Unit 1 單元話題寫作檢測（解析版）VIP

第一節(jié)（滿分15分）假定你是李華,你和你的外國朋友Caroline約好了周六一起參加市里舉辦的“中國航天展”,但因故不能赴約。請給她寫封郵件,內(nèi)容包括：1.表示歉意；2.解釋原因；3.你的期待。注意：1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右；2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。DearCaroline,__________________________________________________________

__________________________________________________________Yourssincerely,

LiHua【答案】DearCaroline,

①I'mwritingtotellyouIcannotattendtheChinaSpaceExhibitiontobeheldnextSaturdaywithyou.Iamsosorryaboutmyabsenceofthevisit.Pleaseexcusemefortheinconveniencecausedbyme.

②IwasreallyexcitedwhenIgottwoticketsforthewonderfulexhibition.I'vealreadysearchedmuchinformationaboutthisshowtoequipmyselfasaguidetoyou.

Unfortunately,yesterdaymyEnglishteacherinvitedmetotakepartinaSpeechcontesttobeheldnextSaturday.

Tomakeyourtriptheremorefulfilled,IwillrecommendyouseveraldocumentariestohelpyoulearnmoreaboutChinaspaceindustry.Ihopeyouenjoythetripyourself.Apologizeformyabsenceagain!Yourssincerely,

???????LiHua【解析】【思路點撥】

本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文寫作，話題為假定你是李華,你和你的外國朋友Caroline約好了周六一起參加市里舉辦的“中國航天展”,但因故不能赴約。請給她寫封郵件。寫作時應(yīng)注意詞匯的選擇和句式的準(zhǔn)確使用，可適當(dāng)添加一定的銜接詞，以使行文連貫。

【結(jié)構(gòu)布局】

引言：表示歉意

中心：解釋原因

結(jié)尾：你的期待

【亮點詞匯】

①recommend

sb.sth.向某人推薦某物

②apologizefor因為……道歉

【高分句型】

①I'mwritingtotellyouIcannotattendtheChinaSpaceExhibitiontobeheldnextSaturdaywithyou.（省略that的賓語從句)

②IwasreallyexcitedwhenIgottwoticketsforthewonderfulexhibition.（when引導(dǎo)的時間狀語從句)

【拓展詞匯】

①express

one'sregret表達(dá)某人的遺憾

②put

sb.intomuchtrouble給某人添了很多麻煩

【拓展句型】

①Isincerelyhopeyoucanacceptmyapologiesandunderstandmysituation.（我真心希望您能接受我的道歉并理解我的處境。）

②Muchtomyregret,Iwasunabletokeepmyengagementtodosth.（很抱歉我沒能遵守約定做某事。）

第二節(jié)（滿分25分）閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段,使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。Itwasinthe1930s,andthingsweretough.MumhadahardtimeraisingusonherowninoursmallcommunityofNewWestminster,BC.MydadhaddrownedinPittLake,fiveyearsago.Lookingback,IrealizewhatMumwentthroughsendinguskidstoschool.Everymorningshewouldputanewpieceofcardboardinourshoes,becausethebottompartswerewornout.Whenwegothome,Mumwouldhave"Frenchtoast"

readyforus.Constantmovingwastypicalformyfamilyinthosetimes.Rentwas25dollarsamonth,butMumcouldn'tpayit,andweknewwewouldbeevictedrightafterChristmasonthefirstofJanuary.Christmaswasapproaching,andwewereentitledtoatwenty-five-dollarChristmasfundfromsocialservices.Theinspectorcametoourhouse,andsearcheditfromtoptobottomtobesurewedidn'thaveanyfoodhiddenaway.Whenhedidn'tfindany,heissuedthechequetoMum.Mumsaidthatinsteadofbuyingfood,shewouldusethe25dollarstopaybackrent,assuringallofusaroofoverourheadsforalittlewhilelonger.ShetoldusthentherewouldbenothingforChristmas.UnknowntoMum,IhadbeensellingChristmastree,cleaningsnow,anddoingpart-timejobstoearnenoughmoneytobuyanewpairofboots.Bootsthatweren'tpatched,bootswithnocardboardinthesoles.IknewexactlywhichbootsIwanted.Theywereten-inchTopGenuinePierreParisandtheyhadapriceof23dollars.Well,thebigdaycameontheafternoonofChristmasEve.Iwasexcited,asIhurrieduptheroadtotheshoestore,butonthewayInoticedahousewithChristmaslightsanddecorations.ItwasthenIrealizedatourhouse,wehadnolights,nodecorations,noranymoneyforChristmasmeals.IknewthatwewouldhavenoturkeyorhamforChristmas,andIfeltsad.注意：1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150個左右；2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。

Paragraph1:

AsIcontinuedwalking,Ibegantoreconsidermyplan._________________________________________________________

_________________________________________________________

Paragraph2:Withgreatexcitementandtears,Iknockedonthedoorofourhouse._________________________________________________________

_________________________________________________________【答案】

AsIcontinuedwalking,Ibegantoreconsidermyplan.Atonemoment,thebootsIhadbeenlongingforflashedthroughmyhead.AndthenmyMum'sfaceappeared,drownedinsorrow,tryinginvaintoexplaintousallwhyweshouldcelebrateChristmaswithnopresents,nodecorationsornoturkey.Atexactlythatmoment,itcametomyawarenesshowselfishIwas.Feelingthemoneyinmysweatyhand,Imadeabigdecisionandsteppedintothegrocerystore.Havingfinishedshopping,Imademywayhome,excitedandproudofmychoice.

Withgreatexcitementandtears,Iknockedonthedoorofourhouse.Icouldhardlywaittoseemymother'sface!NosoonerhadIopenedthedoorthansomeoftheChristmasgoodiesfellinsideontothefloor.Shejuststoodthere,dumbfounded.Holdingbackthetears,Isaid,"MerryChristmas!"Nextmoment,IwaswelcomedbythemostpassionatehugsandkissesfrommybelovedMum.【解析】一、文意梳理

【原文大意】

本文以人物為線索展開，主要講述了在20世紀(jì)30年代末的新威斯敏斯特，作者一家生活拮據(jù)，靠社會救濟(jì)交房租。圣誕將至，作者懷揣打工掙得的錢打算買雙靴子，卻意識到家里沒有置辦任何過節(jié)的物品，于是開始重新考慮自己的計劃的故事?！径温淅m(xù)寫】①由第一段首句內(nèi)容“我繼續(xù)走著，我開始重新考慮我的計劃?！笨芍谝欢慰擅鑼懽髡吒淖冇媱澋男睦戆l(fā)展過程。②由第二段首句內(nèi)容“懷著激動和淚水，我敲開了我們家的門。”可知，第二段可描寫作者將錢花在更有價值的地方了，展示了主人公犧牲小我、奉獻(xiàn)家庭的自我蛻變成長的過程，讓讀者感受到了濃濃的親情。二、線索厘清

【續(xù)寫線索】

重新考慮我的計劃——聯(lián)想到媽媽的話——做出決定，走向雜貨店——激動地回家——回家后媽媽的反應(yīng)和心理狀態(tài)——感悟【詞匯激活】行為類①重新考慮：reconsider/rethink②出現(xiàn)：appeared/comeout③走進(jìn)，進(jìn)入：steppedinto/walkedinto情緒類①渴望：longingfor/des