譯林英語(yǔ)必修3Unit3Narration-Writing-課堂課件(21張)

NarrationWriting學(xué)習(xí)目標(biāo)1.了解寫(xiě)作的重要性2.掌握記敘文寫(xiě)作的要點(diǎn)3.實(shí)戰(zhàn)演練

高分英語(yǔ)的特性一、條理性：段落完整，層次分明。二、流暢性：文章層次清晰，行文連貫。常用關(guān)聯(lián)詞。三、間接性：語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)潔，不重復(fù)，不啰嗦。四、多樣性：詞語(yǔ)豐富，句式結(jié)構(gòu)多變。小詞語(yǔ)原則，狀語(yǔ)提前原則，短語(yǔ)優(yōu)先原則，并列句/特殊句式原則，長(zhǎng)短句交替原則和整潔分段原則。五、準(zhǔn)確性：語(yǔ)法正確，時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)、用詞和句法等。避免拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤。六：思想性：文章立意要高。1.外在美觀2.結(jié)構(gòu)明了3.用詞高級(jí)4.句式精彩5.過(guò)渡自然Whatisnarration?

Narrationisaboutaseriesofeventsrelatedtopersonalexperience.Elementsofnarrationwhatwhenwherewhowhyhow行文結(jié)構(gòu)1.Thebeginning:開(kāi)門(mén)見(jiàn)山地交代時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、人物等

a.Theotherday,whenIwasonmywaytoschool,Imet...b.Iwillneverforgetthedaywhenmymotherwaswaitingformeintherain.

2.Thebody:

詳述故事經(jīng)過(guò)，包括起因、發(fā)展、高潮、結(jié)果等

a.Theybothlookedworried,andthenIwenttohelpthem.b.Atthatmoment,sheappearedatthedoor...3.Theending:

總結(jié)全文，發(fā)表感想。a.Hearingthis,allofusweremovedtotears.b.IwasverygladthatIhadhelpedtheminEnglish.c.Ittaughtmewhatrealloveis.記敘文的寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)：1.時(shí)態(tài)：過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)，動(dòng)詞富于變化。2.人稱(chēng)：第一人稱(chēng)：敘述者親眼所見(jiàn)的經(jīng)歷。第三人稱(chēng)：不受“我”活動(dòng)范圍以類(lèi)的人或事物的限制3.順序：時(shí)間順序（順序和倒敘）4.敘述的過(guò)度：關(guān)聯(lián)詞5.敘述與對(duì)話(huà)：記敘文的基本要領(lǐng)1.頭緒分明，脈絡(luò)清楚：對(duì)六要素構(gòu)思2.突出中心，詳略得當(dāng)：分清主次，定好詳略3.用活語(yǔ)言，準(zhǔn)確生動(dòng)：Whatimpressedmemostisthat…令我印象最深刻的是Amongvariouskindsofexperiences/personsinmymind,…isthemostunforgettableone.在我腦海里的各種經(jīng)歷/人中，。。。是最令人難忘的。1.Mychildhoodmemorywascolorfulandeverythinginmychildhoodmemorywasfullofsmilesandencouragement.開(kāi)頭常用語(yǔ)：2.Thereisasayingthat,’’Yesterdayisahistorywithplentyofbeautifulandunforgettablememories.’’我的童年多彩斑斕，我童年里的一切都充滿(mǎn)了微笑和鼓勵(lì)。Through

this

experience/Afterthat,I

understand

no

matter

what

we

face（無(wú)論我們面對(duì)什么）,

we

should

try

our

best

to

deal

with

it

withoutgivingup.As

long

as

we

believe

ourselves,

we’re

sure

to

succeed

in

the

end.

Tosumup,thoughI’mneverachildanymore,IstillmissmychildhoodandI’mwillingtokeepitinmymindforever.WhenIwasalone,Icouldn’thelpthinkingoftheexperience.Ilearnedalotfromit.結(jié)尾常用語(yǔ)譯林英語(yǔ)必修3Unit3NarrationWritingPPT課堂課件(21頁(yè))-精品PPT課件譯林英語(yǔ)必修3Unit3NarrationWritingPPT課堂課件(21頁(yè))-精品PPT課件1、幾天前theotherday;severaldaysagotwohourslater2、使人感到意外toone’ssurprise3、就在這時(shí)atthatmoment;atthattime常用關(guān)聯(lián)詞譯林英語(yǔ)必修3Unit3NarrationWritingPPT課堂課件(21頁(yè))-精品PPT課件譯林英語(yǔ)必修3Unit3NarrationWritingPPT課堂課件(21頁(yè))-精品PPT課件①副詞：suddenly,unfortunately,luckily,immediatelyasaresult……

Whatwasworse②so/such…that…譯林英語(yǔ)必修3Unit3NarrationWritingPPT課堂課件(21頁(yè))-精品PPT課件譯林英語(yǔ)必修3Unit3NarrationWritingPPT課堂課件(21頁(yè))-精品PPT課件

根據(jù)下列圖畫(huà)中Tom騎自行車(chē)的經(jīng)歷，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇故事。短文要寫(xiě)得連貫、完整。Sample1譯林英語(yǔ)必修3Unit3NarrationWritingPPT課堂課件(21頁(yè))-精品PPT課件譯林英語(yǔ)必修3Unit3NarrationWritingPPT課堂課件(21頁(yè))-精品PPT課件Tom/rideabikeAlongthestreet/roadAfewdaysago/theotherday/oneday2.Gooverthepictures（who,what,where,when,why,how)譯林英語(yǔ)必修3Unit3NarrationWritingPPT課堂課件(21頁(yè))-精品PPT課件譯林英語(yǔ)必修3Unit3NarrationWritingPPT課堂課件(21頁(yè))-精品PPT課件Acar/runfastto/runintohimTom/falloffhisbikeSuddenly

2.Gooverthepictures（who,what,where,when,why,how)譯林英語(yǔ)必修3Unit3NarrationWritingPPT課堂課件(21頁(yè))-精品PPT課件譯林英語(yǔ)必修3Unit3NarrationWritingPPT課堂課件(21頁(yè))-精品PPT課件Thedriver/frightened/runaway2.Gooverthepictures（who,what,where,when,why,how)譯林英語(yǔ)必修3Unit3NarrationWritingPPT課堂課件(21頁(yè))-精品PPT課件譯林英語(yǔ)必修3Unit3NarrationWritingPPT課堂課件(21頁(yè))-精品PPT課件Awoman/rememberthenumberofthecarThepoliceThedriver/catch2.Gooverthepictures（who,what,where,when,why,how)譯林英語(yǔ)必修3Unit3NarrationWritingPPT課堂課件(21頁(yè))-精品PPT課件譯林英語(yǔ)必修3Unit3NarrationWritingPPT課堂課件(21頁(yè))-精品PPT課件KeywordssentencesAwomansawtheaccidentandrememberedthenumberofthecar.Shecalledthepolice.Thedriverwascaught.rideabike/runfasttoseetheaccident/rememberthenumber/callthepolice/becaughtbefrightened/runawayhithim/falloffhisbikeWhenTomwasridingalongthestreet.Acarranfasttohim.Thecarhithim.Andhefelloffhisbike.Thedriverwassofrightenedthatheranaway.譯林英語(yǔ)必修3Unit3NarrationWritingPPT課堂課件(21頁(yè))-精品PPT課件譯林英語(yǔ)必修3Unit3NarrationWritingPPT課堂課件(21頁(yè))-精品PPT課件

Theotherday,Tomwasridingalongthestreet

when

hesawacarrunfasttowardshim.Heturnedleftquicklybutitwastoolate.

Thecarhithimandhefelloffhisbike.Thedriverofthecarwas

so

frightened

that

heranawayasfastashecould.Hewassoonoutofsight,leavingTomhelplessonthespot.

Fortunately,awoman

happenedtoseeit

and

rememberedthenumberofthecar.Shecalledthepoliceman

andtoldhimwhathadhappened.Finally,

thedriverwascaught

andpunishedforhiswrongdoing.Passage2

譯林英語(yǔ)必修3Unit3NarrationWritingPPT課堂課件(21頁(yè))-精品PPT課件譯林英語(yǔ)必修3Unit3NarrationWritingPPT課堂課件(21頁(yè))-精品PPT課件精品習(xí)作1一對(duì)外發(fā)行的英文報(bào)紙有“人物剪影”欄目，請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面的提示寫(xiě)一篇短文，介紹我國(guó)著名乒乓球運(yùn)動(dòng)員王楠。提示：1.王楠：1978年10月出生于遼寧。2.身高1.62米，體重54公斤。3.7歲開(kāi)始打球，19