初中英語中考復(fù)習(xí) 28 責(zé)任 2021年中考英語書面表達(dá)高分作文攻略（全國通用版）

28責(zé)任2021年中考英語書面表達(dá)高分作文攻略（全國通用版）相關(guān)話題解讀與作文示例指導(dǎo)話題解讀對責(zé)任的理解，通常可以分為兩個層面。一是個人對自己、家庭、社會應(yīng)該做的事、應(yīng)該盡的責(zé):二是個人沒有做好分內(nèi)之事面應(yīng)承擔(dān)的責(zé)任或不利后果。責(zé)任感是每個人必備的品格，它既包括對自己的責(zé)任，也包括對他人、對社會的責(zé)任。對中學(xué)生而言，努力學(xué)習(xí)、追求上進(jìn)就是對自己負(fù)責(zé)的表現(xiàn):規(guī)范自己的言行，遵守社會公約，就是對他人和社會負(fù)責(zé)的表現(xiàn)。和責(zé)任有關(guān)的英語話題作文，往往會涉及責(zé)任意識的重要性、如何提高責(zé)任心、我們的責(zé)任具體有哪些等方面，也可以事記情，即通過記敘一件事情來談?wù)剬ω?zé)任心的體會。在寫作時要注意，對責(zé)任的態(tài)度應(yīng)該是積極的、正面的。我們先來看一篇以責(zé)任為主題的英語文章，以供參考:Responsibilityandteenagers:whatyouneedtoknowDuringtheteenageyears,children'sneedforresponsibilityandautonomygetsstronger--it'sanimportantpartoftheirpathtoyoungadulthood.Tobecomecapableadults,teenagersneedtolearntomakegooddecisionsontheirown.Theprocessofhelpingchildrentakeresponsibilityandmakedecisionsisakeytaskforparents.Youhaveanimportantroletoplayintrainingandsupportingyourchildtobereadyformoreresponsibility.Thismeansyouneedtoplanwhenandinwhatareastoletyourchildstartmakingdecisions.Howquicklyyouhandoverresponsibilitytoyourteenagerisuptoyou.Itdependsonmanyfactors,includingyourowncomfortlevel,yourfamilyandculturaltraditions,andyourchild'smaturity.Ideally,youandyourchildshouldbothfeelcomfortablewiththeshiftofresponsibilityandthepaceofchange.Toomuchortoosoonmightleaveyoubothfeelingoverwhelmed.Toolittleortooslowmightendupwithyourchildfeelingimpatientorrebellious.相關(guān)話題作文示例指導(dǎo)（一）題目Writeacompositioninatleast60wordsonthetopicLearntoberesponsible".(iul“學(xué)會承擔(dān)責(zé)任”為題，寫一篇不少于60個詞的短文。)Questionsforreference:1.Whyshouldwelearntoberesponsible?2.Whatshouldweberesponsiblefor?3.Howcanweberesponsible?審題這是一篇以“學(xué)會承擔(dān)責(zé)任”為題的全命題說明文。題目的要求和指示非常清晰，即圍繞“why”、“what"和“how"這三個問題寫作。在寫作時，我們需闡述責(zé)任的意義和重要性，明確責(zé)任的內(nèi)容，比如我們對家庭有哪些責(zé)任，對自已又有哪些責(zé)任，以及如何去具體地承擔(dān)、履行我們的責(zé)任。為了使行文更連貫，可以適當(dāng)使用一些過渡詞和連接詞，使文章更有層級感和邏輯性。同時也要注意時態(tài)，本文應(yīng)使用一般現(xiàn)在時，切忌使用一般過去時詳細(xì)敘述過去的某個事件或經(jīng)歷。段落結(jié)構(gòu)本文可采用三段式的寫作結(jié)構(gòu):第一段(開頭):提出文章的主題，即作者想要闡述說明的主要內(nèi)容。第二段(中心段):是文章的中心部分，對文章的主題展開說明。可以適當(dāng)使用些過2黃渡詞，使文章層次分明，銜接自然。第三段(結(jié)尾):文章的結(jié)尾段，對全文進(jìn)行總結(jié)，概括事理，起到首尾呼應(yīng)的效果。核心語匯haveastrongsenseofresponsibility有很強的責(zé)任感takeresponsibilityforsth.對....負(fù)責(zé)beresponsibleforsth.對...負(fù)責(zé)sparenoeffortstodosth.不遺余力.....befullyawareof...充分意識........playanimportantrole......起重要作用cultivateastrongsenseofresponsibility培養(yǎng)強烈的責(zé)任感參考句型It'syourdutytodosth.....是你的責(zé)任。Thereasonwhy..isthat......的原因是.....Withoutresponsibility,wewould..沒有了責(zé)任，我們便會....Ihavebecomemoreresponsiblebydoingsth.通過.....我變得更有責(zé)任心了。Weshouldbearitinmindthat...我們應(yīng)當(dāng)....牢記在心。.Responsibilityisoneofthemostimportantqualitiesthatapersonshouldhave.責(zé)任心是人所應(yīng)具備的重要品質(zhì)之一。Ididn'trealizehowimportantresponsibilityisuntil..直到....我才意識到責(zé)任的重要性。寫作1LearntoberesponsibleItisanessentiallessonforstudentstolearntoberesponsible.Howtolearnit?Inmyopinion,thefollowingtwoaspectsareveryimportant.First,weshouldlearntotakesomebasicdutiesstepbystepfromeverydetails.Second,weshouldlearntoadmiteverymistakeswehavemade.Becauseitwillmakeusavoidmakingthesameonenexttimeaswellasbetrustedbyotherpeople.Inaword,Aberesponsiblepeoplemeanswehavealreadygrownup.點評:這篇作文內(nèi)容比較完整，表達(dá)比較流暢。但是，根據(jù)題目內(nèi)容和要求，寫作要點應(yīng)在于“why"、“what"和“how",而這篇作文的闡述不夠充分。此外，文中的一些語法問題，比如every+名詞單數(shù)形式、because連接原因狀語從句不可單獨成句，以及動名詞作主語等，可以通過檢查及時糾正。因此，建議該學(xué)生要盡量減少、更正以上語法錯誤，并對“為什么要學(xué)會承擔(dān)責(zé)任”這一問題，進(jìn)行具體的闡述。:習(xí)作2LearntoberesponsibleInmyopinion,beingresponsibleisthekeytosuccess.Withoutresponsibility,wewon'tbeconsideredreliableenough.Thoughweareunder18yearsold,westillneedtolearntoberesponsibleforourselves.Forexample,weshouldlearntoberesponsiblebysharingsomehouseworkinourfamily,suchaswashingthedishes,moppingthefloorandsoon.Inthisway,wecanbemoreindependent.2Inaddition,weshouldlearntoberesponsibleforourstudies.Weshouldworkhardandtrytolearnfromourownmistakessothatwecanmakegreaterprogress.Inaword,3itisastrongsenseofresponsibilitythatmakesustrustworthyandsuccessful.點評:從結(jié)構(gòu)來看，本文是典型的三段式作文，段落結(jié)構(gòu)完整，首尾呼應(yīng)。從內(nèi)容來看，本文開門見山地提出了責(zé)任心的重要性，接著闡述了我們應(yīng)對什么負(fù)責(zé)，應(yīng)該如何去落實，內(nèi)容充實，層次分明。通篇時態(tài)運用合理，用詞準(zhǔn)確，復(fù)合句和強調(diào)句的運用使得文章句式富有變化?？偟膩碚f，是一篇比較好的作文。相關(guān)話題滿分作文必背（一）題目Writeatleast60wordsonthetopic:makesmeresponsible.(以“使我有責(zé)任心”為題，寫一篇不少于60個詞的短文，標(biāo)點符號不占格。)提示:日常學(xué)習(xí)和生活中有很多事情有助于我們培養(yǎng)責(zé)任心。請舉個例子加以說明，并談?wù)勀愕捏w會。范文DoinghouseworkmakesmeresponsibleAsastudent,thoughI'malwaysbusywithstudies,doinghouseworkisneverawasteoftime.Itcannotonlymakemyparentslesstired,butalsohelpmebecomemoreresponsible.DoinghouseworkmakesmeresponsiblebecauseIcanlearnthenecessarylifesill,suchascookingmeals,washingclothes,tidyinguptherooms.Bydoinghousework,Icanlearntobemoreindependent,andtoberesponsibleformyself.Besides,doinghouseworkisachancetoshowmygratitudeandlovetomyparents.Inthisway,Icaneasetheburdenofmyparents,andberesponsibleformyfamilyaswell.Allinall,doinghouseworkmakesmeresponsible.（二）題目Writeatleast60wordsaboutthetopic"Tobearesponsiblestudent!"(請以“做一個有擔(dān)當(dāng)?shù)膶W(xué)生!”為題，寫篇不少于60個詞的短文，標(biāo)點符號不占格。)(注意:短文中不得出現(xiàn)考生的姓名、校名及其他相關(guān)信息，否則不予評分。)Situation:新時代的學(xué)生都需要有責(zé)任意識，無論是在自己家中、在學(xué)?；蛘呤窃谏鐣隙夹枰袚?dān)當(dāng)。請你談?wù)勀愕恼J(rèn)識，并舉例說明你的理解。范文Tobearesponsiblestudent!Havingastrongsenseofresponsibilityhelpsustobebetterandbetter.Tobearesponsiblestudent,Ithinkweshoulddothefollowingthings.First,asastudent,studyingismymajortask.Tobearesponsiblestudent,Ishouldtrymybesttobehavewellatschool.Forexample,Ishouldlistentotheteacherscarefully,takenoteswhennecessaryandthinkactivelyinclass.Second,asafamilymember,Ishouldberesponsibleforthefamilytoo.Ishouldcareformyfather,motherandmygrandparentsandIshoulddosomehouseworkaswell.Allinall,Ishouldberesponsiblefornotonlymyselfbutalsomyfamilymembers.（三）題目Writeatleast60wordsaboutthetopic"