高中英語新高考-英語作文：熱點(diǎn)話題指導(dǎo)與解讀：意見分歧、教育

1、6高中英語新高考-英語作文：熱點(diǎn)話題指導(dǎo)與解讀：意見分歧、教育作文不常寫，寫作技能就會生疏，這是必然的。但是每次寫一定要有 所突破，才會有效，其中一個好方法就是把別人的好作文的好文筆內(nèi) 化為己有。下面這篇文字用到了很多高級詞塊，個別是四級常用詞匯，相信對成績非常好的讀者也會有用。我一貫主張，先廣泛閱讀大量的同類話題作文，然后下筆，調(diào)用自己的思維，用上積累的詞塊。歡迎大家提出更好的寫法建議。非常感謝。 題目：在我們合作的過程中，經(jīng)常小組里出現(xiàn)不同的聲音，如何看待不同的 聲音并且取得一致的聲音。寫作過程：首段導(dǎo)入：說明分歧的壞處：破壞合作和孤立成員（話題導(dǎo)入+解釋說明結(jié)果+明確立場）Nowaday

2、s, alongwith peoplefromdifferentbackgrounds come many conflicts in a community, which, if not handled properly , may threaten cooperation.（這個句子比較復(fù)雜lose support and isolate的，主句是倒裝句，定語從句里含有狀語從句的省略結(jié)構(gòu)，屬于：現(xiàn)象+結(jié)果的思維模式 ）Forexample, it makes members graduallythemselves .（對前面的 threat 繼續(xù)解釋）Therefore,great effo

3、rts should be made to achieve a universal voice.（最后提出觀點(diǎn)）中間段：解釋立場，說明消除分歧爭取統(tǒng)一的聲音的好處First, it can help achieve high working efficiency . Obviously, a group where all members unite as one is usually full of passion and strength . Otherwise, a lot of time will be spent convincing each other.（展開方式：主題句+解木舉

4、+反向說明）Second, it contributes to afriendly environment in which everyone can workwith a goodmood . By contrast, individuals with strong opinionsare inclinedto be aggressive, imposing great pressure on others.（展開方式：主題句+反向說明）結(jié)尾段：提出建議Personally, even with the most deeply held differences, treatingtheoth

5、erpersonwithrespectis always agoodfirststeptowards greater understanding. Also, a good listening cangainyoudeepempathy with others. Both willbe asource ofpersonal comfort and reassurance in various conflicts.（158個詞） 好詞好句： Along withcome兩個事物一起發(fā)生if not handled properly 如果處理不好 lose support 失去支持isolate

6、themselves孤立自我mutual respect 相互尊重achieve high working efficiency贏得高效full of passion and strength充滿激情和力量with a good mood 好心情 are inclined to 傾向于imposing great pressure on 對施力口壓力gain you deep empathy with others帶來共鳴a source of personal comfort and reassurance安撫和寬慰的來源注：最后一段是圣誕節(jié)英國女王致辭里的。But through the

7、many changes I have seen over the years, faith, family and friendship have been not only a constant for mebut a source of personal comfort and reassurance.但縱觀這些年間諸事變遷。我的信仰，家庭和友誼不僅是我永恒的堅(jiān)守，同時也是我的 安撫和寬慰。Even with the most deeply held differences,treatingthe otherperson with respect and as a fellow huma

8、n beingis alwaysagood first step towards greater understanding.即使彼止匕間存在最根深蒂固的分歧，視對方為同儕、待他人以尊重永遠(yuǎn)是增進(jìn)理解的 第一步。題目：評價(jià)虎爸虎媽的嚴(yán)苛教育 本題目可以用在所有父母不當(dāng)?shù)慕逃绞缴?，可以隨意拓展。 開頭段：不贊成這種方式In China, the idea that “spare a rod, spoil a child has been rooted in a family from generation to generation. Personally, such severe paren

9、ting styles could becounterproductive .主體內(nèi)容：1 .削弱創(chuàng)造力和想象力2 .不利于培養(yǎng)溝通能力Firstly, the controlling methods weaken childrens creativity and imagination .（后 面開 始說明 原因） The fast-changing society favors those who will try something newand do awaywith oldroutines .（從反面來說明） Unfortunately, manyparents confine ch

10、ildrens behaviors and thoughts to a crampedspace, depriving them of the freedom to set theirminds free .Secondly, they pose a great threat to the cultivation of communicative ability.（后 面具 體解釋 threat） Children subjected to high-pressure parenting for long tend to make compromises and blindly follow

11、the footsteps of others結(jié)尾:In conclusion, the styles of tiger mothers should be abandonedthough their children may be modest andlead a secure life inthe future.（主題句用一個though 說明了虎媽教育并非都是缺點(diǎn)，后面來了個轉(zhuǎn)折，以退為進(jìn)。）However, they will wear down the childrens bravery to voice different ideas and fight for their own

12、 interests, which makes them obedient and mediocre in the end.（150 詞）好詞好句：spare a rod, spoil a child孩子不打不成器be rooted in 扎根于counterproductive 事與愿違的weaken childrens creativity and imagination肖U弱孩子的倉造力和想象力favor 青睞于try something new嘗試新的do away with 打破，去除confine - to把限制在deprive them of錄 U 奪的set their minds free 釋放； 讓自由pose a great threat to 對構(gòu)成危害the cultivation of的培養(yǎng)communicative ability溝通能力