淺談?dòng)⑽恼撐膶懽髋c投稿的幾點(diǎn)經(jīng)驗(yàn).ppt

1、淺談?dòng)⑽恼撐膶懽髋c投稿的幾點(diǎn)經(jīng)驗(yàn),報(bào)告人：,匯報(bào)內(nèi)容,1. 論文寫作中易犯的幾個(gè)錯(cuò)誤 2. 投稿過程中的幾點(diǎn)注意事項(xiàng) 3. 關(guān)于審稿信的回復(fù),1. 論文寫作中易犯的錯(cuò)誤,“刪繁就簡三秋樹，標(biāo)新立異二月花” 論文中的數(shù)據(jù)并非越多越好； 要以最精煉的語言和最精簡的圖片把問題說清楚；突出重點(diǎn)，突出新意； 自己都解釋不清楚的公式、定理等等最好不要寫上去，以免給審稿人留下把柄。 以最近Materials Letters接收的文章為例,最初時(shí)： Title：“Biomimetic Fabrication of Hydroxyapatite Assisted with Bamboo Membrane” （無

2、新意，不能吸引眼球） 8 figures, 19 equations, 26 pages 修改后： Title：“Fabrication of Flower-like Hydroxyapatite Agglomerates with the Assistant of Bamboo Membrane” 5 figures, no equations, 8 pages.,Reject,Accept,“提綱法”非常有用 可以找?guī)灼c自己想要撰寫的文章相近的文獻(xiàn)（最好是大牛寫的），看看人家是怎么組織內(nèi)容的，分別總結(jié)他們的寫作提綱； 在此基礎(chǔ)上理清思路，列出自己的提綱； 開始動(dòng)手寫作。 “站在巨人的肩膀

3、上”來構(gòu)思我們的論文。,關(guān)于文章的結(jié)構(gòu)組織：,The flower-like hydroxyapatite agglomerates formed on the upper side and lower side of an egg-shell membrane were investigated intensively through a unique designed crystallizer. Firstly the ion driving force was calculated in theory, and also the influences of various factors

4、 on the morphology and crystalline of the agglomerates such as temperature, pH value, and holding time were furthermore explored in detail. Via the SEM, FESEM, FETEM and XRD, it was clear that with higher temperature, larger pH value, and longer holding time the formation of flower-like hydroxyapati

5、te agglomerates are produced with better crystalline, which is certain significance of the formation process of bone.,例子（Colloids &Surfaces B）：,*注意：上文中藍(lán)色標(biāo)出的地方都是有問題的,關(guān)于英文寫作：,The flower-like hydroxyapatite agglomerates formed on the upper side and lower side of an egg-shell membrane were intensively i

6、nvestigated through a unique designed crystallizer. Firstly the ion driving force was calculated in theory. In addition the influences of various factors, such as temperature, pH value, and holding time, on the morphology and crystallinity of the agglomerates, were studied in detail by means of FESE

7、M, TEM and XRD. It was found that flower-like hydroxyapatite agglomerates with high crystallinity can be produced under higher temperature, larger pH value, and moderated holding time, which is significant to the formation process of bone.,主編Dr. Brush（英國人）將其修改為：,多讀歐美人寫的文獻(xiàn)，學(xué)習(xí)其寫作方法，將好的句子記錄下來，自己寫文章時(shí)就可以

8、用到；多積累，培養(yǎng)語感； 寫作時(shí)盡量使用短的簡單句，長難句往往讓人看得很費(fèi)勁，并容易留下把柄；多跟寫作經(jīng)驗(yàn)豐富的老師和同學(xué)交流，請(qǐng)他們幫忙修改。 排版盡量清楚、整潔：字體一般為Times New Roman，字號(hào)一般為小四，2倍行距；為了便于審稿，最好加上行號(hào)；,Tips：,2. 投稿過程中的幾點(diǎn)注意事項(xiàng),投稿前一定要先看清楚目標(biāo)期刊的Author Guideline，一般會(huì)有關(guān)于稿件類型、字?jǐn)?shù)、圖片、排版的要求說明?？稍谄诳黜撝姓业?。例如通訊類論文一般要求不超過3000單詞，圖片不超過5幅，有的要求更少。 有的期刊會(huì)要求使用給定的模板。例如Wiley 數(shù)據(jù)庫的Advanced materi

9、als, Small等；英國皇家化學(xué)會(huì)(RSC)的期刊Chemical Communications, Journal of Materials Chemistry等都要求使用指定的模板。 一定要先看清楚期刊的Scope，這一點(diǎn)很總要 以最近Chemical Communications接收的文章為例,最初： Small (IF6), Advanced Materials (IF8) Title：“Sea Cucumber-Like Hydroxyapatite: Cation-Exchange Membrane Assisted Synthesis and Application for S

10、imultaneous Determination of Lead (II) and Cadmium (II)” 拒稿理由：不符合投稿范圍，內(nèi)容偏重于電化學(xué)分析，過于專業(yè)化 改投1： Biosensors & Bioelectrics (IF5) 拒稿理由：不符合投稿范圍，內(nèi)容不是生物傳感器 改投2： Electrochemical Communications (IF4) 拒稿理由：不符合投稿范圍，建議改投分析化學(xué)類期刊 改投3： Talanta (IF3) 拒稿理由：不符合投稿范圍，建議另投它刊 Give up？,最終： Title: “Sea Cucumber-Like Hydroxya

11、patite: Cation-Exchange Membrane Assisted Synthesis and Application for Ultra-sensitive Heavy Metal” Chemical Communications (IF5) 25/1投出，14/2收到主編的信：,要多跟老師和有經(jīng)驗(yàn)的學(xué)長們交流； 不輕易放棄，在對(duì)數(shù)據(jù)結(jié)果有把握的基礎(chǔ)上要敢于挑戰(zhàn)影響因子高的期刊。,Tips:,3.關(guān)于審稿信的回復(fù),“謙虛誠懇、巧妙避重就輕” 例子(CC)：The authors argue that the “l(fā)arge surface area” of the cucumb

12、er-like hydroxyapatite nano-structure (used to prepare the electrode) is one of the (main) factors conferring an advantage to the electrode. I would go along with that, but it would be good to quantify what is the magnitude of that surface area.,Answer: Thank the referee for the comments. A definiti

13、ve surface area value in not very informative in this case asthe surface coverage will alter the surface area and thus a value is not very useful but rather the magnitude relative to the carbon paste electrode is more informative and can be ascertained by comparing the size of the peak heights for t

14、he SW-voltammetry of the cucumber-like hydroxyapatite to the CPE electrode which indicates the current observed from HAp is much higher in comparison with nearly neglected current from CPE electrode.,結(jié)果：,Dear Dr Zhang Thank you for submitting your revised manuscript. I am satisfied with the changes you have made, and I am therefore pleased to inform you that your paper has been accepted for publication in ChemComm. Proofs