浙江高級(jí)英語3 28講稿writing

WritingGooddictionBalancedstructurecreativeideaDiction

Howtopickupproperandaccuratewords?1.connotation:

走We____aroundtheparkhandinhandforanhouralso.Angrily,Sheturnedand_____off.Despitethewindandtherain,they_____onuntiltheyreachedthecottage.批評(píng)Peoplearealways_____theircircumstancesforwhattheyare.Thecriticroundly____thenovel.殺Twopeoplewere_____inacaraccident.MartinLutherKingwas_____byawhitepeople.MaJiajueislikelytobe____asamurdererthisyear.Theycruelly_____allthepeopleinthevillage.Accordingtothepolicehe___hisrivalincoldblood.ConnotationDenotationChinaismy____.Chinese/Chinaisapeace-loving____.InChina,therailwaysareownedbythe_____.2.Collocation____aquestion______oneresignation_____aproof____asuggestion______anapplication_____awarning渡過難關(guān)______one'sdifficulties一張500美元的支票國(guó)內(nèi)市場(chǎng)內(nèi)政交通擁擠天氣很冷/天氣很熱大HeavyrainAlargeamountof…Alargenumberof…greatcourage/confidence/ability/wisdomBigproblem/house3.context

生意興隆通四海，財(cái)源茂盛達(dá)三江Farandwidetradebooms；hereandtheremoneycomes

Homeandabroadbusinessthrives；hitherandthitherprofitarrives

4.culture

Aspooras____AsstupidasAspureasAsbusyas害群之馬Howtomakeyoursentencesmoreeffective?1.Donotusetoomuch“be”or“therebe”Thetreesarebare.Thegrassisbrown.Thelandscapeseemsdrab.Theteammembersaregoodplayers.Thereare4peopleinthedorm.2.UsemoreconcretewordsLaugh:SmileGrinBeamGiggleTittersniggerChuckleChortleguffawWalkRunStrollTreadpaceStrideMarchParadeWander/roamSheisacarefulshopper.Shecomparespricesandquality.Sheisbeautiful.3.UsepairedwordsWeshouldservethepeopleheartandsoul.Themissingchildcamebacksafeandsound.Afterthefight,hewasblackandblueallover.twistandturn迂回曲折mightandmain盡全力partandparcel重要部分

timeandtide歲月，時(shí)光lawandorder秩序

gotorackandruin陷于毀滅slowandsure慢而穩(wěn)，穩(wěn)妥haleandhearty老當(dāng)益壯

chopandchange變幻莫測(cè)（尤指觀點(diǎn),計(jì)劃等）fairandfoul在任何情況下wealandwoe福禍

forgiveandforget不念舊惡waxandwane（月的）盈虧圓缺；盛衰moveheavenandearth不遺余力pompandceremony盛典

rainorshine不論如何(fight)toothandnail全力以赴treatortrick不給甜頭就有好看的factsandfigures

確鑿的事實(shí)hugsandkisses熱情歡迎insandouts來龍去脈oddsandends零零星星

UsecomplexsentenceItisagoodwayforthosewhoarebusywithworkalldaytorelaxandenjoythepleasurelifeoffersthem.Menarebig,strongandaggressive,whilewomenarephysicallyinferior,andmentallyintimate.

John’sloveforJellyhasdeepermeanings.Heescharmedbyescapinghisownpast.John’sobsessionwithJellyhasdeeperimplications.Heesobsessedwithescapinghisownpast.John’sobsessionwithJellyeventuallytranslatesintoayearningtoescapehisownpast.MyfavoriteauthorisLuXun.Heisafamousauthor.Hewasborninarichfamily.Hisgrandfatherwasagovernmentofficialandhisfatherwasafull-knowledgeman.Hismotherwasakindwoman.Sheinfluencedhimverymuch.UserhetoricinyourwritingcontrastManypeoplewillsoonfindthemselvesrichingoods,butraggedinspirit.Theadvantagesoutweighthedisadvantages.Itwillhavebothnegativeandpositiveeffectsbysodoing.Wehavefriendssimilartousandfriendsdifferentfromus.ParallelconstructionReadingmakesuswisewhileexercisesmakeusstrong.We’llpayanyprice,bearanyburdenandendureanyhardshiptohelpyou.RepetitionWelongforsuccessandweareworkinghardforsuccess.InvertedsentenceNowoncomingtousistheneweraofreformfullofventuresandchances.similemetaphorMylifeisonelongcurve,fullofturningpoints.Hopeisthepoorman'sbread.MetonymyHaveyoueverreadShakespearSwordandcrossinhand,theEuropeanconquerorsfellupontheAmericas.Whenthewarwasover,helaiddowntheswordandtookupthepen.SynecdocheThefarmswereshortofhandsduringtheharvestseason.Greatmindsthinkalike.personificationAgreatmisfortunecreptoverthewholecity.hyperbole/overstatementHerbeautymakesthebrightworddim.AlliterationProudasapeacockBlindasabatDiewithdignityWorldwildwatchSuccessandsurvivaloflibertyLeadthelandweloveThenextday,IwenttotheYigaoDigitalPlaza.TthoughtIshouldfindajobinacomputerstore.Iwentintoastore.AfterItoldthebosswhyIcameto,hesmiledtomeandsaidhewouldarrangeajobforme.Thejobissoldthecomputers.So,Iwasfree.Onsomedays,Istayedintheoffice.Icurledupinanarmchairreadingalotofbooksormagazinesabouttravelling.Fromthis,Iknowmanyplacesofinterests.CommonerrorsincetImproperpassivevoiceAftershewasgraduatedfromhighschool,sheenteredTsinghuaUniversity.Shewasdiedin1991.Thesunwasdisappearedbehindacloud.MisuseofPartsofSpeechHedoesnotlikeanyotherauthorsinthesameperiod,LunXuncanprobeintothedarknessofthesocietysharply.Weneedtowidetheroad.Theoveruseof“I,you,he…”Ifyouhaven’treadhernovelsthatmeansyouhaven’treadanovel.DanglingModifiersAttheageoften,Jelly’sgrandfatherdied.Onseeingtheoldphoto,mychildhoodcamebacktomymemory.Todowellatcollege,goodgradesareessential.SomeexceptionsTobefrank,Generallyspeaking,Judgingby,Speakingof,SentenceFragmentsTherearemanywaystoknowtheworld.ForexamplebyTV,radio,andsoon.WhycouldshegetahighmarkinCET-4?Becausesheworksveryhard.

Run-onSentencesTherearemanywayswehaveneveremployedthembefore.WordysentencesInspiteofthefactthatheislazy,Ilikehim.Forthepeoplewhoarediligentandkind,moneyisjustthethingtobeusedtobuythethingtheyneed.IncoherenceAmanisjudgednotonlybywhathesaysbutalsobyhisdeeds.Wehavegreatfaithandhighhopesforher.Freshwateristhemostimportantthingsoftheearth.

Heisn’tthoseauthorswhoonlywritetheirfeelings.IbegantoreadtheworksofMaodunfrom14yearsold.Itisknowntous,practicemakesperfect.Therewere4personsintheirfamily.Hiswifewasadeanofuniversity,hissonwasaph.D,andhisdaughterwasacollegestudent.ReferringtoLuxun,Ithinknoonecan’tknowhim.Hewasnotonlyafamouswriter,butalsoanoutstandingrevolutor.增加寫作的閃光點(diǎn)1.適當(dāng)用被動(dòng)代替主動(dòng)Weshouldpayattentionto…2.善于使用插入語however/therefore/forexample/Ibelieve…然而，其他人卻認(rèn)為……

3.選用形象、生動(dòng)、具體的詞匯Very:Extremely,exceedingly,intensely,…moreandmorepopular:

Increasingpopularitymoreandmorepeople

GrowingindividualsNow:Currently,presentlysb.beinterestedinsth:Appealto…sth.exertatremendousfascinationonsbsendDeliverGive:offerItplaysagoodrolein…positivefavorable,promising，perfect,pleasurable,excellent,outstandingbadchance/effect/…Unfavorabledreadful,poor,adversethingaffair,business,mattercommonSharedcausegiveriseto,leadto,resultin,triggerwantDesirerememberbearinmindthathaveenjoy,possessTherefore,itishightimethatwecarriedoutsomeproperwaystoraiseourcompetitiveness.Inthenewcentury,moreandmorecomputersareused.Moreandmorepeopleareinterestedincomputers.Forastart,wecan,freely,searchwantedinformationatanymoment.Littlebylittle,we’llhavemoreandmoreknowledge,andwiderandwiderhorizons.Besides,wecangethugepleasuresonlinebychatting,playinggames,orsendingemail.4.否定意義介詞against,beyond,but,except,without,...形容詞absent,different,free,thelast,reluctant,lack,...動(dòng)詞deny,differ,fail,ignore,miss,refuse,usedto,want,...短語keep...from,protect...from,prevent...from,letalone,ataloss,invain,insteadof,outofthequestion,ratherthan,too...to,bynomeans,anythingbut,...在一些國(guó)家里婦女沒有得到平等的權(quán)利。Womenfailtogettheequalrightsinsomecountries.這不是解決能源危機(jī)的最好的辦法。Thisisbynomeansthebestwaytosolvetheproblemofenergycrisis.我們應(yīng)保護(hù)樹木，不讓它們受破壞。Weshouldprotecttreesfrombeingdestroyed.在舊中國(guó)，我們連一個(gè)釘子都造不了，更不用說制造機(jī)器了。InoldChinawecouldnotmakeanail,letalone(make)machines解決問題的辦法是和談,而不是武力.5.contrastManypeoplewillsoonfindthemselvesrichingoods,butraggedinspirit.Theadvantagesoutweighthedisadvantages.Itwillhavebothnegativeandpositiveeffectsbysodoing.ParallelconstructionWe’llpayanyprice,bearanyburdenandendureanyhardshiptohelpyou.2.比較結(jié)構(gòu)1．同級(jí)比較我們過去三年取得的成就相當(dāng)于以前十年所取得的成就.Wehaveplishedasmuchinthepastthreeyearsaswouldhavetakentenyearsinthepast.2．比較級(jí)改革開放的政策讓我們更好的了解外面的世界.3．最高級(jí)4．themore…themore…結(jié)構(gòu)

Themoreamanknows,themorehediscovershisignorance.5．選擇比較Somepatternsforwriting

圖表式作文Pattern1Itisobviousinthegraphic/tablethattherate/number/amountof…h(huán)asundergone

dramaticchanges.Ithasgoneup/grown/fallen/droppedconsiderablyinrecentyears,(as…varies).Atthepointof…,…reachesitspeakvalueof…(多少).Whatisthereasonforthischange?Mainlythereare…(多少)reasonsbehindthesituationreflectedinthegraphic/table.Pattern2Asshown/revealed/indicatedinthegraphic/table,…h(huán)aschangedalot,with…decreasingsteeplyfrom…to…/by…,while…increasingsharplyfrom…to…/by….Amongthepossiblereasons/factorsforthischange,thefollowingsaretypical.Pattern1Nowadays,therearemoreandmor