作文煉句-第28篇譯文老師筆記

MoststudentstodayareawareoftheenvironmentalchallengesfacingourplanetYoungpeopleunderstandthatcuttingdownonenergyuse（1.削減能源消耗）anddecreasingwastearenecessarystepstowardscurbingclimatechange（2.遏制氣候變化）andpreventingenergycutdownonenergycutdownonintake、smoking、wastecut VERB短語動詞削減;減少使用If cutonsomethingor something,youuseordolessof【語法信息】：VPon【語法信息】：(not【語法信息】：V【語法信息】：AlsoVnHecutdownoncoffeeandcigarettes,andateabalanceddiet...他Carownerswereaskedtocutdowntravel...要求車主們減少駕車出行的Ifyouspendmorethanyour e,canyoutrytocutdown? EhsanToreini,asecurityexpertattheUniversityof Newcastle,andhiscolleagues,describeawaytoturnthatrandomnessinto “fingerprint”thatisuniquetoanygivensheetofp r.(Insecurity afingerprintisanyunique,identifyingpattern,notjustonefroma finger).Thatcould,theyhope,helptocut downonfraud. 模式，而非手）。他們希望這樣能減少詐騙發(fā)生。替換表達：reducecurbclimateUK[k?:b] [k?:b] tocontrolorlimitsomethingthatisnotwanted Theernmentshouldacttocurbtaxevasion.應該采取行動抑制curbVERB動詞控制;抑制;限定;約束Ifyou curbsomething,youcontrolitandkeepitwithinlimits.【語法信息】：V【語法信息】：beV-【搭配模式】：oftNon...advertisementsaimedatcurbingthespreadofAids...旨在控制病的Inflationneedstobecurbed inRussia.俄羅斯需要抑制通貨膨脹。Curbisalsoanoun.Hecalledformuchstrictercurbsonimmigration.他呼吁對采取更嚴Tillersonha edtosupportarevenue-neutralcarbon tax–abipartisansolutionthatinadditiontohel curbclimatechangeanditsdamages,wouldhaveamodestly beneficialdirectimpactontheeconomy.（ 替換表達：preventreduceclimateSuppress 點評：suppress（生長、發(fā)展、起作用等）”，例如：Thesuppressesthebody'simmunesystem.這種抑制身體的免疫系統(tǒng)。但不可以用suppress來修飾climatechange，這里可以改為常見說法curbclimatechange climate點評：restrain（增長太多的東西）”，restrainspending/inflation/corruption，不能用restrain修飾climatechangepreventenergy[pr?'vent] tostopsomethingfromhappeningorsomeonefrom something，妨礙；預防Labelyoursuitcasestopreventconfusion.在你提箱上貼上以[+-ingverb]Hisdisabilitypreventshim UK ['??:r.t??d?] whenthereisnotenoughofsomethingThere'sashortageof foodandshelterin therefugeecamps.難Thelonghotsummerhasledtoseriouswatershortages.這個夏天漫長Thenewbodywouldoverseelargeenergyconsumerslimitingtheirconsumptionandwouldorderpowerstationstoincreasetheiroutputtotrytopreventenergyshortages.（ 該新組織將大型能源消耗者的能源消耗限制，命令發(fā)電站加大產(chǎn)出，以避免替換表達：alleviate/ease/tackleenergyQ：Moststudentstodayareawareoftheenvironmental facingourplanet.如果過直譯就是：環(huán)境問題面對 典里面face后面都是接問題：theproblemsfacedby families單親家庭面對的問題Thecompanyisfacinga crisis.公司正 財政。She'sfacedwitha decision.她眼前有一項難作的決定。It'snotalwayseasy thetruth.承認事實并不總是一件容易的。②sthfacesomeone和someonefacesthA：somethingfacessomeonesomeonefacessomething這兩種用法都正確，而且沒有區(qū)別。在麥克米倫詞典中可以找到這樣的例句：Howtocombineacareerandchildrenisadilemmafacingmanywomen.ManyoftheshipyardworkersfacelosingtheirQ：請教老師“Youngpeopleknowingtocutenergyconsumption toreducewasteisnecessarytocurbclimatechangeandprevent A：這句話有問題，因為句子主干變成了：Youngpeopleisnecessaryto climatechange…可以改為：Youngpeopleknowthatcuttingenergyconsumptionand wastearenecessarytocurbclimatechangeandpreventenergyshortages.。。High ）.Weshoulddoourpart（4.盡 的職責）torespondtotheenvironmentalchallengesfacingourplanet.highwaslev·el/?l?vl; /noun AMOUNT數(shù)量,theamountordegreeof something,comparedtoanotheramountordegree數(shù)量;水平，水準，程度: ofIncreaseds areneededtomeetthelevelofdemand.要增加供應high/lowlevelDolphins showahighlevelof Inflationdropped toitslowestlevelin30years.30Atthemoment, publicinterestisatahighlevel BADUSE[Soranunnecessaryorwronguseofmoney,substances,time, abilities,etc浪費；Thatmeetingachievedabsoluynothing-wasa wasteoftime.那次會議根本沒有取得甚么成果——純粹She'sbeenunemployedfortwoyearsandit'ssucha wasteof talents.她已經(jīng)失業(yè)兩年了，這純粹是浪費才華。Mymothercouldn'tbearwaste-shealwaysmadeus eateverythingonourplates.我母親浪費——她總是讓吃光自己碟子里的所有東西。Inwealthycountries,therearelowlevelsofunintentional lossesbuthighlevelsof“food waste”,whichinvolvesfoodbeingthrownawaybyconsumersbecausethey havepurchasedtoomuch,orbyretailerswhorejectfoodbecauseofexacting standards. 替換表達：toomuch high點評：一般沒有highwaste的說法，可以改為highwasenergy[d?'pli:.??n] [Sor(a)reductionthedepletion theozonelayerIncreasedexpenditurehascausedadepletion our開支增加使的資本／減少了ThealliancesaidthestudyfoundthattheBatesonreport's ofdeerphysiologywasfactuallyunsoundandhadledto conclusionsaboutmuscledamage,energy depletionandtheoverallstressofahunteddeer.（ 替換表達：overuseofenvironmentalenvironmentalADJ形容 的Environmentalmeansconcerned withtheprotectionofthenaturalworldofland,sea,air,plants,and 【搭配模式】：ADJ...economicandenvironmentallegislation.經(jīng)濟和生態(tài)環(huán)境保...theenvironmentalclaimsbeingmadeforsomeproducts...要求一些產(chǎn)Environmentalgroupsplantostagepublicsduring conference.環(huán)境保護組織計劃在會議期間組織公眾活動。 nounwhenthebeautyorqualityofsomethingisdestroyedor spoilt玷environmentaldegradationIran’scriticalwatercrisisisanothermarkofenvironmentaldegradation.Lakeandriversaredryingout.LakeUrmia,oncethelargestsaltlakeintheMiddleEast,isnearlygone.（ 伊朗的嚴重水又一次印證著環(huán)境 替換表達：environmentaldoourOne'sresponsibility,duty,orobligation;職責，義務：的責任、職責或義務；份額Weeachdoourpartto thehouseone'sshareorallottedtask(asinanaction) <onemust one'sThepresidencyisarelayrace,requiringeachofustodoourparttobringthecountry closertoitshighestaspirations.（ 職和接力比賽無異，需 每位盡己所能讓全體國民回到意氣風發(fā)之時替換表達：doourduty/bit,takeonourQ：高浪費英語順序Highwasevels，水平一定排在最后嗎？②highwastelevels可不可以直接用Highwaste，levelA：這是level的一種常見用法，noun+levels表示某事物的數(shù)量、程度等很高， elevels；不可以直接用highwasteThemostbasicwayinwhicha ernmentcanaddresstheenergyshortageistobettereducatethepublicparticularlytheyoungergeneration,abouttheimportanceofconservingenergy（1.節(jié)能）.Thiswillensurethatthechildrenoftodayareawareofthegravity（2.嚴峻性）ofthesituationandgrowuptobeenvironmentally-conscious（3.具有環(huán)保意識的）adults.conserveverbtransitiveUK[k?n?s??v] [-tokeepandprotectsomethingfromdamage,changeor waste保護；Toconserveelectricity,wearecuttingdownon central為了省電，在減少供熱Thenationalistsareverykeentoconserve customsand民族主義者非常熱衷于保留他們的和語言I'mnotbeinglazy-I'mjustconservingmy later.我不是在偷懶——在為以后保存精力／體力。Puttingtheimpactofsavingenergyinhumanterms,for example,canhelptoencourageotherstafftoconserveenergy. 替換表達：energy 點評：沒有cuttingenergy的說法，只有cuttingenergyuse，這里建議改為 UK['gr?v.?.ti] US[-?.t?i] noununcountableSERIOUS嚴重seriousnessIdon'tthinkyouunderstandthegravityofthe “Youdon'trealisethegravity ofthesituation…”beganMrTrichet.ButhewascutoffbytheFrench ,NicolasSarkozy,whointerjected,oneFrenantoanother:“Perhaps youspeaktobankers.We,weareanswerabletoourcitizens.”（ 點評：strict是指“嚴格的”，不可以用來修飾thedepth ourpresentofthepresentsituationparlous點評：parlousstatebeinaparlousstate forcewasinaparlousstatein1990.1990年該國的 environmentallyUK adverb★ina thataffectstheenvironmentorisrelatedtoEverybodyhassomescopeforngtheir jobinamoreenvironmentallyresponsibleway.alessenvironmentallydamagingUK['k?n.t??s] NOTICINGbeconsciousoftonoticethataparticularthingor existsoris present意Thetoothdoesn'texactlyhurt,butI'mconscious ofitIcanfeelit)allthetime.牙齒并不痛，我總覺得不舒服。[+-ingverb]Ithinkshe'svery of theintheofficewhodidn'thaveauniversity [+that]Hegraduallybecameconscious fact)thateveryoneelsewaswearingasuit.他漸漸其他人都是穿著Issuessuchasequalpay,environmentallyconsciousmanufacturingprocesses,preventionof counterfeitgoods,humantrafficking,responsiblefarmingpracticesand overproductionofgoodsareallattheforefrontofconsumers’mindswhen makingthesechoices. 替換表達：environmentally 點評：沒有environment awareness的說法，應該改為environmentalQinwhichA：這里是一個定語從句，Themostbasicwayinwhicha ernmentcanaddresstheenergyshortage…which指代前面的way，句子相當于Aernmentcanaddress energyshortageinthemostbasic ernmentcanensurethatthemediaplaysanactiveroleinencouragingtheuseofenergy-efficientpractices（1.節(jié)能措施）.Thismightinclude 宣傳活動）topromotetheuseofbicyclesinsteadofcarsormagazineandthebenefitsofbetterhomeinsulation（3.房屋隔熱ns（2.rarticlesenergy-efficientenergy-ADJ形容 能效高的;高能效的Adevice rmationonhowtomakeyourhomemoreenergy ['pr?k.t?s]actionratherthanthoughtorideasItseemedlikeagoodideabeforewestarted,butin practiceitwasadisaster.在動手之前這似乎是個好主意，但實際上卻是場。Officially,Robert'sincharge,butin HannahrunstheIcan'tseehowyourplanisgoingtoworkin Howdoyouintendtoput theseproposalsinto med?，你打算如何把這些計劃付諸實行？Participantsstressthatitisnecessarytobewillingto doanythingandeverythingtogetpeopleexcitedandengagedinenergyefficient 參與者強調(diào)，大家該竭盡所能讓普羅大眾對節(jié)能措施 ，能投身于其中替換表達：energy-savingmeasuresenergyconservation 1b.aseriesofthingssuchasevisionor thattrytopersuadepeopletobuyaThenboostedsalesofthejeansby200%.anadvertising/publicity/marketingnAnisanyseriesof actionsoreventsthataremeanttoachieveaparticularresult,likean advertisingnofevisioncommercialsand Internetadsthattriestoconvincekidstobuybubble PriortothepassageoftheBipartisan nReformAct i