高三英語(yǔ)第一輪復(fù)習(xí)書面表達(dá)講解與訓(xùn)練三知識(shí)精講

1、高三英語(yǔ)第一輪復(fù)習(xí)：書面表達(dá)講解與訓(xùn)練（三）【本講主要內(nèi)容】書面表達(dá)講解與訓(xùn)練（三）如何寫好情景寫作寫作體裁訓(xùn)練 1）記敘文 2）描述文【知識(shí)總結(jié)歸納】一.考題的設(shè)置和要求：教學(xué)大綱的要求一書面表達(dá)是來考查學(xué)生是否能夠運(yùn)用所學(xué)過的英語(yǔ)知識(shí)和掌握的技巧進(jìn)行思想交流，也就是說考查綜合運(yùn)用英語(yǔ)的能力。 試題的設(shè)置：更貼近實(shí)際生活，與日常生活息息相關(guān)， 讓考生有話可說，更能充分的考查出學(xué)生的語(yǔ) 言交際能力?？疾槟繕?biāo)和要求-要求考生根據(jù)所給情景， 用英語(yǔ)寫一篇100個(gè)單詞左右的短文。（北京試卷要求字?jǐn)?shù)不 少于60字）情景包括目的、對(duì)象、時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、內(nèi)容等；提供情景的形式有圖畫、圖表、 提綱等。近年來的書

2、面表達(dá)一覽表：2000全國(guó)卷記敘文看圖寫作根據(jù)目擊的交通事故給警察局 寫一份材料敘事2001全國(guó)卷論說文以表格形式提 供要點(diǎn)根據(jù)表格所提供的內(nèi)容談一談 減負(fù)給你的學(xué)習(xí)和生活帶來的 變化書信2001 春應(yīng)用文文字邀請(qǐng)你的美國(guó)朋友 Peter來你校 在卜月舉辦的美國(guó)電影節(jié)上給 學(xué)生做一次關(guān)于美國(guó)電影的方面的講座書信2002全國(guó)卷論說文以表格形式提 供要點(diǎn)根據(jù)表格所提供的內(nèi)容談一談 公園要不要收門票書信2002北東卷記敘文看圖寫作寫一篇野外生存訓(xùn)練的日記日記2002 春記敘文文字+圖回給你的美國(guó)朋友寫信介紹你們 是如何慶祝申奧成功的， 并邀請(qǐng) 他2008年來中國(guó)書信2003全國(guó)卷描述文文字+圖回寫信

3、給你的朋友介紹為他找的 住房情況書信2003北樂卷記敘文文字+圖回記述一次配合迎奧運(yùn)宣傳學(xué)雷 鋒活動(dòng)日記2003 春應(yīng)用文向一外教請(qǐng)求有關(guān)選擇劇目方面的幫助，請(qǐng)他給與一些建議書信.如何寫好情景寫作.認(rèn)真審題，確定體裁及篇章結(jié)構(gòu)或提綱（包括開頭點(diǎn)題句， 中間具體內(nèi)容以及結(jié)尾（包括再現(xiàn)主題，感想和希望）。記敘往往和議論密不可分，說明也會(huì)包含于議論中，成為它的 支撐論據(jù)。.再讀細(xì)節(jié)，確定人稱、時(shí)態(tài)、主要情節(jié)、句式等。尤其要考慮動(dòng)詞：搭配（動(dòng)詞與名詞的搭配、動(dòng)詞與介詞的搭配），相關(guān)同義詞或詞組 （例如，visit, have a visit, pay a visit, on a visit to ）。

4、.成文（10句左右），囊括要點(diǎn)，按照文體和篇章要求組織語(yǔ)篇。.潤(rùn)色，注意措辭、復(fù)雜句式及承上啟下的自然銜接，校對(duì)細(xì)節(jié)。.寫作體裁練習(xí)：學(xué)習(xí)如何寫記敘文：記敘文主要是記述所發(fā)生的事情和經(jīng)歷。常見的形式有：故事、傳記、游記、日記、新 聞報(bào)道等。記敘文的寫作要素：.要交代清楚五要素的內(nèi)容即：where, when, what, who, how。.事件可按時(shí)間或空間順序敘述。.時(shí)態(tài)通常與過去時(shí)有關(guān)的時(shí)態(tài)。（如果是當(dāng)前的經(jīng)常性事件，自然，社會(huì)現(xiàn)象。通常用與現(xiàn)在時(shí)有關(guān)的時(shí)態(tài)。）記敘文的篇章結(jié)構(gòu)：開頭the beginning交代必要的背景，如：時(shí)間，地點(diǎn)，人物等。中間the middle交代故事情節(jié)（事

5、情的主體）。如：事件的發(fā)生，發(fā)展和前因后果結(jié)尾the ending事情的結(jié)果或感想，愿望等（ the result or feeling ） 在記敘文中常用到的連接詞:橫線First . Then . Next . Finally縱線Some . Some . Others;the boys . the girls .;Some Ss . some others . the rest of us / them .時(shí) 間 順 序Early in the morning / In the early morning;In the middle of the day / At noon;Late i

6、n the afternoon / In the late afternoon;Far / Deep into the nightIn the past / At present / In the futureFirst, second, next, then, finally;at first, in the beginning; at last, in the end;Shortly afterwards, at once, immediately, all of a sudden, suddenly, soon,The moment-l, as soon as, the first ti

7、me , not untiln ext time,before, after, etc2002年高考書面表達(dá)（北京卷）你和李明參加一次野外生存訓(xùn)練。以下 5幅圖畫表現(xiàn)了野外訓(xùn)練活動(dòng)的過程，請(qǐng)根據(jù)圖 示寫一篇英文日記。注意：1詞數(shù)100左右 2日記的開頭與結(jié)尾已為你寫好。生詞：指南針：compass 手電筒：flashlight急救包：first-aid kit宿營(yíng)地：campsiteSaturday,May4,2002CloudyLi Ming and I took part in a wilderness survival programme yesterday, and it was on

8、e of the most unforgettable experiences since high school.The two of us spent the night in the forest. We learned to use knowledge gained in classroom training to solve problems in the field. It was quite an experience for us both, which I，n ever forget for the rest of my life.2002.高考學(xué)生習(xí)作分析（| 北京卷）Sa

9、turday,May4,2002CloudyLi Ming and I took part in a wilderness survival programme yesterday, and it was one of the most unforgettable experiences since high school.The two of us were to reach the campsite by evening. We set out early in the morning , eager to face the adventure. I was carrying a camp

10、 and a compass in my bag, While Li Ming loaded his with some bread, matches, candles, a map , a knife , a first-aid kit, a flashlight, and some clothes. We followed the marked route until we reached a brook. We had to swim across it, floating our supplies on a piece of wood in order to keep them dry

11、. What s worse, we lost sight of the signs onthe other side of the brook! Thanks to the compass, we finally arrived at the campsite on time, and managed to make the camp and a fire.The two of us spent the night in the forest. We learned to use knowledge gained in classroom training to solve problems

12、 in the field. It was qu ite an experience for us both, which I ll never forget for the rest of my life.Saturday,May4, 2002cloudyLi Ming and I took part n a wilderness survival program yesterday, and it has been one of the most unforgettable experiences since high school.Before we set out yesterday

13、morning, we checked the things that we took. Li Ming told me he brought a compass and a camp, which can be put in his small bag and I told him I took some clothes, some food, some candles, a box of matches and a first-aid kit. After that, we started our trip.We climbed up a high mountain and down to

14、 the foot. Then we swam to the opposite bank in a river and put our bags on a boat. We went into a forest. There were a lot of trees. We took out the compass and found out our campsite quickly. Then we set up the camp and set fire to cook food. The color got dark and dark .The two of us spent the ni

15、ght in the forest. We learned to use knowledge gained in classroom training to solve problems. It was quite an experience for us both, which I ll never forget for therest of my life.如何寫描述文描述文是把人物，事件， 景觀， 地點(diǎn)，環(huán)境等用語(yǔ)言生動(dòng)、形象地描繪出來。描述人物：1)開頭要進(jìn)行簡(jiǎn)明的介紹(introduction )2)文章主體(main part)可按時(shí)間順序或事件的主次進(jìn)行描述3)結(jié)尾(conclu

16、sion )可進(jìn)行評(píng)論或談感受。描述地點(diǎn) 卜1)要準(zhǔn)確使用表示方位的詞及短語(yǔ)2)描述地點(diǎn)的位置通常要從上到下，從里到外，從左到右，從遠(yuǎn)到近。3)注意詳略。重點(diǎn)部分要突出，詳細(xì)描述。學(xué)習(xí)并牢記下列常用短語(yǔ)和句型人at the front/back of something, with . in the centre /around a place;間in front of, behind; next to, close to, in and around,順 on the left/ right,- in the south, in the west / east / north, 序,on t

17、he other side / opposite side of, inside, outside; where etc常用短語(yǔ)和句型： 加位There is a tall shelf on the left of my room. (on the right of, in the front of, near the window,)Above the bed, there is a large painting of the blue sea. (On the right of the room,)Next to it is a bed. (In front of it, At the b

18、ack of, In the middle of, To the right of )They are opposite the door. (on the left/right of the room.)The office building is in the east of the campus. (in the south of, to the west of, in front of, behind, at the back of,)The monument, which was built in 1894, stands in the center of the square.描述

19、國(guó)家，城市狀況等China is located in Asia. (be situated be surrounded by , lie to the east )ofIt covers a huge area of 9,600 000 square kilometers.The population of this city is 100,000 .菽When you come out of (get to reach)(the second traffic lights, theCross the street (river)(keep walking along walk down T

20、urn right at the end of Bridge Street into Riverside Road.first crossing,Take the first turning on your left. (take the path which crosses the river.)Go straight on to the traffic light and then turn right.You ll see find ) it next to the cinema.h物My grandpa, kind and patient, enjoys talking with ki

21、ds.He is about 5feet and 7inches tall.She has a round face with two big eyes.,臃述物品s made of straw.This rope is 100meters long. =The length of this rope is 100 meters. = This rope is 100 meters in length. (in weight, in width, in height, in size, in color, in shape )It is a round yellow hat with pink

22、 flowers on it. ItThere are three books in the her drawer.2003年高考書面表達(dá)假設(shè)你是李華，彳的英國(guó)筆友Bob將9月到你所在城市的建新華文學(xué)校學(xué)中文，來信請(qǐng)你在學(xué)校附近為他找一套住房。請(qǐng)根據(jù)畫面提供的信息，寫信介紹住房的情況，并告之 住房面積為25平方米，月租500元。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.房租rentDear Bob,Yours,Li HuaPossible version:Dear Bob,I m so glad to learn that you re coming in September. I ve found a

23、place for you. Ita small flat of 25 square meters, with a bedroom, a bathroom and a kitchen. In thebedroom there is a bed, a sofa, a desk and a chair. The rent is 500 yuan per month. Theflat is in a building on Fangcao Street, which is not far from jianxin Chinese School. BusNo.11 can take you strai

24、ght to the school. In fact, it s only one stop. Do you think youlike it? If not, I can try and find another place for you. Just let me know.Yours,Li Hua【實(shí)戰(zhàn)模擬】寫作練習(xí)：.你校成功地舉辦了一次攝影展覽，現(xiàn)已結(jié)束。請(qǐng)根據(jù)海報(bào)的內(nèi)容用英語(yǔ)把這次攝影展 寫成一篇報(bào)道，并向 21st century school edition投稿。海報(bào)為了豐富學(xué)生的業(yè)余生活，我校學(xué)生會(huì)將于4月26日-28日舉辦一次學(xué)生攝影展覽。參加對(duì)象：所有同學(xué)自愿參加。作品要

25、求：黑白、彩色均可；但必須是自己的作品。作品主題：學(xué)校生活、自然風(fēng)光、節(jié)日活動(dòng)等。展覽地點(diǎn)：二層閱覽室獲獎(jiǎng)作者將得到意外的的獎(jiǎng)品。注意：(1)報(bào)道必須包括海報(bào)所給的主要內(nèi)容，可以適當(dāng)增減細(xì)節(jié)，使其連貫、完整。(2)報(bào)道的標(biāo)題已給出。(3)次數(shù)：100左右。A Photo Show.假如你是李華，昨天學(xué)校為你們舉辦了18歲成人儀式。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下列要點(diǎn)給你在美國(guó)的筆友發(fā)一封電子郵件，描述儀式過程并簡(jiǎn)述你的感受。(1)成人宣誓(2)感謝家長(zhǎng)和老師的教育培養(yǎng)(3)老師送賀卡(4)表演節(jié)目注意：(1)郵件必須包括以上要點(diǎn)，可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；(2)次數(shù)：100左右；(3)開頭結(jié)尾已為你寫好。生詞： 宣誓： ma

26、ke an oath儀式： ceremonyDear Tom,It is great to receive your email. Now I d like to tell you something that took place in myschool yesterday.假設(shè)你是李華，你的美國(guó)朋友 Mike將于6月底到北京作短暫停留，請(qǐng)你幫他安排一天的活動(dòng)。要求用所給的示意圖寫一封信向他提出建議并對(duì)各地點(diǎn)加以簡(jiǎn)單的介紹。注意：(1)包括示意圖中的主要內(nèi)容(2)次數(shù)100左右(3)信的開頭已寫好(4)生詞：圖書城 Book TownDear Mike,I nglad to hear you

27、 are coming soon. I vplanned a one-day trip for you in Beijing.假如你是王平，即將赴英國(guó)學(xué)習(xí)，今天早上剛剛買到機(jī)票，請(qǐng)根據(jù)票上標(biāo)明的起飛時(shí)間，中途停頓的地點(diǎn)，在英國(guó)等候的時(shí)間及到達(dá)終點(diǎn)的時(shí)間，寫信告訴將到機(jī)場(chǎng)接你的英國(guó)朋友John。FROMTOFLIGHTDATETIMEARRBeijingHongkongCA368Dec2120:00PM21:30PMHongkongLondonDec2122:00PM8:00AMLondonGlasgowBA163Dec2210:00PM11:00AM注意：1)詞數(shù)100-1202)信的開頭以給

28、出。Dec 10th 2001Dear John,A Photo Show【試題答案】答案1:Later in April, a photo show was held in our school. It was a great success! All the photo were taken by the students themselves. There were both black-and-white and color photos, presenting our school life, the beauty of nature, festival activities and

29、 so on. All the works of arts were on show in the reading room on the second floor. Every day, a large number of students went to enjoy it and they were surprised to find that the pictures were so wonderful. Those whose photos were chosen the best were given unexpected prize. In short, this photo sh

30、ow really made our life colorful. 答案2:Dear Tom,It is great to receive your email. Now I d like to yelu something that took place in my school yesterday. In the afternoon we held a growing-up ceremony for our coming 18-year-old birthday. At first we made an oath that as grown-up we should have a sens

31、e of duty for our society from now on. Then we showed our thanks to our parents who had gone through hardships to bring us up and teachers who have been educating us patiently. And our teachers also gave us cards expressing their good wishes to us. Finally, we put on wonderful performances, singing

32、and dancing. We learned a lot from the activity. I think it s very important for us. I will remember theday in my life. 答案3:Dear Mike,I m glad to hear you are coming soon. I vdpyaniipefoiayonuein Beijing.In the morning you can first go to the Summer Palace, which is one of the most beautiful parks in Beijing. There you ca