托福作文詞匯應(yīng)選擇使用不空洞的詞

1、托福作文詞匯應(yīng)選擇使用不空洞的詞 托福寫作中考生不僅需要根據(jù)題目要求寫出內(nèi)容切題的*，也不可忽視帶給讀者也就是考官的閱讀體驗。下面就和大家分享托福作文詞匯應(yīng)選擇使用不空洞的詞，來欣賞一下吧。托福作文詞匯應(yīng)選擇使用不空洞的詞1.一些空洞的單詞或詞組根本不能為句子帶來任何相關(guān)的或重要的信息，完全可以被刪掉。比如下面的句子：when all things are considered，young adults of today live more satisfying lives than those of their parents，in my opinion.這句話當(dāng)中的“when all th

2、ings are considered”和“in my opinion“都顯得多余。完全可以去掉。改為：young adults of today live more satisfying lives than their parents.2.有些空洞和繁瑣的表達(dá)方式可以進(jìn)行替換，例如：due to the fact that our grandparents were under an obligation to help their parents， they did not have the options that young people have at this point in

3、time.“due to the fact that”就是一個很典型的繁瑣的表達(dá)方式的例子，可以替換，簡化為下面的表達(dá)方式：because our grandparents were obligated to help their parents， they did not have the options that young people have now.托福寫作中應(yīng)盡量減少重復(fù)啰嗦1.盡量避免重復(fù)使用同樣的詞匯。或者有的時候雖然詞匯沒有重復(fù)，但意思卻有重復(fù)。這時候可以做一些簡化的工作。例如下面這個例子：the farm my grandfather grew up on was lar

4、ge in size.large 對一個farm來說就是size方面的large，所以in size可以去掉，改為：the farm my grandfather grew up on was large.更簡潔的表達(dá)方式為：my grandfather grew up on a large farm.2.有時一個詞組可以用一個更簡單的單詞來替換，例如：my grandfather has said over and over again that he had to work on his parents farm.這里的over and over again就可以改為repeatedly，

5、顯得更為簡潔：my grandfather has said repeatedly that he had to work on his parents farm.托福考試作文獨立寫作范文：孩子過分依賴電子產(chǎn)品independent tasknowadays, children rely too much on the technology, like computers, smartphone, video games for fun and entertainment; playing simpler toys or playing outside with friends would b

6、e better for the childrens development.寫作參考一:for parents, how to well plan their childrens development has been a huge problem. while some children are given more time on technological gadgets, others are more inclined to choose some activities, such as going camping or traveling. for me, the former

7、 option would be a better one.admittedly, playing simpler toys or playing outside might be good choice for children. simpler toys, namely lego, are a good way to develop childrens thinking on solving the problem through block by block. by assembling the pieces for different blocks, children could as

8、semble an even big piece, such as the classic london tower bridge. also, playing with friends is helpful. when they are playing with others, they would cooperate with them to playing sports or even solve problems. however, on balance, both of these ways are limited in helping children. toys and outd

9、oor activities are restrained to their actual forms: parents need lots of money to buy different toys to help children develop, and they pay a great amount of money on helping their children for different activities. for those parents who suffer from financial burden, these are not effective ways fo

10、r childrens development. comparatively, technology would be a more effective way for children.firstly, internet via computers and smartphone are essential for their development. in other words, internet provides students with vast amounts of information. according to a recent survey conducted by gal

11、lup, after polling thousands of students from local high schools, most respondents claim that internet is the no.1 helper from them to finish homework. when they have problems, they would search reference on internet. websites such as google scholar would be a wonderful tool for them to find some pa

12、pers or academic reference for their homework. meanwhile, internet is a wonderful place for them to entertain as well. they could watch movies on youku. they could even find interesting stories on sina. all funny experiences are available on internet without causing children too much money.in additi

13、on, video games are also necessary for childrens growth. when children are playing video games, they might learn some strategic thinking. for example, when i am playing fifa 20xx, i have to manage my team members according to their physical strength so that i could beat other teams. for those who ru

14、n quickly, it would be a good idea for them to play forward; for those who are tall and strong, they would be better playing middle field. because of this team management strategy, i have achieved many titles in the game. learning from this, i would allocate my time in finishing homework according t

15、o my energy level. when i am energetic, i might choose the most difficult homework; if i am tired, i might choose some easy-to-do tasks, which would not cost me much time.to conclude, while playing toys or spending time on outdoor activities is a good way for their development, technology would be b

16、etter way.寫作參考二:2月28日：nowadays, children rely too much on the technology, like computers, smartphone, video games for fun and entertainment; playing simpler toys or playing outside with friends would be better for the childrens development.technological advancement has contributed to the invention o

17、f a wide range of electronic products and there are an increasing number of children who are reported to rely heavily on the technology. thus, the controversy is raised among the public whether playing simpler toys or playing outside with friends are better for the childrens development. from my per

18、spective, i insist on that depending on high technology is a rather right decision.for one thing, children can learn more about the world and develop a better way of resolving problems. for instance, the upcoming fourth industrial revolution heralds a thorough change of the composition of working fo

19、rce in the society and learning the latest news through computers or smartphones will lead children to be aware of what are needed urgently and what have been outdated, in this way, they can decide what kinds of capabilities and qualities they should develop for being accustomed to the fast-changing

20、 world. besides, children nowadays have to accomplish diverse curriculums many difficult assignments like writing a paper related to how independent war was sparkled or what consequences had been aroused after the assassination of lincoln. computers can help resolve the problem more effectively by p

21、roviding students with abundant references and historic documentation. additionally, there have been more educational programs spreading through the internet like ted that is designed to disseminate the most outstanding professors lectures throughout the world to share the greatest ideas with people

22、 in every corner of the world. obviously, relying on the high-tech devices can be of great benefits for children both to resolve the problems they might meet during their study and learn more things beyond their textbooks.for another thing, video games have been designed to be more alluring and inte

23、llectually demanding. to be more specific, there have occurred many more video games that are invented to exploit childrens imagination and also release their pressure. take minecraft, a popular game sweeping many primary and high school students, as an example. in the game, players can use diverse

24、construction materials and tools to construct what they like such as a castle or a skyscraper even a city. besides, by decorating the entities they created in many different styles, massive intellectual activities are needed like how to design the roof the house and where should put the pets in the city and etc. during the process, students can be fully occupied in the game, serving as an antidote to boredom that will be detrimental to students mental health if it can be erased promptly.