新人教版九年級(jí)英語(yǔ)第四單元寫作指導(dǎo)..ppt

1、,Unit 4 I used to be afraid of the dark.,Section B Writing,Talking,3a,Write notes about how you have changed in your appearance, personality and hobbies. Then talk with a partner about your changes.,Appearance: tall, short, fat, thin, slim,strong, young, old, straight hair, curly hair, long hair, sh

2、ort hair, a medium body ,Talking,Personality: humorous,outgoing,serious, funny, smart, friendly, shy, helpful, quiet,active,brave,unfriendly. hobbies: read cartoon/ novel, sing,dance, playfootball/ basketball,Talking,What makes a good composition?,Discussion,寫作步驟,審題立意 定主人稱時(shí)態(tài) 用詞得當(dāng) 檢查修改,寫作時(shí),找關(guān)鍵詞 由詞組句

3、組句成段 擴(kuò)句成段,Content,Everything needed included which is related to your view. (內(nèi)容要完整),Structure,Good beginning and ending (好的開頭結(jié)尾) Well organized and smoothly developed (結(jié)構(gòu)合理,行文流暢) Proper linking words between sentences（使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞）,練一練,Write sentences by using used to:,1. I/have curly hair/have straight

4、 hair I used to have curly hair,but now I have straight hair. 2.I/so fat/thin I used to be so fat,but now I am thin.,練一練,Write sentences by using used to:,3.I/shy/outgoing and brave I used to be shy,but now I am outgoing and brave. 4.I/read books on martial arts/read books on Western culture I used

5、to read books on martial arts,but now I read books on Western culture.,練一練,Write sentences by using used to:,1. 我過(guò)去是走路上學(xué)的。 I used to go to school on foot/walk to school. 2.我過(guò)去喜歡跑步，但現(xiàn)在我喜歡打籃球。 I used to like running,but now I like playing basketball.,Proper linking words between sentences（連接詞）,first,

6、second, third (the most important) firstly, secondly, thirdly (finally), 首先，第二，第三,表示舉例子： for example 例如 Takefor example 以為例 such as 比如 like 像,表示轉(zhuǎn)折： however (but)然而(但是),表示個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)： In my view 在我看來(lái) In my opinion 我認(rèn)為 As far as I am concerned 就我而言,Write about how you have changed. What did you use to be lik

7、e? Which change is the most important one, and why?,3b,Try to write three paragraphs. （總分總）,Paragraph 1: General introduction about the changes in your life.,Paragraph 2: The most important change and how it happened.,Paragraph 3: To express your own ideas,How Ive Changed! My life has changed a lot

8、in the last few years. I used to_. Now Im _. The biggest change in my life was_ _. This is the most important change because_.,How Ive Changed！ My life has changed a lot in the past few years. I used to have so much time, but now Im too busy. I always used to get up early and stay in school all day. Before I go to high school, I used to spend lots of time playing games with my friends, but I just dont have the time anymore. In the evening, I used to watch TV or play computer games, but now I have to study.,I love music, and my father used to take me to concerts. But I still really