讀后續(xù)寫+忠犬+Bella：危險(xiǎn)時(shí)刻的守護(hù)天使+講義 高一下學(xué)期期末考試英語(yǔ)試卷

閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。WhenIwasadmittedtotheUniversityofAlabama,Idecidedtogetapuppy.SoIadoptedanadorableGoldenRetriever(金毛獵犬)puppyagainstmyparents’wishes.Soon,Irealizedmyparentswereright.Thedogwassonaughtythatitcausedmealotoftroubleeveryday.Infact,shesoonearnedthenickname(綽號(hào))BellatheDevilatschool.However,astimewentby,shetaughtmehowtobeabetterdogmom,andItaughtherhowtobeabetterdog.Webecamebestfriendsanddideverythingtogether.Bellawasthereformeallthetime:parties,restaurants,games,evendates!Welovedspendingtimetogether.BythetimeIwasasenior,BellaandIdevelopedastrongerrelationship.Shewastrulymybestfriend.Inthethirdyear,Iworkedatthelocalcollegelbarnotfarfromthehouse.Onenight,Iwasrunninglate.BellaandIhadbeenwithfriendsdownthestreetwhenIrealizeditwasalready9:00p.m.WehadtorushhomesoIcouldmakeittoworkby9:30.Iranthroughthefrontdoorandjumpedtothebathroomtohaveashower.Bellafollowedmeintothebathroomandlayinherusualplaceonthebathroomfloor.ThenIheardmyfrontdooropen.ItwassoloudthatIthoughtitwasstrange.Itcouldn’tbemyroommateforshehadflowntoNewYork.Iturnedofftheshowerandyelledhername.Noanswer.注意:1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Instantly(立刻),Iknewsomethingwasseriouslywrong._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ThenIwentoutsidetofindBellawiththepolicemen._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________文章大意文章講述了“我”不顧父母反對(duì)在大學(xué)時(shí)收養(yǎng)了一只金毛獵犬Bella，起初它很調(diào)皮，后來(lái)“我們”成為親密無(wú)間的伙伴。在“我”大三那年的一個(gè)晚上，“我”匆忙趕回家準(zhǔn)備去附近酒吧上班，洗澡時(shí)聽(tīng)到前門異常打開(kāi)的聲音，隨后發(fā)現(xiàn)Bella勇敢地面對(duì)闖入的陌生人，保護(hù)了“我”。最后警察到來(lái)，Bella的英勇行為得到稱贊，“我們”的關(guān)系也更加緊密。故事分析伏筆與回應(yīng)：Bella的綽號(hào)：Bella最初被叫做“BellatheDevil”，看似是說(shuō)它調(diào)皮搗蛋，但這也暗示了它活潑勇敢的性格特點(diǎn)，為后文它勇敢對(duì)抗闖入者埋下伏筆，后文它面對(duì)危險(xiǎn)毫不退縮，展現(xiàn)出了與“Devil”這一綽號(hào)相符的勇猛無(wú)畏。Bella與“我”形影不離：文中提到Bella與“我”做什么都在一起，無(wú)論是派對(duì)、餐廳還是約會(huì)，這為它在危險(xiǎn)時(shí)刻出現(xiàn)在“我”身邊并保護(hù)“我”做了鋪墊，因?yàn)樗偸桥惆橹拔摇?，所以在危險(xiǎn)發(fā)生時(shí)也自然會(huì)在“我”身邊守護(hù)。室友不在家：提到室友飛去紐約，這排除了是室友開(kāi)門的可能性，讓“我”立刻意識(shí)到前門打開(kāi)是異常情況，從而增加了故事的緊張感和懸念，也使得后面發(fā)現(xiàn)闖入者的情節(jié)更加合理。時(shí)間緊張：“我”因?yàn)橼s時(shí)間回家洗澡準(zhǔn)備上班，所以匆忙間可能忽略了一些安全防范措施，比如沒(méi)有鎖好門，這就為闖入者的出現(xiàn)提供了契機(jī)，同時(shí)也因?yàn)椤拔摇钡拇颐?，讓故事的發(fā)展更加緊湊和緊張。Bella跟進(jìn)浴室：Bella像往常一樣跟進(jìn)浴室躺在地上，這看似平常的舉動(dòng)，卻為后面它能迅速察覺(jué)危險(xiǎn)并做出反應(yīng)提供了條件，它在浴室離“我”很近，所以能夠第一時(shí)間聽(tīng)到外面的動(dòng)靜并沖出去保護(hù)“我”。續(xù)寫要點(diǎn)第一段：“我”躲在浴室里，聽(tīng)到外面?zhèn)鱽?lái)掙扎和碰撞的聲音，Bella的低吼聲不斷，心中充滿了恐懼和擔(dān)憂，但又不敢輕易出去，只能在心里默默祈禱Bella平安。過(guò)了一會(huì)兒，外面逐漸安靜下來(lái)，“我”小心翼翼地打開(kāi)門，看到客廳一片狼藉，而B(niǎo)ella不知所蹤，“我”的心一下子提到了嗓子眼，急忙呼喊著B(niǎo)ella的名字，開(kāi)始四處尋找。第二段：當(dāng)“我”走出家門，看到Bella正圍著幾位警察歡快地?fù)u著尾巴，警察們對(duì)Bella的勇敢行為贊不絕口，說(shuō)它緊緊咬住闖入者的褲腳，不讓其逃脫，為他們的抓捕爭(zhēng)取了時(shí)間?！拔摇奔?dòng)地跑過(guò)去抱住Bella，眼中滿是淚水，心中對(duì)它充滿了感激與自豪，從那以后，“我”更加珍惜與Bella在一起的時(shí)光，它也成為了鄰里間的小英雄。情感線故事開(kāi)始時(shí)，“我”對(duì)Bella是又愛(ài)又無(wú)奈，它的調(diào)皮搗蛋讓“我”有些頭疼，但隨著時(shí)間推移，“我”們建立了深厚的友誼，Bella成為“我”生活中不可或缺的伙伴，“我”對(duì)它充滿依賴與喜愛(ài)。在遭遇危險(xiǎn)時(shí)，“我”的情感轉(zhuǎn)為極度的恐懼和對(duì)Bella的擔(dān)心，害怕它受到傷害。當(dāng)看到Bella安然無(wú)恙并得知它保護(hù)了“我”，“我”心中滿是感激與自豪，這份情感在事件之后進(jìn)一步升華，讓“我”更加珍視與Bella的情誼，它也從一只寵物變成了“我”生命中的英雄和最重要的家人。故事線“我”在大學(xué)時(shí)收養(yǎng)了金毛獵犬Bella，起初它很調(diào)皮，被叫做“BellatheDevil”。隨著時(shí)間流逝，“我”和Bella成為親密好友，形影不離，共同度過(guò)許多時(shí)光。大三的一個(gè)夜晚，“我”匆忙趕回家準(zhǔn)備去酒吧上班，在洗澡時(shí)聽(tīng)到前門異常打開(kāi)的聲音。發(fā)現(xiàn)闖入者后，Bella挺身而出，與闖入者對(duì)峙，保護(hù)“我”的安全。“我”尋找Bella后發(fā)現(xiàn)它與警察在一起，得知它的英勇行為受到稱贊。此后，“我”與Bella的關(guān)系更加緊密，它成為鄰里間的英雄，“我”也更加珍惜與它的時(shí)光。主旨升華句Truefriendshipisnotonlyaboutsharingjoysbutalsostandingbyeachotherintimesofdanger.（真正的友誼不僅在于分享快樂(lè)，還在于在危險(xiǎn)時(shí)刻相互扶持。）Sometimes,themostunexpectedheroescomeintheformofourbelovedpets,teachingusthemeaningofloyaltyandcourage.（有時(shí)，最意想不到的英雄是以我們心愛(ài)的寵物的形式出現(xiàn)的，它們教會(huì)我們忠誠(chéng)和勇氣的意義。）Inthefaceoffear,thebondbetweenahumanandapetcanprovetobeunbreakable,shiningwiththelightofloveandprotection.（在恐懼面前，人與寵物之間的紐帶可以堅(jiān)不可摧，閃耀著愛(ài)與保護(hù)的光芒。）Theloyaltyofapetisnotmeasuredbywordsbutbytheirfearlessactions,remindingusofthepurestformoflove.（寵物的忠誠(chéng)不是用言語(yǔ)來(lái)衡量的，而是用它們無(wú)畏的行動(dòng)，這讓我們想起了最純粹的愛(ài)。）Adog'sloveandbraverycantransformasimplefriendshipintoanextraordinarytaleofcourageanddevotion.（狗的愛(ài)和勇敢可以將一段簡(jiǎn)單的友誼變成一個(gè)關(guān)于勇氣和奉獻(xiàn)的非凡故事。）寫作示范一Instantly,Iknewsomethingwasamiss.MyheartracedasIclutchedthetoweltightlyaroundme.IheardascuffleandBella'sfiercegrowls.Feargrippedme,butIcouldn'tletmybestfriendfacedangeralone.Summoningallmycourage,Iinchedtowardsthelivingroom.Thesightthatgreetedmewaschaotic-furnitureoverturnedandBellalockedinastrugglewithanintruder.Withoutasecondthought,Igrabbedthenearestobject,readytodefendus.Then,asquicklyasitstarted,theintrudermanagedtobreakfreeandfledthroughtheopendoor.BellawasabouttogivechasewhenIcalledherback,tremblingwithreliefandshock.ThenIwentoutsidetofindBellawiththepolicemen.Shewaspantingheavily,hereyesstillalert.Thepolicemeninformedmethataneighborhadcalledthemafterhearingthecommotion.TheypraisedBella'sbravery,sayingshehadheldtheintruderatbayuntiltheyarrived.IhuggedBellaclose,tearsstreamingdownmyface.Shehadriskedherlifeforme.Fromthatdayon,ourbondwasunshakable.Bellawasnotjustapet;shewasmyguardianangel,asymbolofunwaveringloyaltyandlove.寫作示范二Immediately,Isenseddanger.MybodytensedasIpeekedoutofthebathroom.Bellawasbarkingferociouslyatashadowyfigure.Ifeltasurgeofpanicbutalsoafiercedeterminationtoprotectmyfurryfriend.Iscannedtheroomforsomethingtouseasaweaponandfoundabroom.AsIsteppedforward,thefigurelungedatBella,butshewasquickanddodgedtheattack.Iscreamed,hopingtoscaretheintruderaway.Thechaosseemedtolastforeveruntilsuddenly,thefiguredashedoutthedoor.ThenIwentoutsidetofindBellawiththepolicemen.Shewassittingbesidethem,hertonguelollingout,seeminglyunfazedbytheordeal.Theofficerstoldmetheyhadbeennearbyandrespondedtothecallpromptly.TheycommendedBella'scourageandtenacity.Ikneltdownandembracedher,overcomewithgratitude.ThisincidenthadnotonlystrengthenedourbondbutalsomademerealizethedepthoftheloveandloyaltythatBellahadforme.Shewastrulyaremarkablecompanion,andIvowedtocherisheverymomentwithher,knowingthatshewouldalwaysbetheretoprotectme,comewhatmay.參考答案Instantly(立刻),Iknewsomethingwasseriouslywrong.Atthismoment,Bellafacedthedoor,growling(咆哮著),withthehairraisedonherback.Ihadneverseenherlikethatbefore.Someonewasinmyhouse,andIwasindanger.WhenIfeltlostandhelpless,Bellacharged(沖出)throughthebathroom