高三書面表達練習(xí)《研究性學(xué)習(xí)》.ppt

某英語報向中學(xué)生征集關(guān)于開展研究性學(xué)習(xí)的文章，請你根據(jù)提示，用英語寫一篇介紹你校研究性學(xué)習(xí)活動的短文。,審題,1.建議 如何解決污染問題 2.感想與體會 開展研究性學(xué)習(xí) 開展研究性學(xué)習(xí)后對環(huán)保的認識,存在問題： 1. 書寫較差，卷面不整潔，涂改較多。 2. 部分同學(xué)遺漏要點(主要是感想與體會部分）。 3. 拼寫錯誤嚴重。 local costome choice the subject 4. 中式英語、牽強拼湊的表達較多，不會套用句型，逐詞翻譯。 life wasted water waste water from daily life water was pulled into the river water was poured / pumped into the river water emission water discharged from Farmer use agricultural chemicals is the 3rd reason caused pollution. The 3rd reason is pollution caused by frequent use of agricultural chemicals,Step 1 List the key points 要點1：研究主題豐富多彩，選擇性強 研究主題 research subjects themes of research 研究項目 research projects 做從事進行研究 to do/ conduct/ undertake research carry out a research into /for make researches research (into/ on ) sth. study sth. / make a study of sth,Step 1 List the key points 要點1：研究主題豐富多彩，選擇性強 various subjects a wide range of subjects a variety of subjects The subjects of the research are colorful for us to choose from. The subjects of the research range fromto,要點2: 當?shù)仫L(fēng)俗習(xí)慣、人民生活變化、環(huán)境保護 local customs / manners and customs changes in / to peoples life changes in peoples living conditions (of sth)替代；更換 : a change of government 政府的更迭 environmental protection /the protection of the environment,要點 3 你家鄉(xiāng)的河流的污染問題 the pollution in / of the river in my hometown the river pollution in our hometown the polluted river in our hometown 要點 4 工廠廢水、生活污水、農(nóng)民使用的農(nóng)藥 生活污水 domestic sewage 生活用水 water for life waste /polluted water from the factories waste water from peoples daily life agricultural chemicals,Step2 Make sentences 要點1 我們的研究主題豐富多彩，選擇性強，如當?shù)仫L(fēng)俗習(xí)慣、人民生活變化、環(huán)境保護等。 We have a variety of subjects to choose from, such as local customs , changes in peoples life, protection of the environment and so on.(注意from不可被省略；such as 與前半句用逗號隔開,不能用for example ） There are many kinds of research for us to choose from , such as So colorful are the research subjects that your choice can range from local customs , changes of peoples life to the protection of the environment.,要點 2：我們小組的研究主題是家鄉(xiāng)河流的污染問題。 The research of my group was the pollution of the water in our hometown. Our group made a study of the water pollution in our hometown. Our group carried out a research on the water pollution in our hometown.,要點3 三大污染源是河流污染的主要來源。它們是工廠廢水、生活污水、農(nóng)民使用的農(nóng)藥。 ? resources / sources of pollution,要點3 三大污染源是河流污染的主要來源。它們是工廠廢水、生活污水、農(nóng)民使用的農(nóng)藥。 Our research shows that the river is mainly polluted by the waste water from the factories, thewaste water from peoples daily life and the use of agricultural chemicals without limitation from farmers. We find that the waste water from the factories, waste water from peoples daily life and agricultural chemicals from farmers are the three major causes which lead to / contribute to the water pollution.,The research shows that not only the dirty water produced from the factories as well as our daily lives but also the agricultural chemicals lead to even more severe pollution. We find that there are three major sources that have caused the water pollution, namely the waste water from factory, the dirty polluted water from our life and the agricultural chemical leftover.,要點4 : 建議與感想與體會 這部分是半開放型作文的重要部分，切忌不可遺漏?！敖ㄗh”重點放在提出解決問題的方法。 “感想與體會”重點放在通過這次活動，自己的收獲方面。例如：建議： call on people to be aware of how serious the situation is raise peoples awareness of the environmental protection take measures/take action to stop this phenomenon,The waste water should be treated/purified before it is let out / discharged reduce the use of agricultural chemicals and try to limit the pollution of drinking water ,感想與體會: gain/ build up practical experience improve/ develop our ability to cooperate with others The processes dont always work out as planned. As long as were determined to finish the work perfectly, well finally accomplish the goal.,1. Abusing agricultural chemicals also led to the water pollution. 2. Having done the research work, I have come to realize we shouldnt turn a blind eye to the pollution around us. People are supposed to try their best to live in harmony with nature.,3. We do various kinds of research work, depending on our interests and abilities. During the research we helped each other and enlarged our views( broadened my horizon/widened my knowledge ). I did realize the power of team work and learnt how to work together with others. I think we should do more research work like this and I believe that we can get benefits from it.,There are a range of ideas about research work, such as different local customs, great changes I peoples life, environmental protecting and so on. Of course, we can choose the main idea which interests us most.,There are a range of subjects of research work, such as different local customs, great changes I peoples life, environmental protecting and so on. Of course, we can choose the one which interests us most.,Through our research, we learned something we didnt learn in school. we should get together to protect the environment so that the nature and human beings will be linked as a whole.,Through our research, we learned something we couldnt have learnt in school. we should work together to protect the environment so that nature and human beings will be able to get along well with each other/live together peacefully .,One possible version 第一段： Nowadays we are required to do research work apart from the lessons we learn in school. We are very interested in this kind of activity. We have a variety of subjects to choose from，such as local customs, changes in peoples living conditions，and protection of the environment,第二段： Last term our group made a study of the pollution in a river in my hometownThe river used to be clean, but now it is dirty and the water gives off a terrible smellOur research shows that the river is mainly polluted by the waste water from the factoriesWaste water from peoples daily life and agricultural chemicals also lead to the pollution of the riverTo deal with the problem, we call on people to be aware of how serious the situation is and do something about it,第三段： Through our research，not only did we gain practical experience。but also we developed various abilitiesWe find such research very valuable and helpful,Version 2 Nowadays we are required to do research work apart from the lessons we learn in schoolWe are very interested in this kind of activitySo colorful is the research subjects that your choice can range from local customs, changes of peoples lives or environmental protection.,With the developmen