十句作文法學(xué)習(xí)教案

1、十句作文法十句作文法第一頁，共20頁。高考英語作文完美行文四步驟運用十句作文法STEP1：確定文章框架，包括：時態(tài)、語態(tài)、格式、展開方式、開頭結(jié)尾等。STEP2：確定內(nèi)容要點，包括：主要(zhyo)人物、時間地點、重要細(xì)節(jié)、合理發(fā)揮等。STEP3：正式開始寫作，整理思路成篇，行文連貫。STEP4：檢查全文，主要(zhyo)檢查語法以及粗心犯下的錯誤。第1頁/共19頁第二頁，共20頁。重點詮釋：1.第一段為開頭，包括兩句。第一句為主題句，點明全文主題；第二句為擴(kuò)展句，進(jìn)一步說明和支持主題句。兩者關(guān)系也可倒過來，由第一句說明情況(qngkung)，第二句點明主題。2.第二段為正文，共七句。第三句為

2、主題句，提出本段的主題，它應(yīng)與第一段的主題相關(guān)或一致。第四至九句為擴(kuò)展句，說明和支持本段的主題。句與句之間要注意好過渡，以使段落邏輯合理，結(jié)構(gòu)得當(dāng)。3第三段為結(jié)尾，簡化為一句，也是全文的總結(jié)句， 它將前面的內(nèi)容總結(jié)為一個結(jié)果，表明自己的論點。第2頁/共19頁第三頁，共20頁。注意：要提高(t go)語言表達(dá)的檔次，在句式運用上就不能一味地使用簡單句和稱述句，而應(yīng)該根據(jù)實際情況靈活運用所學(xué)的各種句式。豐富的句式有助于考生在高考中出類拔萃，贏得高分。第3頁/共19頁第四頁，共20頁。寫作典例：電視在人們的日常生活中占有很重要的地位，電視傳播不斷深層次地影響著每一個人。請以“Television”

3、為題，寫一篇有關(guān)其所帶來的積極影響的英語短文。分析：1。這篇書面表達(dá)的中心思想是電視所帶來的積極影響。2。電視對現(xiàn)代生活的影響是多方面的，考生不要試圖面面俱到，如果涉及面太多，文章(wnzhng)反而顯得松散，我們只選擇幾個方面進(jìn)行寫作，可用舉例的方法合理安排語言材料。第4頁/共19頁第五頁，共20頁。 TelevisionTelevision presents a vivid world in front of us.1(主題(zht)句) Through TV, we can learn what is happening half way across the world. 2(擴(kuò)展句)

4、 Television also plays an important educational role in our daily life.3(主題(zht)句) For one thing, the TV university provides an opportunity for people who can not go to formal university.4(擴(kuò)展句) For another,children can broaden their scope of knowledge by watching such popular programs as “The Animal

5、 World” and “The Mickey Mouse and DuckDonald”.5(擴(kuò)展句)第5頁/共19頁第六頁，共20頁。Besides, women can learn about the latest fashion of dresses and the best recipe for making fruit cakes.6(擴(kuò)展(kuzhn)句) Furthermore, we can learn many world advanced technologies from TV programs.7(擴(kuò)展(kuzhn)句) And also we can learn s

6、inging, dancing and doing physical exercise in some special TV training courses,8（擴(kuò)展(kuzhn)句）In short,the effect of TVs educational role is becoming more and more obvious.9(擴(kuò)展(kuzhn)句)Having viewed these aspects, and with many more TV programs produced, I believe that our life will become even more

7、significant. 10(總結(jié)句)第6頁/共19頁第七頁，共20頁。 假設(shè)你班最近舉行了一次班會，討論怎樣使英語學(xué)習(xí)(xux)變成一件快樂的事。請你根據(jù)下表所提示的信息，為某英語網(wǎng)站寫一篇短文，談?wù)勀銈兊挠懻撉闆r并提出你的建議。討論情況討論情況1課內(nèi)互動課內(nèi)互動 (師生或生生互動師生或生生互動)；2課外活動課外活動 (演講或晚會等演講或晚會等)；3運用英語運用英語 (口頭或書面交流口頭或書面交流)； 你的建議你的建議(請考生根據(jù)自己的經(jīng)歷與感想，提出兩至三點建議請考生根據(jù)自己的經(jīng)歷與感想，提出兩至三點建議)注意：1對所給要點逐一陳述，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，不要簡單翻譯。2詞數(shù)120左右。開頭已經(jīng)寫好

8、，不計入總詞數(shù)。3作文中不得提及(t j)考生所在學(xué)校和本人姓名。4參考詞匯：interactive adj.互動的 Recently we had a discussion on how to make learning English relaxing and fun.第7頁/共19頁第八頁，共20頁。 Recently, we had a discussion on how to make learning English relaxing and fun. Most students believe that there are many ways to do so. First of

9、 all, we can have more interactive activities in class, such as discussions, interviews, story-telling and role-play. In this way, we can have more fun learning English. Secondly, we can take part in more out-of-class activities like English speech contest and English evenings. Thirdly, we need to f

10、ind more opportunities to communicate in English with people, whether they are English teachers or classmates, foreigners or Chinese, because using English is the best way to learn. These ideas sound reasonable and practical. 范文(fnwn)一：第8頁/共19頁第九頁，共20頁。 From my experience, there are many other inter

11、esting and relaxing ways. For example, we can listen to English songs and watch English movies. We can also watch English programs on TV or join English clubs or make English pen-friends on the Internet. All in all, what we need is more free time and more space. 第9頁/共19頁第十頁，共20頁。 Recently, we had a

12、discussion on how to make learning English relaxing and fun. Most students believe that there are many ways to do so. First of all. We can have more interactive activities in class, such as discussions, interviews, story-telling and role-play. In this way, we can have more fun learning English. Besi

13、des, more out-of-class activities like English speech contest and English evenings should be organized, helping us to improve our English. Whats more, wed better make full use of every opportunities to communicate with others in English. These ideas sound reasonable and practical. 范文(fnwn)二：第10頁/共19

14、頁第十一頁，共20頁。 From my experience, there exists many other effective ways which make English learning interesting. For example, listening to English songs and watching English movies benefit us a lot. In addition, we may also watch English programs on TV or join English clubs or make English pen-friend

15、s on the Internet.第11頁/共19頁第十二頁，共20頁。1. First of all, . Secondly, . Thirdly,2. First of all. . Besides, . Whats more,1. Secondly, we can take part in more out-of-class activities like English speech contest and English evenings. 2. Besides, more out-of-class activities like English speech contest an

16、d English evenings should be organized, helping us to improve our English.第12頁/共19頁第十三頁，共20頁。1. Thirdly, we need to find more opportunities to communicate in English with people, whether they are English teachers or classmates, foreigners or Chinese, because using English is the best way to learn.2.

17、 Whats more, wed better make full use of every opportunities to communicate with others in English.第13頁/共19頁第十四頁，共20頁。2. From my experience, there exists many other effective ways which make English learning interesting. For example, listening to English songs and watching English movies benefit us

18、a lot. In addition, we may also1. From my experience, there are many other interesting and relaxing ways. For example, we can listen to English songs and watch English movies. We can also watch English 第14頁/共19頁第十五頁，共20頁。2. Thus, we can surely make english learning relaxing and fun.1. All in all, wh

19、at we need is more free time and more space. 第15頁/共19頁第十六頁，共20頁。 As can be seen from the result of the survey, opinions are divided. About 60% of the students in Senior 1 hold the opinion that life in senior high school is far from relaxing. The reasons are as follows: Firstly, the subject they are

20、learning now are obviously more different. Besides, they have to do endless homework after class, which leaves them little time for exercise and other activities. On the contrary, others say they have become used to the new life and have begun to enjoy it. They say that they find the courses are more interesting and the activiti