+讀后續(xù)寫練習+復活節(jié)假期：勇救溺水伙伴 高三上學期英語一輪復習專項

高考英語讀后續(xù)寫語篇練習復活節(jié)假期：勇救溺水伙伴1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現范文呈現努力方向2Part1題目呈現3續(xù)寫原文ItwastheEasterholidays,andschoolwasclosedfortwoweeks.Forme,theEasterholidaysweresoboringthatitwasimpossibletofindsomethingfuntodo.MymomhadsuggestedthatIdosomestudiessincethepromotiontestwascomingup.However,Ididn’tfollowmymother’ssuggestion.Instead,Iwentoutsidetoseekoutmyfriendstoplaywith.WhenIhadsuccessfullycontactedsomeofmyfriends,noneofthemseemedtobemuchinaplayfulmood,butonefriendJimmyagreedtoplaywithme.Hesuggestedwegodowntotheriverandjustrelaxthere.Theriverwasnotfarfrommyhome,andwearrivedtherequickly.4續(xù)寫原文Justrelaxingontheriverbankwithnothingbutsomewastelogs,itwasn’tfunforusatfirst.Clearlywhatwasonourmindswastojumpintotheriverandjusttakeaswimintheclearcoolwater.Sowetookoffourclothesdowntoourunderwearandwalkedintotheshallowpartofthewater.Thewaterwastrulycoolandrefreshingandwewerestartingtohavefunthen,playingandlaughing,aswesplashedthecoolwaterontoeachother’sfaces.5續(xù)寫原文Thenwestartedtochaseeachotheraroundontheriverbankandthenweranstraightintotheriver.Wewerehavingsomuchfunthatwedidn’tnoticedangerwasaroundthecorner.BeforeJimmycouldknowit,andbeforehecoulddoanythingtokeephisbalance,helosthisfootingonatreebranch,whichwasintheshallowpartofthewater,andslipped,bringinghiswholeentirebodyintothedeepwater.Hetriedtoresurfacefromthewaterbutfounditextremelyhardtokeephisheadabovethewater.6段首句Paragraph1：IwasscaredtoseehimstrugglinginthewaterbutIknewImustrescuehim.Paragraph2：Afterawhile,Jimmyrecoveredfrompanicandthankedmymomandtheneighbors.7Part2題目分析8續(xù)寫原文分析9在復活節(jié)兩周的假期里，“我”覺得無聊，不聽媽媽學習的建議，和朋友吉米去河邊玩。起初在河邊無聊，他們下水嬉戲，之后在河岸追逐又沖進河里。玩耍時，吉米沒注意到水里的樹枝，失足滑倒掉進深水區(qū)，難以保持頭部露出水面?！拔摇币姞睿赂沂┚?，在鄰居幫助下成功救起吉米。事后吉米恢復，感謝媽媽和鄰居，“我”也從這次經歷中領悟到警惕危險與助人的重要性。點1：位于續(xù)寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語；點2：位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點3：位于續(xù)寫第二段段首，續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語；點4：文章結尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強調主題。情節(jié)構建的重點10續(xù)寫思路分析Para1:

IwasscaredtoseehimstrugglinginthewaterbutIknewImustrescuehim.看到吉米在水中掙扎，我害怕極了，但救人的念頭讓我迅速冷靜下來。我顧不上自己的恐懼，像離弦之箭般飛速游向他。每劃動一下手臂，我的心跳就愈發(fā)劇烈。好不容易靠近他，我用盡全身力氣，伸手緊緊抓住他的胳膊。我咬緊牙關，拼命往岸邊拉，可吉米的身體很重，拉起來十分艱難。就在我感到體力不支時，鄰居們聽到動靜趕來了。他們迅速找來一根長樹枝，伸向我們，在大家齊心協力下，終于把吉米拉上了岸。11續(xù)寫思路分析Para2：Afterawhile,Jimmyrecoveredfrompanicandthankedmymomandtheneighbors.過了一會兒，吉米從驚慌中緩過神來。這時，媽媽也匆匆趕到，她心疼地把毯子裹在吉米身上。吉米眼中滿是感激，他聲音還有些顫抖，不住地感謝媽媽和鄰居們。他拉著我的手說，能有我這樣的朋友是他的幸運，我們的友誼更加深厚了。鄰居們紛紛夸贊我勇敢，那一刻，我心里既自豪又感慨。這次經歷讓我明白，在危險時刻保持警覺和幫助他人是多么重要，這個復活節(jié)假期也因此變得意義非凡。12Part3范文呈現13范文呈現IwasscaredtoseehimstrugglinginthewaterbutIknewImustrescuehim.Overcomingmyfearinstantly,Idartedtowardshimlikeanarrow.Myheartwaspoundinglikeadrum,andeverystrokeofmyarmsseemedtoechotheurgencyofthesituation.WhenIfinallyreachedhim,Igraspedhisarmfirmlywithallmystrength.Pullinghimtowardstheshorewasanarduoustaskashisbodywasheavyandresistant.JustasIwasstartingtofeelexhausted,someneighborsheardthenoiseandrushedtothescene.Withouthesitation,theyextendedalongbranchtowardsus.Withtheirhelp,wemanagedtopullJimmyontothesafetyoftheshore.14范文呈現Afterawhile,Jimmyrecoveredfrompanicandthankedmymomandtheneighbors.Mymom,whohadbeenalertedbythecommotion,arrivedinahurryandwrappedJimmyinawarmblanket.Jimmy,stillabitshaken,expressedhisgratitudesincerely.Hesaidthathewasextremelyluckytohavemeasafriendandthatourfriendshiphadbecomeevenstronger.Theneighborspraisedmycourage,sayingthatIhadshowngreatbraveryinthefaceofdanger.Fromthatdayon,Irealizedthesignificanceofbeingvigilantandhelpingothersintimesofcrisis.ThisEasterholidayhadbecomeanunforgettableexperiencethattaughtmeavaluablelesson.15升級版范文呈現IwasscaredtoseehimstrugglinginthewaterbutIknewImustrescuehim.Fearmomentarilygrippedme,yetthedeterminationtosavemyfriendoverrodeitcompletely.Dartingtowardshimwithallmymight,Iresembledanarrowshotfromabow,myheartpoundinginmychestlikeawardrum.Eachstrokeofmyarmsthroughthewaterwasadesperateattempttoreachhim.UponfinallyreachingJimmy,Iclaspedhisarmwithavice-likegrip,summoningeveryounceofstrengthwithinme.Pullinghimtowardstheshorewasanuphillbattle,ashisbody,weigheddownbypanicandwater,resistedmyefforts.Justwhenfatiguethreatenedtooverwhelmme,thearrivaloftheneighborsbroughtaglimmerofhope.Withoutamoment'sdelay,theyextendedalongbranchtowardsus,andinacollectiveeffort,wemanagedtohaulJimmyontothesafetyoftheriverbank.16升級版范文呈現Afterawhile,Jimmyrecoveredfrompanicandthankedmymomandtheneighbors.Mymom,alertedbythecommotion,rushedtothesceneinaflurry.Withamotherlytouch,shewrappedJimmyinawarmblanket,offeringcomfortandsolace.Jimmy,stillvisiblyshaken,expressedhisgratitudewithheartfeltwords.Heemphasizedhowfortunatehewastohavemeasafriend,andhowthisincidenthadforgedanevendeeperbondbetweenus.Theneighbors,theireyesfilledwithadmiration,commendedmycourage,highlightingthebraveryIhaddisplayedinthefaceofdanger.Fromthatdayforward,Iwasacutelyawareoftheimportanceofremainingvigilantandextendingahelp