高中英語讀后續(xù)寫素材積累12

1、讀后續(xù)寫素材累積1一、境描繪的素材境描繪分客和主兩種角度:客從境事物自己下手,主從察者角度描繪。往常在描繪主客交替行,主描繪比重稍大?？途趁枥L:Part1境描繪的adj要求:有聲,有色,有感,有滋味thebluesky(天)thesongsofbirds()thethunderingclouds(光雷)thefragileflowers(嫩的花);(thedark,rainingevening雨夜交加的夜晚)thegreengrass(青草)thefragrantroses(的玫瑰);thesetting/risingsun(夕陽/徐徐升起的太陽)Part2境描繪的verb(vi&vt)要求)

2、.Wind(blow/click/howl/wail/roar)1.Agustofwindblewandpartedthedroopingbranchesoftheweepingwillowlikeacurtain,一吹,吹起了彎柳的低垂枝條,就像卷起的窗簾。2.Thewind,softandcold,clickedthroughtreebranchesandstirredthebushesthatsprinkledtheslope.,柔卻嚴(yán)寒,點(diǎn)著枝,著斜坡下的灌木。3.Acoolbreezeblewthroughthequietpark.涼快的微吹拂著沉寂的公園。4.Acoldbreeze

3、waftedthroughmyhair.冷(吹拂我的)Thewindwasperfectforkiteflying,blowingjusthardenoughtogivesomelift.(今天正是放箏的晴天氣,的力了箏的上漲。).Water(flow/travel/move/meander/enter)聲音:1.Atonepoint,thefaintsoundofwatertumblingthroughthevalley.在某,潺潺的的水聲在山谷中奏響。色2.Thewaterwasdeepblueandsunlightglitteredonitslookingglass-clearsurfa

4、ce.水是深色的,陽光在透明的玻璃表面光。3.Alittlewayoffwasasmallbrook,rushingandsparklingalongbetweengreenbank.離此不,有一條小溪,在色的河岸奔耀。4.Itmurmuredinasoftvoicelikealittleinnocentgirlwhisperedtoherlovingmother.仿佛它在溫柔低,就一位天真少女著她那慈的母私。(action,sound,colour).Sky(stand/appear/turn)1.Theskywasacurdledgrayburdenedwithlumpsofclouds.

5、天空是的灰色,伴著的云2.Blueskiesstoodtallandfar的天空高高立主境描繪:1.Sbfoundsthadj/doing/done某人某物(狀/作/被).2.Sbsaw/heard/felt/smeltsthdoing/done某人看到/聽到/感覺/到某物(狀/被)3.Itwassoadjthatwefind/feel它是這樣.以致于4.Sthkeptsbspellbound/amazed/光景使我這樣沉醉/驚/sthheldsbentirelyintheirpower光景我完整驚呆了5.Itlooked/seemed/appeared/feltlike光景看起來像二、景描繪

6、的素材(來自原著:追箏的人)Atleasttwodozenkitesalreadyhunginthesky,likepapersharksroamingforprey.Withinanhour,thenumberdoubled,andred,blue,andyellowkitesglidedandspuninthesky.Acoldbreezewaftedthroughmyhair.Thewindwasperfectforkiteflying,blowingjusthardenoughtogivesomelift,makethesweepseasier.(放風(fēng)箏的場景描繪,從各個(gè)角度,立體描繪

7、)空中已經(jīng)掛著起碼二十來只風(fēng)箏,好像紙制的鯊魚,巡游搜獵食品。不到一個(gè)鐘頭,這個(gè)數(shù)字翻了一番,紅色的、藍(lán)色的、黃色的風(fēng)箏在蒼穹往返飛舞,熠熠生輝。嚴(yán)寒的細(xì)風(fēng)吹過我的頭發(fā)。這風(fēng)正適合放風(fēng)箏,風(fēng)速不大,恰巧能讓風(fēng)箏飄浮起來,也便于控制。2.Thewaterwasadeepblueandsunlightglitteredonitslookingglass-clearsurface.湖水澄藍(lán),波平如鏡,陽光照在湖上熠熠生輝。ThenIglancedupandsawapairofkites,redwithlongbluetails,soaringinthesky.Theydancedhighabovet

8、hetreesonthewestendofthepark,overthewindmills,floatingsidebysidelikeapairofeyeslookingdownonSanFrancisco,thecityInowcallhome.(場景、比喻)我抬開端,看見兩只紅色的風(fēng)箏,帶著長長的藍(lán)色尾巴,在天空中徐徐升起。它們舞動(dòng)著,飛越公園西邊的樹林,飛越風(fēng)車,并排飄浮著,好像一雙眼睛俯視著舊金山,這個(gè)我此刻當(dāng)作家園的城市。Blueskiesstoodtallandfar,thesunlikeabrandingironsearingthebackofyourneck.Creekswh

9、ereHassanandIskippedstonesallspringturneddry,andrickshawsstirreddustwhentheysputteredby.(場景、比喻)天空一碧如洗,陽光像烙鐵般灼痛后頸。整個(gè)春季我和哈桑在溪流取水漂,到了夏天它們也干枯了。黃包車嗒嗒走過,揚(yáng)起陣陣塵埃。5.Somewhere,abranchsnapped,anowlhooted.Thewind,softandcold,clickedthroughtreebranchesandstirredthebushesthatsprinkledtheslope.Andfrombelow,thefain

10、tsoundofwatertumblingthroughthevalley.在某個(gè)地方傳來樹枝劈啪作響的聲音,還有貓頭鷹的喊聲。北風(fēng)輕輕拂動(dòng)樹枝,吹過山坡上的灌木叢。而下邊,水流在山谷淌動(dòng),傳來陣陣輕微的聲音。6.Bythreeoclock,therainhadstoppedandtheskywasacurdledgrayburdenedwithlumpsofclouds.Acoolbreezeblewthroughthepark.(天氣)到三點(diǎn)時(shí),雨停了,鉛灰色的天空陰云密布,一陣北風(fēng)吹過公園。7.Thesunwasbeginningtoset,glitteringredthroughthe

11、cracksbetweentheramshacklebuildings.(情景)太陽開始下山,那些風(fēng)雨飄搖的房屋的裂痕中,溢出閃閃的紅色斜暉。三、描繪時(shí)間,動(dòng)作,心理和感情)、感情好詞:1.喜樂Thesmileonherfaceshonelikeadiamond.她臉上的笑臉像鉆石同樣閃閃發(fā)光。Asmileofunderstandingflashedacrosshisface他.臉上露出了一種理解的淺笑。Arippleofexcitementranthroughthem.一陣激動(dòng)聲穿過他們。Laughterlingeredaroundtheroom.笑聲在房間里繚繞。Hiseyestwinkl

12、edwithpleasure.他的眼睛閃耀著快樂。Awildgaiety(快樂)tookholdofher.一種瘋狂的快樂控制了她。Unforgettablewerehereyesthatshonelikediamondsandlipsheldinasteadysmile.令人難忘的是她的眼睛像鉆石同樣閃閃發(fā)光,嘴角保持著穩(wěn)固的淺笑。Iwaswildwithjoy.我驚喜若狂。Iwaspleasedbeyonddescription.我快樂得難以形容。Sheworeashiningsmileonherface她.臉上帶著絢爛的笑臉。Hersmilelitupthewholeroom.她的笑臉照

13、亮了整個(gè)房間。Sheshedtearsofjoy.她快樂得流下了眼淚。Hereyesweresparklinglikediamonds.她的眼睛閃著鉆石般的光輝。Shewasoverflowingwithhappiness.她洋溢著幸福。Herflushedfacewasshiningwithexcitement.她激動(dòng)得滿臉通紅。Joywelledupinsideher.她心中涌起愉悅。Iwasfloatingonair.我飄蕩在空中。Amusementgleamedinhiseyes.他眼睛表露出快樂的神態(tài)。2.憤慨:Iwasseizedbyanger我.充滿了憤慨。Hewasfuming

14、withrage.他氣得雷霆之怒。Hisangerboiledover.他的憤慨迸發(fā)了。Hecouldhardly/scarcelycontainhisrage.他幾乎控制不住怒火。Hewasbreathingfireandfury.他充滿著怒火。Hisvoicetrembledwithanger.他的聲音因憤慨而發(fā)抖。Hegavemealookofburninganger他.憤慨地看了我一眼。Heglaredatmewithburningeyes.他用灼熱的眼光怒目著我。Heflaredupattheword.他一聽到這個(gè)字就勃然震怒。Hisfacecloudedwithanger.他氣得神

15、色陰森。3.悲Hestoodsilently,tearsrollingdownhischeeks.他靜靜地站著,眼淚著面流了下來。IfeellikeIamfloatinginanoceanofsadness我.飄蕩在悲的大海里。Herhandswereshaking.Shewasonthevergeoftears她.的手在抖。她快要哭了。Hearingthenews,sodesperatewashethathedrownedsadnessinwine聽.到個(gè)信息,他望地把悲吞沒在酒里。Sheburstintotearsandranoutoftheroom.她忽然哭了起來,跑出了房。Shesob

16、bed,hidingherfaceinherhands她.掩面嗚咽。Itriedtofightbacktears./Myeyeswerefilledwithtears.我努力忍住眼淚。/我的眼里充了淚水。Afrown(眉)nowstoodonhisface.他起了眉。Theysattherewithglumlooksontheirfaces.他坐在那邊,著一郁。Thenewscastacloudofgloomoverhisface.信息使他上蒙上了一暗影。Hebrimmedoverwithsorrowwhen.他是悲Theywereimmersedinsorrow.他沉醉在沉痛之中。Thesedayshewasinlowspirits.些日子他情低沉。4.懼怕:Heturnedtome,withhiseyesfullofhorror.他身來,眼里充了懼怕。Fearslowlycreepsuponher.懼怕慢慢地延伸到她身上。Shewasstruckwithhorrorwhen.她感覺懼怕Shewaschokedbyfear她.因懼怕而窒息。Herfaceturnedpaleandstoodtheretongue-tied.她色白地站在那邊,舌打。Afloodoffearwelledupinhim./Fearfloodedoverhim.他心中涌起一懼怕。/懼怕吞沒了他。Her