15年考研英語大作文范文

1、Part B52. Directions:Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay you should1) describe the drawing briefly2) explain its intended meaning, and3) give your commentsYou should write neatly on ANSWER SHEET. (20 points) 1. 推導(dǎo)圖畫寓意手機(jī)的出現(xiàn)給生活帶來了巨大的變化，對(duì)人際交往的負(fù)面作用逐漸呈現(xiàn)，如何抵制

2、這樣的影響是現(xiàn)代人需要關(guān)注的問題。2. 羅列關(guān)鍵詞table n.餐桌 dish n.菜seat v.坐play with phones玩手機(jī)smart phone 智能手機(jī)face-to-face communication面對(duì)面交流contact in real life真實(shí)生活中的交流3. 優(yōu)秀范文賞析手機(jī)時(shí)代的聚會(huì)【參考范文】Four friends get together to have a dinner. Whats weird is that the four appear to be stranger to each other, not talking with frien

3、ds seated beside but totally indulging in smart phones.The picture reveals a typical scene for modern people. Whenever people have a chance to relax, they will fish out phones to play for a while. The warm face-to-face communication which was taken for granted has been violently ruined by smart phon

4、es and becomes a luxury. It is challenging or even impossible for many people to keep concentration on face-to-face communication. As the quality of emotional interaction between people suffer an annoying dramatic deterioration, more and more people arrive at an approval that people should shut down

5、 mobile phones when being with friends or relatives. Unfortunately, it is only a theoretical opinion. Few people apply it.The smart phone is really the most controversial modern invention, bringing enjoyable relaxation and great convenience on one hand and causing problematic phone addiction and con

6、sequent interpersonal isolation on the other hand. Rational attitude should be paid to the mobile phone. We should not squander on a lifeless machine the limited and precious time with friends and relatives. Due importance should be attached to the contact in real life.批判詞匯：weird， indulge in, be vio

7、lently ruined by, impossible,suffer an annoying dramatic deterioration, unfortunately, controversial, problematic addiction, interpersonal isolation, squander time on ., take a rational attitude to,hold a rational attitude toward,attach due importance to sth.精彩句式1. Whats weird is that the four appea

8、r to be stranger to each other, not talking with friends seated beside but totally indulging in smart phones.句子成形步驟：1） 寫出簡單句The four seem not to know about each other.They dont talk with others.They only play with smart phones.It is weird.2) 整合簡單句It is weird that the four seem not to know about each

9、 other, because they dont talk with others and only play with smart phones.3) 增加表達(dá)精確性和美感Whats weird is that the four appear to be stranger to each other, not talking with friends seated beside but totally indulging in smart phones.2. As the quality of emotional interaction between people suffer an a

10、nnoying dramatic deterioration, more and more people arrive at an approval that people should shut down mobile phones when being with friends or relatives.句子成形步驟：1） The quality of communication declines.People are with friends or relatives.People should shut down mobile phones.More and more people a

11、gree about it. 2) 整合簡單句As the quality of communication declines, more and more people agree that people should shut down mobile phones when they are with friends or relatives.3) 增加表達(dá)精確性和美感As the quality of emotional interaction between people suffer an annoying dramatic deterioration, more and more

12、people arrive at an approval that people should shut down mobile phones when being with friends or relatives. 3. The smart phone is really the most controversial modern invention, bringing enjoyable relaxation and great convenience on one hand and causing problematic phone addiction and consequent i

13、nterpersonal isolation on the other hand.句子成形步驟：1） 寫出簡單句The smart phone is controversial.The smart phone can make people relaxed. The smart phone brings convenience. The smart phone will make people addict to the phone.The addiction to the phone causes interpersonal isolation.2) 整合簡單句The smart phone

14、 is controversial, which can make people relaxed, bring convenience but will make people addict to the phone, which causes interpersonal isolation.3) 增加表達(dá)精確性和美感The smart phone is really the most controversial modern invention, bringing enjoyable relaxation and great convenience on one hand and causi

15、ng problematic phone addiction and consequent interpersonal isolation on the other hand. consequent adj.隨之發(fā)生的；作為結(jié)果的必然的抵擋作文進(jìn)階演練低檔作文（7分）修改范例（15分）The picture above depiction1 that two girl and two boy2 sit3 near a table having4 a dinner together. However, all them5 looking6 masseges7 in their mobiles8

16、instead of eat and talk9. How horrible it is! The picture above depicts1 that two girls and boys2 are sitting3 near a table to have4 a dinner together. However, all of them5 are checking6 messages7 in their mobile phones8 instead of eating dishes and talking to each other9. How horrible it is! The p

17、icture reflect8 what happening9 more freqently10 in now society11. It1 send2 a profound massege3 that young4 are addict5 to phone6 forget some time for real person7. They12 rather13 talking or playing14 with stranges15 on the internet than talking or playing16 with friends or families17. This is the

18、 high technology can be a double sword.18 On one hand, it give great convenient for19 life and work, but on the other hand, it get people further and further away20. The picture1 conveys2 a profound message3 that young people4 are addicted5 to phones6 and forget to spare some time to communicate wit

19、h real persons7. What the picture reflects8 happens9 more frequently10 in todays society11. Young people12 would rather13 talk or play with14 strangers15 on the internet than do16 with friends or family members17. The mobile phone really is a double-edged sword.18 On one hand, it brings great conven

20、ience to19 life and work, but on the other hand, it makes people distant from each other20.I think it best if we use1 our phone2 proper and wise3. What screen disply4 never replace5 the feel6 among human7. I think we should use1 our phones2 properly and wisely3. What is displayed on the screen4 can

21、never replace5 the warm communication6 among people7.Unfolded in the elaborately painted cartoon is a thought-provoking scene: four youngsters are sitting together to have their gathering feast. However, much of their attention has been attached to their mobile cell phones, totally forgetting what t

22、hey are gathering for. Just as is put in the caption of this cartoon, it is typically a“Dinner party in mobile era.”This picture is naturally associated with a wide-spreading phenomenon in contemporary societytoo much addiction to the mobile phones. Indeed, we have all stepped into an era of getting and staying in touch with others through telecommunication. Each of us seems close to another under this circumstance, bu