人教版八年級(jí)下冊(cè)英語 Unit 3 Could you please clean your room？滿分話題作文范文與解析 學(xué)案

第第頁人教版八年級(jí)下冊(cè)英語Unit3Couldyoupleasecleanyourroom？滿分話題作文范文與解析學(xué)案1．假設(shè)你是麗莎(Lisa),某英文報(bào)刊正在就“ShouldTeenagersHelpTheirParentswithHousework”這一話題展開征文活動(dòng)，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)自己的體會(huì)，寫一篇短文向該報(bào)社投稿。提示：1.What’syouropinion(觀點(diǎn))aboutit?2.Whyshouldteenagershelptheirparentswithhousework?3.Whataretheadvantages(好處)ofdoinghousework?要求：1.語句通順、符合邏輯，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。2.不少于70詞。開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。DearSirorMadam,Ithinkthat_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourstruly,Lisa【答案】DearSirorMadam,Ithinkthatteenagerslikemeshouldhelpourparentswithhousework.First,doinghouseworkmakesusindependent.Wecan’tdependonourparentsallthetime.Soweshouldlearnhowtotakecareofourselvesnow.Second,doinghouseworkisakindofphysicalexercise.Ithelpsusstayhealthyandstrong.Third,sinceweliveinahousewithourparents,it’sfairforustoworktogetherandmakethehousecleanandcomfortable.Allinall,doinghouseworkhelpsustolearnlifeskillsandunderstandtheideaoffairness.SoIthinkteenagersshouldlearntoenjoydoingitwithourparents.

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Lisa【解析】【詳解】本文是根據(jù)自己的體會(huì)，寫一篇短文向該報(bào)社，所以句子的主語用第一人稱，句子的謂語動(dòng)詞用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，所寫的句子應(yīng)該符合英語語法，要使用高級(jí)的句式和詞匯。短文用了一些短語和句式，如：helpsbwithsth幫助某人做某事；takecareof照顧；itis+形容詞+forsbtodosth,makesth+形容詞；enjoydoingsth喜歡做某事。用了that，since引導(dǎo)的從句，增加了文章的亮點(diǎn)。2．學(xué)生做家務(wù)不僅可以培養(yǎng)勞動(dòng)意識(shí)，而且有利于掌握一些生活技能。假設(shè)學(xué)校正在開展“珍愛親情，我愛做家務(wù)”的征文活動(dòng)，請(qǐng)你針對(duì)該話題寫一篇英語短文。要求:1.條理清楚，語義連貫，句式規(guī)范。2.詞數(shù)100左右，文意開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Asamiddleschoolstudent,Ithinkdoinghouseworkisgoodforme.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文Asamiddleschoolstudent,Ithinkdoinghouseworkisgoodforme.First,doinghouseworkcannotonlydevelopmyabilitytolookaftermyselfwellbutalsomakemeindependent.Afterall,Ican’tdependonothersallmylife.Second,doinghouseworkcanhelpsharemyparents’work.Itcanalsoimprovetherelationshipbetweenmyparentsandme.Finally,doinghouseworkcankeepmyroomtidy,soIcanhaveacomfortableplacetoliveandstudy.Inshort,it’sreallygoodforstudentstodohouseworkathome.【解析】【詳解】題干解讀：題目要求對(duì)學(xué)生做家務(wù)這一話題，發(fā)表自己的看法，講述學(xué)生做家務(wù)的一些好處。這是一個(gè)話題作文，題目中只給出了寫作的話題，而具體的寫作內(nèi)容，需要學(xué)生們自己發(fā)揮想象力進(jìn)行詳細(xì)地闡述。短文應(yīng)使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)、第一人稱來敘述。例文點(diǎn)評(píng)：例文寫得非常優(yōu)秀，文章是總分總的結(jié)構(gòu)，層次清晰。第一段點(diǎn)明文章主旨，下面從三個(gè)方面敘述了做家務(wù)的好處，使用了First,Second和Finally，敘述詳細(xì)、清晰。最后用一句話作總結(jié)。句式結(jié)構(gòu)文章，符合英語的表達(dá)需要。語法規(guī)范、語言準(zhǔn)確。高分亮點(diǎn)：短語：Asamiddleschoolstudent；isgoodfor；lookafter；Afterall；dependon；allmylife；keepmyroomtidy；haveacomfortableplacetoliveandstudy；Inshort。句型：Ithinkdoinghouseworkisgoodforme.；First,doinghouseworkcannotonlydevelopmyabilitytolookaftermyselfwellbutalsomakemeindependent；Finally,doinghouseworkcankeepmyroomtidy,soIcanhaveacomfortableplacetoliveandstudy.；Inshort,it’sreallygoodforstudentstodohouseworkathome3．請(qǐng)你根據(jù)提示及要求，以Let’shelpourparentsdochores為題，寫一篇英文倡議書。要點(diǎn)提示：（1）父母工作繁忙，我們應(yīng)該分擔(dān)家務(wù)；（2）我們可以做的家務(wù)有：整理床鋪、打掃房間，洗衣服，洗餐具、倒垃圾等。寫作要求：（1）包括所有要點(diǎn)提示，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；（2）80詞左右(開頭結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))。Let’shelpourparentsdochoresDearstudents,Helpingourparentsdochoresisoneofthebestwaystocareaboutthem._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Doingchoresisnotdifficult,butitmeansalot.Fromnowon,let’shelpourparentsdochores.【答案】例文Let’shelpourparentsdochoresDearstudents,Helpingourparentsdochoresisoneofthebestwaystocareaboutthem.Ourparentsarealwaysbusywithwork.Theyaretiredafterwork,buttheystillhavetodochores.Ifwehelpthemdosomechores,theywillhavemoretimetorest.Andsharinghouseworkcanhelpusunderstandourparentsbetter.Soweshouldhelpthemdohouseworkasmuchaswecan.Infact,wecandolotsofhouseworkathome.Forexample,wecouldmakethebed,cleanuptheroom,washclothes,dothedishesandtakeoutthetrash.Doingchoresisnotdifficult,butitmeansalot.Fromnowon,let’shelpourparentsdochores.【解析】【詳解】1.題干解讀：題目要求以“Let’shelpourparentsdochores”為題，根據(jù)寫作要點(diǎn)寫一篇倡議書，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：首先第一部分，指明要幫助父母做家務(wù)的原因以及做家務(wù)的好處，此處人稱主要為第三人稱；其次第二部分，談?wù)勎覀內(nèi)粘Ｉ钪锌梢宰龅募覄?wù)有哪些，此處人稱主要為第一人稱；最后總結(jié)感受，此處文章已給出結(jié)尾。全文時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，行文時(shí)要涵蓋要點(diǎn)提示，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，思路清晰，層次分明。4．在一堂英語課上,老師組織全體同學(xué)開展有關(guān)“做家務(wù)活”的小組調(diào)查活動(dòng)。假設(shè)下表是你所做的小組調(diào)查記錄,請(qǐng)你根據(jù)記錄信息,用英語向全班同學(xué)進(jìn)行匯報(bào)。要求:1.將表格信息全部用上。2.適當(dāng)發(fā)揮,談?wù)勀銓?duì)做家務(wù)活的看法。3.詞數(shù):60～80個(gè)。(開頭及結(jié)尾已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))NameChoresLiMingCleanuproomsLinMeiHelpMomcookdinnerWangJieWashclothesIWatertheflowersDearclass,Goodmorning!Nowletmereportthediscussionworkinourgroup.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________That’sall.Thanksforlistening!【答案】Dearclass,Goodmorning!Nowletmereportthediscussionworkinourgroup.LiMingcleansuproomsatweekendsandLinMeilikescookingdinnerwithhermother.WangJiesometimeswashesclothesforherfamily.Asforme,Iusuallyhelpmyfatherwatertheflowers.Inmyopinion,itisnecessaryforusstudentstodosomechores.Bydoingchores,wecanhelpourparentsandunderstandthembetter.We’llalsolearntotakecareofourselves.Besides,wecanrelaxourselvesfromhardworkanddevelopourabilities.That’sall.Thanksforlistening!【解析】【詳解】在一堂英語課上,老師組織全體同學(xué)開展有關(guān)“做家務(wù)活”的小組調(diào)查活動(dòng)。假設(shè)下表是你所做的小組調(diào)查記錄,請(qǐng)你根據(jù)記錄信息,用英語向全班同學(xué)進(jìn)行匯報(bào)。注意文中使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，第一段主語用第三人稱單數(shù)，最后一段用第一人稱，寫作時(shí)，要注意謂語動(dòng)詞形式的變化。另外，還需要使用一些句型和短語，使整篇短文意思連貫，表達(dá)流暢?！军c(diǎn)睛】作者寫作時(shí)，還使用了較為豐富的句型，如WangJiesometimeswashesclothesforherfamily；Inmyopinion,itisnecessaryforusstudentstodosomechores.這些給文中增色不少。5．假如你是李明，下表是你所做的一項(xiàng)關(guān)于“做家務(wù)活”的討論記錄，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)這個(gè)記錄用英語向全班同學(xué)做一個(gè)匯報(bào)。提示：1.匯報(bào)內(nèi)容：你和同學(xué)所做的家務(wù)活；你對(duì)做家務(wù)活的看法；2.詞數(shù)：80左右，匯報(bào)的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。NamesHouseworkWuJunCleanuproomsatweekJiaMeiHelpmothercookdinnerWangPingWashclothesI……Dearclass,Goodmorning!I`mLiMing.Nowletmereportthediscussionabouthouseworkinourgroup.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________That’sall.Thanksforlistening!【答案】Dearclass,Goodmorning!I`mLiMing.Nowletmereportthediscussionabouthouseworkinourgroup.WuJuncleansuproomsattheweekendandJiaMeilikescookingdinnerwithhermother.WangPingsometimeswashesclothesforherfamily.Asforme,Iusuallyhelpmyfatherwatertheflowers.Inmyopinion,itisnecessaryforusstudentstodosomehousework.Bydoingit,wecanhelpourparentsandunderstandthembetter.We’llalsolearntotakecareofourselves.Besides,wecanrelaxourselvesfromhardworkanddevelopourabilities.That’sall.Thanksforlistening!【解析】【詳解】這是一篇材料作文，也是一篇演講稿。假如你是李明，下表是你所做的一項(xiàng)關(guān)于“做家務(wù)活”的討論記錄，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)這個(gè)記錄用英語向全班同學(xué)做一個(gè)匯報(bào)。本文人稱主要第一人稱，時(shí)態(tài)主要是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。仔細(xì)閱讀提示和要點(diǎn)、注意事項(xiàng)。這些要點(diǎn)構(gòu)成寫作的基本框架。動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不要遺漏要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，適當(dāng)使用連詞，敘述的條理性。根據(jù)提示要點(diǎn)，列出本文的寫作提綱，提綱包括所有提示要點(diǎn)。寫完以后，注意再讀一遍，看看有無拼寫、語法錯(cuò)誤（時(shí)態(tài)、主謂一致等）。本文提綱：尊敬的同學(xué)們：早上好！我是李明?，F(xiàn)在讓我報(bào)告一下我們小組關(guān)于做家務(wù)的討論。吳軍周末打掃房間，賈梅喜歡和媽媽一起做飯。王平有時(shí)為家人洗衣服。至于我，我通常幫我父親澆花。在我看來，我們學(xué)生有必要做些家務(wù)。通過這樣做，我們可以幫助我們的父母，更好地理解他們。我們也會(huì)學(xué)會(huì)照顧自己。此外，我們可以放松自己，從艱苦的工作和發(fā)展我們的能力。就這些。謝謝你的聆聽！【點(diǎn)睛】這篇文章語言規(guī)范，敘事清楚，時(shí)態(tài)運(yùn)用正確，敘述清楚條里，語句通順，意思連貫，是一篇不錯(cuò)的文章。學(xué)以致用，運(yùn)用了重要句型和短語有：Asforme/Inmyopinion/itisnecessaryforusstudentstodosomehousework./Besides,wecanrelaxourselvesfromhardworkanddevelopourabilities.等。（1）學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)，牢記一些