高考英語復(fù)習(xí)讀后續(xù)寫練習(xí)：母親節(jié)禮物：愛無需昂貴

高考英語讀后續(xù)寫語篇練習(xí)母親節(jié)禮物：愛無需昂貴1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫原文Onthewalkhomefromschool,myfriend,Cherry,happilysaid,“TomorrowisMother’sDay.I’vebeensavingupforthepastmonthandplantobuymymothertheperfume(香水)she’sbeenwantingforsolong.”HerexcitementmademerealizethatIhadn’tpreparedanythingspecialyet.ButIonlyhadalittlemoneyleft.Ibegantoregretspendingsomuchonsnackseveryday.4續(xù)寫原文Icontinuedwalkingalongtheroad,carefullythinkingaboutwhatgiftIshouldchoose.Iplannedtobuysomethinglikeflowersorchocolate,butnowitseemedlikethosewerewaytoosimple.Therefore,Ipushedopenthedoortoamallandtriedtofindtheperfectgift.Thebrightlightsshinedthecollectionofvariousgoods.Ipickedupalipstick(口紅)butimmediatelyputitbackafterseeingitsprice.Icouldneveraffordthat!ThenIwalkedintoanothershopandsawalovelycup.Ipickeditupandturneditovertoseethepricelisted,hopingitwasnottooexpensive.Butonceagain,Icouldn’tafforditevenwithallthemoneythatIhad.Feelingsad,Icontinuedtowanderaroundtheshops.Timeflewbyquickly,andbeforeIknewit,theskybegantodarken,soIhadtogohome.5續(xù)寫原文Sincetherewasnotimeormoneyformetopickoutagift,Idecidedtomakeasimplecard.Iheldupthecard,examiningitshardcover,handwrittenletterandthetinypicturesI’ddrawnofmymomandme.It’sprobablynevergoingtocomparetotheexpensivegiftsthatmyfriendsboughtfortheirmothers,Ithoughtsadly.6段首句Paragraph1：Soon,morningcame,anditwastimetogivemymothermyhandmadecard.Paragraph2：“Ilovethiscard!”Mymothersaidexcitedly.7Part2題目分析8續(xù)寫原文分析9放學(xué)路上，朋友Cherry興奮地說起為母親節(jié)準(zhǔn)備了心儀已久的香水，這讓“我”意識到自己還未準(zhǔn)備禮物，可手頭錢少?！拔摇比ド虉鰧ひ挘诩t、杯子等心儀之物都因價格望而卻步。無奈之下，“我”回家制作了一張簡單賀卡，雖覺得比不上朋友們的昂貴禮物，但也只能如此。故事圍繞“我”在母親節(jié)為母親挑選禮物的波折展開。點1：位于續(xù)寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語；點2：位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點3：位于續(xù)寫第二段段首，續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語；點4：文章結(jié)尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強(qiáng)調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點10續(xù)寫思路分析Para1：Soon,morningcame,anditwastimetogivemymothermyhandmadecard.很快，清晨來臨，到了給母親送自制賀卡的時候。我雙手微微顫抖著，緩緩將賀卡遞到母親面前，心臟好似敲鼓般咚咚直跳。我低著頭，聲音略帶顫抖地說道：“媽媽，這是給您的。很抱歉，它不像別人送的禮物那么精美。”母親臉上掛著溫柔的笑容，輕輕接過賀卡。她緩緩打開，目光仔細(xì)地掃過每一個字、每一幅畫，眼神中滿是專注與溫柔。11續(xù)寫思路分析Para2：“Ilovethiscard!”Mymothersaidexcitedly.“我太喜歡這張賀卡了！”母親激動地說道。緊接著，她一把將我拉進(jìn)懷里，緊緊抱住。“這是我收到過最珍貴的禮物。你的愛和用心，對我來說無比重要。有了你，我不需要那些昂貴的東西。”母親的話如同一股暖流，瞬間驅(qū)散了我心中的不安與擔(dān)憂。我這才深深明白，愛從來都不是用金錢來衡量的。禮物中飽含的心意與關(guān)懷，才是最最珍貴的。從這個母親節(jié)開始，我徹底領(lǐng)悟了給予的真正意義。12Part3范文呈現(xiàn)13范文呈現(xiàn)Soon,morningcame,anditwastimetogivemymothermyhandmadecard.Withmyhandsshakingslightly,Islowlyhandedthecardtoher.MyheartwaspoundingsohardthatIcouldhearitinmyears.Iloweredmyheadandsaidinatremblingvoice,"Mom,thisisforyou.I'mreallysorryit'snotasfancyasothergifts."Withagentlesmileonherface,mymothertookthecardcarefully.Sheopeneditslowlyandhereyesscannedeverywordandeverydrawingattentively.14范文呈現(xiàn)"Ilovethiscard!"Mymothersaidexcitedly.Thenshepulledmeintoherarmsandhuggedmetightly."It'sthemostpreciousgiftI'veeverreceived.Yourloveandtheeffortyouputintoitmeaneverythingtome.Idon'tneedexpensivethingswhenIhaveyourlove."Herwordsmadeallmyworriesdisappear.Irealizedthatlovecan'tbemeasuredbymoney.It'sthethoughtandcareinthegiftthattrulycount.FromthatMother'sDayon,Iunderstoodtherealmeaningofgiving.15升級版范文呈現(xiàn)Soon,morningcame,anditwastimetogivemymothermyhandmadecard.Withmyheartthumpingwildly,Igingerlyextendedthecardtowardsher,myhandsbetrayingafainttremor.Headbowed,Imurmuredinaquiveringvoice,"Mom,thisisforyou.I'mdreadfullysorryitpalesincomparisontotheelaborategiftsothersmightoffer."Atendersmilegracingherfeatures,mymotheracceptedthecardwithutmostcare.Assheunfoldeditslowly,hereyesmeticulouslytracedeveryword,everydelicatedrawing,hergazebrimmingwithaffection.16升級版范文呈現(xiàn)"Ilovethiscard!"Mymotherexclaimedwithenthusiasm.Instantly,shedrewmeintoawarmembrace,holdingmetightly."It'sthemostpricelessgiftI'veeverreceived.Yourloveandthepainstakingeffortyouinvestedmeantheworldtome.Idon'tneedcostlypresentswhenIhaveyourheartfeltdevotion."Herwordsdissolvedallmyanxietieslikemagic.Itdawnedonmethatlovedefiesquantificationbymonetaryvalue.It'sthethoughtfuln