讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)：雪中救馬講義-2024屆高三英語(yǔ)一輪復(fù)習(xí)

讀后續(xù)寫(xiě):雪中救馬閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫(xiě)兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。Benracedoutofschool.Christmasholidays!Whenhegothome,hewenttocheckonhispony,Scout.Heslippedhimacandy,andScoutnuzzled（用口鼻輕擦）hisshoulder.BenstartedtowardthehouseandfoundhisolderbrotherJackstartingthesnowmobile（雪地機(jī)動(dòng)車(chē)）todelivergastoUncleMike.Benjumpedonthebackandjoinedhim.Theysetoffslowly.Thesnowwasfreshanddeepontheremotemountainpath.Whentheyarrived,Jackwentoverwiththegascan.Benlookedupthemountainandsawsomethingmoving.Hegotbinoculars（望遠(yuǎn)鏡）andsawtwoanimals.Coulditbeahorse?JackclimbedbackonthesnowmobileandaskedBentoleave.WhenBentoldJackhesawhorsesupinthesnowytrees,Jackdidn'tbelieveit.Benlookedbackupthemountain,buthecouldn'tseeanything.AtdinnerBentoldhisfatherhesawtwohorsesuponthemountaintoday.tulftheyarchorses,theymustbetrappedbyallthissnow."saidhisdad.nIfthey'retrapped,wehavetodosomething,'1saidBen,hisvoicerising.HisdadlookedatJack."Well,inthemorninggoandtakealook.Takethegunandsomehay（干草）.Iftheylookasiftheycansurvive,thatway.HegaveScoutsomeoatsandstrokedhisnose.Hetriedagain,andthistimeScoutfollowednervously.Whentheyarrivedatthetop,Jacksaid,uOhno,Ihopewedon'thavethreehorsesstuckuphere.^^Ben'sheartfroze,butheledScoutovertothehorses.Theysniffedandnickeredgentlyateachother.BenturnedaroundandledScouttowardthelong,narrowtrenchinthesnow."FollowmeJhesaidurgently.DadandJackquicklymovedbehindScoutwiththehorses,andScout,afterabitofhesitation,starteddownthetunnel.Benheldhisbreath.Hecouldn'ttelliftheothershadfollowed.Thenheheardanothershortcheerandknewitwasworking.Whentheyfinallyreachedthebottom,therewasacrowdtheretogreetthem,wavingandsmilingfromtheirsnowmobiles."Wedidit,Scout!,,saidBen,pattinghispony."Wealldidittogether!杰克繞著馬走著。"嗯，〃杰克嘆了口氣說(shuō)，拿起步槍。〃我想我最好用這個(gè)。沒(méi)有辦法讓他們從雪地里下來(lái)。他們看起來(lái)很糟糕?！āú唬〔?本說(shuō)。有一匹馬轉(zhuǎn)過(guò)身來(lái)，看著他，輕輕地叫了一聲。"我們應(yīng)該試試，〃本懇求道?！ㄎ覀?cè)趺粗浪鼈兊降子卸嘣愀?〃爸爸可以去找獸醫(yī)!〃嗯,我不知道，〃杰克慢慢地說(shuō)。他又繞著馬走了一圈。他拍了拍那只棕色的大貓的脖子。它發(fā)出一種悲傷的、微小的呻吟聲。〃也許你是對(duì)的?！ㄋ隙ú幌霘⒘诉@些馬。本迅速地把干草從雪地摩托的后面拿下來(lái)，堆成一堆。馬吃得很餓，本把水倒進(jìn)桶里給它們。每匹馬又拍了一下，杰克和本爬上雪地摩托，以最快的速度駛下山去報(bào)告他們的消息。回到家里，一家人匆忙地開(kāi)了個(gè)會(huì)?！ㄎ覀?cè)趺床拍馨阉鼈兣聛?lái)呢?〃他們的媽媽問(wèn)。“也許我們可以找架直升機(jī)把他們抬出來(lái)，〃杰克說(shuō)。爸爸搖了搖頭?！ㄋ麄兛赡軙?huì)摔斷腿?！ㄈ绻覀儼阉鼈兎旁谝粋€(gè)大雪橇上呢?〃母親說(shuō)?！ㄎ也恢牢覀?cè)趺床拍馨涯敲创蟮难┣僚先?，〃爸爸說(shuō)?！ㄎ艺J(rèn)為最仁慈的做法就是讓他們擺脫痛苦。〃〃不!本說(shuō)，〃那我們只需要鏟一條小路或者挖一條隧道?！ㄋ母改笓P(yáng)起了眉毛?！鞘且欢魏荛L(zhǎng)的路，還有很多雪。"我不知道能不能做到，"爸爸說(shuō),〃除非我們有很多人來(lái)鏟?！ū究吹贸鰜?lái)他對(duì)這個(gè)主意很感興趣?！ㄎ覀儠?huì)找到的!〃本說(shuō)。他抓起外套和靴子?！▉?lái)吧，杰克，我們走!〃杰克疑惑地看著他爸爸。”也許有可能，〃爸爸說(shuō)?！ㄖ档靡辉?，我想。〃但他聽(tīng)起來(lái)并不充滿希望。兩兄弟挨家挨戶地請(qǐng)大家來(lái)幫忙。他們?nèi)チ宋褰鸬旰图佑驼?。他們?cè)陔s貨店和圖書(shū)館張貼了告示。他們?nèi)チ算y行和旅館。然后，他們帶著更多的干草、水和一些暖和的毯子，開(kāi)著雪地摩托回到了山上。馬兒們似乎很高興見(jiàn)到他們。本口袋里還有燕麥和方糖給斯各特，他給了他們一些。本和杰克開(kāi)始鏟土。他們工作了幾個(gè)小時(shí)，但只在雪地上挖了一個(gè)小坑?！](méi)希望了，〃杰克說(shuō)。他倚在鏟子上，擦了擦淌著水的鼻子?！ㄎ覀兓丶野伞](méi)人會(huì)幫忙的?！拔覀儾荒芊艞墸ū菊f(shuō)。但他的手指凍僵了，鼻子也麻木了。突然，一群摩托雪橇手帶著鐵鍬和熱巧克力來(lái)了。他們順著本和杰克的足跡走到了小路上。〃好了，孩子們，〃他們說(shuō)?！ㄐ菹⒁幌?。還有更多的人來(lái)了!”在接下來(lái)的一個(gè)星期里，人們每天都來(lái)鏟土，一條又深又窄的溝慢慢地挖下山來(lái)?？斓绞フQ節(jié)了，但沒(méi)有人有時(shí)間去想這個(gè)問(wèn)題。杰克和本每天都去喂馬、給馬喝水、和馬說(shuō)話。到了第七天，他們知道自己快要成功了。杰克和爸爸很早就開(kāi)著雪地摩托出發(fā)了，所以本決定騎著他的小馬去山上。當(dāng)他到達(dá)底部時(shí)，他把斯各特綁在一棵樹(shù)上聽(tīng)著。他能聽(tīng)到低沉的說(shuō)話聲和鐵鍬的聲音。幾分鐘后，響起了一陣歡呼聲，兩個(gè)拿著鐵鍬的人在底部鏟雪。每個(gè)人都在慶祝，互相擁抱。有些人用手機(jī)打電話給他們認(rèn)識(shí)的每個(gè)人。本笑得合不攏嘴，給了斯各特一個(gè)大大的擁抱。然后他以最快的速度穿過(guò)隧道來(lái)到空地上。爸爸給每匹馬套上籠頭，他和杰克開(kāi)始牽著馬穿過(guò)隧道。但是第一匹馬不肯走!它很害怕:我很害怕，〃爸爸說(shuō)。然后他們?cè)嚵肆硪黄ヱR。同樣的事情發(fā)生了。本給受驚的馬一些胡蘿卜。他們還是不動(dòng)。〃我知道!本說(shuō)。〃我去叫斯各特!〃他跑下隧道，找到斯各特。斯各特對(duì)進(jìn)入隧道很不高興。他停了下來(lái)，拒絕移動(dòng)。〃加油，斯各特，你能做到的，〃本說(shuō)。他跑了那么遠(yuǎn)，上氣不接下氣，氣喘吁吁。他給斯各特一些燕麥，撫摸著他的鼻子。他又試了一次，這次斯各特緊張地跟在后面。當(dāng)他們到達(dá)山頂時(shí)，杰克說(shuō):〃哦，不，我希望我們沒(méi)有被三匹馬卡在這里?！ū镜男亩冀┳×?，但他還是領(lǐng)著斯各特向馬走去。他們互相嗅著鼻子，輕輕地竊竊私語(yǔ)。本轉(zhuǎn)過(guò)身，領(lǐng)著斯各特朝雪地里那條又長(zhǎng)又窄的溝走去。〃跟我來(lái)。"他急切地說(shuō)。爸爸和杰克迅速趕著馬跟在斯各特后面，斯各特猶豫了一會(huì)兒，開(kāi)始沿著隧道往下走。本屏住了呼吸。他不知道其他人是否跟著來(lái)了。接著，他又聽(tīng)到一陣短促的歡呼聲，知道這招起作用了。當(dāng)他們終于到達(dá)谷底時(shí)，有一群人在那里迎接他們，他們從雪地摩托上揮手微笑。〃我們成功了，斯各特!〃本拍拍他的小馬說(shuō)?！ㄎ覀兌际且黄鹱龅?〃givethemthehay.Ifnot..."Jacklookedserious,andslowlynodded.Benknewwhatthegunwasfor,andhischestwentcold.Inthemorning,theysetoffinthecoldsnow.WhentheygottotheplacewhereBenhadseenthehorses,theystoppedandlookedupusingbinoculars.Nohorses.Theywaitedforafewminutes.'Iseethem.They'rehorses.Let'stakethesnowmobileupthere."Bensuddenlyexclaimed.Theydrovethesnowmobileinthedeepsnowandfinallyreachedtheplace."Ohno!'*saidBen"They'restarving!nOneofthehorseshadlostalotofhair,andtheirtailswerealmostgone.Theireyeswerelifelessandtired.注意：.續(xù)寫(xiě)詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Paragraph1:Jackwalkedaroundthehorses.Paragraph2:Thetwobrotherswentfromdoortodooraskingeveryonetocomeandhelp.范文：Jackwalkedaroundthehorses."Well,”saidJack,sighing,pickingupthegun.nIguessIbetterusethis.^^"No!Weshouldatleasttry!"pleadedBen,strokingthehorsesgently.Jackwalkedaroundthehorsesagain.Hepattedoneofthemontheneck.Itmadeasad,smallgroaningsound,"Maybeyou'reright."Hesuredidn'twanttohavetoshootthesehorses.Benquicklygotthehayandspreaditaroundinpiles.Thehorsesatehungrily.Withonemorepattoeachhorse.JackandBenclimbedonthesnowmobileanddrovebackdownthemountainasquicklyastheycouldtoreporttheirnews.Backathomethefamilyhadahurriedmeeting.Afterdiscussingallkindsofpossiblewaystoputthehorsesoutoftheirmisery,theyfinallydecidedtoshovelatunnel.Thetwobrotherswentfromdoortodooraskingeveryonetocomeandhelp.Theyevenputnoticesupinthestreets.Thentheytookthesnowmobilebackupthemountainwithmorehayandwaterandsomewarmblankets.Thehorsesseemedhappytoseethem.BenandJackstartedshovelingwiththeirfingersfrozenandnosesnumb.Fortunately,soonagroupofsnowmobilersarrived.Forthenextweek,peoplecameandshoveledeveryday,andadeep,narrowtrenchveryslowlyworkeditswaydownthemountain.JackandBenwenteverydaytofeedandwaterandtalktothehorses.Whenthebigdaycame,BenandJackmanagedtoleadthehorsesdownthelong,narrowtunnel.Everyonewascelebratingandhuggingeachother.Bengrinnedfromeartoearandgavethehorsesabighug.杰克繞著馬走著?！ㄠ?，〃杰克嘆了口氣說(shuō)，拿起槍。“我想我最好用這個(gè)?！āú?我們至少應(yīng)該試一試!〃本懇求道，輕輕地?fù)崦R。杰克又繞著馬走了一圈。他拍拍其中一個(gè)的脖子。它發(fā)出一種悲傷的、輕微的呻吟聲，〃也許你是對(duì)的?！ㄋ隙ú幌霘⒘诉@些馬。本很快把干草撿起來(lái)，堆在地上。馬吃得很餓。每匹馬再拍一下。杰克和本爬上雪地摩托，以最快的速度開(kāi)車(chē)下山去報(bào)道他們的消息。回到家里,一家人匆忙地開(kāi)了個(gè)會(huì)。在討論了各種可能讓馬擺脫痛苦的方法后,他們最終決定挖一條隧道。兩兄弟挨家挨戶地請(qǐng)大家來(lái)幫忙。他們甚至在街上張貼告示。然后，他們帶著更多的干草、水和一些暖和的毯子，開(kāi)著雪地摩托回到了山上。馬兒們似乎很高興見(jiàn)到他們。本和杰克開(kāi)始鏟土，他們的手指凍僵了，鼻子麻木了。幸運(yùn)的是，很快就來(lái)了一群雪地摩托。在接下來(lái)的一個(gè)星期里，人們每天都來(lái)鏟土，一條又深又窄的溝慢慢地挖下山來(lái)。杰克和本每天都去喂馬、給馬喝水、和馬說(shuō)話。當(dāng)大日子到來(lái)的時(shí)候，本和杰克設(shè)法牽著馬穿過(guò)又長(zhǎng)又窄的隧道。每個(gè)人都在慶祝，互相擁抱。本笑得合不攏嘴，給了馬一個(gè)大大的擁抱。原文Benracedoutofschool.Twoweeksofholidays!Christmaswasalmosthere.Hejumpedoverpilesofsnowontheroadandsliddownatobogganruninthepark.Whenhegothome,hewentintothebarntocheckonhispony,Scout.Heslippedhimasugarcubefromhispocket,andScoutnuzzledhisshoulder.BenstartedtowardthehouseandsawhisolderbrotherJackstartingthesnowmobile."UncleMikejustcalled,9,saidJack.44Heranoutofgasonthebigtrail.Wanttocome?”“Sure!”saidBen.Hezippedintothehouse,pulledonhiscold-weathergear,heavyboots,helmet,andgoggles,andhoppedontheback.Theysetoffslowly.Thesnowwasfreshanddeepontheremotemountainpath.WhentheygottoUncleMike'ssnowmobile,Jackwentoverwiththegascan.Benputonhisthickwoolhatandwalkedupanddowntokeepwarm.Helookedupthemountainandsawsomethingmoving.Maybeitwasadeer.Helookedagain.Wasitamoose?Hewentbacktothesnowmobiletogetthebinoculars.Nowhecouldseethereweretwoanimals.Onehadawhitespotonitsforehead.Coulditbeahorse?Wayupthereinthesnow?Jackclimbedbackonthesnowmobile.HegaveUncleMikeawave,andsaid,"Let'sgo,Ben.I'mfreezingl^Bensaid,“Ithinktherearehorsesupthere!”Hepointeduptothesnowytrees.ttWhat!,^saidJack."Noway.Mustbemoose.Lefsgo."Benlookedbackupthemountain,buthecouldn'tseeanything.Hewassuretheywerehorses.HeslowlysatbehindJack.AtdinnerBensaid,“Isawtwohorsesuponthemountaintoday.vHisfatherstoppedeatinghisstew.'Tmsure,“saidBenfirmly,“H'm,"saidhisdad."Iftheyarehorses,theymustbetrappedbyallthissnow.Butnoonehastalkedaboutlosinganyhorses.""Ifthey'retrapped,wehavetodosomething,saidBen,hisvoicerising.HisdadlookedatJack."Well,inthemorninggotakealook.Taketherifleandsomehay.Iftheylookasiftheycansurvive,givethemthehay.Ifnot...”Jacklookedgrim,andslowlynodded.Benknewwhatthegunwasfor,andhischestwentcold.Firstthinginthemorning,BenwokeupJack."Let'sgo,lefsgo!”hesaid.Jackwashalfasleep."OK,OK,“hemumbled.64Justletmehavesomecoffee.Theysetoffinthecold,crispsnow.WhentheygottotheplacewhereBenhadseenthehorses,theystoppedandlookedup.Nohorses.Theywaitedforafewminutes.Benstompedupanddowntryingtogetwarmintheminustwenty-fivedegreeweather.Jackbangedhishandstogether."Well,yourhorsesaren'tthere.Let'sgohome!”"Wait,Jack."Benputtwofingersinhismouthandgavetheloudestwhistlehecould.Jackhadtaughthimhowtodoit.”Doitagain,saidJack.Hewhistledatthesametime.Heusedthebinocularsforaminute.“Iseethem.Aheadjustpoppedup.They'rehorsesallright.Ithinkthey'reatthetopoftheoldhikingroad.Let'strytotakethesnowmobileupthatway.”Theystartedup.Thesnowmobilesankabitinthedeepsnow,buttheykeptgoing.Atlasttheyreachedtheclearingwherethehorsesstood.4<Ohno!”saidBen."They'restarving!Lookattheirribs.”O(jiān)neofthehorseshadlostalotofhair,andtheirtailswerealmostgone.Theireyeswerelifelessandtired.Jackwalkedaroundthehorses."Well,“saidJack,sighing,pickinguptherifle."IguessIbetterusethis.There'snowaytogetthemdownthroughthesnow.Andtheylookprettybad."“No!No!”saidBen.Onehorseturnedandlookedathimandmadeasoftlittlenoise.“Weshouldtry,“pleadedBen."Howdoweknowhowbadtheyreallyare?Dadcangetthevet!”"Well,Idon'tknow,“saidJackslowly.Hewalkedaroundthehorsesagain.Hepattedthebigbrownoneontheneck.Itmadeasad,smallgroaningsound."Maybeyou'reright."Hesuredidn'twanttohavetoshootthesehorses.Benquicklygotthehayoffthebackofthesnowmobileandspreaditaroundinpiles.Thehorsesatehungrily,andBenpouredwaterintoapailforthem.Withonemorepattoeachhorse,JackandBenclimbedonthesnowmobileanddrovebackdownthemountainasquicklyastheycouldtoreporttheirnews.Backathomethefamilyhadahurriedmeeting.t€Howwillweevergetthemdown?^^theirmotherasked."Maybewecouldgetahelicoptertoliftthemout,“saidJack.Dadshookhishead."They'dprobablybreaktheirlegslanding.”“Whatifweputthemonabigsled?”Momsaid.UIdon'tknowhowwecouldgetasledthatbigupthere,Dadsaid,"Ithinkthekindestthingtodoistoputthemoutoftheirmisery.""No!"saidBen,"We'lljusthavetoshovelapathortunnelthen.^^Hisparentsraisedtheireyebrows."That'salongway,andalotofsnow.Idon'tknowifitcanbedone,“Dadsaid,“unlesswehaveanawfullotofpeopleshoveling.Bencouldseehewaswanningtotheidea.uWc,llfindsome!”saidBen.Hegrabbedhiscoatandboots.uComeon,Jack,let'sgo!”Jacklookedquestioninglyathisdad."Itmightbepossible,Dadsaid."Worthatry,Iguess.”Buthedidn'tsoundhopeful.Thetwobrotherswentfromdoortodooraskingeveryonetocomeandhelp.Theywenttothehardwarestoreandthegasstation.Theyputnoticesupinthegrocerystoreandthelibrary.Theywenttothebankandthehotel.Thentheytookthesnowmobilebackupthemountainwithmorehayandwaterandsomewarmblankets.Thehorsesseemedhappytoseethem.BenstillhadoatsandsugarcubesinhispocketforScout,andhegavethemsome.BenandJackstartedshoveling.Theyworkedforhoursbutonlymadeasmalldentinthesnow."Thisishopeless,saidJack.Heleanedonhisshovelandwipedhisdrippingnose."Let'sgohome.Nooneisgoingtohelp.”“Wccan'tgiveup,“saidBen.Buthisfingerswerefrozen,andhisnosefeltnumb.Suddenly,agroupofsnowmobilersarrivedwithshovelsandhotchocolate.TheyhadfollowedBenandJack'stracksupthetrail.UOK,boys,^^theysaid.uTakeabreak.Therearemorecoming!”Forthenextwe