初中英語寫作課件.ppt

1、一、題型與特點 中考“書面表達”屬于開放性的主觀題，在命題中力求體現(xiàn)以下特點： 所選用的題材貼近考生生活和情感； 需要使用的語言材料是考生掌握的； 對字數(shù)的要求相對穩(wěn)定（80左右）； 對語法不做過高要求； 通過文字說明或圖畫對考生所寫內(nèi)容進行限定，這類題型要求考生根據(jù)提示寫出內(nèi)容連貫、意思完整的短文?？忌纫紤]人稱、時態(tài)，還要考慮前后的聯(lián)系，也給考生的發(fā)揮留下了很大的空間。,典型病例,名詞的單復數(shù)問題 主謂一致問題 時態(tài)和語態(tài)問題 Chinglish 現(xiàn)象 行文的邏輯性問題 詞類錯用,名詞的單復數(shù)問題：,1. Joy found there was much fish in the lake

2、.,2.The water was so clear that they could see all kinds of fish.,3.Many place are very dry.,Joy found there were many fish in the lake.,The water was so clear that they could see all kinds of fishes.,Many places are very dry.,時態(tài)和語態(tài)問題,Her mother jumped into the lake and swimed to Joy. At last her mo

3、ther saved Joy. They were all got wet.,2. Toms mother jumped into the water. She saves her daughter at last.,3. On Tree Planting Day,many trees planted in Yongan Park.,Her mother jumped into the lake and swam to Joy. At last her mother saved Joy. They all got wet.,On Tree Planting Day,many trees wer

4、e planted in Yongan Park.,Toms mother jumped into the water. She saved her daughter at last.,4.The 29th Olympic Games will hold in China.,The 29th Olympic Games will be held in China.,主謂一致問題,1. And now many rivers becomes very dirty.,2. Everything are going very well.,3. David with his little brothe

5、r go to the park every Sunday.,4. There are a man teacher and two women teachers in the office.,And now many rivers become very dirty.,Everything is going very well.,David with his little brother goes to the park every Sunday,There is a man teacher and two women teachers in the office.,Chinglish 現(xiàn)象,

6、1. Last Sunday,Ann with her mother and brother went to a park. The park with a lake.,2. I and my classmates by bus to Dayang Foreign Language School.,Last Sunday,Ann went to a park with her mother and brother. There was a lake in the park.,My classmates and I took a bus to Dayang Foreign Language Sc

7、hool.,行文的邏輯性問題,1. At once, she jumped into the water to save her daughter with her mothers help.,2. But she wasnt careful, so that she fell into the river.,At once, she jumped into the water to save her daughter.,She wasnt careful, and she fell into the river.,詞類錯用,1.When I was sadly, I played with

8、it. When I was happily, I played with it.,2. All of us are excited in it. Because it can make we happy and healthy.,When I was sad, I played with it. When I was happy, I played with it.,All of us are excited about it. Because it can make us happy and healthy.,請你當老師,書面表達 自行車在北京仍然受歡迎，騎車上學或上班都很方便。如今越來越

9、多的人這使得。騎車既可以，又可以。那么你更喜歡哪種交通工具呢？為什么？,請你當老師,Bicycle are still popular on the streets in Beijing. Its easy to by bike go to school or go to work. Now more and more people plan to buy cars instead of bike. But I think that running cars make air dirty. It was harmful to our health. Riding bicycles can he

10、lp people keep healthy, and energy can be save. Because riding bikes will always make me happy, so I prefer to go to school by bike.,Please read it carefully, then find the mistakes and correct them.,Bicycles are still popular on the streets in Beijing. Its easy to go to school or go to work by bike

11、. Now more and more people plan to buy cars instead of bikes. But I think that running cars makes air dirty. It is harmful to our health. Riding bicycles can help people keep healthy, and energy can be saved. Because riding bikes will always make me happy, I prefer to go to school by bike.,English W

12、riting 英語書面表達訓練,寫過去的事,書面表達,六 步 法,書面表達六步法,書面表達六步法,一、審題,確定基本要素:5W1H,何 時 何 地 何 人 為 何 如 何 做 了 何 事,書面表達六步法,二、抓要點,確定主要行為,What happened?,書面表達六步法,三、擴展成句,形成基本語義單位,Who did what?,書面表達六步法,四、連句成文,時間 空間 細節(jié) 連貫 呼應,書面表達六步法,五、查錯改錯,要盡量剔除錯誤,書面表達六步法,六、謄寫,卷面不工整扣5分,Write a short passage talking about feelings when receivi

13、ng a gift. What was the gift? Who gave it to you and why? How did you feel when you opened it? (4) Did the person who gave it think carefully about it.,Have a try!,You may use some sentences like the following: 1. My best/worst gift is 2. I got it on my thirteenth birthday. 3. gave it to me. 4. It m

14、ade me 5. I hope my gift is ,書面表達經(jīng)典示例,假設(shè)你是李華，在美國探親。2000年2月8日清晨，你目擊了一起交通事故。警察局讓你寫一份材料，報告當時所見情況。根據(jù)下列圖畫寫出報告。1、目擊者應該準確報告事實； 2、詞數(shù)100左右； 3、結(jié)尾已為你寫好。 _About two minutes later I stopped a passing car and took the old man to the nearest hospital. Li Hua,附圖,1,2,3,4,一幅圖，一要點,時態(tài)直達 語態(tài)到位,介/副詞緊隨,抓要點，配動詞,精 彩 范 文 賞 析,

15、At 7:15 a.m. on the morning of Feb. 8th, 2000, I was heading east on the south side of the Park Road, taking my morning walk as usual. I saw an old man on the other side of the road outside the gate of the City Park.,精 彩 范 文 賞 析,He was just crossing the street when a car on the 3rd Street made a sud

16、den right turn at the crossing.,精 彩 范 文 賞 析,The car was so fast that the old man even didnt have time to dodge and the car hit the elderly hard.,精 彩 范 文 賞 析,I thought the driver would have stopped to help, but she didnt. Instead, she just drove off, leaving the old man still lying on the ground in pain.,精 彩 范 文 賞 析,Fortunately, I noted down the details: it was a yellow car, the plate number of which was AC864, and the driver was a young lady. After that, I went over to chec