對(duì)比性議論文

1、議論文對(duì)比性議論文【考例再現(xiàn)】人們完成工作的方式通常有兩種：獨(dú)立完成與合作完成。兩種方式各有特點(diǎn)。請(qǐng)你以“Working Individually or Working in a Team”為題，按照以下要點(diǎn)寫一篇英語(yǔ)短文：1. 獨(dú)立完成：自行安排、自己解決問題；2. 合作完成：一起討論、相互學(xué)習(xí)；3. 我喜歡的方式和理由。注意：詞數(shù)100-120，文章的題目和開頭已給出(不計(jì)詞數(shù))。Working Individually or Working in a TeamThere are basically two ways to get work done._【范文展示】Working Indi

2、vidually or Working in a Team There are basically two ways to get work done. One is to work individually. In this way, people can decide for themselves when to start work and how to do it. Whats more, they will be able to learn how to solve problems on their own.People may also choose to work in a t

3、eam, where they can learn from each other and help each other. Besides, they may work out better ways to get work done by discussion.Personally, I prefer to work in a team, which offers me a chance to learn how to get along with others and to share my experiences with them. As the work can be divide

4、d among several people, it can be done efficiently. Teamwork is always important. (浙江2008)【范文賞析】文體分析本文是議論文，主要就兩種完成工作的方式進(jìn)行對(duì)比，要求考生根據(jù)要點(diǎn)提示寫作。此范文要點(diǎn)齊全，較多地使用了復(fù)合句，加強(qiáng)了句子結(jié)構(gòu)的復(fù)雜性。另外，本文使用了許多過渡短語(yǔ)或詞匯。如：in this way, whats more, besides, personally等，這些詞匯使文章邏輯關(guān)系增強(qiáng)，過渡自然，渾然一體。 文章使用的是第三人稱，時(shí)態(tài)用的是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。行文模式本文采用了議論文最常見的“三段式

5、”結(jié)構(gòu)：第一段：首先點(diǎn)出文章的主題，然后緊接著描寫了獨(dú)立完成工作這種方式，點(diǎn)出了這種工作方式的優(yōu)點(diǎn)。第二段：描述的是合作完成工作方式的優(yōu)點(diǎn)。第三段：發(fā)表自己的觀點(diǎn)和看法。佳句集錦1. A) People may also choose to work in a team, where they can learn from each other and help each other.B) Personally, I prefer to work in a team, which offers me a chance to learn how to get along with others

6、and to share my experiences with them.(這兩個(gè)句子都是主從復(fù)合句，都使用了定語(yǔ)從句，一個(gè)是where引導(dǎo)的，另一個(gè)是which引導(dǎo)的。在英語(yǔ)書面表達(dá)中，我們經(jīng)常借助于定語(yǔ)從句來(lái)使句子結(jié)構(gòu)復(fù)雜，所以這兩句值得在寫作中學(xué)習(xí)。)2. As the work can be divided among several people, it can be done efficiently.(這也是一個(gè)主從復(fù)合句。as引導(dǎo)的是原因狀語(yǔ)從句。)【即學(xué)即練】現(xiàn)在全國(guó)很多學(xué)校出現(xiàn)了一種新的教學(xué)方式：小組合作學(xué)習(xí)方式(group-centered studying)。在此之前，

7、常用的方式是“填鴨式教學(xué)(forced-feeding method of teaching)”。這兩種方式各有特點(diǎn)，請(qǐng)你以“Forced-feeding teaching or group-centered studying”為題，按照以下要點(diǎn)寫一篇120詞左右的短文： 1. 填鴨式教學(xué)：老師講得多，把知識(shí)灌輸給學(xué)生，課堂氣氛沉悶，學(xué)生缺乏主動(dòng)性；2. 小組合作學(xué)習(xí)：老師講得少，同學(xué)們一起討論、相互學(xué)習(xí)，有學(xué)習(xí)的積極性，但部分同學(xué)容易養(yǎng)成偷懶的習(xí)慣；3. 你喜歡的方式和理由。 One possible version:Forced-feeding teaching or group-cent

8、ered studying There are basically two teaching methods at present. One is forced-feeding teaching, the other is group-centered studying. With forced-feeding teaching, teachers spend much time on the instructions while the students are busy taking notes. Therefore, it leads to the whole class not tak

9、ing an active role in their lessons. With group-centered studying, students can exchange what they learn and express their opinions freely. But it has a shortcoming: Some students get into the habit of being lazy. As far as I am concerned, I prefer to study in a team, which offers students a chance to learn how to express their opinions. Whats more, it can mak