四六級(jí)作文第二講四六級(jí)作文中的常見(jiàn)錯(cuò)誤

1、四級(jí)作文中的常見(jiàn)錯(cuò)誤四級(jí)作文中的常見(jiàn)錯(cuò)誤 5. 四級(jí)作文中的常見(jiàn)錯(cuò)誤四級(jí)作文中的常見(jiàn)錯(cuò)誤n5.1. 詞層面詞層面n5.1.1. 用詞搭配不恰當(dāng)用詞搭配不恰當(dāng)However, the speed of a car is much faster than that of a bicycle.In the past the price of milk was so expensive that most families could not afford it.Nowadays, the traffic in big city is getting more and more crowded.In

2、recent one and two years, people who take TOEFL have decreased.In the past few years, grain has decreased by nearly 20%. 5. 四級(jí)作文中的常見(jiàn)錯(cuò)誤四級(jí)作文中的常見(jiàn)錯(cuò)誤n5.1. 詞層面詞層面n5.1.1. 用詞搭配不恰當(dāng)用詞搭配不恰當(dāng)1. However, the speed of a car is much faster than that of a bicycle.nHowever, the speed of a car is much higher than that

3、 of a bicycle.n說(shuō)明：speed 只能和high, good, top, normal, fantastic, moderate, surprising 等搭配，不能與fast, quick, slow 搭配，但可以說(shuō)A car is much faster in speed than a bicycle.2. In the past the price of milk was so expensive that most families could not afford it.nIn the past the price of milk was so high that mo

4、st families could not afford it.n說(shuō)明：price只能和high, low, inflated, moderate, minimum, original, reduced, reasonable等搭配，不能與expensive, cheap搭配，但可以說(shuō)In the past, milk was so expensive that most families couldnt afford it.3. Nowadays, the traffic in big city is getting more and more crowded.nNowadays, the

5、traffic in big city is getting heavier and heavier.4. In recent one and two years, people who take TOEFL have decreased.nIn recent one and two years, the number of people who take TOEFL test has decreased.5. In the past few years, grain has decreased by nearly 20%.nIn the past few years, the consump

6、tion/amount of grain has decreased by nearly 20%.n5.1.2. 修飾語(yǔ)不當(dāng)修飾語(yǔ)不當(dāng)He neither speaks English nor Chinese.Without television, people cannot get information which comes from other parts of the world immediately.At the age of six, my father began to give me English lessons.Having carried out economic r

7、eforms in our country, peoples living standard has greatly improved.1.To improve ones writing skill, regular practice is essential.n5.1.2. 修飾語(yǔ)不當(dāng)修飾語(yǔ)不當(dāng)He neither speaks English nor Chinese.nHe speaks neither English nor Chinese.Without television, people cannot get information which comes from other p

8、arts of the world immediately.nWithout television, people cannot immediately get information which comes from other parts of the world.3. At the age of six, my father began to give me English lessons.nWhen I was six years old, my father began to give me English lessons.4. Having carried out economic

9、 reforms in our country, peoples living standard has greatly improved. Our government having carried out economic reforms in our country, peoples living standard has greatly improved.nSince economic reforms have been carried out in our country, peoples living standard has greatly improved.5. To impr

10、ove ones writing skill, regular practice is essential.nTo improve ones writing skill, one must practice regularly.5.1.3. 把形容詞和介詞誤作動(dòng)詞把形容詞和介詞誤作動(dòng)詞nThis term well very busy.nThis term well be very busy.nThe cave like a room very much.nThe cave looked very much like a room.nI very like this novel.nI like

11、 this novel very much.5.1.4. 少用連詞少用連詞nI started to play table-tennis in middle school, still play it now.nI started to play table-tennis in middle school, and I still play it now.nTV becomes an important part in our daily life. Because we cannot live without it.nTV becomes an important part in ourda

12、ily life, because we cannot live without it.5.1.5. 指代不當(dāng)指代不當(dāng)nPeople have been fighting against the influences of TV commercials, but it often proves useless.nPeople have been fighting against the influences of TV commercials, but this effort often proves useless.nTelevision provides us with a vivid,

13、colorful world, which enables us to enjoy life thoroughly.nBy providing us with a vivid, colorful world, television enables us to enjoy life thoroughly.n5.1.6. 一致方面的錯(cuò)誤一致方面的錯(cuò)誤nStudy hard now so that we can cope with the change and challenge of the twenty-first century.nStudy hard now so that you can

14、cope with the change and challenge of the twenty-first century.nOne serious problem human beings are faced with are how to use our natural resources economically.nOne serious problem human beings are faced with is how to use our natural resources economically.nNow fruit and vegetables can be seen ev

15、erywhere when it is in season.nNow fruit and vegetables can be seen everywhere when they are in season.n5.1.7. 詞的誤用詞的誤用nWith the industrious development, there is a great need for different kinds of energy.nWith the industrial development, there is a great need for different kinds of energy.nTV comm

16、ercials have a profound influence on our every day life.nTV commercials have a profound influence on our everyday life.nFirst we should use our natural resources in an economic way.nFirst we should use our natural resources in an economical way.5.2. 句子層面句子層面5.2.1. 中國(guó)式英語(yǔ)中國(guó)式英語(yǔ)nHave money can do many t

17、hings. 有錢(qián)可以做好多事情。nThere are many people do morning exercise in the park. 有很多人在公園里面晨練。nHis joke made me laugh to death.nI was quite amused by the joke he just told.nChinese people are devoting themselves to the physical exercise. Why? Because they think it is very important to their health.nMore and

18、more people are spending part of their free time on physical exercise because they realize the importance of regular physical exercise.nSmoking cigars will do harm to our body.nSmoking cigars will do harm to our health.nReading books can acquire knowledge.nThrough reading one can acquire knowledge.n

19、Now people go abroad is not easy.nIt is not easy for people to go abroad now.nNowadays young people who seek to go abroad are becoming more and more.nNowadays more and more young people seek to go abroad.nThe chief reasons for the change have five points.nThere are five main reasons for the change.n

20、5.2.2. 句子結(jié)構(gòu)不完整，不平衡句子結(jié)構(gòu)不完整，不平衡nTV becomes an important part in our daily life. Because we cannot live without it.nTV becomes an important part in our daily life because we cannot live without it.nA park is a place where everyone can have a good time or just to be sitting around doing nothing.nA park

21、is a place where everyone can have a good time or just sit around doing nothing.n5.2.3. 懸垂修飾語(yǔ)懸垂修飾語(yǔ)nWhile reading the paper last night, an article on solar energy attracted my attention.nWhile reading the paper, I became interested in an article on solar energy.n5.2.4. 主謂不一致主謂不一致n集合名詞（army, audience,

22、 cabinet, class, company, committee, crew, crowd, family, government, group, party, population, public, staff, team等）作主語(yǔ)，如果指整體，則謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞用單數(shù)；如果指具體成員，則謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞用復(fù)數(shù)。n表示時(shí)間、距離、價(jià)格等的復(fù)數(shù)名詞或短語(yǔ)，如果強(qiáng)調(diào)整體，謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞用單數(shù)；如果強(qiáng)調(diào)具體數(shù)量，則謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞用復(fù)數(shù)。單數(shù)名詞如果跟著along with, as well as, besides, but, combined with, except, in addition to, rather t

23、han等時(shí)，謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞用單數(shù)。n但用eitheror, neithernor, not onlybut also, or等連接的名詞作主語(yǔ)時(shí)，謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞需要與最近的那個(gè)主語(yǔ)保持一致。nTom is one of the students who does not take applied mathematics.nTom is one of the students who do not take applied mathematicsnSomeone/Somebody think that reading should be selective. (誤)nSome think that read

24、ing should be selective. (正).n5.2.5. 贅言問(wèn)題贅言問(wèn)題nIn my opinion, I believe the free medical system is in need of reform.nIn my opinion, the free medical system is in need of reform.nIn general, young people in these days tend to remain single.nYoung people in these days tend to remain single.nThe reason

25、 why people choose to live in the country is because there is no pollution nor noise there.nThe reason why people choose to live in the country is that there is no pollution nor noise there.nWe must cooperate together to make our cities greener and cleaner.nWe must work together to make our cities g

26、reener and cleaner.n5.3 語(yǔ)篇層面語(yǔ)篇層面 偏離主題偏離主題 段落缺乏統(tǒng)一性段落缺乏統(tǒng)一性 缺少連貫性缺少連貫性n5.4. 語(yǔ)法方面語(yǔ)法方面 語(yǔ)態(tài)，比較級(jí)，非謂語(yǔ)形式，冠詞用法，可數(shù)語(yǔ)態(tài)，比較級(jí)，非謂語(yǔ)形式，冠詞用法，可數(shù)不可數(shù)名詞，不定代詞單復(fù)數(shù)，時(shí)態(tài)不可數(shù)名詞，不定代詞單復(fù)數(shù)，時(shí)態(tài)n5.5. 標(biāo)點(diǎn)用法標(biāo)點(diǎn)用法5.6. 拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤nenvironment（環(huán)境，容易寫(xiě)成enviroment）ngovernment（政府，容易誤拼成goverment）nmodern（現(xiàn)代的，容易拼成morden） respectable（受人尊敬的），respectful（尊敬別人

27、的），respective（各自的）neconomic（有關(guān)經(jīng)濟(jì)的），economical（節(jié)儉的）ndelighted（感到高興的），delightful（使人高興的）.nhistoric（有歷史意義的），nhistorical（關(guān)于歷史的）nconsiderate（關(guān)心別人的），nconsiderable（相當(dāng)大的，相當(dāng)多的）nsensible（合理的，可感知的），nsensitive（敏感的）ncredible（可信的），ncredulous（容易輕信的）ncontinual（持續(xù)的，中間有間隔），ncontinuous（持續(xù)的，中間沒(méi)有間隔）nsatisfied（滿(mǎn)意的），nsatis

28、factory（令人滿(mǎn)意的）nfarther（更遠(yuǎn)，表示距離），nfurther（更進(jìn)一步，表示程度）nimaginary（虛構(gòu)的，想象中的），nimaginative（想象力豐富的），nimaginable（可以想象的）CET作文常見(jiàn)錯(cuò)誤作文常見(jiàn)錯(cuò)誤在實(shí)際的閱卷過(guò)程中，語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤，尤其是較為嚴(yán)重的錯(cuò)誤，是閱卷人員的主要在實(shí)際的閱卷過(guò)程中，語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤，尤其是較為嚴(yán)重的錯(cuò)誤，是閱卷人員的主要“照顧點(diǎn)照顧點(diǎn)”，有時(shí)甚至是惟一的點(diǎn)；當(dāng)然那樣處理是有道理的，大家可以設(shè)想一，有時(shí)甚至是惟一的點(diǎn)；當(dāng)然那樣處理是有道理的，大家可以設(shè)想一下，一篇語(yǔ)法上漏洞百出、嚴(yán)重影響表達(dá)的作文又會(huì)有什么樣的好內(nèi)容呢？如果下，一

29、篇語(yǔ)法上漏洞百出、嚴(yán)重影響表達(dá)的作文又會(huì)有什么樣的好內(nèi)容呢？如果因?yàn)檎Z(yǔ)言上的錯(cuò)誤而導(dǎo)致失分，那將得不償失。因此，認(rèn)清各種各樣的語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤，因?yàn)檎Z(yǔ)言上的錯(cuò)誤而導(dǎo)致失分，那將得不償失。因此，認(rèn)清各種各樣的語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤，盡可能地避免少犯，對(duì)于提高作文分是有極大的幫助的?，F(xiàn)將閱卷過(guò)程中所發(fā)現(xiàn)盡可能地避免少犯，對(duì)于提高作文分是有極大的幫助的?，F(xiàn)將閱卷過(guò)程中所發(fā)現(xiàn)的大量語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤逐一歸類(lèi)，抽出其中的典型錯(cuò)誤，以警示大家，供參考。的大量語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤逐一歸類(lèi)，抽出其中的典型錯(cuò)誤，以警示大家，供參考。1.句子成分殘缺不全句子成分殘缺不全We always working till late at night before

30、taking exams.(誤誤)We are always working /We always work till late at night before taking exams(正正)We should read books may be useful to us. (誤誤)We should read books which may be useful to us. (正正)2.句子成分多余句子成分多余This test is end, but there is another test is waiting for you. (誤誤)One test ends, but anot

31、her is waiting for you. (正正)The driver of the red car was died on the spot. (誤誤)The driver of the red car died on the spot. (正正)3.主謂不一致主謂不一致Someone/Somebody think that reading should be selective. (誤誤)Some think that reading should be selective. (正正)My sister go to the cinema at least once a week. (

32、誤誤)My sister goes to the cinema at least once a week. (正正)4.動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)的誤用動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)的誤用I was walking along the road, and there are not so many cars on the street. (誤誤)I was walking along the road and there were not so many vehicles on the street. (正正)We have little time to read some books which we interest

33、. (誤誤)We have little time to read some books in which we are interested. (正正)I am a student who has studying in the college for two years. (誤誤)I have been studying in the college for two years(正正)5.詞類(lèi)混淆詞類(lèi)混淆It is my point that reading must be selectively. (誤誤)In my opinion, reading must be selective.

34、 (正正)Honest is so important for everyperson. (誤誤)Honesty is so important for everyone. (正正)The old man was hit by a car when he across the street. (誤誤)The old man was hit by a car when he was crossing the street. (正正)6.名詞可數(shù)與不可數(shù)的誤用名詞可數(shù)與不可數(shù)的誤用Too much tests are disadvantage for students study. (誤誤)Too

35、 many tests are disadvantageous to students. (正正)In the presidents office, we have found new equipments of various kinds. (誤誤)In the presidents office, we have found new equipment of various kinds. (正正)7.動(dòng)詞及物與不及物的誤用動(dòng)詞及物與不及物的誤用The traffic accident was taken place at the junction of two highways. (誤誤)

36、The traffic accident took place at the junction of two highways. (正正)Because of his excellent performance, the boss rose his salary. (誤誤)Because of his excellent performance, the boss raised his salary. (正正)8.介詞介詞to和不定式符號(hào)的混淆和不定式符號(hào)的混淆Too many tests will do harm to cultivate our independent thinking.

37、(誤誤)Too many tests will do harm to the cultivation of our independent thinking. (正正)All these contributed to solve the serious problem. (誤誤)All these contributed to the solution to the serious problem. (正正)9.情態(tài)動(dòng)詞的誤用情態(tài)動(dòng)詞的誤用It may not good to our health. (誤誤)It may be not good to our health. (正正)They

38、should spent much time. (誤誤)They should spend much time. (正正)10. There be句型的誤用句型的誤用There exists some new problems such as being dishonest. (誤誤)There exist/arise some new problems such as being dishonest. (正正)There are many students think college education is worthwhile. (誤誤)There are many students w

39、ho think college education is worthwhile. (正正)11. 動(dòng)賓搭配不當(dāng)動(dòng)賓搭配不當(dāng)We must pay attention to it and make solutions to the problem. (誤誤)We must pay attention and find a solution to the problem. (正正)It also may help you to make success. (誤誤)It may also help you succeed/obtain your goal. (正正)12. 根據(jù)中文逐字硬譯根據(jù)中文

40、逐字硬譯 If someones family situation is not well, he can apply for loan to bank. (誤誤)If ones family is not well off, he can apply to the bank for a loan. (正正)Let alone touch the outside world of campus/keep a good body health. (誤誤)Let alone get in touch with the world outside of the campus/keep fit.(正正

41、) 如何用簡(jiǎn)單句表達(dá)復(fù)雜思想如何用簡(jiǎn)單句表達(dá)復(fù)雜思想 n大學(xué)生剛剛畢業(yè)就想立刻找到高薪的工作是不可能的。 nIt is impossible for sb. to do sth. nIt is impossible for剛剛畢業(yè)的大學(xué)生to找找到高薪的工作到高薪的工作.ncollege students who have just graduated nto find jobs which can give them a lot of money。 nIt is impossible for college students who have just graduated to find jobs which