2013高考英語語法專題復(fù)習(xí)精品課件17：作文常用關(guān)聯(lián)詞

1、17作文常用關(guān)聯(lián)詞,審校：王偉,表示時間關(guān)系：first, second, then, finally/at lastin the end , soon immediately, suddenly, at the same time, meanwhile, recently 表示對稱順序關(guān)系：for one thing. for the other thing, on one hand,.on the other hand，above all, first of all, firstly, secondly, next, finally，the former.the latter, 表示遞進關(guān)

2、系：what is more, as well, moreover, besides ,furthermore, in addition，whats worse 表示換一種方式表達：in other words ,that is to say,表示舉例說明：for example, like, such as, for instance 表示陳述事實：in fact ,actually, as a matter of fact, to tell you the truth 表示總結(jié)：on the whole, in a word, to sum up, in short, in conclus

3、ion, from what I have said above 表示因果關(guān)系：as a result ,thus, therefore, so that, as, because, consequently, 表示轉(zhuǎn)折：but, however, while, instead, although, different from, not only .but also 表達自己的觀點：in my opinion, personally, as far as I know, I believe, I think, as we all know ,It is known to us all tha

4、t.,范例1：假如你事實李華，你班同學(xué)最近開長了一場討論，主題是：高三學(xué)生要不要參加體育鍛煉，請根據(jù)下面所提供的信息，寫一篇短文，介紹討論的情況，并發(fā)表自己的觀點,1.關(guān)鍵詞語 體育鍛煉 做早操 增強體質(zhì) 減少疾病 休息 學(xué)習(xí)有效果 浪費時間 投入學(xué)習(xí) 受傷,take exercises do morning exercises build up the body reduce the disease have a rest study more effectively a waste of time pay attention to study be hurt,2.作文結(jié)構(gòu),1.have h

5、ad a discussion about whether students of Senior 3 should take physical exercises. As we know, every coin has two coins./Different students have different ideas . 2.55%of the students think.such as(舉例).（原因）. 3.On the other hand,45% of the students believe.(原因）. 4.In my opinion, I prefer to,3.范文： Rec

6、ently , we have had a discussion about whether have had a discussion about whether students of Senior 3 should take physical exercises. As we know, every coin has two coins. 55%of the students think they should take all kinds of exercises every day ,such as doing morning exercises, playing table ten

7、nis and playing basketball, but not spend too much time on them . As a proverb says ,” all work and no play makes Jack a dull boy. Exercise builds up their body and reduce lots of diseases. Sports let them have a good rest so that their study will be more effective.,On the other hand,45% of the stud

8、ents believe taking exercise is a waste of time and tiring. After taking exercise, they are too excited for a long time to pay attention to their lessons. And its possible to be hurt in sports. In my opinion, I prefer to take proper exercises in my spare time.,練習(xí)：“你們班會的討論主題是“上大學(xué)是高中生唯一的出路嗎？”請根據(jù)下面提供的信

9、息寫一偏短文，客觀的介紹下討論的情況，并發(fā)表自己的觀點,關(guān)鍵詞語：widen knowledge, improve qualities, high tuition, senior students 關(guān)鍵句子：of us consider it necessary to go to college 10% of students think it no use going to college 30% believe “All roads lead to Rome.”,范例： 某中學(xué)生英語報社正開展一場題為“Young teachers or elderly teachers，which do

10、you prefer?” 請你依據(jù)下面表格所提供的要點寫一篇短文，向該報社投稿。,注意：1詞數(shù)100左右，開頭語已為你寫好，不計入總數(shù)；2短文必須包含表格的全部內(nèi)容。要求觀點明確，結(jié)構(gòu)合理，緊湊連貫,學(xué)生作品1： Compare with young teachers, I prefer elderly teachers. There are some reasons below. For one thing, most of elderly teachers are patient in teaching. They not only spare no effort to teach the

11、 students, but also give classes carefully .They will do all they can to make the students understand the teaching content.What good teachers! For another thing, elderly teachers are full of teaching experience. This is also the most important, especially for us senior students. This is only my opin

12、ion. I think young teachers are also good.,點評： 亮點：1、觀點鮮明，詞匯句型的運用 比較靈活 2、過渡詞及連詞的使用使文章結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊連貫、條理清楚。,2、審題不全面，忽略了對青年教師這部分信息的處理。這一點是比較大的失誤。,1),2),3),1) Compared,2) more,3) try to make the classes lively and interesting,不足之處：,1、個別地方的表達需 要改進。,學(xué)生作品2: Opinions are divided on this question. Some students who l

13、ike the elderly teachers more than the young ones think that the elderly ones are more patient in teaching, more careful in explaining and also have a lot of experience. However, the others have a different opinion. They think the teachers who are young are full of energy. Besides, their teaching is

14、 lively and they dare to bring in the new ideas. Well, in my opinion, I like both the elderly teachers and the young ones because from them we both can learn a lot.,點評： 亮點： 1、段落清楚，要點齊 全，句式表達比較靈 活，能適當(dāng)運用復(fù)句。 2、過渡詞運用也比較 熟練。,需要改進的地方：,1）,2),3),4),1) prefer the elderly teachers to the young ones,2) with ex

15、planations,3) the 去掉,4) The young teachers,One possible version: Opinions are divided on this question. Some students may like elderly teachers teaching because they think elderly teachers have more teaching experience and that they tend to be patient and careful with explanations. However, I prefer

16、 to be taught by young teachers. Firstly, we students have much in common with them. So they are our friends as well as our teachers. Secondly, they are more .energetic and enthusiastic. Usually they can make their classes lively and interesting. Besides, they are more ready to accept or create new ideas, including teaching. Thirdly, most young teachers devote themselves to their work, making them teach creatively and effectively. In a word, I prefer young teacher