2014山東高考作文.ppt

1、2014山東高考書面表達(dá),某英文報社組織主題為“我喜歡的英語諺語”征文活動，你有意參加。請從下面兩句諺語中任選一句作為標(biāo)題寫一篇英語作文。內(nèi)容包括： 1.諺語的含義； 2.體現(xiàn)該諺語含義的個人經(jīng)歷。 A friend in need is a friend indeed. Where there is a will, there is a way. 注意：1.詞數(shù)120-150； 2.文中不得透露個人姓名和學(xué)校名稱 參考詞匯： 諺語proverb,【考點】考查半開放性作文,【寫作指導(dǎo)】 文體：議論文，要求考生從A friend in need is a friend indeed.和Where

2、 theres a will, theres a way.這兩個諺語中選擇一個作為話題說明自己的觀點。 時態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時（在敘述個人經(jīng)歷時使用過去時）和第一人稱。 本文要求考生首先理解諺語內(nèi)容，然后根據(jù)諺語內(nèi)涵從個人或者熟悉的人的經(jīng)歷中找出與之適合的事例。寫作時注意語言組織以及串聯(lián)詞的使用。上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，一定要契合給出的開頭，不能出現(xiàn)文章脫節(jié)問題。,三段式寫作,第一段闡述諺語的含義，可以使用“主題句拓展句”結(jié)構(gòu)，再靈活運用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪^渡詞，使你的觀點層次分明，擲地有聲。 第二段結(jié)合個人經(jīng)歷來談對該諺語的看法，巧妙利用時間狀語銜接上下文。此外，記敘過程中一定要保證動詞時態(tài)的一致，避免

3、因時態(tài)混亂而丟分。 第三段對自己的觀點進(jìn)行簡短總結(jié)，再次扣題。,布局： Para 1the understanding of one of the proverbs Para 2my experience Para 3conclusion,分析題目中的兩句諺語如何著筆。第一句 “A friend in need is a friend indeed” 強(qiáng)調(diào)摯友的重要性。在理解其含義時，要抓住句中最有感觸的詞“in need” 和“indeed”，而在闡述時，可以聯(lián)想真正的朋友應(yīng)該具備的優(yōu)秀品質(zhì)，如“忠誠(loyalty)” “信任(trust)”等，然后一一作解釋。,第二句 “Where th

4、ere is a will, there is a way” 就是我們再熟悉不過的“有志者事竟成”。具體闡述時，可以從志向?qū)σ粋€人在哪些方面非常重要來著筆。,引出諺語（必背）：,1.Astheproverbgoes, “” 2.My favorite proverb is “” 3. There are many proverbs in English, of which I like “” most. It means that. 4.As a proverb says, “”,4.As a popular saying goes, “” 5.Just as the saying goes,

5、 “” 6.There is an old saying“”,7.As is known to all, “” 8.It is well known to us that 9.What is well known to us is that,翻譯下面句子： 有一個著名的古老的諺語： Where theres a will, theres a way”有志者，事竟成。它對我的生活產(chǎn)生了巨大的積極的影響。,（1）There is a well-knownold saying“ Where theres a will, theres a way”，which hasa great and posit

6、ive influence on my life. （2）There is a well-knownold saying“ Where theres a will, theres a way”，havinga great and positive influence on my life.,【一句多譯】,有一個古老的諺語： Where theres a will, theres a way”有志者，事竟成。它告訴我們要堅持自己的目標(biāo)不放棄。 （1）There is an old saying“ Where theres a will, theres a way”，which tell us t

7、o stick to our goal. （2）There is an old saying“ Where theres a will, theres a way”，telling us to stick to our goal.,背誦一些常用的格言,No pains,no gains A man is known by the company he keeps Every coin has two sides Everything has two sides Practice makes perfect All road lead to Rome All work and no play m

8、akes Jack a dull boy Dont put off till tomorrow what should be done today,Failure is the mother of success God helps those who help themselves Knowledge is power Rome was not built in a day Life is full of ups and downs Two heads are better than one Its no use crying over spilt milk,范文欣賞1,注意：標(biāo)題必寫 Wh

9、ere there is a will, there is a way There are many proverbs in English, of which I like “where there is a will, there is a way” most. It means that if you have a dream in mind, you should keep on working even though you encounter some difficulties, and you will achieve your dream through your great

10、efforts.,Life is a journey full of troubles and challenges. When I was a 9 grader, I failed to pass the exam to go to my ideal high school for further study, which made me very frustrated. At that time, I almost gave up. Thinking of my dream that I would become a teacher in the future, I made up my

11、mind to take the exam again the next year. I made it eventually.,Such an unforgettable experience encourages me so much to head ahead all the way that I achieve more and more in my life because I bear it in mind that where there is a will, there is a way.,要點： 1. Where theres a will, theres a way.告訴我

12、們遇見事情要有堅韌不拔的毅力，堅持到底就可以獲得成功。 2.個人經(jīng)歷：一次數(shù)學(xué)考試中遇見了一道難題，剛開始時想不到合適的解題方法，但是自己沒有放棄，最后成功地算出了這道題。 3.總結(jié),范文欣賞2,Astheproverbgoes,“Wherethereisawill,thereisaway”.Whenanopportunitycomes,itbringsapromisebutneverrealizesitonitsown. Itisonlywhenyouhaveastrongambitionandsetouttoachieveitthatyourdreamwillcometrue.Threey

13、earsago,IhaddifficultyconqueringoralEnglishduetomypoorvocabulary.ShyasIwas,IstillmadeupmymindtoattendanEnglishspeakingcontest.HowtremblingIwas whensteppingonto thestagewhereaspotlightwaswaitingforme.Insidemymind,avoicetoldme,“Wherethereisawill,thereisaway”.Gatheringupallmycourage,Icalmedmyselfdownan

14、dhadanexcellentperformance,speakingavery fluentEnglish.AsenseofachievementroseandIbecamewildwithjoywhenIrealizedIhadwonthefirstprize.Ididit!Ihadmasteredtheimpossible.Intimeofdifficultiesandchallenges,yououghttohaveawill.Onceyouholdontothebeliefthateverythingisachievable,itbecomeseasytodowhat needsto

15、bedone.,范文欣賞3,Where there is a will, there is a way.My favorite proverb is “where there is a will, there is a way.”, which means we will be able to get over all kinds of challenges if we can stick to our dreams and never give up.Memories rushed to my mind when I saw this topic. When I was in high sc

16、hool, I had great enthusiasm for English and intended to take part in an English speech contest.,However, when preparing for it, I found it very challenging to collect information and use language correctly. I was about to give up when my Dad noticed and offered this proverb to me. Encouraged by it,

17、 I spared no effort to solve every problem with confidence. If it hadnt helped me，I couldnt have won the prize finally.In a word, not only does this proverb enable me to face up to the difficulties,1.首先要了 解兩句諺語的基本意思,2.其次要用短短150詞將說明+記敘+議論結(jié)合起來，銜接流暢，有理有據(jù)，確實對考生的英語知識素養(yǎng)，思維能力和表達(dá)能力有著很高的要求。 考生在保證了 “說明含義-回憶往事

18、-總結(jié)議論”這一基本的邏輯分段清晰之后，只需結(jié)合“價值觀“中的素材，非限制性定語從句、使讓、非謂語動詞、無靈主語、倒裝、強(qiáng)調(diào)等常用句型，以及一些常見寫作詞匯的高 級替換，就可以輕松的沖擊高分檔次。 【邏輯分段】 解釋諺語意思（20詞） 記敘個人經(jīng)歷（80詞） 議論升華主旨（50詞） 【例文】,作文反饋練習(xí)： 你校正在進(jìn)行“英語讀書周”活動，該活動要求學(xué)生摘錄名言佳句（quote）并相互交流。以下是某同學(xué)摘錄的句子：”Yourfuturedependsonmanythingsbutmostlyonyou”：請按下列要求用英語寫一篇100-120個詞的短文： 1.針對摘錄句中的觀點談?wù)勀愕目捶ǎ?

19、2.舉例說明理由,題目結(jié)構(gòu)和考法非常相似，差異在于一個舉例說明，一個寫自己的故事。其實說自己的故事就是舉例的一種。 面對這種題目，根據(jù)當(dāng)初給的范文，可以很好地改編。 當(dāng)時給的范文如下： IntheEnglishReadingWeek,oneofmyclassmatesrecommendedaquotetous,whichgoeslikethis:“Yourfuturedependsonmanythings,butmostlyonyou.” （解釋說明）Icantagreemorewiththeview.Itstruethatourfutureisdeterminedbymanythings,s

20、uchasfortune,opportunitiesandhelpfromothers,butourownhardworkandattitudeplayamoreimportantrole.Inotherwords,wearethemasterofourownfuture. （舉例說明）TakeAbrahamLincolnforexample.Hewasborninapoorfamily,andonlyreceivedalimitededucationinhischildhood.Butthroughhisconstantefforts,hechangednotonlyhisownfatebutalsothehistoryofAmerica.Eventothisday,Lincolnisregardedasoneofthemostinspiritingfiguresintheworld. Therefore,Ifirmlybelievethatourfutureisinourhands. 只要把林肯換成自己，再稍微加以改變就可以了,【2014年山東高考范文】： Icantagreemorewiththeview.Inourdailylife,wewillfa