Internet(修改完整版)分析

1、Internet開頭 現(xiàn)象法引出要剖析的現(xiàn)象或者問題, 然后評論 . 1. Recently the rise in problem of/(phenomenon of) . has cause/aroused public/popular/wide/ worldwide concern. 最近,問題(現(xiàn)象)的逐漸嚴(yán)重已經(jīng)引起廣泛的關(guān)注. 2. Recently the issue of the problem of/the phenomenon of .has been brought into focus. ( has been brouth to public attention) 3.

2、Internet addition/Inflation/Corruption/Social inequality . is yet another of the bitter truth we have to learn to face now/constantly. 網(wǎng)癮|通貨膨脹|腐敗|社會不平等是另外一個(gè)令人感到苦澀的我們不得不學(xué)會去面對的一個(gè)事實(shí). 故事法先講一個(gè)較短的故事來引發(fā)讀者的興趣, 引出文章的主題. 1. Once in (a newspaper) , I read of/learnt . The phenemenon of . has aroused public conc

3、ern. 這個(gè)現(xiàn)象激發(fā)人們的公共意識. 2. I have a friend who . Should he . ? Such a dilemma we are often confront with in our daily life. 如此進(jìn)退兩難的局面是我們?nèi)粘Ｉ钪薪?jīng)常面對的. 3. Once upon a time , there . This phenomenon may be (unbelievable) , but it still has a realistic significance now. 很久以前,也許這個(gè)現(xiàn)象令人難以置信,但它仍有重大的現(xiàn)實(shí)意義開頭 Interne

4、t plays a very important role in everybodys life, It has made a huge difference in the world. 網(wǎng)絡(luò)在每個(gè)人生活中扮演重要的角色，它已經(jīng)在世界上起了巨大作用。 Only when we can make it serve our needs,can we benefit most from it. 只有當(dāng)我們使它為我們的需求服務(wù)，我們才能從中收益。 副詞only置于句首，強(qiáng)調(diào)方式狀語，條件狀語，地點(diǎn)狀語，時(shí)間狀語等狀語時(shí)，主句要進(jìn)行部分倒裝。如果被only 所強(qiáng)調(diào)的狀語為狀語從句時(shí)，只對主語進(jìn)行倒裝。此

5、句強(qiáng)調(diào)的是時(shí)間狀語，后面為部分倒裝。原因結(jié)果 基本原因 分析某事物時(shí), 用此句型說明其基本的或者多方面的原因. 1. Why . ? For one thing. For another . 為什么?第一第二 2. The answer to this problem involes many factors. For one thing. For another. Still another . 這個(gè)問題的答案涉及到許多因素.第一第二另外 3. A number of factors , both physical and psychological affect . /both indiv

6、idual and social contribute to . 許多因素,包括物質(zhì)上的和精神上的個(gè)人原因都能導(dǎo)致 另一原因 在分析了基本原因之后, 再補(bǔ)充一個(gè)次要的或者更重要時(shí)用! 1. Another important factor is . 2. . is also responsible for the change/problem. 3. Certainly , the . is not the sole reason for .當(dāng)然,不是的唯一因素 后果影響 分析某事物可能造成的后果或者帶來的影響 . 1. It will produce a profound/far-reach

7、ing effect/impact on. 2. In involves some serious consequence for .優(yōu)點(diǎn) Internet makes our study and work more effective. 互聯(lián)網(wǎng)使我們的學(xué)習(xí)和工作更有效。 By the Internet,we can learn more knowledge and open our horizons. 通過互聯(lián)網(wǎng),我們可以學(xué)習(xí)更多的知識并開拓視野. Whats more,Internet is just like a bridge of communicating between peopl

8、e.People get closer through it,which promotes interpersonal relationship. 而且,互聯(lián)網(wǎng)就像溝通的橋梁.人們通過它距離更近了,促進(jìn)了人際關(guān)系. Besides,they can know about the latest news,widen their field of vision/broaden our horizon/broaden ones outlook and gain their knowledge. 另外他們還可以了解最新消息、開闊視野，擴(kuò)大知識面。缺點(diǎn) Many students ignore thei

9、r studies since they are addicted to computer games seriously. 許多學(xué)生沉迷于網(wǎng)絡(luò)游戲后忽視了學(xué)習(xí). There are so many traps that beyond our guard. 有許多網(wǎng)絡(luò)陷阱超越了我們的防衛(wèi). A great deal of junk information spread through the Internet,which disturbs our life terribly. 互聯(lián)網(wǎng)上傳播的大量垃圾信息嚴(yán)重干擾了我們的生活. People spend so much time surfing

10、the Internet at the cost of their health. 人們花大量的時(shí)間上網(wǎng)付出了健康代價(jià). Often play online games is bad for the eyes and cause vision loss, also is not good for students who have web pages easy to cause harm to the body and mind. 經(jīng)常玩網(wǎng)游對眼睛不好，導(dǎo)致視力下降，網(wǎng)上也有對學(xué)生不好的網(wǎng)頁容易對身心造成傷害。 Surfing the Internet is fun, but its also

11、 a time waster. 上網(wǎng)很有意思，但也很浪費(fèi)時(shí)間。 Due to the poor Internet administration and weak network security, our information might be open, stolen or sold. 由于互聯(lián)網(wǎng)管理的不良和網(wǎng)絡(luò)安全的薄弱，我們的信息可能會被公開，盜竊或出售。 due to 加名詞表示“因?yàn)椋捎凇敝?，在?biāo)準(zhǔn)英語里，due to只能用以引導(dǎo)形容詞短語，不可引導(dǎo)副詞短語。 Chatting on the net,will also meet blackmail,and strangers.

12、 網(wǎng)上聊天，也會遇到敲詐，和陌生人 1動名詞做主語，常表示泛指意義的行為 2動名詞在”It is no use/no good/fun/a waste of time/a good pleasure/not any use/useless/worthwhile/need等詞+doing結(jié)構(gòu)中做主語，it為形式主語。 3在there is no +v.-ing結(jié)構(gòu)中，常用動名詞做主語。結(jié)尾 后果性揭示所討論的問題若不解決, 將產(chǎn)生的嚴(yán)重后果. 1. We must call for an immediate method , because the current phenomenon of .

13、 , if allowed to proceed, will surely lead to the heavy cost of . 我們必須提出一個(gè)緊急方案,因?yàn)楫?dāng)前的現(xiàn)象,如果被允許進(jìn)行,將理所當(dāng)然的導(dǎo)致的重大代價(jià)花費(fèi) 2. Obviously , if we ignore/are blind to the problem , there is every chance that . will be put in danger. 明顯的,如果我們對這個(gè)問題視而不見,將有更大的可能被置于危險(xiǎn)之中. 號召性呼吁讀者行動起來, 采取行動或提請注意. 1. It is time that we ur

14、ged an immediate end to the undesirable tendency of . 是我們促使將不好的趨勢結(jié)束的時(shí)候. 2. It is essential that effective measures should be taken to correct the tendency. 有效的措施被用來改變這傾向是必須的. 3.Due attention has to be paid to this phenomenon,from my perspective,firstly,as the coexistence of merits and demerits of. 這

15、種現(xiàn)象必須引起注意，在我看來，.的優(yōu)點(diǎn)和缺點(diǎn)共存 建議性對所討論的問題提出建議性的意見, 包括建議和具體的解決問題的方法. 1. While it cannot be solved immediately, still there are ways. The most popular is . Another method is . Still another one is . 2. Awareness/Recognition of the problem is the first step toward the situation. 對這問題的察覺認(rèn)識是面對這種情況的第一步. 3.To sum up, on the one hand, the government should . On the other hand, as individuals, we should . I believe a good future is waiting for us if we make good use of . 總之，一方面，政府應(yīng)該.另一方面，對于個(gè)人而言，我們應(yīng)該.我相信一個(gè)好的未來在等著我們?nèi)绻覀兒煤贸浞掷?結(jié)尾 Considering the above-mentioned, we must enhance the alertness when using the Int