劍橋雅思作文范文及解析

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2、EST 335TEST 435way can the host country develops more quickly and more healthy in the future.TEST 44.Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing.Over the last half century the pace of change in the life

3、of human beings has increased beyond our wildest expectations. This has been driven by technological and scientific breakthroughs that are changing the whole way we view the world on an almost daily basis. This means that change is not always a personal option, but an inescapable fact of life, and w

4、e need to constantly adapt to keep pace with it.Those people who believe they have achieved some security by doing the same, familiar things are living in denial. Even when people believe they are resisting change themselves, they cannot stop the world around them from changing. Sooner or later they

5、 will find that the familiar jobs no longer exist, or that the 6safe9 patterns of behaviour are no longer appropriate.However, reaching the conclusion that change is inevitable is not the same as assuming that change is always for the better9. Unfortunately, it is not always the case that new things

6、 are promoted because they have good impacts for the majority of people. A lot of innovations are made with the aim of making money for a few. This is because it is the rich and powerful people in our society who are able to impose changes (such as in working conditions or property developments) tha

7、t are in their own interests.In conclusion, I would say that change can be stimulating and energizing for individuals when they pursue it themselves, but that all change, including that which is imposed on people, does not necessarily have good outcomes.題解一些人喜歡一輩子都做同樣的事情，防止變化。而其他人認為變化總是好事。討論這兩種觀點并提出

8、 你的看法。參考譯文過去半個世紀人類生活的變化速度遠遠超出我們的想象。這一變化是由于科技突破推動的，這些科技 進步幾乎每天都在改變我們看待世界的方式。這意味著變化并不總是個人的選擇，而是無法回避的生 活事實，而我們需要不斷適應以趕上變化。那些相信可以通過做同樣的、熟悉的事情來獲得某種平安感的人們是在自欺欺人。即便人們認為他們 自己在抵抗變化，他們也無法阻止周圍世界的變化。他們遲早會發(fā)現(xiàn)熟悉的工作不再存在，或者行為 的“平安，模式不再合適。但是，得出變化不可防止的結論不等于假設“變化總會變得更好”。不幸的是，新事物被推動并不總是 因為對大多數(shù)人有好處。許多革新的目的是為少數(shù)人謀利。這是因為正是我

9、們社會里有錢和有權的人 們才有能力施加有助于他們自己的利益的變化(比方在工作環(huán)境或者地產(chǎn)開展方面)?？傊?，我認為變化對于那些追逐變化的人們來說是令人興奮，鼓舞人心的，但并不是所有的變化都必 定會有好結果，這其中也包含施加于人的變化。分析本文是Discuss類考題。本文的開頭指出變化無處不在，也無法防止，融進了作者的觀點，說明防止變化是不可能的。第二段話不是分析反方的觀點，而是直接反駁觀點一的理由。第三段話也并沒有論證正方的觀點，而 是指出觀點二的理由并不總能立住腳，指出變化并不總是會變得更好，而只是使得少數(shù)掌握資源的人 變得更好，其他人那么無法支配變化。結尾總結觀點，指出變化對于那些主動追求變

10、化、能掌控變化的人來說是好的，而對于其他人，尤其 是被動面對變化的人來說那么未必如此?？偟膩碚f，本文并沒有采用完全平衡式的論證方法，最后說明自己傾向于某種觀點，而是指出兩種觀 點在某種程度上的合理之處以及局限所在，從而得出自己的看法。這種寫法比擬適合Discuss中兩種 觀點都不夠完善，無法完全同意的情況。點評：題目Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing.

11、認真看一下這個題目，狡猾狡猾的，因為這個話題的兩個觀點不是完全對立的，而是從不同的角度來 表述這個問題：一方面，一些人拒絕改變（拒絕改變是一種結果，其原因可能是不喜歡改變或是害怕 改變，甚至是不知道周圍是變化的）;另一方面，一些人認為改變經(jīng)常是件好事（認為改變是件好事是一 種觀點，也就是原因，可能行為是嘗試新鮮事物等）。所以回答這個問題就不存在中立、傾向或一邊 倒，而是把問題一個個回答掉。第一段：Over the last half century the pace of change in the life of human beings has increased beyond our w

12、ildest expectations.介紹背景，老調(diào)重彈beyond詞組經(jīng)常用到：beyond doubt毋容置疑；beyond recognition 無可識別；beyond expectations 不可想象；This has been driven by technological and scientific breakthroughs that can changing the whole way we view the world on an almost daily basis.這句話說明 technological and scientific breakthroughs 產(chǎn)

13、生了兩個作用 drive this (the pace of change has increased); change the whole way we view the world, 很是狡猾This means that change is not always a personal option, but an inescapable fact of life, and we need to constantly adapt to keep pace with it.實際上開始接觸到第一問題了，not a person option, but an inescapable fact o

14、f life的這句很有哲理，而 且經(jīng)常用到，大家記住第二段Those people who believe they have achieved some security by doing the same, familiar things are living in denial.直接回答文章的第一問，those people are living in denialin denial 介詞短語，拒絕成認事實(refusing to admit the truth or reality of something unpleasant),舉例 a patient in denial abou

15、t his health problemsEven when people believe they are resisting change themselves, they cannot stop the world around them from changing.解釋他們“生活在一種不愿面對真相的狀態(tài)中l(wèi)ive in denial”When conj: although盡管，表轉折，并非常見的表時間Sooner or later they will find that the familiar jobs no longer exist, or that the 6safe5 patt

16、erns of behavior are no longer appropriate.接著解釋 they will find that. . that第三段However, reaching the conclusion that change is inevitable is not the same as assuming that change is always for the better 相當于把兩問都給否認了，A is not the same as B句子用詞的多樣化：Reaching the conclusion 對應 assuminginevitable 對應首段的 ine

17、scapableUnfortunately, it is not always the case that news things are prompted because they have good impacts for the majority of people.新事物被推動并不總是因為對大多數(shù)人有好處接著解釋，it is not always the case, case 指 reality 事實解釋原因的著力點the majority of people,就是“是否代表最廣大人們的根本利益”，看看老外學“三個 代表”真是活學活用A lot of innovations are m

18、ade with the aim of making money for a few. This is because it is the rich and powerful people in our society who are able to impose changes (such as in working conditions or property developments) that are in their interests.這是因為正是我們社會里有錢和有權的人們才有能力推動符合 他們自己的利益的變化(比方在工作環(huán)境或者房地產(chǎn)開展方面)。結果,It is because

19、+原因，前果后因的因果關系，大家多學習學習It is people who.that多層復合關系的從句結構需搞清楚Such as文章舉例，使其具體化Sth is in ones interest 符合某人的利益， be in the public/national interest第四段：In conclusion, I would say that change can be stimulating and energizing for individuals when they pursue it themselves, but that all change, including whi

20、ch is imposed on people, does not necessarily have good outcomes.總之，我認為變化對于那些追逐變化的人們來說是令人興奮，鼓舞人心的，但并不是所有的 變化都必定會有好結果，這其中也包含施加于人的變化。I would say標志著我的觀點的正式出現(xiàn)，而且把兩個問題回答強調(diào)一下Pursue 對應第一問中的 avoid, not have good outcomes 回答了第二問審題這個題目很陰險，不是簡單的是非問題，而是同一個話題兩種不同觀點，但觀點的側重點又有所不同, 那好辦，就一個問題一個問題解決。問題:Some people pr

21、efer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change.世界是變化 的，你只能使用變化，而非逃避變化；問題二:Others think that change is always a good thing,變化有可能都是好事，有時也是壞事框架第一段：這一段談談背景，引入話題。由于技術的進步，變化無處不在，表達在兩個方面：人類生活 節(jié)奏加快和我們看待世界的看法。這是個誰也逃避不了的現(xiàn)實。第二段：回答題目的第一問，喜歡做熟悉事情的人是不愿意成認事實，應為這是他們逃避不了的現(xiàn)實, 很快他們就會發(fā)現(xiàn)他們熟悉的工作不存在，或

22、者是平安的行為方式不合適。第三段：回答題目的第二問，開頭這句話得將二三兩段聯(lián)系起來，所以就說改變是不可防止的并不等 同于改變總是好的。因為有些改變只符合權貴的利益，并不有利于廣大人民群眾。第四段：結尾段，得把兩個問題聯(lián)系起來，做一個簡單的歸納。當人們主動追求變化時，這個改變就 是令人振奮的，但并不是所有的變化都會產(chǎn)生積極的后果。假如是我？看到這個問題，頭腦里閃出的就是有句歌詞“不是我不明白，是因為世界變化快。”一看這兩個問題， 還是很好回答的，下面就開始吧。第一段：介紹背景，無論是誰，都是這一套第二段：回答第一個問題，拒絕變化的的做法是不可能的。因為變化時恒定存在的，而且個人來講不 能懼怕變化

23、，積極的面對變化，有時能使人得到更大的開展，所以叫做。pportunity第三段：回答第二個問題，變化的結構有好有壞，如核技術的創(chuàng)造，可以用來發(fā)電，服務人類，也可 用來制造核武器，毀滅人類，所以科學技術的變化帶來的雙重影響。第四段：再次強調(diào)自己的觀點，既然變化是肯定存在的，我們就必須積極面對，同時積極的杜絕消極 的影響，讓變化造福人類等。范文2：In modern society, there are two types of lives. Some people like to lead a stable life without change. Others prefer changing

24、 to static. Both kinds of people have their admittedly reasons to support themselves.The ones who advocate steady life is comfortable give their points as follows. First of all, long-term of work can provide a reliable source of income. Changing jobs frequently maybe hard for a family to live comfor

25、table. Secondly, movement of home is quite usual. This activity can cost you a great deal of finance to deal with this problem. Besides, shuttling among different kinds of job cannot make you gather the experience of a type of subject. Because you often change the way to face the subjects while chan

26、ging your jobs. After few decades, you may still a freshman in your job.On the contrary, audacious young people like changeable life much better than the people above who are interested in steadily life. They are convinced that diversity of life is a treasure of our experience. When we grow more mat

27、ure in considering questions. Whats more, when we change our life styles, we indeed get a quality of how to adapt new life. According to the mental research, people who own adaption ability may hardly feel lonely, and the risk of develop psychological illness can be decreased. So changing lives can

28、groom the qualities of youngsters.For my part, I would like to share the last point of view. Because I am a young man now, so changing life is a good opportunity for the people like me to join into the society and develop the ability of adapting new life styles.范文3Change, as progress, may not always

29、 be a good thing, but we could not possibly stop change from coming. Whether we like it or not, change happens. It seems that, any change, even a change for the better, is sometimes accompanied by drawbacks and discomforts.In general, progress is positive. This has been driven by technological and s

30、cientific breakthroughs that are changing the whole way we view the world on an almost daily basis. Indeed, over the last half century the pace of change in the life of human beings has increased beyond our wildest expectations. From the Industrial Revolution to the present Information Age, human be

31、ings have been benefiting from such changes in life as never before seen. Inevitably, it is a different world, probably one that is better economically and socially than any time in the past. If nothing else, life has become more enjoyable and labor less strenuous.However, that change is inevitable

32、is not the same as assuming that change is for the better*. Unfortunately, it is not always the case that new things are promoted because they have good impacts for the majority of people. For instance, a lot of innovations are made with the aim of making money for a few. Altogether, it seems as if

33、everything we gain, we lose something else; and everything we lose, we gain something else. True enough, change always comes bearing gifts; nevertheless, we have reasons to doubt if some of those gifts were not directly from hell. It is because all changes, even the most longed for, have their melan

34、choly as what we have left behind us is a cherished part of ourselves.All things considered, we are obliged to welcome change as our rule because there is nothing wrong with change as long as it is in the right direction. Given that all progress does not necessarily have good outcomes, we cannot pre

35、vent the world from changing. Since change is the only constant, the only institution which rejects progress is perhaps the cemetery.GENERAL TRAINING5. Using a computer every day can have more negative than positive effects on young children. Do you agree or disagree?I tend to agree that young child

36、ren can be negatively affected by too much time spent on the computer every day. This is partly because sitting in front of a screen for too long can be damaging to both the eyes and the physical posture of a young child, regardless of what they are using the computer for.However, the main concern i

37、s about the type of computer activities that attract children. These are often electronic games that tend to be very intense and rather violent. The player is usually the 6hero, of the game and too much exposure can encourage children to be self-centred and insensitive to others.Even when children u

38、se a computer for other purposes, such as getting information or emailing friends, it is no substitute for human interaction. Spending time with other children and sharing non-virtual experiences is and important part of a childs development that cannot be provided by a computer.In spite of this, th

39、e obvious benefits of computer skills for young children cannot be denied. Their adult world will be changing constantly in terms of technology and the Internet is the key to all the knowledge and information available in the world today. Therefore it is important that children learn at an early age

40、 to use the equipment enthusiastically and with confidence as they will need these skills throughout their studies and working lives.I think the main point is to make sure that young children do not overuse computers. Parents must ensure that their children learn to enjoy other kinds of activity and

41、 not simply sit at home, learning to live in a virtual world.劍7TESTIIt is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sport or music, and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician.D

42、iscuss both these views and give your own opinion.The relative importance of natural talent and training is a frequent topic of discussion when people try to explain different levels of ability in, for example, sport, art or music.Obviously, education systems are based on the belief that all childre

43、n can effectively be taught to acquire different skills, including those associated with sport, art or music. So from our own school experience, we can find plenty of evidence to support the view that a child can acquire these skills with continued teaching and guided practice.However, some people b

44、elieve that innate talent is what differentiates a person who has been trained to play a sport or an instrument, from those who become good players. In other words, there is more to the skill than a learned technique, and this extra talent cannot be taught, no matter how good the teacher or how freq

45、uently a child practices.I personally think that some people do have talents that are probably inherited via their genes. Such talents can give individuals a facility for certain skills that allow them to excel, while more hard-working students never manage to reach a comparable level. But, as all q

46、uestions of nature versus nurture, they are not mutually exclusive. Good musicians or artists and exceptional sports stars have probably succeeded because of both good training and natural talent. Without the natural talent, continuous training would be neither attractive nor productive, and with ou

47、t the training, the child would not learn how to exploit and develop their talent.In conclusion, I agree that any child can be taught particular skills but to be really good in areas such as music, art or sport, then some natural talent is required.structure: paragraph 1: paraphrase the topicparagra

48、ph 2: any child can be trainedparagraph 3: but trained student have ceilingsparagraph 4: talent and training are both essentialparagraph 5: talent is needed to excelTEST 2Some people believe that there should be fixed punishments for each type of crime. Others, however, argue that the circumstances

49、of an individual crime, and the motivation for committing it, should be taken into account when deciding the punishment.Discuss both views and give your own opinion.7.5分考生范文選段：固定不變的定罪制度和分情況靈活的定罪制度On the one hand, fixed punishment will have a deterring effect on society. Individuals knowing that they

50、 will be subject to a certain punishment if they are convicted with a given crime will reconsider committing this act in the first place. This deterring effect also leads to social stability and security, through minimizing the number of crimes committed. If people knew they would be able to convinc

51、e the court or the jury of reason for having committed the crime they are accused of, penal decisions would be largely arbitrary. This would result into criminals getting away with their crimes and into a high level of injustice caused by the subjective approach of different courts.On the other hand

52、, taking the circumstance of a crime and its motivation into consideration is a prerequisite for establishing and ensuring justice and equity. A person killing in self-defense cannot be compared to a serial killer, moving from one victim to the next.詞匯的多樣使用：認為 consider 重新考慮 reconsider 思考 considerati

53、on懲罰（動詞）Punish懲罰（名詞）punishment懲罰的penal犯罪Crime罪犯criminal.短語的多樣使用：月艮從be subject to判罪 be convicted with3 11 罪 commit crimes判決某人有某罪convince sb of sth方法 the approach of考慮到 take sth into consideration被指控be accused of前提 a prerequisite for與某事相提并論be compared to理由reason for.對策題干核心詞與短語“題干核心詞與短語”是指在每個話題的題目中，會有一

54、些出現(xiàn)頻率比擬高的名詞或短語。雅思議 論文題目雖多，但是可以按話題分為八大類：教育，科技，環(huán)境與動物，媒體與廣告，政府，工作與 生活，語言與文化，法律與犯罪。復習以雅思寫作機經(jīng)為主，關注近兩年的寫作題目。素材核心詞與短語“素材核心詞與短語”主要是指某一類話題作文常會論證的角度，一般是由一些“實意詞”為主。建 議考生按照話題大量研讀范文的主題句或是支持句，去積累和總結。0 .Grammatical range and accuracy.具體要求Grammatical range and accuracy表示語法的準確性和多樣性。在官方給出的評分標準中，7分有這 樣的要求：Uses a varie

55、ty of complex structuresProduces frequent error-free sentencesHas good control of grammar and punctuation but may make a few errors能夠使用各種復合結構。句子無語法錯誤。能夠正確使用語法和標點。.范例評析劍橋雅思全真試題7Test2Task2Some people believe that there should be fixed punishments for each type of crime. Others, however, argue that the

56、 circumstances of an individual crime, and the motivation for committing it, should be taken into account when deciding the punishment.Discuss both views and give your own opinion.5分考生范文選段：On the one hand, fixed punishment will have a deterring effect on society. Individuals knowing that they will b

57、e subject to a certain punishment if they are convicted with a given crime will reconsider committing this act in the first place. This deterring effect also leads to social stability and security, through minimizing the number of crimes committed. If people knew they would be able to convince the c

58、ourt or the jury of reason for having committed the crime they are accused of, penal decisions would be largely arbitrary. This would result into criminals getting away with their crimes and into a high level of injustice caused by the subjective approach of different courts.On the other hand, takin

59、g the circumstance of a crime and its motivation into consideration is a prerequisite for establishing and ensuring justice and equity. A person killing in self-defense cannot be compared to a serial killer, moving from one victim to the next.非謂語On the one hand, fixed punishment will have a deterrin

60、g effect on society.This deterring effect also leads to social stability and security, through minimizing the number of crimes committed.This would result into criminals getting away with their crimes and into a high level of injustice caused by the subjective approach of different courts.A person k