.Onarriving,wesawredripepeacheshangingonthetree.Usingbasketsandladders,

Wefirstpickedtheonesthatweremostbeautifulincolor,thenthosethatwereripeandsoft.

Icouldn’twaittotakeabite,andthesweetjuicewentdownmythroat.Iwasgratefulforthisopportunitytogetclosetonature.NotonlywouldIbeabletoexperiencefruitpicking,butIcouldalsofeastonthesweetness!【解析】【詳解】第一步：依據(jù)提示可知，上周末，你和同學(xué)參與了一次采摘活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)你為班級(jí)英語(yǔ)角寫(xiě)一篇短文，介紹這次活動(dòng)。內(nèi)容包括：1.農(nóng)場(chǎng)狀況；2.采摘過(guò)程；3.個(gè)人感受。其次步：依據(jù)寫(xiě)作要求確定關(guān)鍵詞（組），如：pickpeaches,issituated,beautifulscenery,fruittrees,avarietyofanimals,Usingbasketsandladders,

takeabite,begratefulfor,getclosetonature,feastonthesweetness.第三步：依據(jù)提示和關(guān)鍵詞（組）進(jìn)行遣詞造句，留意主謂一樣和時(shí)態(tài)問(wèn)題。本文用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過(guò)去時(shí)。第四步：連句成文，留意運(yùn)用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的連接和過(guò)渡，書(shū)寫(xiě)肯定要規(guī)范清楚，保持整齊美觀的卷面是特別重要的?！军c(diǎn)睛】范文內(nèi)容完整，語(yǔ)言規(guī)范，語(yǔ)篇連貫，詞數(shù)適當(dāng)。作者在范文中運(yùn)用了較多高級(jí)表達(dá)方式，如Organizedbythestudentunion,agroupofvolunteerswenttoHopeFarmtohelpthefarmerspickpeacheslastweekend.和Usingbasketsandladders運(yùn)用了非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞；Wefirstpickedtheonesthatweremostbeautifulincolor,thenthosethatwereripeandsoft.

運(yùn)用了定語(yǔ)從句；NotonlywouldIbeabletoexperiencefruitpicking,butIcouldalsofeastonthesweetness!運(yùn)用了連詞notonly…but…和倒裝句。全文中沒(méi)有中國(guó)式英語(yǔ)的句式，顯示了很高的駕馭英語(yǔ)的實(shí)力。另外，文章思路清楚，層次分明，上下句轉(zhuǎn)換自然，為文章增色添彩。Passage2(2024·北京卷)假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三學(xué)生李華，你的英國(guó)摯友Jim在給你的郵件中提到他對(duì)中國(guó)文化感愛(ài)好，支配明年來(lái)北京上高校。他向你詢問(wèn)相關(guān)信息。請(qǐng)給他回郵件，內(nèi)容包括：(1)表示歡迎；(2)舉薦他上哪所高校；(3)建議他做哪些準(zhǔn)備工作。留意：(1).詞數(shù)不少于50；(2).開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。DearJim,____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)】本文為提綱式作文，文章要求寫(xiě)舉薦信，為英國(guó)摯友介紹北京的高校。首先可以介紹一下寫(xiě)作背景（Jim對(duì)中國(guó)文化感愛(ài)好，要來(lái)中國(guó)學(xué)習(xí)），表達(dá)歡迎。然后舉薦一所高校，并簡(jiǎn)要介紹舉薦的緣由（如高校的特色，可以學(xué)到什么等）。再次簡(jiǎn)潔介紹應(yīng)當(dāng)做哪方面的準(zhǔn)備，如可以提前學(xué)習(xí)漢語(yǔ)，讀點(diǎn)有關(guān)中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)文化的書(shū)，了解中國(guó)的習(xí)俗，讓自己更好地適應(yīng)中國(guó)的生活。文章可采納一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，人稱可以運(yùn)用其次人稱?！痉段摹緿earJim,I’msogladtohearyourfutureeducationplaninBeijinginyourlastletter.FirstIwouldliketoexpressmywarmestwelcometoyouandIamsureyouwillhavethemostunforgettableexperienceduringyourcollegeinBeijing.LearningyourkeeninterestinChineseculture,IsuggestyouapplyforPekingUniversity,oneofthebestuniversitiesinChina.ItsChineseLiteraturemajorisperfectforyouwhereyoucanbecompletelysoakedinChineseprofoundhistoryandrichculture.Asforpreparation,somereadinginadvanceinneededlikeTheStoryoftheStonewhilesomeonlinecoursesofspokenChinesecanbehelpfulforyoutoadaptintotheChineselanguageenvironment.Isincerelyhopeyourdreamwillcometrueandit’smypleasuretoshowyouaroundinBeijingwhenthatdaycomes.Ifyouhavefurtherquestions,pleasefeelfreetoletmeknow.Yours,LiHua【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】文章中奇妙運(yùn)用非謂語(yǔ)LearningyourkeeninterestinChineseculture,使句子結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊。運(yùn)用定語(yǔ)從句ItsChineseLiteraturemajorisperfectforyouwhereyoucanbecompletelysoakedinChineseprofoundhistoryandrichculture.使句子表達(dá)更完備；奇妙運(yùn)用連接詞while引出來(lái)中國(guó)前的準(zhǔn)備，使句子結(jié)構(gòu)對(duì)稱。Passage3（2024·天津卷）假設(shè)你是李津，與你以前的外籍老師MrsGreen始終保持聯(lián)系。近日她來(lái)信詢問(wèn)你的近況，請(qǐng)依據(jù)以下提示給她回復(fù)一封郵件。1．簡(jiǎn)要介紹自己的學(xué)習(xí)和生活；2．告知你已成為八月底在津舉辦的第十三屆全運(yùn)會(huì)的志愿者，并介紹為此所做的準(zhǔn)備(如深化了解天津等)；3．希望她有機(jī)會(huì)重訪天津。留意：1.詞數(shù)不少于100；2．可適當(dāng)加入細(xì)微環(huán)節(jié)，使內(nèi)容充溢、行文連貫；3．開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。參考詞匯：第十三屆全運(yùn)會(huì)the13thNationalGamesDearMrsGreen，I'msogladtohearfromyou._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours，LiJin【解析】首先，內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)要全，三個(gè)要點(diǎn)都要包含：(1)介紹自己的學(xué)習(xí)和生活；(2)告知她你作為第十三屆全運(yùn)會(huì)志愿者所做的準(zhǔn)備；(3)希望她重訪天津。其次，要精確并恰當(dāng)?shù)剡\(yùn)用詞匯和各種復(fù)合句。留意運(yùn)用定語(yǔ)從句，非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞等表達(dá)。在行文過(guò)程中要留意時(shí)態(tài)的正確運(yùn)用。第三，要留意上下文的連貫和語(yǔ)言的得體。留意運(yùn)用一些表示連接和轉(zhuǎn)折的詞。最終，要留意一下卷面整齊，書(shū)寫(xiě)工整。【答案】DearMrsGreen,__I'msogladtohearfromyou.Inyourlastletter,youaskedmeaboutmystudyandlife.I'mverypleasedtotellyouthatIhavemadegreatprogressinmyspokenEnglishsinceyouleft.Asformylife,Itakeexerciseregularlyanddomoreoutdooractivities,whichbuildsupmybodyandcharacteraswell.IhavegoodnewstotellyouthatIhavebeenchosentobeavolunteerinthecoming13thNationalGamestobeheldinTianjinattheendofAugust.Tobeaqualifiedvolunteer,Imadesomepreparations.Iinterviewedmanypeoplefromallwalksoflife,whichimprovedanddeepenedmyunderstandingofTianjin.IhopeyoucanrevisitTianjinifyouhaveachance.Lookingforwardtoseeingyouagain.Yours，LiJin【典題模測(cè)】Passage1假定你是李華，想邀請(qǐng)你的新西蘭摯友Kevin參與你校將要實(shí)行的“勞動(dòng)周”相關(guān)活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)給他寫(xiě)封郵件，內(nèi)容包括：1.活動(dòng)時(shí)間；2.活動(dòng)內(nèi)容（如：校內(nèi)環(huán)境美化、校內(nèi)垃圾分類等）；3.活動(dòng)意義.參考詞匯：LabourWeek勞動(dòng)周留意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)微環(huán)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【范文】DearKevin,IfeelextremelydelightedtoinformyouthatourschoolwillholdsomerelevantactivitiesduringtheupcomingLabourWeek.I’mwritingtoinviteyoutoexperiencethegreatactivities.TheLabourWeekwillstartonJune10thandlastforfivedays,whenwewillholdvariousactivities.Tobeautifyourschool,wewillplanttreesthataredefinitelygoodforourphysicalandmentalwell-being.Moreover,it’sawonderfulideatosortgarbageinaneco-friendlyway,makingourcampuscleanerandmorefascinating.Thereisalsoalaborknowledgecompetitionwhichissorewardingthatwecan’taffordtomissit.Asforthesignificance,wecanbenefitalotundoubtedly.Ourawarenessoflabourcanbedeveloped.Besides,wewilllearntocherishandrespectthefruitsofpeople’swork.Lookingforwardtoyourfavorablereply.Yourssincerely,LiHua【解析】【分析】本篇寫(xiě)作屬于應(yīng)用文，主要是邀請(qǐng)新西蘭的摯友Kevin參與學(xué)校實(shí)行的勞動(dòng)周活動(dòng)。【詳解】第一步：審題體裁：應(yīng)用文時(shí)態(tài)：依據(jù)提示，時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般將來(lái)時(shí)。結(jié)構(gòu)：總分法?？偡址ㄖ赴阎黝}句作為總說(shuō)，把支持句作為分說(shuō)，并以這種方式支配所寫(xiě)內(nèi)容。寫(xiě)作要求：1.活動(dòng)時(shí)間；（thetimeofthisactivity）2.活動(dòng)內(nèi)容（如：校內(nèi)環(huán)境美化、校內(nèi)垃圾分類等）；（thecontentofthisactivity）3.活動(dòng)意義。（thesignificanceofthisactivity）其次步：列提綱（重點(diǎn)詞組）inform;relevant;upcoming;various;beautify;definitely;physicalandmental;asforthesignificance;undoubtedly;cherish第三步：連詞成句IwanttoinformyouthatourschoolwillholdsomerelevantactivitiesduringtheupcomingLabourWeek.I’mwritingtoinviteyoutoexperiencethegreatactivities.Wewillplanttreesthataredefinitelygoodforourphysicalandmentalwell-being.WewillholdvariousactivitiestosupportourLabourWeek.It’sawonderfulideatosortgarbageinaneco-friendlyway.Sortinggarbagecanmakeourcampuscleanerandmorefascinating.Asforthesignificance,wecanbenefitalotundoubtedly.Ourawarenessoflabourcanbedeveloped.Wewilllearntocherishandrespectthefruitsofpeople’swork.在進(jìn)行造句的時(shí)候肯定要留意時(shí)態(tài)和語(yǔ)態(tài)上面的問(wèn)題。第四步：連句成篇（連接詞）1.文章的結(jié)構(gòu)依次：勞動(dòng)周具體時(shí)間和地點(diǎn)；勞動(dòng)周的活動(dòng)內(nèi)容；勞動(dòng)周的實(shí)際意義。2.表并列補(bǔ)充關(guān)系：Whatismore,Besides,Moreover,Furthermore,InadditionAswellas,notonly…but(also),including,連句成文，留意運(yùn)用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的連接與過(guò)渡，書(shū)寫(xiě)肯定要規(guī)范清楚.第五步：潤(rùn)色修改【點(diǎn)睛】范文內(nèi)容完整，要點(diǎn)全面，語(yǔ)言規(guī)范，語(yǔ)篇連貫，詞數(shù)適當(dāng)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系。范文開(kāi)頭IfeelextremelydelightedtoinformyouthatourschoolwillholdsomerelevantactivitiesduringtheupcomingLabourWeek.既運(yùn)用了一個(gè)賓語(yǔ)從句，又開(kāi)宗明義的點(diǎn)出了寫(xiě)作的主題和目的。此外范文中形容詞和副詞用得特殊好，比如extremely和definitely等，都能夠表達(dá)出作者的情感。還用到了非謂語(yǔ)結(jié)構(gòu)Moreover,it’sawonderfulideatosortgarbageinaneco-friendlyway,makingourcampuscleanerandmorefascinating.文章思路清楚，層次分明，上下句轉(zhuǎn)換自然。為文章增色添彩。Passage2假設(shè)你是某中學(xué)的學(xué)生謝飛，你校國(guó)際部將選拔一些學(xué)生志愿者，參與國(guó)際部接待學(xué)訪團(tuán)等外事活動(dòng)的策劃和組織。你欲參選，請(qǐng)依據(jù)以下提示，寫(xiě)一篇競(jìng)選演講稿。*個(gè)人優(yōu)勢(shì)介紹（如性格，特長(zhǎng)等）；*接待學(xué)訪學(xué)生的活動(dòng)支配（校內(nèi)，校外）；*表達(dá)當(dāng)選的愿望。留意：1.詞數(shù)不少于100；2.請(qǐng)勿提及真實(shí)學(xué)校名稱；3.可適當(dāng)加入細(xì)微環(huán)節(jié)，以使內(nèi)容充溢、行文連貫；4.開(kāi)頭、結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。參考詞匯：競(jìng)選runfor…;學(xué)訪學(xué)生studentsontheexchangeprogramGoodafternoon,mydearfriends,MynameisXieFei._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________