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1、專題訓(xùn)練專題訓(xùn)練-半開放式作文半開放式作文 江蘇省大豐高級中學(xué)江蘇省大豐高級中學(xué) 丁菊菊丁菊菊作文題目作文題目：假定你叫張華。一家英文報社來信：假定你叫張華。一家英文報社來信邀請你調(diào)查一下中學(xué)生對網(wǎng)絡(luò)使用的情況，并邀請你調(diào)查一下中學(xué)生對網(wǎng)絡(luò)使用的情況，并依照調(diào)查寫一篇報道。請根據(jù)下表提供的信息，依照調(diào)查寫一篇報道。請根據(jù)下表提供的信息，對你的調(diào)查作簡要介紹，發(fā)給報社。對你的調(diào)查作簡要介紹，發(fā)給報社。主要的用途主要的用途出現(xiàn)的問題出現(xiàn)的問題1閱讀國內(nèi)外新聞，閱讀國內(nèi)外新聞，學(xué)習(xí)英語學(xué)習(xí)英語2. 發(fā)發(fā)email、欣賞、欣賞音樂、看電影玩游音樂、看電影玩游戲等戲等3.網(wǎng)上購物網(wǎng)上購物1. 過多的在網(wǎng)

2、上玩游戲，浪過多的在網(wǎng)上玩游戲，浪費(fèi)了時間，影響了學(xué)業(yè)費(fèi)了時間，影響了學(xué)業(yè)2. 瀏覽不健康信息，對身心瀏覽不健康信息，對身心有害有害發(fā)表個人觀點(diǎn)發(fā)表個人觀點(diǎn)注意：詞數(shù)注意：詞數(shù)150左右左右Dear editor, Im writing to tell you something about how the students use the Internet_ I hope every student can make use of the Internet properly for their studies.Comments on homeworkPart one The majority

3、 of the students read news at home and abroad as well as learning English. Meanwhile, some always send e-mails by it. It is very convenient for others enjoying music and films. Also, shopping online is very fashionable. As for me, there is no doubt that network brings me lots of convenience and amus

4、ement. Meanwhile, it more or less has some disadvantages. As a matter of fact, the key to dealing with network lies in whether we can use it correctly. On condition that we obey some necessary principles and avoid bad factors, I feel in my bones that well benefit more and more from the network.Guida

5、ncePart two1.List the key points2.Make sentences3.Form a passage and polish作文題目作文題目：假定你叫張華。一家英文報社來信：假定你叫張華。一家英文報社來信邀請你調(diào)查一下中學(xué)生對網(wǎng)絡(luò)使用的情況，并邀請你調(diào)查一下中學(xué)生對網(wǎng)絡(luò)使用的情況，并依照調(diào)查寫一篇報道。請根據(jù)下表提供的信息，依照調(diào)查寫一篇報道。請根據(jù)下表提供的信息，對你的調(diào)查作簡要介紹，發(fā)給報社。對你的調(diào)查作簡要介紹，發(fā)給報社。主要的用途主要的用途出現(xiàn)的問題出現(xiàn)的問題1閱讀國內(nèi)外新聞，閱讀國內(nèi)外新聞，學(xué)習(xí)英語學(xué)習(xí)英語2. 發(fā)發(fā)email、欣賞、欣賞音樂、看電影玩游音樂

6、、看電影玩游戲等戲等3.網(wǎng)上購物網(wǎng)上購物1. 過多的在網(wǎng)上玩游戲，浪過多的在網(wǎng)上玩游戲，浪費(fèi)了時間，影響了學(xué)業(yè)費(fèi)了時間，影響了學(xué)業(yè)2. 瀏覽不健康信息，對身心瀏覽不健康信息，對身心有害有害發(fā)表個人觀點(diǎn)發(fā)表個人觀點(diǎn)Step 1 List the key points Step 2 Make sentences 要點(diǎn)要點(diǎn)1 閱讀國內(nèi)外新聞，學(xué)習(xí)英語閱讀國內(nèi)外新聞，學(xué)習(xí)英語1.They can not only read news at home and abroad _ learn English through the Internet/ _ Internet.2. With the_of th

7、e Internet, they can have access to learning the latest news at home and abroad _ learning English.but alsobyhelpas well as 要點(diǎn)要點(diǎn)2 發(fā)發(fā)email、欣賞音樂、看電影玩游戲、欣賞音樂、看電影玩游戲1.By_ the Internet, they can also send emails to their families, relatives and friends, enjoy _ types of music, watch movies and play compu

8、ter games.2. The Internet also makes it _for them to keep in touch with others by _emails and to relax themselves by _music, seeing films and playing PC games.usingvarious possiblesendingappreciating要點(diǎn)要點(diǎn)3 網(wǎng)上購物網(wǎng)上購物1.They can do online shopping_leaving their homes.2. It is more _for them to do online

9、shopping. 3. Online shopping brings them a lot of _.withoutconvenient convenience要點(diǎn)要點(diǎn) 4 過多的在網(wǎng)上玩游戲，浪費(fèi)了時間，過多的在網(wǎng)上玩游戲，浪費(fèi)了時間，影響了學(xué)業(yè)影響了學(xué)業(yè)1.They spend too much time playing computer games online. T_/ As a _, it wastes a lot of time and affects their studies.2. They are addicted to online computer games, _wa

10、stes lots of valuable time and a_ their studies.hereforeresultwhichffects要點(diǎn)要點(diǎn) 5瀏覽不健康信息，對身心有害瀏覽不健康信息，對身心有害1. They read some unhealthy information, _ does harm to both their body and mind.2. Harmful information that they read on the net _their body and mind.whichhas a bad effect on1.Students who can n

11、ot control themselves very well are drunk with computer games.2.The better we use the Internet, the more we will benefit from it.刑霞刑霞陳蒙蒙陳蒙蒙3. It is high time that we should do something to guide the students to use the Internet properly.4. Nowadays, with the development of the technology, Internet h

12、as shrank our world.陳紹綜陳紹綜吳倩吳倩5. Just as every coin has two sides, surfing the internet also has its advantages and disadvantages.高偉文高偉文6. According to these, there is no doubt that the Internet brings us a lot of convenience. 陳駒洲陳駒洲Step3. Form a passage and polishDear editor, Im writing to tell you

13、 something about how the students use the Internet. _ , they can have access to learning the latest news at home and abroad as well as learning English with the help of the Internet._, the Internet also makes it possible for them to keep in touch with others by sending emails and to relax themselves

14、 by appreciating music, seeing films and playing PC games._, it is more convenient for them to do online shopping. As we all know, the Internet is playing an increasingly important role/ part in our daily life.There is no doubt that it brings students lots of convenience.FirstlyWhats morelastly開頭：引出

15、話題開頭：引出話題總起句：因特網(wǎng)的優(yōu)勢總起句：因特網(wǎng)的優(yōu)勢 分述三個優(yōu)勢分述三個優(yōu)勢 However, every coin has two sides. The Internet also has its disadvantages. Some students are hooked on /are glued to online computer games, which results in a waste of time and poor performance in their studies._, they also read something unhealthy on the

16、net, which is undoutedly/unavoidably physically and mentally harmful to them.To make things worse /Whats worse However, every coin has two sides. The Internet also has its disadvantages. 過渡句（承上啟下過渡句（承上啟下）貶義遞進(jìn)貶義遞進(jìn) As far as Im concerned, theres no doubt that the Internet is playing a more and more im

17、portant role in our society. We can acquire knowledge and broaden our horizon by using it. Im sure if we can make use of the Internet properly, we can benefit from it.PracticePart three據(jù)報道，中國成功地將三人小組送入太空，據(jù)報道，中國成功地將三人小組送入太空，其中一人進(jìn)行了中國首次太空行走，這是其中一人進(jìn)行了中國首次太空行走，這是自自2003年首次將一人送入太空后中國最具年首次將一人送入太空后中國最具挑戰(zhàn)的太空

18、任務(wù)。你對本校學(xué)生就探索太挑戰(zhàn)的太空任務(wù)。你對本校學(xué)生就探索太空的利與弊問題進(jìn)行了調(diào)查。請根據(jù)表格空的利與弊問題進(jìn)行了調(diào)查。請根據(jù)表格中的內(nèi)容用英語寫一篇短文，發(fā)表在你校中的內(nèi)容用英語寫一篇短文，發(fā)表在你校校報上。校報上。支持（多數(shù)學(xué)生）支持（多數(shù)學(xué)生） 探索太空是中國人長期持有的夢想探索太空是中國人長期持有的夢想有助于未來中國參與國際競爭有助于未來中國參與國際競爭中國科學(xué)技術(shù)的發(fā)展使探索太空成中國科學(xué)技術(shù)的發(fā)展使探索太空成了可能了可能反對（部分學(xué)生）反對（部分學(xué)生） 探索太空需要大量的金錢，中國負(fù)探索太空需要大量的金錢，中國負(fù)擔(dān)不起擔(dān)不起中國是一個發(fā)展中國家，應(yīng)努力解中國是一個發(fā)展中國家，應(yīng)

19、努力解決其它社會問題決其它社會問題 你的觀點(diǎn)和感想你的觀點(diǎn)和感想 （表明你自己的觀點(diǎn)，并結(jié)合實(shí)際（表明你自己的觀點(diǎn)，并結(jié)合實(shí)際談?wù)劯邢?。兩至三點(diǎn)。）談?wù)劯邢搿芍寥c(diǎn)。） 注意：注意：1. 不要逐句翻譯，總詞數(shù)不要逐句翻譯，總詞數(shù)150左右，左右， 開頭已經(jīng)寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)；開頭已經(jīng)寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)；2. 要求字跡工整，卷面整潔要求字跡工整，卷面整潔.3. 參考詞匯：參考詞匯： 太空探索太空探索 Space Exploration。 It has been reported that China successfully launched a three-man crew into spa

20、ce whereone of them made the countrys first space walk, the countrys most challenging space mission since first launching A person into space in 2003.作為學(xué)生，我們應(yīng)該如何做：作為學(xué)生，我們應(yīng)該如何做：支持（多數(shù)學(xué)生） 探索太空是中國人長期持有的夢想有助于未來中國參與國際競爭中國科學(xué)技術(shù)的發(fā)展使探索太空成了可能反對（部分學(xué)生） 探索太空需要大量的金錢，中國負(fù)擔(dān)不起中國是一個發(fā)展中國家，應(yīng)努力解決其它社會問題 你的觀點(diǎn)和感想 （表明你自己的觀點(diǎn)，并

21、結(jié)合實(shí)際談?wù)劯邢?。兩至三點(diǎn)。） (3)have been dreaming of contribute to/ take part in/ International competitionmake it possible forto do sth.call for/ cost; afforddeveloping; make an effort to do sth. I have made a survey about the schoolmates opinions about Space Exploration. Opinions are different from person to

22、person. The majority of the students surveyed are in favor of it. For one thing, they say the Chinese people have been dreaming of going into outer space ever since before; for another, exploring space will help China to take part in the international competition in the future. Moreover, the develop

23、ment of science and technology makes it possible for China to realize the dream. Some students consider it unnecessary for our country to explore the outer space. First and foremost, they think Space Exploration calls for a large amount of money. Consequently, as a developing country, it would be mu

24、ch better for our country to make more efforts to solve other social problems. As far as Im concerned, everybody should take a right attitude to Space Exploration. I must say it is necessary, as it will bring more benefits in the future, which we cannot imagine now. As a student,I feel not only happ

25、y but also proud of our great achievements in this field. I will work hard so that I can make a contribution to our nation.Summary Part four規(guī)范三寫規(guī)范三寫：大大 小小 寫寫, ,拼拼 寫寫, ,書書 寫寫鹽城一調(diào)Homework: write a composition after class!書面表達(dá)各檔次的給分范圍和要求書面表達(dá)各檔次的給分范圍和要求第五檔（第五檔（21-2521-25分）分）完全完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)。完全完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)。l準(zhǔn)確、清楚地表達(dá)了短文的內(nèi)容，要點(diǎn)無遺漏準(zhǔn)確、清楚地表達(dá)了短文的內(nèi)容，要點(diǎn)無遺漏l應(yīng)用了較多的語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯應(yīng)用了較多的語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯l語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯有少許錯誤，但為盡可能使用較復(fù)雜表達(dá)方式語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯有少許錯誤，但為盡可能使用較復(fù)雜表達(dá)方式 所致；具備較強(qiáng)的語言應(yīng)用能力所致；具備較