17級高一下第一次月考作文

寫作一：(15分)請結(jié)合材料，按要求用英文寫作。AreportshowsthatChinahasover300millionsmokers，thehighestintheworld，withtherateofteenagesmokersincreasingeveryyear．要求：1．就此材料發(fā)表你的看法；2．緊扣材料，有明確的觀點(diǎn)；3．詞數(shù)不少于60；4．在答題卡上作答。試題分析：本文是一篇材料作文，在寫作時首先應(yīng)該先用一句話來總述材料內(nèi)容，即中國是世界上吸煙最多的國家，而且青少年吸煙的人數(shù)也在增加。然后就材料發(fā)表看法，此時應(yīng)該先提出吸煙的危害theharmofsmoking,可以使用的短語有doharmto,beharmfulto,ruinone’shealth等。接下來要表達(dá)作者自己的觀點(diǎn)，也就是要戒煙，改掉吸煙的壞習(xí)慣，可以使用的短語有kickthehabitof、quitsmoking,giveupsmoking等。另外，因?yàn)楸疚氖潜磉_(dá)現(xiàn)狀，所以在寫作時可以使用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)。為了使句子或段落語義連貫，表達(dá)合理準(zhǔn)確，可以適當(dāng)加入一些連接詞語。如表達(dá)轉(zhuǎn)折的but,however,otherwise等，表達(dá)的遞進(jìn)besides,what’smore等，表達(dá)因果so,therefore,asaresult等，有時還需要加入一些必要的過渡句子以達(dá)到承上啟下的效果。Accordingtoareport,Chinahasthelargestnumberofsmokersintheworld,withmoreandmoreteenagersjoiningtherankseveryyear.

Onepossibleversion:Theproblemhasarousedgreatpublicconcern,sincesmokingisresponsibleforthousandsofprematuredeathseveryyearcausedbysmoking-relateddiseases.Itaffectsthehealthofsmokers,andmeanwhilethreatensnon-smokersbyexposingthemtosecondhandsmoke.Therefore,awarenessshouldberaisedabouttherisksofsmoking,andanationwidebanshouldbeissuedonsmokinginpublicplaces.Itishopedthatthroughthesemeasures,fewerpeoplewillfallvictimtocigarettes,andmorewillbeabletoembraceahealthylifefreeofsmoke.寫作二：（20分）假設(shè)你叫李華，是一家英文雜志社的心理咨詢師。某中學(xué)生小王給你寫信，提到自己偏胖，想節(jié)食減肥，征求你的意見。請你給她回一封信，談?wù)勀銓υ搯栴}的見解。內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下：

1．健康比漂亮更重要；2．學(xué)生以學(xué)習(xí)為主，不要過于注重外貌和別人的看法；3．可通過多鍛煉保持健康，要改變不良的飲食習(xí)慣；

4．健康的心態(tài)也很重要。

注意：

1．短文必須包括所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；

2．詞數(shù)：80左右。

3．參考詞匯：state

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