高考英語復習讀后續(xù)寫練習：足球場上的迷茫與成長：發(fā)現(xiàn)別樣的自己+課件

高考英語讀后續(xù)寫語篇練習足球場上的迷茫與成長：發(fā)現(xiàn)別樣的自己1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫原文Iwaselevenyearsold.Thiswasmyfirstsoccergame.Withlittleknowledgeoftherulesofthegame,Iwasnervousanduneasy,butstillexcited.Withkidsrunningatmefromalldirections,Iobservedtheskillsthatmanyofmyteammatespossessed.Theirmotionsappearedsosuggesthandeffortless,whiletheirfacesrevealedtheirattachmenttothegame.I,however,lackedthespiritofplayingaggressivelythatmanyoftheotherkidshad.Tomyknowledge,thisgameturnedouttobeanintenseone.Myteamwasfallingbehindtheentiregame,buttowardtheend,wetieditup.Iwatchedasparentsyelledandscreamed,findtoexcitementandemotion.Manyoftheparents,withtheirwavingarmsandcheerfuleyes,seemedmoreinvolvedinthegamethantheirchildren.4續(xù)寫原文Suddenly,itwasmyturntokicktheball.ThiswasmychancetorevealthatJwasasgoodaseveryoneelse.Ibroughtmylegbackandwasreadytokickwithallmystrength.Igaveagood,hardkick-oneofmybetter—butunfortunately,Ihadkickedtheballinthewrongdirection.Seeingthedisappointedfacesofthemembersofmyteam,Ifeltmyfacegofrompalewhitetobrightred;Iwantedtorunhome,fasterthanIeverraninasoccerpractice.Overthenextfewyears,Icontinuedtoparticipateinavarietyofsports,tryingtofindtheonewhereIwouldbethecenterofattentionfortherightreasons.Thatneverhappened.Veryoftenmyfathercouldn’twaittopractiseplayingsocceraroundthebackyardwithme.EachtimeIsomehowmanagedtotriponashoelace(鞋帶)ortripoverarock.Myfathercontinuedtopushme,andduringmyelementary-schoolyearsitseemedthatImightbecomequitetheathlete.Atthesametime,mylittlebrotherwassuddenlynotsolittleandbegantocontrolthefamilyathleticfield.HisabilityandpassionforsportsmademewonderwhyIwassodifferent.5段首句Paragraph1:Eventually,Iunderstoodsomethingallofasudden.Paragraph2:ItsuddenlyoccurredtomewhatIshoulddowithitnext.6Part2題目分析7續(xù)寫原文分析811歲時，“我”迎來了人生中的第一場足球比賽。由于對足球規(guī)則了解甚少，“我”既緊張又興奮。賽場上，隊友們動作熟練、充滿激情，而“我”卻缺乏那種積極拼搏的勁頭。比賽過程十分激烈，我方一直處于落后狀態(tài)，臨近結束時才艱難扳平比分。當輪到“我”踢球時，本想借此證明自己的實力，卻意外地將球踢向了錯誤的方向，引得隊友們滿臉失望，“我”羞愧得無地自容。此后的幾年里，“我”不斷嘗試各種體育運動，渴望能在某個項目中嶄露頭角，成為眾人矚目的焦點，然而卻總是事與愿違。父親一直鼓勵“我”，對“我”寄予厚望，在小學階段，他堅信“我”能成長為一名優(yōu)秀的運動員。但隨著弟弟逐漸長大，他在體育方面展現(xiàn)出了非凡的天賦和熱情，與“我”形成了鮮明的對比，這讓“我”開始對自己產(chǎn)生了深深的疑惑。點1：位于續(xù)寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語；點2：位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點3：位于續(xù)寫第二段段首，續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語；點4：文章結尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強調主題。情節(jié)構建的重點9續(xù)寫思路分析Paragraph1:Eventually,Iunderstoodsomethingallofasudden.終于，我突然明白了一些事情?；叵肫鹱约涸诟鞣N體育項目中的表現(xiàn)，那些失敗的經(jīng)歷像電影片段一樣在我腦海中不斷閃現(xiàn)。我意識到，自己在體育方面似乎并沒有天賦，無論怎樣努力，都無法達到像其他孩子那樣的水平，更無法成為眾人矚目的焦點。我曾經(jīng)為了在體育上取得成功，付出了大量的時間和精力，可結果卻總是不盡人意。我一直盲目地追隨他人的腳步，試圖在體育領域找到自己的價值，卻忽略了自己真正的興趣和優(yōu)勢。每個人都有自己獨特的天賦和特長，而我的天賦或許并不在體育上。我開始反思自己的愛好和特長，發(fā)現(xiàn)自己在繪畫和寫作方面有著濃厚的興趣，并且能夠從中獲得極大的快樂和滿足感。每當我拿起畫筆，或是在紙上寫下自己的想法時，內心就會充滿平靜和喜悅。我明白了，我不應該再在不適合自己的體育道路上苦苦掙扎，而是應該去尋找真正屬于自己的舞臺。10續(xù)寫思路分析Paragraph2:ItsuddenlyoccurredtomewhatIshoulddowithitnext.我突然想到了接下來該怎么做。我決定放下對體育的執(zhí)念，把更多的時間和精力投入到繪畫和寫作中。我開始主動參加學校的繪畫社團和寫作興趣小組，在那里，我結識了許多志同道合的朋友。我們一起交流繪畫技巧，分享寫作心得，互相學習，共同進步。在繪畫社團里，我認真學習各種繪畫技法，不斷嘗試新的風格和題材。我用畫筆描繪出自己眼中的世界，將內心的情感和想法通過一幅幅作品表達出來。在寫作興趣小組里，我閱讀了大量的優(yōu)秀作品，學習了不同的寫作手法和技巧。我開始嘗試創(chuàng)作自己的故事和文章，將生活中的點滴感悟記錄下來。隨著時間的推移，我的繪畫和寫作水平有了顯著的提高。我的作品在學校的比賽中多次獲獎，得到了老師和同學們的認可和贊揚。我終于找到了屬于自己的價值和自信，明白了只有做自己真正熱愛的事情，才能綻放出最耀眼的光芒。11Part3范文呈現(xiàn)12范文呈現(xiàn)Eventually,Iunderstoodsomethingallofasudden.Lookingbackonmyperformanceinvarioussports,thosefailureexperienceskeptflashinginmymindlikemovieclips.IrealizedthatIdidn'tseemtohaveanytalentinsports.NomatterhowhardItried,Icouldn'treachthelevelofotherkids,letalonebecomethecenterofattention.Ihadspentalotoftimeandenergytryingtosucceedinsports,buttheresultswerealwaysdisappointing.Ihadbeenblindlyfollowingothers'footsteps,tryingtofindmyownvalueinthefieldofsports,butIhadoverlookedmyownrealinterestsandstrengths.Everyonehastheirownuniquetalentsandspecialties,andmytalentmightnotbeinsports.IstartedtoreflectonmyhobbiesandstrengthsandfoundthatIhadastronginterestinpaintingandwritingandcouldgetgreatjoyandsatisfactionfromthem.WheneverIpickedupapaintbrushorwrotedownmythoughtsonpaper,myheartwouldbefilledwithpeaceandjoy.IunderstoodthatIshouldn'tstruggleontheunsuitablesportspathanymore,butshouldlookforthestagethatreallybelongedtome.13范文呈現(xiàn)ItsuddenlyoccurredtomewhatIshoulddowithitnext.Idecidedtoletgoofmyobsessionwithsportsanddevotemoretimeandenergytopaintingandwriting.Ibegantoactivelyparticipateintheschool'spaintingclubandwritinginterestgroup.There,Imetmanylike-mindedfriends.Weexchangedpaintingtechniquesandsharedwritingexperiences,learningfromeachotherandmakingprogresstogether.Inthepaintingclub,Iseriouslylearnedvariouspaintingtechniquesandkepttryingnewstylesandthemes.Iusedmypaintbrushtodepicttheworldinmyeyesandexpressedmyinnerfeelingsandthoughtsthroughmyworks.Inthewritinginterestgroup,Ireadalargenumberofexcellentworksandlearneddifferentwritingtechniquesandskills.Istartedtotrytocreatemyownstoriesandarticles,recordingthelittlefeelingsandinsightsinlife.Astimewentby,mypaintingandwritinglevelsimprovedsignificantly.Myworkswonmanyawardsinschoolcompetitionsandwererecognizedandpraisedbyteachersandclassmates.IfinallyfoundmyownvalueandconfidenceandunderstoodthatonlybydoingwhatIreallylovedcouldIshinethemostdazzlinglight.14升級版范文呈現(xiàn)Eventually,Iunderstoodsomethingallofasudden.AsIcastmymindbackonmyperformanceindiversesportsarenas,thosecountlessfailureexperienceskeptflickeringinmymindlikescenesfromanever-endingmovie.ItdawnedonmethatIseeminglylackedanyinnatetalentinsports.NomatterhowstrenuouslyIstrived,Iwasunabletomatchtheproficiencyofotherkids,letaloneemergeasthecenterofattention.Ihadsquanderedavastamountoftimeandenergyinmyrelentlesspursuitofsuccessinsports,yettheoutcomeswereinvariablydisheartening.Ihadbeenmindlesslytrailinginthefootstepsofothers,desperatelyattemptingtounearthmyownworthwithintherealmofsports,allthewhileturningablindeyetomygenuineinterestsandstrengths.Itstruckmethateachindividualpossessestheirowndistinctsetoftalentsandaptitudes,andperhapsmyfortelayelsewhere.Iembarkedonajourneyofself-reflection,ponderingovermyhobbiesandstrengths.Tomydelight,IdiscoveredthatIharboredaprofoundpassionforpaintingandwriting,andtheseactivitiesconsistentlybestoweduponmeaprofoundsenseofjoyandfulfillment.EverytimeIpickedupapaintbrushorputpentopaper,myheartwouldbesuffusedwithasenseoftranquilityandcontentment.IcametotherealizationthatIshouldnolongerpersistinmyfutilestruggleonthisill-suitedsportspathbutinsteadsetouttoseekthestagethattrulybelongedtome.15升級版范文呈現(xiàn)ItsuddenlyoccurredtomewhatIshoulddonext.Iresolvedtorelinquishmyfixationonsportsandredirectmytimeandenergytowardspaintingandwriting.Ipromptlyinitiatedmyactiveparticipationintheschool'spaintingclubandwritinginterestgroup.There,Ihadtheprivilegeofmeetingamultitudeoflike-mindedindividuals.Weengagedinlivelyexchangesofpaintingtechniquesandsharedourwritingexperiences,constantlylearningfromoneanotherandmakingcollectiveprogress.Withinthepaintingclub,Iimmersedmyselfinthestudyofvariouspaintingtechniques,fearlesslyventuringintonewstylesandthemes.IemployedmypaintbrushasamediumtocapturetheworldasIperceivedit,channelingmyinnermost