高考英語作文范例及評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)

1、普通高考評(píng)卷英語作文評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)評(píng)分總則：1、本題總分為25分，按5個(gè)檔次給分。2、評(píng)分時(shí)，先根據(jù)文章的內(nèi)容和語言初步確定是否達(dá)到及格線（15分），然后確定其所屬的具體檔次，以該檔次的要求來衡量，最后給分。其所屬檔次，然后以該檔次的要求來衡量，確定或調(diào)整檔次，最后給分。3、詞數(shù)少于80和多于120的，從總分中減去2分。4、評(píng)分時(shí)應(yīng)注意的主要內(nèi)容為：內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)、應(yīng)用詞匯和語法結(jié)構(gòu)的豐富性和準(zhǔn)確性及上下文的連貫性。5、若缺少要點(diǎn)，分?jǐn)?shù)降一檔處理。6、拼寫與標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)是語言準(zhǔn)確性的一個(gè)方面。評(píng)分時(shí)應(yīng)視其對(duì)交際的影響程度予以考慮。英、美拼寫及詞匯用法均可接受。7、書寫較差以至于影響交際，將其分?jǐn)?shù)降低一個(gè)檔次。

2、評(píng)分細(xì)則：優(yōu)秀（22-25）：緊扣主題，覆蓋所有要點(diǎn)，內(nèi)容充實(shí)；語法結(jié)構(gòu)多樣，詞匯豐富，行文流暢，顯示出較強(qiáng)的語言運(yùn)用能力，允許有個(gè)別語言錯(cuò)誤，但不影響意思表達(dá)。良好（18-21）：緊扣主題，覆蓋所有要點(diǎn)，內(nèi)容較充實(shí)，行文較流暢，語言有少量錯(cuò)誤，但基本不影響意思表達(dá)。一般（15-17）：緊扣主題，基本覆蓋所有要點(diǎn)，語言錯(cuò)誤已影響了部分意思的表達(dá)，但多數(shù)句子基本正確；基本達(dá)到預(yù)期寫作目的。較差（11-14）：要點(diǎn)不全，內(nèi)容不完整，行文不夠連貫；語言錯(cuò)誤較多，半數(shù)句子基本正確。差（6-10）：內(nèi)容混亂，或主要內(nèi)容偏離主題，尚能夠?qū)懗錾贁?shù)與內(nèi)容相關(guān)的可讀句。極差（0-5）：只能寫出與內(nèi)容相關(guān)的詞語，

3、沒有有效信息；抄寫其他文章，或只是寫出與作文無關(guān)的內(nèi)容。高考命題組提供的參考范文：Dear Peter, Id like to ask you to write an article for our schools English newspaper. The “Foreign Cultures” section in our newspaper is very popular among us students. It carries articles written by foreign friends about the cultures of their home count

4、ries. Would you please write something about the culture in your part of the United States? And we would especially welcome articles about how Americans spend their holidays and festivals, and the life of American high school students. You can write anything relevant so long as its interesting and i

5、nformative.400 words wouldbe fine. Could we have your article before June 28? Im looking forward to hearing from you. （95words）Yours,Li Hua【點(diǎn)評(píng)】該參考范文語言簡(jiǎn)練，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，但從高考考場(chǎng)作文考慮應(yīng)提示學(xué)生詞數(shù)再增加一些，句式可再豐富一些，這樣才更有利于得高分。各檔次打分參考范文示例：1.閱卷組確定的24分作文范例Dear Peter, Id like to ask you to write an article for our schools

6、English newspaper. Recently a refreshing program has been established in our schools English newspaper which is named “The Foreign Culture”. Im inclined to invite you to write an article. The importance concerning this issue is listed as follows.This program is aiming to introduce the festivals and

7、habits in America, especially including the life of students in high school. Consequently, I intend to inquest you to write some matters.Such as what the individuals tend to do when significant events are forthcoming. Additionally, its universally acknowledged that American students have extremely a

8、ctive thoughts. Considering that how they study in school is what we indeed intend to attain.Whats more, it must be beared in mind that the articles are supposed to be around 400 words. Meanwhile, I anticipate you can finish it before 28th, June.Im looking forward to your conclusive reply. (140 word

9、s)2. 閱卷組確定的22分作文范例Dear Peter, Id like to ask you to write an article for our schools English newspaper. It will be put on the part of Foreign Culture, which aims to introduce many other countries culture. This article needs to be concerned with America festival custom and middle school students life

10、. As you are American student, its certain that you can teach us a large amount of knowledge about it. As is known to all, only if we learn American Culture well, can we truly understand the country. Therefore, Id appreciate it if you write article.There are some requirements below. The essay is aro

11、und 400 words. Besides, it has to be sent before June, the 28th. If you have other questions, please write to me as soon as possible.(112 words)3. 閱卷組確定的18分作文范例Dear Peter, Id like to ask you to write an article for our schools English newspaper. We have an area named “Foreign Culture”. Its used

12、 to introduce Americas customs and students daily life. Could you write an essay for me.Initially please write some traditional festivals to enlarge our horizons. Some interesting things in your school life is also fine. Moreover, please write more than 400 words. So we can edidate is better. Eventu

13、ally, the deadline is 6,28 because our work must be finished in these days. Dont be late please？Here are my words. Thanks for attention. Looking forward to your reply at your earliest convenience.(92 words)4. 閱卷組確定的15分作文范例Dear Peter, Id like to ask you to write an article for our schools English new

14、spaper. The English newspaper have a “foreign culture” program. If your article is written well, it will be select in newspaper. The article is about American festivals and customs, besides inclouded media school students life. There is no doubt that you can make it. Because you is familiar with the

15、m. In opinion, you can also increase students how to study. Most importantly, your article can help us broaden horizon and let us know more American culture.You need to write about 400 words. Last but not least, you must hand in it before June, 28th.Im looking forward to your early reply.(101 words)

16、5. 閱卷組確定的12分作文范例Dear Peter, Id like to ask you to write an article for our schools English newspaper. The English newspaper has a show which is made describes for American Traditional Day Culture and middle school students school life.I think you had much knowledge about them. Therefore, I want to t

17、hat you could write a paragraph for them. You can write about 400 words. In addition, the paragraph should finished and put on before June, 28th.I believe you are able to do well.Im looking forward to your information.Thanks about your favour.(77 words)6. 閱卷組確定的9分作文范例Dear Peter, Id like to ask you t

18、o write an article for our schools English newspaper. The newspapers “Foreign Culture” part plan add an article of product the USAs festival and students life. Then, I tell some about it.First of all, the article must about the USAs Festival and students life, you can write the students study behavi

19、our. And write the USAs festival behaviour. In addition, the article you need take 400 words. Dont write a very large artist. You can make a simple production. At last the articles deadline is before 28th, June.I believe you can finish better.Best wishes.(87 words)7. 閱卷組確定的4分作文范例Dear Peter, Id like

20、to ask you to write an article for our schools English newspaper. My name is Li Hua. I need you help. thank you. I hope you write the USA style and student live. I need you help. I need you letter. letter need to 400, in 6,28. need to your letter. thank you. (41 words)1. 感謝信假設(shè)你是李華，梁教授去年六月推薦你去悉尼大學(xué)深造，

21、現(xiàn)在你已經(jīng)被悉尼大學(xué)化學(xué)學(xué)院錄取，請(qǐng)寫封信向梁教授表示感謝?！緝?yōu)秀滿分范文】Dear Professor Liang,I am writing to extend my gratitude to youbecause with your help I am now a student of Chemistry Department of SydneyUniversity.Last June, when I applied to become agraduate student of SydneyUniversity, you really gave me a lot of valuablehe

22、lp. You not only wrote a recommendation（推薦） for me to Professor Wells who worksin the Sydney University but also gave me careful and patient instructions onhow to fill the application forms and write the application letters.It is your unreserved(無保留的) help thatenables me to obtain this spl

23、endid（極好的）opportunity of further education. For thefollowing two years I will study hard to reciprocate（回報(bào)） your sincere help andexpectations with excellent grades.Yours truly,Zhang Ying2. 道歉信假設(shè)你是李華，你上星期參觀倫敦，當(dāng)時(shí)你爸的一個(gè)朋友Rogers先生對(duì)你照顧有加，請(qǐng)寫封信表達(dá)你對(duì)他的感謝?！緝?yōu)秀滿分范文】Dear Sarah,I am terribly sorry to tell you

24、 that I am unable toattend your birthday party next Thursday evening. That is owing to（因?yàn)椋?#160;the fact that （同位語從句）my younger brother suddenly fell ill and was taken to a hospital thismorning. I have to go there immediately and take care of him. As told by thedoctor in charge, it will take around

25、five days for him to recover and I haveasked my boss for a leave.I really regret that I cannot go to celebrate yourbirthday personally and would miss the perfect chance of enjoying myself withall our old friends. I have chosen a small gift for you and will send it to youtomorrow to show my best wish

26、es. Besides, please give my regards to our friendswhen you meet them at the party.Cordially, （sincerely）Li Hua3. 申請(qǐng)信假定你是李華，將于今年七月從新星外語學(xué)校畢業(yè)。你從報(bào)紙上得知B & B公司要招聘一名英文秘書，你很感興趣，要寫一封求職信，包括下列要點(diǎn)：1年齡：1822. 學(xué)習(xí)情況：班級(jí)前5，英語口語好3興趣和特長(zhǎng)：打字快，喜歡閱讀，聽音樂4性格特點(diǎn)：積極向上【優(yōu)秀滿分范文】Dear Sir/ Madam,I learned from the newspaper

27、that your company needs an English secretary. Im really interested in this position so I am writing to apply for it.Im18 years old and will graduate from Xinxing ForeignLanguagesSchool this July.Im an excellent student, among the top 5 in my class of 50 students. Im good at English, especially spoke

28、n English. I often use the computer and I type very fast. In my spare time, I read a lot. Poems are my favorite. I enjoy music very much too. Being an active young person, I like sports and outdoor activities. Besides, Im easy to get along with and I like to make friends.I hope I may be granted（授予）&

29、#160;an interview,when I can explain my qualifications（資格，條件） more fully. I am looking forward to your reply.Sincerely/Yours,LiHua4. 通知假如你是校學(xué)生會(huì)主席。新年即將到來，為了幫助你校的外國(guó)留學(xué)生更好地了解中國(guó)文化，學(xué)生會(huì)將為他們舉辦一個(gè)新年晚會(huì)。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示，用英語向他們發(fā)出口頭通知。時(shí)間：下周五6：008：00地點(diǎn)：教學(xué)樓101室內(nèi)容：1唱中國(guó)歌    2比賽用筷子    3學(xué)習(xí)包餃子注意：1詞數(shù)不少于5

30、0；2可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。【優(yōu)秀滿分范文】Good afternoon, everyone. May I have your attention, please?      Im the chairman of the Students Union. As the New Year is around the corner（即將到來）, weare going to hold a New Year party for you, which is intended to enable you tohav

31、e a better understanding of Chinese culture. During the party, not only canyou sing a Chinese song, but you will also compete with each other to see howskilled you are at using chopsticks. Whats more, youll learn at the party howto make dumplings. Sounds great, doesnt it? The party is scheduled

32、（計(jì)劃于） in Room 101of the Teaching Building from 6:00 p.m. to 8:00 p.m. next Friday. Please make sure you wont miss it. Thank you for your attention.5. 邀請(qǐng)信你們班同學(xué)打算周六去爬香山。請(qǐng)給外教Chris寫一封英文信，邀請(qǐng)他參加此次活動(dòng)。具體內(nèi)容如下：1. 時(shí)間：8am5 pm；2. 集合地點(diǎn)：校門口；3. 交通工具：公交車；4. 攜帶物品：雨具，午餐，相機(jī)?！緝?yōu)秀滿分范文】Dear Chris，&

33、#160;     Im writing to tell you that we intend to climb the Fragrant Hill this Saturday and I sincerely invite you to go with us on behalf of our class. We are supposed togather at the school gate and set out at 8:00 am sharp. The bus will serve asour transportation. We will cli

34、mb to the top of the hill and enjoy our picniclunch there, so please take some food with you as lunch. At about 2:00 pm. Wewill go down the hill along another path and return to our school at about5.00pm. You may equip yourself with a camera to record the beautiful sceneryand an umbrella or a rainco

35、at is also necessary in case you are caught in arain. Please spare some time to join us. Your participation can surely addcolor to our trip and we are all looking forward to your involvement.Yours,Joe6. 建議信假定你是李華，你所喜愛的Global Mirror周報(bào)創(chuàng)刊五周年之際征集讀者意見請(qǐng)你依據(jù)以下內(nèi)容給主編寫封信，內(nèi)容主要包括： 1說明你是該報(bào)的忠實(shí)讀者  &#

36、160; 2說明該報(bào)優(yōu)點(diǎn)：1)兼顧國(guó)內(nèi)外新聞     2)介紹名人成功故事 3提出建議：   刊登指導(dǎo)英語學(xué)習(xí)的文章【優(yōu)秀滿分范文】Dear Editor-in-Chief,Congratulations on the 5th anniversary of Global Mirror!Im a regular reader of your newspaper. I like it so much that I hardly miss any copy.There are many advantages of Glo

37、bal Mirror. Firstly, Global Mirror covers both national and international news. By simply turning the pages, I can know all important things that have happened both home and abroad. Besides, the success stories of world-famous people are also attractive to me, which help me learn a lot from the

38、m. In a word, thanks to Global Mirror, we are well-informed and keep up with the changing world.As a young student, I wish that I can be a master of English language. Therefore, I suggest that Global Mirror provide articles about English learning for us.Finally, I hope that Global Mirror will b

39、ecome more and more popular. Thank you for your time!Sincerely yours,Li Hua7. 求助信假設(shè)你是李華，你的美國(guó)朋友Tom上個(gè)月來到北京學(xué)習(xí)。七月份你將去北京參加暑期中學(xué)生英語演講比賽 (speech contest)，你在資料搜集、語言運(yùn)用等方面遇到了困難。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)給Tom寫一封電子郵件：1.詢問Tom的生活和學(xué)習(xí)情況；2.談?wù)勀愕睦щy并請(qǐng)Tom幫忙；3.告訴Tom你打算賽后去看他。【優(yōu)秀滿分范文】Dear Tom，How is it going these days? I keep wondering

40、how you feel about your school life in Beijing. Have you got used to the life in China? Are you enjoying your life? I hope you are. Let me tell you a piece of good news: Im going to take part in an English speech contest of middle school students in July in the coming summer vacation. So Im bus

41、y preparing for it. But now I have some difficulty in collecting useful information and using proper English word to express my thoughts. Besides,  I really want to improve my spoken English, especially the pronunciation and intonation（語調(diào)）. Of course, as a native English speaker, you can give m

42、e some suggestions.In addition, Im going to visit you after the contest. Im sure we will have a wonderful time together in Beijing! I can hardly wait to see you! I am looking forward to your early reply.Li Hua8. 投訴信你是李華，兩周前你從網(wǎng)上一套書蟲系列讀物（BookwormSeries）昨天才到貨，且包裝破損，數(shù)量不足。請(qǐng)就此向網(wǎng)店客服寫郵件投訴。要點(diǎn)如下：1.  

43、;  介紹購(gòu)物情況2.    反映存在問題3.    提出解決方案可能用到的生詞：投訴complaint n.【優(yōu)秀滿分范文】To whom it may concern,I am one of your customers(顧客). I ordered（訂購(gòu)）a set of(一套) Bookworm Series on your website two weeks ago, but I didnt receive them until yesterday. And much to my disappointme

44、nt, thebooks were so poorly packed up that the cover of one book was torn. To makematters worse, it is not a complete set, as I found one book missing.I am sorry to have received such poor service, and I believe I have every rightto ask you to deal with this problem. I hope that you either return my

45、 money ordeliver a new set of books to me. Besides, Id like to be informed of theprocess of your dealing with my complaint.Lookingforward to your reply.Sincerely,Li Hua9. 祝賀信假如你是李華，你的好友魏芳在中學(xué)生英語演講比賽中榮獲一等獎(jiǎng)。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容，給她寫一封祝賀信。內(nèi)容包括：1. 表達(dá)你的愉悅心情；2.向她表示祝賀； 3.請(qǐng)她介紹成功的經(jīng)驗(yàn)。參考詞匯：英語演講比賽 the English Speech Contest【優(yōu)秀滿分范文】Dear Wei Fang,I hear that you have won first prize in the English Speech Co