高考英語復(fù)習(xí)讀后續(xù)寫練習(xí)：倫敦馬拉松的暖心互助時刻+課件

高考英語讀后續(xù)寫語篇練習(xí)倫敦馬拉松的暖心互助時刻1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫原文Trainingforamarathonisoneofthemostphysicallydemandingactivitiesyoucanwillinglyputyourselfthrough.Andwhentheracedayfinallycomesaftermonthsoftrainingandhoursspentrunningontheplaygroundyouwanttofinishtheracewell.Butsometimes,thatjustdoesn’thappen.Awarmmomenthappenedamongthreerunners,andwiththehelpoftwootherrunners,therewasarunnerwhoreachedthefinishlineandfinishedtherace.It’sreportedthatthethreerunnersdidn’tknoweachotherbeforetherace.4續(xù)寫原文Thatmomenthappenedatthe203LondonMarathon.ArunnernamedLouisexperiencedthisasheworkedhiswaytowardstheendoftherace.Themanbegantodoubleover(彎腰)andwasontheedgeofcollapsing(昏倒)asotherrunnerspassedby.Clearly,hewastootiredtofinishtherace.Butitwasonly200metersleft.Andhemightfalltothegroundatanytime.Sotired,Louisfelltothegroundandlookedwhiteandupset.Atthatmoment,arunnersawLouiswhoneededhelp,sotherunnerrantohimandpickedhimup.“AreyouOK?”therunneraskedLouis.“Iamtootiredtokeeprunning,”Louisreplied.“Comeon!Letmesupportyoutothefinishline200metersaway,”therunnersaidandgrabbedhisarm.5續(xù)寫原文“Itisverykindofyou,”Louissaidhappily.Withthehelpoftherunner,therewereonly150metersawayfromthefinishline.Butitseemedthathecouldn’tholdLouissteadyenough,Louiswasinabadconditionandwouldfalltothegroundatanytime.Therunnerwasveryanxiousandwatchedhelplesslyasotherrunnersrantothefinishline,notknowingwhattodo.AlthoughtherunnertriedhisbesttosupportLouissteady,Louisfelltothegroundagain.6段首句Paragraph1：Justatthatmoment,anotherrunnercamefrombehindLouis.Paragraph2Withthehelpofthetworunners,Louisfinallyreachedthefinishline.7Part2題目分析8續(xù)寫原文分析9馬拉松訓(xùn)練極為艱苦，選手都渴望在比賽中順利完賽。在2023年倫敦馬拉松賽上，選手路易斯臨近終點時體力不支，幾近昏倒。此時一名選手發(fā)現(xiàn)后，主動上前攙扶，助他前行。然而，只剩150米時，因一人難以支撐，路易斯再次摔倒。就在這關(guān)鍵時刻，另一名選手及時出現(xiàn)，一場感人的互助接力就此展開。點1：位于續(xù)寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語；點2：位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點3：位于續(xù)寫第二段段首，續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語；點4：文章結(jié)尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點10續(xù)寫思路分析Para1：Justatthatmoment,anotherrunnercamefrombehindLouis.就在這時，另一名選手從路易斯身后趕來。他看到路易斯摔倒在地，以及旁邊那名滿臉焦急的選手，立刻明白發(fā)生了什么。沒有絲毫猶豫，他迅速跑到路易斯身旁，蹲下身子，一只手穿過路易斯的腋下，用力將他扶起。然后對另一位幫忙的選手說：“我們一起，一定能把他送到終點！”兩人分別在路易斯兩側(cè)，緊緊攙扶著他，一步一步向前挪動。盡管路易斯身體沉重，腳步踉蹌，但他們?nèi)说难凵裰卸纪钢鴪远?，一心朝著終點前進(jìn)。11續(xù)寫思路分析Para2：Withthehelpofthetworunners,Louisfinallyreachedthefinishline.在兩名選手的幫助下，路易斯終于抵達(dá)了終點線。沖線的那一刻，全場觀眾爆發(fā)出熱烈的掌聲和歡呼聲。路易斯雖疲憊不堪，卻滿臉感激，他對兩位幫助他的選手說道：“沒有你們，我不可能完成比賽，太感謝了！”兩位選手笑著回應(yīng)：“這是我們應(yīng)該做的，大家都是為了完成這場挑戰(zhàn)?！边@場馬拉松比賽，不僅是體力的較量，更是人性善良與互助精神的體現(xiàn)，而這溫暖的一幕，也將永遠(yuǎn)留在人們的記憶中。12Part3范文呈現(xiàn)13范文呈現(xiàn)Justatthatmoment,anotherrunnercamefrombehindLouis.HesawLouislyingonthegroundandthefirstrunnerlookinganxious.Withoutthinkingtwice,herantowardsthemquickly.KneelingdownbesideLouis,heputhisarmaroundLouis'sshoulderandsaid,"Don'tworry.I'mheretohelp."Then,heandthefirstrunnerstoodoneithersideofLouis,firmlysupportinghim.TheyencouragedLouiswithkindwordsandslowlymovedforwardstepbystep.AlthoughLouiswasextremelyweakandcouldbarelymovehislegs,thethreeofthemweredeterminedtoreachthefinishlinetogether.14范文呈現(xiàn)Withthehelpofthetworunners,Louisfinallyreachedthefinishline.Astheycrossedtheline,thecrowderuptedintoapplauseandcheers.Louis,exhaustedbutgrateful,turnedtothetworunnersandsaid,"Icouldn'thavemadeitwithoutyou.Thankyousomuch!"Thetworunnerssmiledandreplied,"It'swhatweshoulddo.Weareallheretocompletethischallenge."Thismarathonracewasnotonlyatestofphysicalstrengthbutalsoashowcaseofthekindnessandmutualassistanceamongpeople.Thiswarmmomentwouldbeengravedineveryone'smemoryforever.15升級版范文呈現(xiàn)Justatthatmoment,anotherrunnercamefrombehindLouis.SpottingLouislyinghelplesslyonthegroundandthefirstrunnerindistress,thisnew-comerrushedoverwithouthesitation.KneelingdownbesideLouis,hefirmlyputhisarmaroundLouis'sshoulder,saying,"Holdon!I'mheretogiveyouahand."Then,shoulder-to-shoulderwiththefirsthelper,theyflankedLouis,lendinghimstrongsupport.Withwordsofencouragement,theyinchedforward,stepbystep.DespiteLouis'sextremeweakness,theirdeterminationwasunwavering,astheywereallsetonreachingthefinishlinetogether.16升級版范文呈現(xiàn)Withthehelpofthetworunners,Louisfinallyreachedthefinishline.Astheycrossedthatsignificantline,theon-lookingcrowderuptedintothunderousapplauseandcheers.Exhaustedyetfilledwithgratitude,Louisturnedtohistwosaviorsandsaid,"Itwasyoutwowhomadethispossible.Thankyoufromthebottomofmyheart!"Smiling,thetworunnersreplied,"It'ssimplywhatrunnersdoforeachother.We'reallinthischallengetogether."Thismarathonwasn'tmerelyatestofphys