2025屆高考英語(yǔ)復(fù)習(xí)讀后續(xù)寫練習(xí)+母子間的沖突與意外+課件

高考英語(yǔ)讀后續(xù)寫語(yǔ)篇練習(xí)母子間的沖突與意外1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫原文OneSaturday,athirteen-year-oldboynamedTimwashangingoutwithhisfriendsatalocalcafe.Timandhisfriendswouldusuallyspendtheentireweekendtogether,beforemeetingagainthefollowingweekwhileinschool.Thatday,Tim’smomGloriawantedtochangeuphisroutinebyinvitinghimtowatchanewsuperheromoviewithher.GloriakeptcallingTimonhiscellphone,buthewouldn’tpickup.So,shedecidedtomakeherwaytothecafe,knowingthatthiswaswhereTimandhisfriendsusuallyhadlunchonSaturdays.4續(xù)寫原文WhenshespottedTimandhisfriends,shemadeherwaytothem,onlytoseeTim’sfriendsgiggling.“Yourgrandmother’scometopickyouup,Tim!”theyteased.Timglared(怒視)athismotherandwalkeduptohertostopherfromgoinganycloser.“Whatareyoudoinghere?”!hescoldedher.“You’reembarrassingmeinfrontofmyfriends!”“Ijustwantedtoaskifyouwantedtowatchamoviewithme,”shesmiled,tryingtoholdhishand.Timshrugged(聳肩)offherhands.“Leavemealone!I’mwithmyfriends!”hetoldher.Gloriawalkedbackhomesadly.WhenTimgothomethatnight,itwasalreadyhalfpastten.Hewentstraighttohisroom,notevenacknowledgingGloria’spresenceinthelivingroom.“What’sthematter,Tim?”Gloriaaskedhim.“Whyisitthatyoudon’tlikebeingwithmeanymore?I’mworriedaboutyou,Tim.Ibarelyknowwhat’sgoingoninyourlife!”shesaid,tryingtowalkclosertohim.5續(xù)寫原文“You’resuchanold,boringwoman!Whydidyouevengivebirthtome?!”heyelled.GloriafeltapaininherchestafterhearingTimyellatherthatway.Beforeshecouldrespond,Timgrabbedhisbackpackandranoutthedoor.“Tim!”Gloriacalledout.Timrodeonhisbikeandleftthestreet.Gloriatriedcallingoutandchasingafterhim,buthewastoofast.Then,shefaintedinfrontofoneofherneighbor’shouses.6段首句Paragraph1：WhenTimgothomelatethatnight,hesawaneighborattheirdoor.Paragraph2：Afterridingforhalfanhour,Timarrivedatthehospital.7Part2題目分析8續(xù)寫原文分析9文章講述了十三歲的蒂姆在周六和朋友在咖啡館玩耍，媽媽格洛麗亞想邀請(qǐng)他看電影，卻遭到蒂姆拒絕。蒂姆對(duì)媽媽態(tài)度惡劣，言語(yǔ)傷人。媽媽傷心回家后暈倒，蒂姆回家發(fā)現(xiàn)鄰居在門口。蒂姆得知媽媽被送往醫(yī)院，急忙趕去。點(diǎn)1：位于續(xù)寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語(yǔ)；點(diǎn)2：位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點(diǎn)3：位于續(xù)寫第二段段首，續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語(yǔ)；點(diǎn)4：文章結(jié)尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強(qiáng)調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點(diǎn)10續(xù)寫思路分析Para1：WhenTimgothomelatethatnight,hesawaneighborattheirdoor.蒂姆深夜回家，看到鄰居在門口。鄰居告訴他媽媽暈倒被送去了醫(yī)院。蒂姆心里一驚，后悔自己剛才對(duì)媽媽的態(tài)度。他騎上自行車飛速往醫(yī)院趕去，路上不斷回憶起媽媽平時(shí)對(duì)自己的關(guān)心和照顧。到了醫(yī)院，他看到媽媽躺在病床上，臉色蒼白。蒂姆走到媽媽身邊，淚水奪眶而出，輕輕握住媽媽的手。11續(xù)寫思路分析Para2：Afterridingforhalfanhour,Timarrivedatthehospital.蒂姆坐在媽媽床邊，想著媽媽的話。他意識(shí)到自己對(duì)媽媽太冷漠了，一直忽略了媽媽的感受。他決定以后要多關(guān)心媽媽，不再讓媽媽傷心。當(dāng)媽媽醒來(lái)后，蒂姆緊緊抱住媽媽，向她道歉。媽媽看到蒂姆的轉(zhuǎn)變，欣慰地笑了。從那以后，蒂姆和媽媽的關(guān)系變得更加親密。12Part3范文呈現(xiàn)13范文呈現(xiàn)WhenTimgothomelatethatnight,hesawaneighborattheirdoor.Theneighbortoldhimthathismotherhadfaintedandbeensenttothehospital.Timwasshockedandimmediatelyfeltapangofregretforhisharshwordstowardshismother.Hequicklyhoppedonhisbikeandpedaledasfastashecouldtowardsthehospital.Alongtheway,hewasfilledwiththoughtsofhismother'sloveandcare.Whenhearrivedatthehospital,herushedtohismother'sroomandsawherlyingonthebed,lookingpaleandweak.Hewalkeduptoherandgentlytookherhand,hiseyesfilledwithtears.14范文呈現(xiàn)Afterridingforhalfanhour,Timarrivedatthehospital.Hesatbesidehismother'sbed,thinkingaboutherwords.Herealizedhowselfishhehadbeenandhowmuchhehadhurthismother.Hedecidedtochangehisattitudeandbemorecaringtowardsher.Whenhismotherwokeup,Timhuggedhertightlyandapologized.Hismotherwashappytoseethechangeinhim.Fromthenon,Timandhismotherhadacloserrelationship.15升級(jí)版范文呈現(xiàn)WhenTimgothomelatethatnight,hesawaneighborattheirdoor.Theneighborinformedhimthathismotherhadfaintedandbeentakentothehospital.Shockedandremorseful,Timimmediatelyhoppedonhisbikeandpedaledasfastashecouldtowardsthehospital.Duringtheride,memoriesofhismother'scareandloveflashedthroughhismind.Hethoughtabouthowshehadalwaysbeenthereforhim,andhowhehadbeensothoughtlessandunkind.Ashearrivedatthehospital,herushedtohismother'sroom,hisheartpoundingwithworry.16升級(jí)版范文呈現(xiàn)Afterridingforhalfanhour,Timarrivedatthehospital.Hesatbesidehismother'sbed,lookingatherwithguiltandregret.Heknewhehadtomakethingsright.Whenhismotherwokeup,hegentlytookherhandandsaid,“Mom,I'msosorryforbeingsomeantoyou.IloveyouandIneedyou.”Hismothersmiledweakly,hereyesfilledwithloveandrelief.Fromthatmomenton,Timunderstoodtheimportanceofcherishinghismotherandtheirre