高三英語第二輪復(fù)習(xí)優(yōu)秀書面表達(dá)背誦范例(4)(精編版)

1、高三英語第二輪復(fù)習(xí)第二階段讀寫過關(guān)-優(yōu)秀書面表達(dá)背誦范例一、基礎(chǔ)寫作篇基礎(chǔ)寫作 1- 寫信應(yīng)用文假定你是李華， 從小喜愛大熊貓， 一直通過有關(guān)網(wǎng)站關(guān)注三年前在美國圣迭哥動(dòng)物園出生的大熊貓“蘇琳”和她的母親“白云” ?，F(xiàn)在蘇琳即將三歲。請根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)給動(dòng)物園工作人員寫一封信： 寫作內(nèi)容 1. 自我介紹； 2. 祝賀蘇琳生日； 3. 感謝工作人員； 4. 索取蘇琳三歲生日照。 寫作要求 1. 只能用 5 個(gè)句子表達(dá)全部內(nèi)容 ; 2. 要使用多種時(shí)態(tài) ;3. 開頭語已為你寫好。dear sir/madam, greetings from china!possible version dear sir

2、/madam, greetings from china!i mli hua, a student in sichuan and i ve been a panda lover since i was a child.about three years ago i was delighted to learn that baiyun gave birth to her daughter sulin and i ve been watching her grow on your website. now shes going to be three so i d like to wish her

3、 a happy birthday and to express my thanks to you for yourhard work, because of which sulin and her parents are living a happy and healthy life in the us.by the way, could i have a photo of sulin taken on her third birthday? thank youvery much in advance.基礎(chǔ)寫作 2- - 回信應(yīng)用文假設(shè)你是李華， 你的英國筆友最近來信，詢問你高考后的暑期安排

4、。請你根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)， 用英語回一封信，說明你的計(jì)劃，并簡述理由。1.休息 2. 讀書 3. 陪伴父母4. 參加社會(huì)活動(dòng)寫作要求：1. 只能使用5 個(gè)句子表達(dá)全部內(nèi)容；2. 信的開頭已為你寫好，但不含在5 個(gè)句子中。參考詞匯：高考-college entrance examination社會(huì)活動(dòng) - social activities dear henry,i m glad to receive your letter.50best wishes!possible versiondear henry,li huai m glad to receive your letter. it s a pl

5、easure for me to tell you my plan of this coming summer vacation after the college entrance examination.firstofall,a good restisneeded because i do feeltiredafterthehard work of all these years. of course, ill do some reading for fun, and for knowledge aswell. ill spend some time staying with my par

6、ents, chatting with them and doingsome housework since they have done so much for me. if possible, i ll take part in some social activities so that i can know more about the society.best wishes!li hua基礎(chǔ)寫作 3-演講稿應(yīng)用文你所在的班級將要舉辦一次主題為“what can we do for our school?”的英語演講比賽。請寫一篇英語演講稿，要求從以下兩方面進(jìn)行闡述，并舉例加以說明。1

7、. 美化校園 :種樹、組織大掃除、養(yǎng)成把垃圾丟到垃圾箱里的好習(xí)慣;2. 保護(hù)學(xué)校設(shè)施：離開教室時(shí)關(guān)燈關(guān)門窗、不要讓自來水流掉、實(shí)驗(yàn)課時(shí)不要浪費(fèi)材料.寫作要求：1 只能使用5 個(gè)句子表達(dá)全部內(nèi)容；2所給開頭的句子不含在5 個(gè)句子中。參考詞匯：校園 campus;大掃除 -a thorough cleaning設(shè)施 facilities;氛圍 environmentpossible versionhello, everyone. its nice to speak about what we can do for our school, and i think each of us can do

8、something.thefirstthingwe can do isto make our campus more beautifulby plantingtrees in the school, or organizing a thorough cleaning on the campus. we can also forma good habit of putting the rubbish in the trashcan. the second thing we can do isto protectthe facilitiesinour school.whenwe leavethe

9、classroom,we shouldnever forget to turn off the light or close the door. don t leave the tap water runningor waste any materials in the laboratory class.thank you for listening!基礎(chǔ)寫作 4-說明文假定你是李華， 準(zhǔn)備參加學(xué)校舉辦的主題為“健康成長”的英語作文比賽。請按要求寫一篇短文，主要內(nèi)容包括：1. 樂觀的人生態(tài)度；2. 努力學(xué)習(xí)；3. 參加體育鍛煉。寫作要求：1 只能使用5 個(gè)句子表達(dá)全部內(nèi)容；2所給開頭的句子不含

10、在5 個(gè)句子中。possible versionweallwant to grow up happilyand healthily,and forthisgoal we must do several things.firstly, we should develop a good attitude toward life since life consists ofnot onlysunshinebut also hard times.secondly,we must studyhard because knowledge ispower. ifwe have the power, we c

11、an helpto buildour countryand enjoylifebetter.in order to study well, we need to do sports so that we can keep fit, such as goingrunning, playing ball games, simply taking a walk after a days study and so on. if we do those things well, we will be able to grow up happily and healthily.基礎(chǔ)寫作 5郵件應(yīng)用文假設(shè)你

12、是卜曼宜， 你購買了一部某外國公司生產(chǎn)的手機(jī)，因有質(zhì)量問題， 要求該公司更換。請根據(jù)下列要點(diǎn)，用英文寫一封電子郵件。寫作要點(diǎn)：1. 問題： 1）手機(jī)不響鈴，不能發(fā)短信； 2）該產(chǎn)品已售完，無法更換； 3）型號新，無配件，無法維修。2. 要求：公司應(yīng)盡快予以更換。寫作要求：1. 只能使用5 個(gè)句子表達(dá)全部內(nèi)容；2. 所給開頭的句子不含在5 個(gè)句子中。3. 參考詞匯：配件spare part; dear sir,i am writing to you for the mobile phone of dephone-s250 i bought on 20th apr.2008 at tele mal

13、l in wuhan, p.r. china.thank you for your consideration.possible version dear sir，sincerely yours,bu manyii amwritingto you forthe mobilephone ofdephone-s250 i boughton 20thapr.2008 at tele mall in wuhan, p.r. china.ten days after that, it didnt ring and send short messages. then i took it to the se

14、ller, but was told that the model had beensold out and i had to wait at least three months for a new one. later i went to the repairman, who said since it was a new model in china, it was impossible to fix it without the right spare parts. i was so desperate on hearing that. therefore, i require tha

15、t you send me a new one of the same model within a month.thank you for your consideration.sincerely yours,bu manyi基礎(chǔ)寫作 6人物描寫請根據(jù)下面的英文短詩，展開適當(dāng)?shù)南胂?，寫一篇短文。?biāo)題為： my teacher mr moorethere s a teacher mr .moore. who is lovely and thirty-four.always encouraging us to try.he leads us to a world of“ why”. we all

16、 admire him more and more.注意： 1.不得照抄短詩原文。2. 必須結(jié)合短詩的內(nèi)容，發(fā)揮想象，適當(dāng)展開。3. 必須突出短詩的主題，結(jié)構(gòu)完整，語意連貫。4. 短文不能寫成詩歌形式。5.五句話。one possible version：mr. moore, one of my teacher aged 34, is a lovely man who impresses me most. compared with other teachers, mr. moore pays more attention to his way of teaching, trying vari

17、ous ways tomake his classes lively and interesting .in his opinion, we should not only know“ what ” ,understand “ why”so, instead of givingus answers immediately,he encourages us to thinkbyourselves whenever he puts forward questions. with his help, we settle problem.he is such a learned person that

18、 we all admire him very much.rned how toanvaelylezae and基礎(chǔ)寫作 7地點(diǎn)介紹類假設(shè)你是李華， 你的新西蘭筆友nick將于八月來四川旅游，特來信詢問有關(guān)旅游景點(diǎn)情況。請根據(jù)下表所提供的要點(diǎn)，寫一封回信，并表示盼望他的到來。旅游資源許多世界著名的風(fēng)景名勝，如：九寨溝（海子；清澈見底；色彩斑斕）都江堰水利工程（2， 000多年歷史；仍在發(fā)揮作用）相關(guān)信息位于中國西南部，氣候適宜，交通方便對四川旅游景點(diǎn)評價(jià)(內(nèi)容由考生自己擬定)1. 五句話完成，信的格式及開頭以為你寫好（不記入總詞數(shù)）。2. 可根據(jù)內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。 3.參考詞

19、匯：省份 province海子 lake都江堰水利工程 dujiangyan irrigation projectone possible version：dear nick,i m glad to hear that you re coming to sichuan insiacuhguuasnt.province lies in southwest of china which is a good place for people to enjoy many world-famous places of interest, such as jiuzhaigou and dujiangyan

20、 irrigation project. jiuzhaigou is well known for its beautiful lakes, of whichthe water is clear and looks colorful.another attraction is dujianyanirrigationproject,which was built over 2,000 years ago and is stillplaying an importantpart in irrigationtoday. besides, the nice weather and convenient

21、 transportation here can make your trip more enjoyable.in my opinion, it is a wise choice to travel here.i'm looking forward to your coming.yours sincerely,li hua基礎(chǔ)寫作8看圖敘事類下面 4 幅圖片描述的是星期天上午在中山公園里發(fā)生的一件事。請根據(jù)圖片所提供的信息用英語為你校的“英語園地 ”寫一篇短文。注意：短文須包括所有圖片的主要內(nèi)容。短文的內(nèi)容要連貫、完整；用五句話完成短文。參考詞匯：貨攤stand (n.) ; 搶奪sn

22、atch (v.) ; 逮捕arrest (v.)one sunday morning,there were some people in zhongshan park. one possible version：one sunday morning,there were some people in zhongshan park. at a stand, a woman was buyingan ice-cream whena youngman behind her snatched her handbag away. hearingthe shouting“ stop him” , a f

23、ew people began to run after him. there was an old man sitting quietly on a bench nearby and as the snatcher was running past him, the old man quickly picked up his umbrellaand put it between the snatcherlegss ,so the young man fell down on the ground hard. soon twopolicemen came in a police car and

24、 arrested him. at last, the woman thanked the old man, and the people around praised the old man for his cleverness.基礎(chǔ)寫作9活動(dòng)安排有一批英國學(xué)生在廣州旅游，住白天鵝賓館。 請你用英語為他們擬一個(gè)參觀廣州動(dòng)物園的口頭通知，通知的內(nèi)容如下：參觀時(shí)間： 11 月 11 號，星期天；集合時(shí)間：星期天早上7 點(diǎn)，行車50 分鐘； 集合地點(diǎn)：白天鵝賓館大門口；廣州動(dòng)物園的簡介：有50 年左右的歷史，有各種各樣的動(dòng)物，還有稀有的大熊貓，揚(yáng)子鱷等；注意事項(xiàng)：自帶食物，穿舒服的鞋子。寫作要求：

25、只能用5 個(gè)句子表達(dá)全部內(nèi)容。評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)：句子結(jié)構(gòu)準(zhǔn)確，信息內(nèi)容完整，篇章結(jié)構(gòu)連貫，適當(dāng)使用結(jié)構(gòu)復(fù)雜的句子。參考詞匯：揚(yáng)子鱷chinese alligators白天鵝賓館white swan hotel注意：文章的開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，但不算字?jǐn)?shù)。hi, everyone! may i have your attention, please?that s all. thank you!one possible version：hi, everyone. may i have your attention please?on sunday, october 11th, we will visit t

26、he guangzhou zoo, which has a long history of 50 years or so. there we can see all kinds of animals, including some rare animals such as pandas, chinese alligators and so on. those who want to go please gather at the gate of the white swan hotel at 7:00 on sunday morning. it will take us 50 minutes

27、to get to the zoo. be sure to take some food with you and wear comfortable shoes because we will do a lot of walking.that s all. thank you!基礎(chǔ)寫作10圖表類【參考詞匯】【寫作要求】多元化（的） ： diversified調(diào)查對象： respondent以上述信息為材料寫一段五句話的短文。標(biāo)題不計(jì)入句數(shù)。chinese young people's life goals today最近的一項(xiàng)調(diào)查表明如今的中國青年的人生目標(biāo)比過去要顯得多元化。這種選擇

28、的變化表明社會(huì)在進(jìn)步，人們的生活目標(biāo)較以前更為實(shí)際。比例53.5%目標(biāo)掙錢給自己買一房一車手段71.9% 的人說將努力拼搏以實(shí)44%提高生活質(zhì)量現(xiàn)人生的目標(biāo)43.7%成為富人23.9%找一份好工作one possible version：chinese young people's life goals todaya recent survey shows that in today's society, chinese young people's life goals have become more diversified than before. when yo

29、ung people are asked what they will struggle for, more than half of the respondents choose to earn enough money to buy a house and a car for themselves. in addition to this practical goal, some people, about 44%, pick up their life goal as improving theirlife quality or to be a rich person while 23.

30、9% of the respondents are simply satisfied to have a good job. as for how to achieve their life goals, mostof them prefer struggling to realize their dreams. the survey shows that the society is making progress and people's life goals have become more practical.基礎(chǔ)寫作11-說明文 -描寫大學(xué)生活大學(xué)生活即將開始，你將面對新的學(xué)

31、習(xí)和生活環(huán)境，請根據(jù)提示寫一篇英語短文，談?wù)勀愦蛩闳绾伟才拍愕拇髮W(xué)生活。內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)應(yīng)包括：確定新的學(xué)習(xí)目標(biāo)改進(jìn)學(xué)習(xí)方法學(xué)會(huì)獨(dú)立生活參加各種課外活動(dòng) 處理好與同學(xué)的關(guān)系 寫作要求 評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn) 1. 只能使用5 個(gè)句子表達(dá)全部內(nèi)容；2. 文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱。3、信的開關(guān)和結(jié)尾已為你寫好（不計(jì)入你所寫句數(shù)）；4、已給出的信的開頭和結(jié)尾不得抄入答題卡.句子結(jié)構(gòu)準(zhǔn)確，信息內(nèi)容完整，篇章結(jié)構(gòu)連貫。范文i will go to college in the near future.after i enter college, i plan to set new goals in my study a

32、nd improvemyway oflearning. what smore, as i am away frommyparents, it is necessary for me to learn to live on my own, such as doing some washing and cleaning by myself.in my spare time, i will take part in different kinds of school activities, for example, i will often go to the english corner to p

33、ractice my spoken english. in addition, i need to get along well with my classmates and teachers at college. i think i will have a wonderful college life.基礎(chǔ)寫作12.- 應(yīng)用文 -倡議書2007 年 4 月 29 日上午 10 點(diǎn)到 11 點(diǎn)，全國億萬學(xué)生陽光體育活動(dòng)在各地大中小學(xué)校同時(shí)進(jìn)行。教育部倡導(dǎo)學(xué)生：每天鍛煉一小時(shí)健康工作五十年幸福生活一輩子請你根據(jù)以上提示， 用英語準(zhǔn)備一份發(fā)言稿， 向同學(xué)們講述一下陽光體育活動(dòng)的有關(guān)情況，并就高三

34、學(xué)生是否需要每天花一小時(shí)鍛煉，談?wù)勀愕目捶袄碛?。注意?、 發(fā)言稿應(yīng)包括以上所有信息，要有適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。2、 只能使用 5 個(gè)句子表達(dá)全部內(nèi)容。發(fā)言稿的開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)寫好，不計(jì)入總句數(shù)。3、 參考詞匯：陽光體育活動(dòng)a national student sports program;教育部 the ministry of education good afternoon, everyone,thank you!good afternoon, everyone.on the morning of april29, 2007, from 10:00 to 11:00, hundreds of mill

35、ionsof students from primary, middle schools and universities all overchina joined in a national student sports program. the ministryof education calls on students to exercise for an hour every day, in the hope that they will have good health to work fifty years and enjoy the whole life.personally,

36、i think it a good idea for us senior 3 students to have daily exercise.it is well worth of taking an hour a day for exercise, which helps us build up our body and keep a clearmind. therefore, we can work more efficiently.thank you!基礎(chǔ)寫作14.- 議論文 -談看法最近， 你班召開了高三學(xué)生家長會(huì)。會(huì)后， 英語老師要求學(xué)生用英語寫一篇短文談?wù)勱P(guān)于對家長會(huì)的看法的。要點(diǎn)

37、如下：1、家長會(huì)的目的：相互溝通，提高學(xué)習(xí)成績。2、贊同的觀點(diǎn)及理由。3、不贊同的觀點(diǎn)及理由。4、 你的觀點(diǎn)及理由。寫作要求：1、只能用5 個(gè)句子表達(dá)全部內(nèi)容。 （開頭的句子不計(jì)入總數(shù)）2、可適當(dāng)增加邏輯細(xì)節(jié)。recentlyaparentsmeetingwasheldinourschool.possible version:recently a parents meeting was held in our school. but different people have different ideas.some students think it is of great importan

38、ce to have the meeting for parents to know more about their children at school. on the contrary, others hold the view that it is no use because they may know their childrens poor marks and improper behavior. even some parents may scold or beat their children.in my opinion,to get a better understandi

39、ng and communicationwiththe teachers and children, parents meetings are quite necessary.基礎(chǔ)寫作15.- 寫信假如你在加拿大旅游過，告訴他。開頭已經(jīng)給出。你的筆友李華想留學(xué)，要了解加拿大的情況，請你用 5 句話寫信地理加拿大是世界第二大國，是世界是湖泊最多的國家。經(jīng)濟(jì)東部區(qū)以漁業(yè)、森林為主，中部人口最密集。留學(xué)生活建議選擇東部留學(xué)，因?yàn)榱魧W(xué)生比較少，學(xué)費(fèi)便宜。醫(yī)療有病一般去診所，醫(yī)院費(fèi)用非常昂貴，建議購買醫(yī)療保險(xiǎn)，每月54 加元dear li hua,i am glad to know that you a

40、re going to study in canada, so i am writing to tell yousomething about this country.寫作要求：1、只能用5 個(gè)句子表達(dá)全部內(nèi)容。 （開頭的句子不計(jì)入總數(shù)）2、可適當(dāng)增加邏輯細(xì)節(jié)。dear li hua,i am glad to knowthat you are goingto studyin canada, so i am writingto tellyou something about this country.canada is the second largest country withthe la

41、rgest number of lakes in the world.themajority of people live in the central part of the country, while fishing and forestry are of great importance in the eastern part. i suggest that you (should) choose to study in the east, where not many international students study and tuition is lower. most pe

42、ople will go to a clinic instead of a hospital, because it is very expensive to see a doctor there. so i advise you to buy hospitalization insurance, which is 54 canadian dollars a year.基礎(chǔ)寫作16 記敘文 -成語故事假如你的美國朋友正在學(xué)習(xí)漢語，他寫來電子郵件，向你了解中國成語“掩耳盜鈴 ”的故事，請你根據(jù)以下的寫作內(nèi)容，用英語寫出這個(gè)故事?！緦懽鲀?nèi)容】1. 盜鈴的念頭：深夜里偷竊鄰居家掛在屋外的大鈴鐺。2.

43、 鐘鳴：掩耳；3. 盜鈴：被捉；4. 寓意。【寫作要求】只能使用5 個(gè)句子表達(dá)全部的內(nèi)容。once upon a time there was a stupid man one possible version:once upon a time there was a stupid man who went to steal his neighbour s big bell hung outside the door one night. he tried to get the bell off, but it rang the moment he touched it. hewas afra

44、id that someone would hear it, so he covered his ears and got the bell down. hearing the sound of the bell, a lot of people came to the gate and caught him. the story tells us that we can never fool ourselves by ignoring the facts.基礎(chǔ)寫作18 說明文 -寫短文假設(shè)你是一位心理輔導(dǎo)老師，你的一位學(xué)生因?yàn)榭荚嚦煽儾缓枚蚰闱笾?。針對他的情況，請你以marks do no

45、t mean everything為題，寫一篇短文開導(dǎo)他。要點(diǎn)：1. 成績好壞并不意味著一個(gè)學(xué)生的優(yōu)劣；2. 成績可以通過自身的努力提高；3. 要學(xué)會(huì)調(diào)整心態(tài)，爭取進(jìn)步；4. 只要自己付出，就沒有什么可后悔的。寫作要求：1. 必須使用5 句子介紹全部所給的內(nèi)容。2. 將 5 個(gè)句子組織連貫成的一篇短文，使用必要的連接詞。one possible versionmarks do not mean everythingit is usual that many students parents and teachers consider marks as everything, but in fa

46、ct, marks only show whether one gains more or less achievement in a certain period. it does not meanstudents who get high marks are top or excellent ones. what s more, marks can be truly improved if you work hard at your lessons. however hard you feel at present, you will be happy in the future,so y

47、ou should adjust your mind to reality and make up your mind to make progress. as a matter of fact, if you put your heart into your study, whatever the result is, there is nothing left for you to regret.基礎(chǔ)寫作19- 應(yīng)用文 -自薦信 -閱讀下面一則廣告，按照要求完成寫作任務(wù)。eil international english summer camp volunteer wantedeil wa

48、s founded in britain in 1936 with the fundamental aim of international understanding“ learn to live together by living together”.requirements: over 16; good knowledge of english; outgoing; working well with children between 7-12activities : language study, outdoor recreation and travelcampers : stud

49、ents from different countriescamp site: mount wuyi, fujiantime : july 26-august 9application deadline: july 15. 2008if interested, please e-mail to 寫作內(nèi)容 假設(shè)你是李華，這則廣告引起了你的興趣，請用英文寫一封自薦信。要求如下：1. 對夏令營主題的理解；2. 根據(jù)招聘要求自我介紹；3. 參加夏令營的目的。注意： 1. 信的開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；2.只能用五個(gè)句子表達(dá)。dear sir,i m li hua f

50、rom fujian.i am looking forward to your early reply.one possible versiondear sir,yours sincerely ，li huai mli hua from fujian. when i was reading the advertisement , the aim of this activity impressed me greatly. i think it is instructive to learn to live together by living together. it is such a go

51、od opportunity for the only child like me to learn to share and work together that i recommend myself to you without hesitation.as a boy of 17, i am outgoing, have a good command ofenglish and some experience ofworkingwell with childrenaged from 7 to 12. i thinkit is a kind of win-winactivity,throug

52、h which i can help take care of the children and meanwhile improve my english, make more friends, and enrich my life during the summer vacation.i am looking forward to your early reply.sincerely yours, li hua基礎(chǔ)寫作20 應(yīng)用文 -回信假定你是李華，david是你的美國筆友。他對中國鼓勵(lì)使用環(huán)保購物袋很感興趣，來信向你詢問此事。請你給他寫封回信。主要內(nèi)容如下： 感謝他的關(guān)注。 簡要介紹相關(guān)

53、情況。 談?wù)勀愕母邢?。注意?. 詞數(shù) 100 左右，信的格式已為你寫好。2. 可根據(jù)內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。3 只能用 5 個(gè)句子表達(dá)全部內(nèi)容。4.參考詞匯：環(huán)抱購物袋-environment-friendly shopping bag;關(guān)注 -concern. dear david,yours, li huaone possible version dear david,i m glad that you ve noticed our efforts directed towards environmental protection. thank youfor your con

54、cern.astoomuchuse ofplasticbags has caused serious whitepollution,ourgovernment encourages us to use reusable environment-friendly shopping bags, which are made of a variety of material that can be easily treated when they become rubbish. more and more people in china have realized the advantages of

55、 such bags and started using them.i believe that the wide use of these shopping bags, one of the many steps we are taking to make our country an even cleaner place, can greatly improve our environment.yours, li hua基礎(chǔ)寫作 21科普知識與現(xiàn)代科學(xué)技術(shù)寫作內(nèi)容如今， 各類電視節(jié)目廣泛使用短信參與方式，對此人們評價(jià)不一。請你對此現(xiàn)象談?wù)剛€(gè)人看法：態(tài)度一態(tài)度二你的態(tài)度給觀眾提供了更多的參與機(jī)會(huì)控制不當(dāng)，節(jié)目品位無法保證給媒體帶來更多收益短信費(fèi)用過高，觀眾易生反感？迎合年輕人對新事物的追求沉溺于此，浪費(fèi)精力寫作要求1、只能用 5 個(gè)句子表達(dá)全部的內(nèi)容。2、文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱。評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)句子結(jié)構(gòu)準(zhǔn)確，信息內(nèi)容完整，篇章結(jié)構(gòu)連貫。possible versionatpresent, people react to short m