讀后續(xù)寫-圣誕前夕的親情重逢講義-浙江省杭州地區(qū)(含周邊)重點中學2024-2025學年高二上學期11月期中英語試題

閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構成一篇完整的短文。Theheavysnowcontinuedoutside.ItwastheweekbeforeChristmas.Theeveningreceptionistwhowasscheduledtorelievemehadphonedtosayshehadbeenunabletogethercarstarted.WhywasItheunluckyonestuckbehindareceptionist’sdesk?Suddenly,mythoughtwasinterruptedbytheringingofthetelephone.Answeringalittleunhappily,Iheardaman’svoice.“IsthisAvisCarRental?”“No,I’mafraidourphonenumberhereattheassistedlivingfacilityisonedigitdifferentthanAvis.Letmegiveyouthatnumbersoyoudon’thavetolookitupagain,”Ifinishedgivingthegentlemanthenumber,wishinghimaMerryChristmas.JustasIwasabouttohangup,Iheardhisvoiceinmidair.“Waitaminute,please!Doyoubelieveinmiracles?”Isatstraighterinmychair,surprisedatsuchaquestionfromatotalstranger.“Definitely.Whydoyouask?”“I’lltrytomakealongstoryshort.Myparentsrecentlypassedawayinacaraccident.IhavenooneleftintheworldbutagrandmothersomewhereinVirginiawhoIhaven’tseensinceIwaslittle.Myuncleplacedmygrandmotherinanassistedlivingfacilitywhenhegrewtooilltocareforheranylonger.Unfortunately,he’sgonetoheavenaswell.DoyouhappentohaveGraceSheperdatyourfacility?”MyheartbeatfasterasIrecognizedthefamiliarname.“Areyoustillthere?”heaskedfinally.“Yes.I’mafraidthere’saprivacypolicythatprohibitsmefromanswering.”“Iunderstand,”theyoungmansoundedsosad.“Thankyouforyourtime,andMerryChristmas!”“Wait!VirginiaisabeautifulstatetovisitatChristmastime!Letmegiveyououraddressincaseyouhappentobetravelingthroughourareaanytimesoon...”Iadded.“Thankyou!”theyoungmansaidbeforehehungup.注意：1.

續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應為150左右；2.

請按如下格式在答題紙的相應位置作答。ThenextdaywhenIwaspassingGraceSheperd’sroom,Isuddenlyfrozeinplace.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Theyoungmanslowlyrosetohisfeetandwalkedtome.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________一、文章大意故事發(fā)生在圣誕節(jié)前一周的大雪天，“我”在養(yǎng)老院前臺值班，原本該來換班的人因車故障無法前來?！拔摇苯拥揭粋€打錯的，對方詢問是否是租車公司，在糾正后，男子詢問“我”是否相信奇跡，并講述了自己的身世，他的父母在車禍中去世，世上只剩在弗吉尼亞某養(yǎng)老院的祖母，而他的叔叔也已離世，他想找一位叫格蕾絲?謝潑德的老人。“我”雖因隱私政策不能告知，但給了養(yǎng)老院地址。二、五處伏筆以及在續(xù)寫中的回應伏筆：男子提到父母在車禍中去世，叔叔也離世，只剩祖母。續(xù)寫回應：男子見到祖母時的激動與悲傷交織，以及他與祖母相認后互相傾訴失去親人后的孤獨，凸顯他對親情的渴望與珍視。伏筆：“我”認出了格蕾絲?謝潑德這個熟悉的名字。續(xù)寫回應：在格蕾絲房間看到的與她相關的物品，如家庭照片等，證實她就是男子要找的祖母，也為后面相認情節(jié)做鋪墊。伏筆：“我”給了男子養(yǎng)老院地址并說弗吉尼亞圣誕節(jié)很美。續(xù)寫回應：男子在圣誕節(jié)前夕來到養(yǎng)老院，體現(xiàn)他對找到祖母的急切與期待，也呼應了故事的時間背景。伏筆：男子問“我”是否相信奇跡。續(xù)寫回應：男子與祖母相認的場景如同奇跡發(fā)生，讓在場的人都為之感動，強調(diào)親情重逢的珍貴與美好。伏筆：“我”因隱私政策不能直接回答男子關于祖母是否在養(yǎng)老院的問題。續(xù)寫回應：男子來到養(yǎng)老院后通過自己的觀察和與“我”的交流確定了祖母的身份，使故事發(fā)展更合理且有波折。三、續(xù)寫要點第一段：描述在格蕾絲房間外看到的情景，如房間里有一些家庭照片等能暗示她身份的物品?！拔摇眱?nèi)心糾結是否要進一步幫助男子。可以提及養(yǎng)老院里其他人對格蕾絲的一些看法或格蕾絲日常的狀態(tài)，表現(xiàn)出她可能也在思念親人。第二段：男子來到養(yǎng)老院后的表現(xiàn)，他的神態(tài)、動作等，如他懷著緊張又期待的心情走進來。他與“我”交流，最終確定格蕾絲就是他的祖母，然后他走進房間與祖母相認的感人場景，如兩人相擁而泣，互訴思念。四、情感線男子從最初打時的孤獨、悲傷與期待，到得到養(yǎng)老院地址后的一絲希望，再到來到養(yǎng)老院時的緊張與激動。“我”從一開始的不耐煩被打擾，到對男子身世的同情，再到糾結是否幫助以及最后看到祖孫相認時的感動。格蕾絲則是長期思念親人的孤獨，到與孫子相認時的驚喜與欣慰。五、故事線男子因親人離世尋找祖母，打錯到養(yǎng)老院，“我”雖不能直接告知但給了地址。第二天“我”在格蕾絲房間外有所發(fā)現(xiàn)，之后男子來到養(yǎng)老院，通過與“我”的互動確定了祖母身份并相認，在圣誕節(jié)前夕實現(xiàn)了親情的團圓。六、主旨升華句“Familyloveislikeabeaconinthedark,alwaysguidingthelostonesbackhome.”（親情就像黑暗中的燈塔，總是指引著迷失的人回家。）“Thepowerofkinshipcantranscenddistanceandtime,mendingthebrokenhearts.”（親情的力量可以跨越距離和時間，修補破碎的心。）“Inthejourneyoflife,thereunionoffamilyisthemostpreciousmiracle.”（在人生的旅途中，家庭的團聚是最珍貴的奇跡。）“Truefamilybondsareunbreakable,eveninthefaceofgreatadversity.”（真正的家庭紐帶是牢不可破的，即使面對巨大的逆境。）“Loveamongfamilymembersistheeternalmelodythatplaysintheheart,neverfading.”（家庭成員之間的愛是在心中奏響的永恒旋律，永不褪色。）七、寫作示范第一篇ThenextdaywhenIwaspassingGraceSheperd’sroom,Isuddenlyfrozeinplace.Throughthehalfopendoor,Icouldseesomeoldfamilyphotosonthewall.Thefacesinthepicturesseemedtotellastoryofaoncehappyfamily.Ihesitated,wonderingifIshoulddomoretohelptheyoungman.Thethoughtofhissadvoiceonthephonemademefeelastrangesenseofresponsibility.IknewthatifItookonemorestep,Imightbeabletoreuniteabrokenfamily.Buttheprivacypolicystillloomedinmymind.Theyoungmanslowlyrosetohisfeetandwalkedtome.Hiseyeswerefilledwithamixtureofhopeandnervousness.“IcameassoonasIcould,”hesaidsoftly.Iledhimtotheroom,andasheentered,hesawthephotosandrecognizedhisgrandmotherinstantly.Tearswelledupinhiseyes.Hewalkedtowardstheoldladywhowassittingbythewindow.“Grandma,it’sme,”hewhispered.Theoldwomanturnedaround,andalookofdisbeliefandthenoverwhelmingjoyspreadacrossherface.Theyembracedtightly,andIcouldfeelthepoweroffamilylovefillingtheroom.ItwastrulyaChristmasmiracle.第二篇ThenextdaywhenIwaspassingGraceSheperd’sroom,Isuddenlyfrozeinplace.Thereweresomeknitteditemswiththeinitials“GS”intheroom,whichmadememorecertainthatthiswasthegrandmothertheyoungmanwaslookingfor.IpeekedinandsawGracelookingoutofthewindow,ahintoflonelinessinherexpression.Ithoughtabouttheyoungman’sdesperatesearchandhowmuchthisreunionwouldmeantobothofthem.Theyoungmanslowlyrosetohisfeetandwalkedtome.Hisfacewaspalebutdetermined.“Ihopeshe’shere,”hesaid.ItookadeepbreathandtoldhimwhatIhadseenintheroom.Hetookastepclosertothedoorandcalledoutsoftly,“Grandma?”Graceturnedaround,andhereyeswidenedinshock.“Isityou,mydear?”shesaidtremulously.Theyoungmanrushedtohersideandkneltdown,takingherhandsinhis.Theybothcried,sharingtheirsorrowsandjoys.Atthatmoment,Irealizedthatfamilytiescouldneverbesevered,andthelovebetweenthemwasagiftthatcouldwarmeventhecoldestofhearts.【答案】Onepossibleversion:ThenextdaywhenIwaspassingGraceSheperdsroom,Isuddenlyfrozeinplace.

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