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寫作技巧點撥系列(二)掌握四種并列關系,并列句變得更輕易1/16【句式提煉】1.(·四川高考)Keepitinmind,andgraduallywecangainthisgoodlearninghabitandbenefitfromit.記住它,我們會逐步掌握這種好學習習慣,并從中受益。分析:and為并列連詞,連接前后句子,表示同等關系。2/162.(·遼寧高考)Usually,nomatterhowfarawayorhowbusyweare,wewilltrytocomehomeforthecelebration.通常,不論我們距離多遠或者我們多么忙,我們將會設法回家慶賀。分析:or連接前后句子表示選擇,為選擇關系連詞。3/163.(·湖南高考)IbegantolearnEnglishveryhard,whichwashardwork,butIenjoyedit.我開始努力學習英語,即使很辛勞,但我喜歡。分析:but連接前后句子是表示轉折意義并列連詞。4/164.(·全國卷Ⅱ)Asweallknow,Chineseknotsmeanreunion,friendliness,warmth,peaceandlove,soIthinktheywillsellwell.正如我們所知,中國結意味著團聚、友好、溫暖、和平和愛,所以我想它們會賣得好。分析:so連接前后兩個表示因果關系句子,意思為“所以,結果”,為因果關系并列連詞。5/16【關鍵點撥】1.并列句定義由并列連詞連接兩個或兩個以上獨立句子就是并列句。其句式特點為:句子之間用逗號+連詞或分號隔開或經過句意來表達。6/162.并列連詞分類:(1)同等關系:慣用and,notonly...butalso...,both...and...,aswellas,then,when(就在這時)等。HeisinClassOneandIaminClassTwo.他在一班,我在二班。7/16(2)選擇關系:慣用or,otherwise,either...or...,neither...nor等。Eitheryoufollowmyinstructionsoryouleavehere.要么你遵從我指示,要么你離開這兒。(3)轉折關系:慣用but,still,yet,while等。ShethoughtIwastalkingaboutherdaughter,while,infact,Iwastalkingaboutmydaughter.她認為我在談她女兒,可是,實際上我在談我女兒。8/16(4)因果關系:慣用so,for等。Peterwenttobedearly,forhefeltverytired.彼得早早就睡覺了,因為他感到非常疲乏。9/163.尤其提醒:(1)“祈使句+and/or(otherwise)+簡單句”也是并列句一個,or在此意為“不然”。GivemeonemoreminuteorIwon’tbeabletofinishit.再多給我一分鐘,不然我不能完成它。10/16(2)notonly...butalso連接并列句,當notonly置于句首時,其后句子通常要用部分倒裝形式。Notonlyhasshebeenlatethreetimes,butalsoshehasdonenowork.她不但僅遲到了三次,她還沒干一點活。(3)并列句有時也可不用并列連詞連接,而用分號(;)連接。Thefutureisbright;theroadistortuous.前途是光明,道路是波折。11/16【對點訓練】Ⅰ.用適當連詞填空1.Hedoesn’ttalkmuch,___hethinksalot.2.Onemoreweek,____wewillfinishthetask.3.Tomhadaheadache,__hedidn’tgototheparty.4.LiFangisverybusy,___she’salwayshelpingotherswiththeirlessons.5.Let’sturntoUncleWangforhelp,___ourworkcan’tbefinishedontime.

butandsobutfor12/16Ⅱ.用適當并列連詞變換句型1.Ifyoudon’tgetupnow,you’llbelateforwork.→_________________________________2.Heisapoet.Heisalsoawriter.→_____________________→_________________________________Getupnow,oryou’llbelateforwork.Heisapoetandwriter.Heisnotonlyapoetbutalsoawriter.13/163.HeiswatchingTV.I’mreadingthenewspaper.→_____________________________________________4.Shecan’tfinishthetaskontimeandnorcanI.→______________________________________5.Runfast.Youwillbecaughtupwith.→__________________________________Heiswatchi