2023學(xué)年完整公開課版九年級(jí)Unit2MyfavoriteChinesefestival-Writing

Learningobjectives能介紹自己喜歡的中國傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日，會(huì)使用復(fù)合句表達(dá)自己的觀點(diǎn)。2.學(xué)會(huì)通過思維導(dǎo)圖或者列出框架的方法整理自己的寫作思路。3.要充分地認(rèn)識(shí)中國傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日，珍惜與家人一起過節(jié)的時(shí)間，熱愛生活，熱愛家人。寫作話題：Festivals,holidaysandcelebrations(節(jié)假日活動(dòng))Pre-writing

Writingguidelines(寫作方法指導(dǎo))說明文是以說明為主要表達(dá)方式，介紹事物的形狀、構(gòu)造、性質(zhì)、變化、類別、狀態(tài)、功能、成因、結(jié)果等特征的文章。它是一種應(yīng)用性很強(qiáng)的文體，說明的目的是讓讀者有所知，給讀者提供知識(shí)，使之了解客觀世界，掌握解決問題的方法。說明文具有知識(shí)性、科學(xué)性、應(yīng)用性、解說性和條理性等特點(diǎn)。常見的說明文有：解說詞、說明書、書文簡介、內(nèi)容提要、科普小品、生產(chǎn)工藝、操作規(guī)程和景物介紹等，常見說明方法有：定義、注釋、舉例、分類、比較、引用、比喻、描述、數(shù)字分析和綜合等。寫說明文必須注意事實(shí)正確，表達(dá)清晰，條理清楚，層次分明，語言簡練和用詞準(zhǔn)確。本單元話題是寫中國的傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日。學(xué)生對(duì)于這方面是有許多感性認(rèn)知的，比如春節(jié)討紅包，元宵吃湯圓，端午看龍舟，中秋吃月餅等。所以，本單元寫作指導(dǎo)的側(cè)重點(diǎn)是如何整理思路：該寫什么，先寫什么，再寫什么。可以使用說明文中的分類法幫助學(xué)生從以下幾個(gè)類別進(jìn)行思考：“whenisitcelebrated?Whatdoesitcelebrate?Howdopeoplecelebrateit?Whydoyoulikeit?”2.半開放性的提綱作文提綱作文是指通過設(shè)置情景和具體要點(diǎn)性提示來開展寫作。由于有一定的提示限制，所以它屬于半開放性寫作。此類作文應(yīng)從以下的途徑分析：(1)首先要認(rèn)真審題，確定體裁、時(shí)態(tài)、人稱，抓住主題，避免寫偏。(2)分析題目中已經(jīng)設(shè)置的提示，這些提示在作文中一定要都涉及到，不能漏掉提示點(diǎn)。(3)分析題目設(shè)置中允許開放的寫作范圍，思考在該范圍限制內(nèi)能寫些什么內(nèi)容。Lookatthepicturesandsaywhatfestivalstheyare.探究1：Brainstorm(頭腦風(fēng)暴)WhatChinesefestivalsdoyouknow?(你知道有哪些中國節(jié)日嗎？)

FreeTalkTheDragonBoatFestivalTheMid-AutumnFestivalTheSpringFestivalTheLanternFestivalLet’smakealist!thepopularfestivalsinChinaWhenisit?

SpringFestivalLanternFestivalDragonBoatFestivalMid-AutumnFestivalinJanuaryorFebruaryonthe15thofthefirstlunarmonth

onthe5thofthefifthlunarmonthinSeptemberorOctober1．Unittopiclanguages（單元話題語言）Languagebox（語言工具箱）名詞/動(dòng)名詞詞塊:①oneofthemostpopularfestivals,②atraditionalfestival，③thebeginningofnewyear,④dumplings,…(1)Chunks（詞塊）(1)Chunks（詞塊）動(dòng)詞詞塊：①cleanthehouses,②guessriddles,③makezongzi,④gettogether,⑤admirethemoon,⑥havedragonboatraces,⑦sharemooncakeswithrelatives,⑧getreadyfor,⑨givebestwishes,⑩makelanterns,…介詞詞塊：①onthefifteenthdayofthefirstlunarmonthoftheyear,②inmemoryofsb.,③duringthisfestival,④notonly…butalso…(1)Chunks（詞塊）Quiz:Readaloudthechunksaboveandtrytomatchthemeaningbynumbering.名詞/動(dòng)名詞詞塊:（）一個(gè)傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日，（）餃子，（）最受歡迎的節(jié)日之一（）新年之始①②③④動(dòng)詞詞塊：（）送上最好的祝福，（）和親戚分享月餅，（）賞月，（）舉行龍舟賽，（）為…準(zhǔn)備，（）團(tuán)聚，（）做粽子，（）打掃房子，（）猜燈謎，（）做燈籠③④⑤⑦⑧①⑨⑥②⑩介詞詞塊：（）農(nóng)歷第一個(gè)月的第十五天，（）為了紀(jì)念某人，（）不僅…而且…（）節(jié)日期間①③②④（2）Patterns（句型）MyfavoriteChinesefestivalis…Itiscelebratedin/on…EveryyearthereisaXXXFestivalinChina，XXXFestivalisoneofthemostpopularfestivalsinChina，ItisatraditionalChinesefestivalcalled…，ItiscelebratedonthefifteenthdayofthefirstlunarmonthIlikeitbecause…It’smyfavoritefestivalbecause…Duringthisfestival,people…Itmakesmefeel…2.Extensivelanguages（拓展性語言）Famoussaying，proverbs,aphorismsandClassicalsamplesentences（名言、諺語、警句與經(jīng)典例句）Eastofwest,homeisthebest.無論去哪，家是最好的地方。(2)Beiteversohumble,thereisnoplacelikehome.(JohnHowardPayne,Americandramatistandactor)金窩，銀窩，不如自家的草窩。(美國劇作家、演員佩恩.J.H.)(3)Homeiswheretheheartis.心之所在，家之所在。(4)Thefamilyisoneofnature'smasterpieces.(GeorgeSantayana,AmericanPhilosopherandpoet)家庭是大自然創(chuàng)造的杰作之一。(美國哲學(xué)家、詩人桑塔亞那.G.)(5)Asthenewyearbegins,letusalsostartanew一元復(fù)始，萬象更新Whenwetalkaboutafestival,wecantalkabout…ChinesefestivalwhenthingstodothingstoeatfeelingwhyDrawanoutlineforwritingbeginningnameofthefestivalWhenisitcelebrated?EveryyearthereisaSpringFestivalinChina.Itiscelebratedonthefifteenthdayofthefirstlunarmonthoftheyear.Itiscelebratedin/on…ItisatraditionalChinesefestivalcalled…Mid-AutumnFestivalisoneofthemostpopularfestivalsinChina.bodyHowdopeoplecelebrateit?thingstoeat

thingstododumplingszongzitangyuanmooncakesnoodlescleanthehousesmakezongzihavedragonboatraces

admirethemoon

makelanternsguessriddlesgettogethergivebestwishes

sharemooncakeswithrelativesWhatdoesitcelebrate?Itcelebratesthebeginningofnewyear.ThisfestivalisinmemoryofQuYuan,oneofthegreatestChinesepoets.endingWhatdoyouthinkofthefestival?Whydoyoulikeitsomuch?Ithinkitisfunandexciting.Iusuallyhaveagreattimeduringthisfestivalbecauseitmakesmerelaxed.IlikethefestivalverymuchbecauseIcangettogetherandsharehappinesswithmyfamilies.NotonlycanIspendmoretimewithmyfamilies,butIgetmuchluckymoney.Writing在這么多的中國傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日當(dāng)中，你最喜歡哪一個(gè)？請(qǐng)你從中選取你最喜愛的一個(gè)節(jié)日,以”MyfavoriteChinesetraditionalfestival”為題寫一篇80詞左右的說明文。內(nèi)容包括：

1.節(jié)日的名稱和日期

2.人們?cè)趺磻c祝這個(gè)節(jié)日

3.你為什么喜歡這個(gè)節(jié)日MyfavoriteChinesefestivalis…Itiscelebratedin/on…Duringthisfestival,people…It’smyfavoritefestivalbecause…Itmakesmefeel…Thefollowingexpressionscanhelpyou:

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Writing主要人稱：_________主要時(shí)態(tài)：_________體裁：_____________一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)第一人稱說明文開聲朗讀自己的文章，并從結(jié)構(gòu)、人稱、時(shí)態(tài)、字?jǐn)?shù)、拼寫、大小寫、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)等方面進(jìn)行自我修正。自我欣賞與修正Afterwriting用詞方面:代詞主格,賓格；名詞單復(fù)數(shù)；動(dòng)詞搭配；副詞位置句子方面:篇章方面:細(xì)節(jié)方面:句子完整；主謂一致；動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)；連詞使用內(nèi)容完整；要點(diǎn)齊全；布局合理單詞拼寫；標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)；大小寫Check（查一查）Afterwriting

Appreciating&Evaluating欣賞與評(píng)價(jià)①請(qǐng)交換習(xí)作互相欣賞，用紅筆劃出對(duì)方的亮點(diǎn),并對(duì)不足的地方進(jìn)行適當(dāng)修改。②你能給同學(xué)什么建議，使得對(duì)方的習(xí)作更好呢？③根據(jù)worksheet上的評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)，給同伴的習(xí)作打分。Afterwriting我欣賞，我快樂Afterwriting注意：作文通用修改字符：優(yōu)美句子～；漏詞∧；錯(cuò)處○；去掉／;語法錯(cuò)誤G;人稱錯(cuò)誤P;時(shí)態(tài)錯(cuò)誤T

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theMid-AutumnFestival.TheMid-AutumnFestivalisoneofthetraditionalChinesefestivals.ItisoftencelebratedinSeptemberorOctober.Itissaid,“Eastofwest,homeisthebest.”Mid-AutumnFestivalisthedayforreunion.Onthatday,familymembersgettogetherandhaveabigmeal.Afterdinner,theywilleatfruitsandmooncakes,enjoyingthefullmooninthedarksky.

IlikeMid-AutumnFestivalbecauseIcanmeetallmycousinsandplaywiththem.AndIlikethosedeliciousmooncakes,too!文章脈絡(luò)清晰，開頭就點(diǎn)明喜歡的節(jié)日及其日期。詞塊oneof和被動(dòng)語態(tài)becelebrated使用恰當(dāng)，語句簡短，內(nèi)容豐富。第二段講述該節(jié)日人們的活動(dòng)時(shí)引用了諺語，突顯了中秋節(jié)團(tuán)圓的意味，升華了主題情感。

使用了名詞詞組“thedayforreunion”，動(dòng)名詞“enjoining”做伴隨狀語，以及“because”等原因狀語從句都使得文章語言更靈動(dòng)豐富。MyfavoriteChinesefestivalChinahasmanytraditionalfestivalsamongtheyear.TheSpringFestivalismyfavorite.Itfallsonthe1stdayofthe1stlunarmonth.

BeforetheSpringFestival,myfamilyusuallycleananddecoratethehouse,buynewclothesandputupSpringFestivalcouplets.Wearesobusy.DuringtheFestival,wehavealotof