2020-2021年中考英語書面表達(dá)專題復(fù)習(xí)經(jīng)典1

1、2020-2021 年中考英語書面表達(dá)專題復(fù)習(xí)經(jīng)典1一、中考英語書面表達(dá)（含答案詳細(xì)解析）1. 書面表達(dá)假如彳是Amy,德國的交換生 Sara下周即將來你家寄宿，昨天你收到她的來信，在信中， 她詢問如下信息：1.你家情況；2.有關(guān)餐桌禮儀；3.她要承擔(dān)的家務(wù)勞動；4.現(xiàn)在，你 就她提出的問題給她回信，也預(yù)祝她在你家過得開心！ 要求： 1. 文章必須包括圖片中主要內(nèi)容，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名、校名等相關(guān)信息；3. 字?jǐn)?shù)約 110 詞。Dear Sara，I m glad to heafrom you yesterday.Love，Amy【答案】Dear Sara，I m gla

2、d to hear from you yesterday. Welcome to my family next week.I have a small family. There are three people in my family, my parents and me. In China, unlike in the West, plates are placed on the table and shared by everyone. And sometimes the Chinese hosts use their chopsticks to put food in your bo

3、wl or plate. This is a sign of politeness. The appropriate thing to do would be to eat the whatever-it-is and say how delicious it is. If you feel uncomfortable with this, you can just say "thank you |"in politely and leave the food there.As for housework, I think it's our duty to help

4、 our parents do some housework. So you can help my parents wash the dishes, clean the room and make the bed. I hope you can take care of yourself and your family by doing housework.Of course, if you like, I will teach you how to cook delicious dishes. Love,Amy【解析】 【詳解】 這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少，如 be

5、 glad to ， hear from ， unlike in the West ， on the table ， a sign of ， help sb. do ， do some housework ， wash the dishes， clean the room ， make the bed ， take care of， how to do 等。而復(fù)雜并列結(jié)構(gòu)InChina, unlike in the West, plates are placed on the table and shared by everyone. 和 If you feel uncomfortable w

6、ith this, you can just say a polite thank you and leave the food there./ I hope you can take care of yourself and your family by doing housework./ if you like, I will teach you how to cook delicious dishes.等復(fù)雜從句結(jié)構(gòu)的運用，豐富了短文內(nèi)容，使表達(dá)多樣化，是本文的 亮點。在學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)牢記一些固定句式及短語，寫作時就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章表達(dá) 更有邏輯性，也更富有條理?！军c睛】書面表達(dá)題既

7、不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運用所學(xué)英語知識準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要點，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，盡可能使用高級詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。2 書面表達(dá)假如你是九年級學(xué)生李華，你的美國筆友Billy 發(fā)來郵件詢問你平時鍛煉的情況。請你根據(jù)以下信息，給Billy 回封電子郵件，并建議他每周都要花些時間鍛煉身體。寫作要點：1. 你最近正忙于為即將到來的體育測試（ physical test）做準(zhǔn)備。2. 介紹你平時鍛煉的情況：（ 1 ）每天鍛煉的時間：不到一個半小時。（ 2 ）偶爾不鍛煉的原因：作業(yè)多，

8、沒時間。（ 3 ）擅長的體育運動：球類運動。3. 談?wù)勫憻捊o你帶來了哪些好處。寫作要求：1. 不得使用真實的姓名和學(xué)校名。2. 可適當(dāng)加入細(xì)節(jié)，使內(nèi)容充實，行文連貫。3. 字跡工整，語言精練，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，條理清晰。4. 至少 80 詞。Dear Billy,It s my great pleasure to receive you-rmeail.Best wishes!Yours,Li Hua【答案】 Dear Billy,ll tellIt s my great pleasure to receive you-rmeail. You wanted to know abou t my usual

9、 exercise. I it to you.I am busy preparing for the coming physical test. So I take exercise less than an hour every day. Sometimes I don t do exercise, because I have so much homework that I have no time to do it. I do well in playing balls.Doing exercise can help me keep a strong body, and it is go

10、od for my health. Besides, I think it can make me relaxed by doing exercise. So I advise you to spend more time doing exercise every week.Best wishes!Yours,Li Hua【解析】【分析】這是一篇給材料作文，給Billy回封電子郵件，介紹自己平時的鍛煉情況，并建議他每周都要花些時間鍛煉身體。【詳解】結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，人稱為單數(shù)第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如

11、：I ambusy ；because i have，Doing exercise can help , So I -advise you to等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運用代詞，注意多種句式交替運用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān) 系?！军c睛】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡練。開頭表示很高興收到Billy的來信，接下來介紹我平時的鍛煉情況，最后指出鍛煉給我?guī)淼暮锰幰约拔医ㄗhBilly要多鍛煉。此處be busy doing sth,prepare for, do well in, be good for, advise sb to do sth 等這些詞組的運用也讓文章增色不少。3.書面表達(dá)Dear B

12、ellyfI like reading a Hooks very much. But my parents anti teachers tire ugtiinst it. They don 7 allow me io read any eRao& From then on, tny life is not interestai alL What can / do ? Could you give me some advice ?I am looking forward to hearing from you soonYoursLucy假設(shè)你是某英文報紙“Teenager升目的編輯Bet

13、ty,日前收到了 Lucy的來信。她在信中訴說了她的煩惱，請你根據(jù)Lucy的來信，用英語寫一封90詞左右的回信。要求內(nèi)容合理，信的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。Dear Lucy,I ' m sorry to know that you aren' t allowed to read eBooks.All the best!Betty【答案】Dear Lucy,I ' m sorry to know that you aren' t allowed to read eBooks.In recent years, electronic books, as a p

14、roduct of information technology, have gained more and more popularity. It is no doubt electronic books bring many benefits. For one thing, they are so convenient that we can read them anywhere and anytime. For another, their appearance will make paper-waste less.However, as every coin has two sides

15、, electronic books also have some disadvantages. For example, long time of reading e-books does harm to our eyes. And there are more radiation which is harmful to people's body.In my opinion, E-book cannot take the place of traditional book, but it's an useful product. I think that e-books a

16、re beneficial if we read correctly and properly instead of reading over.All the best!Betty【解析】【詳解】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少，如 in recent years, as a product of, live in , more and more , so that for example , do harm to , be harmful to , in my opinion , take the place of, instead of 等。同時 For one thin

17、g, / For another,/ However, 等使短 文的敘述很有條理，而It is no doubt electronic books bring many benefits./ they are soconvenient that we can read them anywhere and anytime. / And there are more radiation which is harmful to people's body./ I think that e-books are beneficial if we read correctly and proper

18、ly instead of reading over. 等復(fù) 雜從句結(jié)構(gòu)的運用，豐富了短文內(nèi)容，使表達(dá)多樣化，是本文的最大亮點。在學(xué)習(xí)中注意 總結(jié)牢記一些固定句式及短語，寫作時就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章表達(dá)更有邏輯性，也更富 有條理?！军c睛】書面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理 后展開思維，考查運用所學(xué)英語知識準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要點，要 盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，盡可能使用高級詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得 到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。4.書面表達(dá)根據(jù)以下提示，寫一篇介紹我的朋友張陽的短文。基本情況張陽，陽光中學(xué)九年級二班學(xué)生興趣愛好1 .喜

19、歡閱讀。每周花七個多小時閱讀各種類型的書，因為2 .喜歡觀鳥。每年統(tǒng)計兩次鳥兒的數(shù)量，以研究鳥兒在數(shù)量方面 的變化。優(yōu)秀事跡上個月把零花錢捐給了希望工程木米夢想1 .希望成為連接家鄉(xiāng)到上海路段的高鐵總工程師2 .每個人為保護(hù)環(huán)境都可以做一些改變。如：.（舉1例）要求：1）表達(dá)清楚，語法正確，上下文連貫；2）必須包括表格中所有的相關(guān)信息，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；3）詞數(shù)：100詞左右（短文的開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)）；4）不得使用真實姓名、校名和地名等。Zhang Yang is a student in Sunshine Middle School.【答案】 Zhang Yang is a student

20、 in Sunshine Middle School. He is in Class 2,Grade 9. He likes reading. He spends more than seven hours a week reading all kinds of books because he thinks reading is helpful. He enjoys watching birds. He counts the number of birds twice a year to study changes in the number of birds. He donated his

21、 pocket money to the Hope Project last month. His dream is to be the chief engineer of high-speed railway connecting my hometown to Shanghai. He hopes everyone can make some changes to protect the environment. We mustn throw rubbish everywhere.【解析】【詳解】亮點說明：這篇習(xí)作的層次清晰，內(nèi)容飽滿，表達(dá)流暢。文中使用了非常好的短語，例如like read

22、ing ， more than ， all kinds of ， spend time doing ， enjoy doing ， the number of ， twice a year， be the chief engineer of 等。而 He spends more than seven hours a week reading all kinds of books because he thinks reading is helpful./ He hopes everyone can make some changes to protect the environment. 等多

23、種復(fù)雜從句結(jié)構(gòu)的綜合運用，豐富了習(xí)作內(nèi)容，使表達(dá)多樣 化，是本文的最大亮點。【點睛】書面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運用所學(xué)英語知識準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要點，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，盡可能使用高級詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得 到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。5 （題文） 書面表達(dá)在中學(xué)生機(jī)器人大賽上，出現(xiàn)了一種專門照顧老人的新型家用智能機(jī)器人，它的主要功能有：1.定時做飯、洗衣服； 2. 陪老人聊天、下棋、做運動；3. 處理緊急情況（如：撥打 120 ）假如你是該機(jī)器人的發(fā)明者，請你介紹這個產(chǎn)品，并談?wù)勀愕奈磥碓O(shè)想。要

24、求：1. 意思連貫，語句通順；2. 詞數(shù)80 詞左右；短文的開頭已給出（不計入總詞數(shù)）3. 參考詞匯： at a fixed time 定時 emergency 緊急情況ccompany sb. 陪伴某人Ladies and gentlemen,Thank you for attending our robot show. Now I' d like to introduce my new invention to all of you.【答案】 Ladies and gentlemen,Thank you for attending our robot show. Now I'

25、; d like to introduce my new invention to all of you.I invented the new robot mainly to help the elderly at home. It can cook meals and do some washing at a fixed time. When old people feel alone, it can also accompany them by having a chat, playing chess or doing exercise. What' s more, it can

26、deal withenomsemor example, ifan old man falls ill suddenly, the robot will call doctors immediately for help.I ' m sure my new invention will be a great help to the elderly. I think in the future people will live a more comfortable life with the help of new robots.【解析】亮點說明：這篇習(xí)作的層次清晰，內(nèi)容飽滿，表達(dá)流暢。文

27、中使用了非常好的短語，例如thank you for doing , I' d like to dointroduce sb. to , all of you , at home , do some washing , at a fixed time, have a chat, play chess do exercise, deal with, a great help, in the future 等。而 Thank you for attending our robot show./ I invented the new robot mainly to help the elde

28、rly at home. / I think in the future people will live a more comfortable life with the help of new robots.等非謂語動詞和復(fù)雜從句的運用，豐富了習(xí)作內(nèi)容，使表達(dá)多樣化，是本文的 最大亮點。點睛：書面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容 經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運用所學(xué)英語知識準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要 點，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，盡可能使用高級詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu) 以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。6.書面表達(dá)同學(xué)們，中考后就會迎來漫長的暑假了，

29、班會課上老師組織大家討論假期學(xué)習(xí)和生活計 劃。假如你是李華，請根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容提示用英語向同學(xué)們匯報一下你的計劃。內(nèi)容提示：暑假計劃學(xué)習(xí)博覽群書；學(xué)習(xí)技能（或自擬一點）生活健康飲食；堅持鍛煉（或自擬一點）其它熱愛公益；親近自然（或自擬一點）汪思：1.表達(dá)中必須包括所給要點，可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，不要簡單翻譯。2.詞數(shù)90左右。開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)。3.表達(dá)中請勿提及真實校名及姓名。Dear classmates,Summer holiday is coming, and here is my plan for it.I hope all of you can enjoy the coming

30、holiday. That s all. Thank you.【答案】 Dear classmates,Summer holiday is coming, and here is my plan for it.First, I'd like to choose several good books and read them carefully. This can help me open my mind and learn more about the world. I also think it's necessary for me to learn at least on

31、e skill. I'm interested in cooking, so I will learn to cook some delicious dishes during the holiday.Second, health is the most important. So I will eat healthily and exercise more. I plan to eat more fruit and vegetables and keep running every day.Third, it's a good idea to join in some cha

32、rity activities because we should be kind to someone in need. I will pay more attention to protecting our environment so that we can make our Earth a better world. Also, travelling out is a good choice. While travelling, we can be close to nature and learn about different cultures. We have more chan

33、ces to search the Internet. I know unhealthy websites are harmful to us. I will say no to them.I hope all of you can enjoy the coming holiday. That's all. Thank you.【解析】亮點說明：這篇習(xí)作的層次清晰，內(nèi)容飽滿，表達(dá)流暢。文中使用了非常好的短語，例如I'd like to do ， help me open my mind ， at least ， be interested in ， during theholi

34、day ， plan to do ， join in ， be kind to someone in need ， pay more attention to ， be close to nature ， search the Internet 等。而 First, I'd like to choose several good books and read them carefully./ Second, health is the most important./Third, it's a good idea to join in some charity activiti

35、es because we should be kind to someone in need. 等表順序詞和綜合句式的運用，既使 短文層次清晰，又豐富了習(xí)作內(nèi)容，使表達(dá)多樣化，是本文的最大亮點。點睛：書面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運用所學(xué)英語知識準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要點，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，盡可能使用高級詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu) 以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。7. ( B)根據(jù)要求完成大作文,詞數(shù)：80-100體育運動是中學(xué)生的共同愛好.請根據(jù)下面提示寫一篇題為 What We Get from Spor

36、ts 的短文 ,應(yīng)該包含以下要點 ：1,學(xué)生參加體育運動的興趣不同,理由各異.2 .多數(shù)學(xué)生學(xué)習(xí)疲倦時,通過運動來放松自己 .3 .男孩參加各項體育運動,希望運動能使自己更強(qiáng)壯.4 .女孩也喜歡運動，希望運動使自己減肥和保持健康,苗條 .5 .你對運動的觀點.6 .注意 :文中不得出現(xiàn)自己的名字和學(xué)校的名字7 .短文開頭已給出,不計入詞數(shù).8 .參考詞語 :keep slim （保持苗條）What We Get from SportsStudents in our school have one thing in common an interest insports.【答案】 Student

37、s in our school have one thing in common an interest in sports. But different students have different reasons for taking part in sports.Many students have sports when they feel tired after study. They just want to relax themselves and have fun. Most boys love sports. They take part in all kinds of s

38、ports in order to become stronger. They join in the sports that interest them most, such as soccer, basketball and volleyball. As for girls, they want to lose weight. They want to keep slim, so they also like taking exercise. In my opinion, no matter what reasons we have, we all can get a lot from s

39、ports. 【解析】 【詳解】本篇寫作主要是談?wù)撟约簩\動的觀點和看法，應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，寫作要點要包括： 1.提出目前學(xué)生對運動的不同看法及原因。2.具體分析（多數(shù)學(xué)生的觀點、男生的觀點、女生的觀點）。3.提出自己對運動的觀點。亮點說明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好地完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語言表達(dá)符合英語習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運用時態(tài)，主謂一致，在文中使用了時間狀語從句，定語從句，特別使用一些亮點詞句，如 have fun ， in order to ， as for， in my opinion 等。增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意 思連貫，句子通順，行文連貫。9 書面表達(dá)難忘的初中三年學(xué)習(xí)生活已經(jīng)接近尾聲

40、，你一定既有收獲又有不足，也有許多對自己未來的期待。請以 My Unforgettable Middle School Life 為題，根據(jù)下面的思維導(dǎo)圖，寫一篇短文 介紹自己難忘的校園生活并描述對未來的期盼。注意：1.詞數(shù)90左右。短文的開頭已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)；2 .短文須包括所有要點，并補(bǔ)充相關(guān)信息，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。語言連貫、通順 ；3 .短文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名、校名等相關(guān)信息。How time flies! My colourful middle school life is nearly ending. Here is what I think about myself.【答案】

41、How time flies! My colourful middle school life is nearly ending. Here is what I think about myself.In the past, I learnt a lot of knowledge not only from books but also from the teachers. So, I am very grateful to them. They helped me a lot! I also got on well with my classmates. We shared happines

42、s and sadness together. We were like a big family. However, I still have a lot to improve. I didn 'do well in Maths because I gave up easily when meeting difficult Maths problems. Besides, I didn ' t have a good sense of time. I used to go to school late and that made my teachers angry. Ther

43、efore, in the future, I will try my best to become better. I will work harder and organize my life and my time better. I hope one day, my school and teachers will be proud of me!【解析】試題分析：本篇書面表達(dá)以"My Unforgettable Middle School Life為題：結(jié)合本題所給的寫作信息，闡述自己難忘的中學(xué)生活。根據(jù)內(nèi)容提示可知本文會用一般過去時態(tài)和 一般將來時態(tài)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用

44、。寫作中注意連詞、固定短語的交替使用，使文 意連接緊密，還要注意使用豐富的語句，注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系，最后最好要表達(dá) 出自己的感想和看法。寫作亮點：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，要點齊全，語言簡練。文中 not only - but also, help a lot, share happiness and sadness, do well in , give up, besides, so, and, a good sense of time, used to, make sb.+adj., therefore, be proud of等詞（組）恰當(dāng)使用,使上下文意連接緊密；文章 的最后 I hope

45、 one day, my school and teachers will be proud of me! 表達(dá)了 自 己愿望與想法， 使文章增色不少，值得學(xué)習(xí)。9. 2019年2月20日，中央宣傳部授予北京榜樣優(yōu)秀群體時代楷模”稱號。時代楷模充分體現(xiàn) 愛國、敬業(yè)、誠信、友善”的價值準(zhǔn)則。某網(wǎng)站正在開展以向時代楷模學(xué)習(xí)”為主題的英語征文活動。假如你是李華，請用英語寫一篇短文投稿，談?wù)勆钪心阍撛趺醋觯约斑@樣做的意義。提示詞語： pick up, rubbish, study, honest, important提示問題： What should you do in your daily li

46、fe? Why do you do so?As a middle student, I can do a lot to learn from our role models.【答案】例文As a middle student, I can do a lot to learn from our role models. First, we can protect the environment. For example, we can pick up the rubbish, recycle things in our daily life, and so on. Second, we shall respect people around us. Respect others to start from small things. Third, behave well. We should be kind to others, warm-hearted to everyone, and generous to our friends. By doing so, our world will become more