2023屆遼寧省部分市高三英語一模試題匯編：讀后續(xù)寫（含答案）

2023屆遼寧省部分市高三英語一模試題分類匯編

讀后續(xù)寫

2023屆遼寧省葫蘆島市高三一模英語試題

第二節(jié)讀后續(xù)寫（滿分25分）

67.閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。

Alanandtheothercamperssataroundthefirechewingmeatchops.ItwouldbeAlan,sfirst

nightinatent,andhewasexcitedbutalittlenervous.

Astheyate,theconservationofficerspoke.44Muchofthewildlifeinthisareacomesoutonlyat

night.Soaftersupper,let,sstartanightwatch.Volunteerswilltaketurnstostaydownherebythe

fire,awayfromthetents.Thosewhotakepartwillgetachancetoseeaworldthatmanyofyou

neverknewexisted.,,

Alan,sstomachtightened.Thenheheardtheofficercontinue,??Therearenodangerousanimals

thisclosetoCapeTown.Anyvolunteers?^^

Atough-lookingkidwithredhairmutteredsomethingaboutneedingagoodnight,ssleep.

Anotherboyspokeup.'THtakeashift."Thekidwho,dsatnexttoAlanonthebusvolunteered.

Alansattight.Thenoneofthegirlsraisedherhandwithagiggle.Alanfrowned.Ifagirlcoulddoit,

hecould,too.Hevolunteered.

Afewmorekidsraisedtheirhands,andthentheofficerexplained,??Thisishowitworks.When

therestofyougotobedinatent,thefirstwatchertakeshisorherplacebythefire.Thedutyof

watcheristokeepthefiregoinggently.Afterthirtyminutes,heorshewakesthenextperson.v

Alanheardhisvoiceasking,44Areyousureit,sabsolutelysafe?^^

Theofficerlookedathim."Thedangerisminimal.Wewouldn,thavetakenyouhereotherwise.

Doyoustillwanttovolunteer?^^Alannoddedbutfeltuneasy.

Earlierthatday,theofficerhadchallengedthecamperstospotanimaltracksalongtheriver.

Thatwasfiιn.Butbeingaloneinthedarkwasnot.Alan,sflashlightwasalreadyfadingtoadim

glowbecausehehadusedittoooften.Lookingaround,Alanthoughthesawalargebirdswooping

（俯祝∣）andwonderedifitwasanowl.Hehadseensmallpawprintsinthesandbytheriver.Wasthe

owlhuntingforthecreaturethathadmadethem?

注意：

1.所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；

2.續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，每段的開頭語已為你寫好。

Paragraph1:

Hearinganoise,Alanfroze,feelingsomethingwasthereinthedarkness.

Paragraph?:

Thenextmorning,theofficeraskedforreports.

2023屆遼寧省丹東市高三一模英語試題

第二節(jié)（滿分25分）

47.閱讀下面文章，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一個完整短文，續(xù)寫

詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右。

“Judy,hurryup!Let,sgotothebeach!,,Thatwasafamiliarmorningcallfrommyolderbrother,

Sirin.Hearingthat,IwouldspringupquicklyandWewouldsetoffonourjourney.Raisedbyour

grandparentsinSavanna,Weexperiencedourhappiestmomentsthere.Nestledbetweenthe

mountainsandthesea,withitslushgreentrees,crystal-likeocean,andclearbluesky,Savannawas

likeasmallvillagefromafairytale.

SirinandIoftenenjoyedthegentleseabreezeasweexploredthebreathtakingcoast,withthe

endless,openwaterbesideusandthevast,clearskyoverhead.Wefeltasenseoffreedomtowander

thesandybeachorexperiencetheexcitementofsailingouttosea,delightingintheawe-inspiring

beautyofnature'swonders.WhenWegrewtired,leisurelywalkingonthesoft,warmsandsto

collectunique,fascinatingseashellsbroughtusadifferentkindofpeacefuljoy.Thefriendly,

warmheartedvillagerstreateduslikefamily,oftensharingtheirfreshly-caughtseafoodwithus.

ThreeyearslaterWeweretakenawayfromthevillagetoreceiveabettereducationbyour

parents.Occupiedwithourstudy,Werarelyvisitedourbelovedgrandparents,onlycallingthem

occasionally.Wegraduallyadaptedtothefast-pacedcitylifeandfounditmoreefficientand

convenient.WheneverWehadanappetiteforseafood,ourdadwouldsimplyorderitthroughhis

phone,anditwouldbedeliveredtoourdoorstepwithinminutes.Inadditiontoseafood,wecould

orderanythingourheartsdesired,nomatterhowlateitwas.Whatwelovedmostwasthe

convenienceofnotneedingtowashthedishesaftereating,astheywerealldisposable,designedfor

singleuse.

However,deepwithinus,wesometimeslongedforthesimplepleasuresofvillagelife.We

weretoldbyourgrandparentsthatmoreandmoretouristsfloodedintothevillage,which

strengthenedourdesiretoreturn.So,whentheeagerly-awaitedsummervacationarrivedthisyear,

wefinallymadeourdreamtripbacktoourchildhoodparadise.Aftergreetingourgrandparentswith

hugsandsmiles,weeagerlyheadedtowardsthesun-kissedseasidetoreliveourcherished

memories.

注意：

1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；

2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。

Paragraph1:However,whatWesawshockedus.

Paragraph2:HearingGrandfather,swords,Wecouldn,twaittodosomethingtotacklethe

pollution.

2023屆遼寧省撫順市高三一模英語試題

第二節(jié)（滿分25分）

47.閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。

Emilyfinishedplayingthemusic,andthenbowedtotheanimaltoysonherbed.??There,three

timesinarowwithnomistakes,,,shesaid,44IjusthopeIcanplayitthatwellattheconcert.^^Injust

anhourshewouldbeplayingherfirstsolo,andthethoughtwasgivingherbutterflies.

“You'reluckyyoudon,thavetoplaybyyourselfinfrontofeverybody,,,shesaid,smoothing

LeatheTiger,sfur,andgazeddownatthesmilingfaceofZoeytheZebra.Emilyscolded,4?You,rea

bighelp.Howcanyoubesohappyatatimelikethis?”

Shelookedaroundtheroomatthebear,lion,monkey,andotheranimaltoysthatlinedherbed

andshelves.??Iwishyoucouldallcomewithme,^^shesighed.Shegavethemonelastglanceand

wenttojoinherparentsinthecar.

“DoIhavetoplayintheconcert?"askedEmilyassheclimbedintothebackseat.??Ismy

favoritefirst-gradergettingnervous?^^herdadasked,smiling.Emilydidn,tanswer.Shewastrying

topicturewhatitwouldbeliketoplayinfrontofallthosepeople.fc?You,lldofine,honey."Headded.

“Thefirsttimeisalwaysthehardest.^^

Whentheyarrivedattheconcerthall,Emilyhandedherviolintoherteacher,MrsAllen,for

tuningandtiptoedovertowherethecurtainsparted.Lookingout,shecouldseethatalltheseats

werefilled,withmanymorepeoplestandinginback.

Nervouslyshetookherviolinandsatwiththeotherstudentsonstage.Sheheldherbreathasthe

curtainsstartedtoopenandMrsAlienpickedupthemicrophonetobegintheprogram.Onebyone

thestudentsplayedtheirpieces.Finally,Emilyheardhernameannounced.Herheartpoundedas

shewalkedtowardthefrontofthestage.

注意：

?.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；

2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。

Sheputherviolinunderherchin,butshecouldn'trememberevenherfirstnote.

Assheplayed,the“animals“audienceseemedtobechangingbackintopeople.

2023屆遼寧省鞍山市高三一模英語試題

第二節(jié)（分25）

47.閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進(jìn)行續(xù)寫，使之構(gòu)成一個完整的故事。

IlovetoplaythepianoandIgreatlyenjoyperformingmysongs,sowhentheannualwinter

recitalwascanceled,Iwasdisappointed.Ihadlookedforwardtoitforalongtimeandhadalready

preparedtwoofmybestsongs.

Mymomhadawonderfulidea,however,toturnthisdisappointingletdownintosomething

worthwhile.??YoucanperformyoursongsatCarriageHouseSeniorLiving,,,mymomsuggested

brightly.??I,msuretheseniorstherewhodonothavefamiliesvisitthemthatoften,wouldreally

appreciatethemusicandyoucouldplaymorethanjusttwosongs.”

Iimmediatelythoughtthiswasagreatidea.OneofthethingsIdidnotlikeabouttherecitals

wasthatIwaslimitedtoplayingjustacoupleofsongs.PlayingthepianoatCarriageHouseseemed

likeawin-winsituationbecausenotonlywouldIgettoplaymoresongs,butIwouldalsohavethe

chancetocheeruptheresidentstherewithsomelivelytunes.

MymomcalledCarriageHouseandmadearrangementsformetoperform.Inthecomingdays,

IworkedespeciallyhardtopolishupfifteenpiecesthatIthoughtthecrowdwouldenjoy,including

manyoldclassics.

Whenthemuch-anticipateddayfinallyarrived,myfamilyandIdrovetoCarriageHouse.

Walkingthroughtheenormousdoubledoors,westeppedintoanentrywaythatoverlookedthe

spaciousgranddiningroom.Rightattheentrancetothediningroomstoodthepianoasifitwere

justwaitingtomakesomemusictoliventheplaceupabit.Atnearlyeverytableseveralgray-haired

womenormenwereseatedenjoyingtheirdinnerandthecompanythatthecrowdedroomprovided.

Despitetheconversationsgoingonatvarioustablesthough,isolationhunglikeadarkcloudinthe

room.

Almostimmediately,weweregreetedbyanoldwomanwithawalkerwhointroducedherself

asPhyllisinchargeofCarriageHouse.Shewelcomedmeandledmetothestage.

注意：

1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；

2?請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。

AsISatdownonthebench,Ipressedakeyonthepianoandwassurprisedtohearnosound.

NervousnessmeltedawayandIstartedtoenjoytheperformancewiththeold.

2023屆遼寧省沈陽市高三一模英語試題

第二節(jié)（滿分25分）

47.閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。

IntheGame

'Tmgonnaplaybasketball,Daddy."Mydaughter,Lauren,whooped,skippingintotheroom.

“ThereareonlyelevengirlsinVerden,andeverybodymakestheteam.”

High-schoolsportsisthebiggestthingthathappensinVerden,soIshouldn,thavebeen

su?prisedwhenLaurcnannouncedshewasgoingoutforthegirls,basketballteams—LadyTige匚

ButIwas.MywifeandInevertoldLaurenthatshewasdisabled.Wedidn,twanthertofeel

differentfromotherchildren.ShehasDownsyndrome（唐氏綜合征）.

Whatiftheothergirlsontheteamfailedtoaccepther?WhatifLaurenspentmostofhertime

onthebench?Whatifshegotinjuredduringthegame?WhatshouldIsaytothecoach?

Thenextafternoon,Iparkedbythebasketballcourt.

“Hey,Johnny,,,CoachForthythecalled.t?We,regladLaurencameoutfortheteam.^^

“Well,Mr.Forthythe,youknowwedon,texpectyoutoplayherinagame,justincludeher

whenyoucan.”

ThegamearrivedthenextSunday.Isettledintoaseatonthesecondrowwithmywife.

Momentslater,atrainofgirlschuggedoutofthelockerroom.LastinlinewasLauren.Istoodalong

withthecrowdandclapped.Shesearchedthestands,spottedusandwavedbroadly.

Thegamegotofftoagoodstart,butsoonVerdenwasbehind.IgazedatLauren,themost

excitedontheteam.Sheslapped（拍打）herkneewhentheopponentsscored.Herarmsmoved

aroundintheaireachtimeVerdenshot.Eventhoughshewasn,tplaying,shelookedasifshewere

havingthetimeofherlife.Now,Ifeltadmirationformydaughter.Herteamwasgettingbeat,yet

shestillenjoyedtheaction.

Justlessthantwominuteswereleft,andVerdenwasdownby17points.Coachcalleda

time-out.Thenboomedtheannouncer,svoice,“Numberthirty-three,Lauren,infortheLady

Tigers.”

注意：

L續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；

2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。

Withaslaponherback,CoachsentLaurenrunningontothecourt.

“Didyousee?DadandMum.Iscored!Imadeabasket!”

答案：

2023屆遼寧省葫蘆島市高三一模英語試題

【答案】

Hearinganoise,Alanfroze,feelingsomethingwasthereinthedarkness.Arippleoffearcrept

uponhimashecastaglancethere.Heartbeatingwildly,Alanmadehiswaytothenoise,withboth

ofhislegstremblinguncontrollably.Acloserlookconvincedhimthatitwasonlyarabbit,which

quicklydisappearedinthedark.Inrelief,hefeltthegentlebreezerubbinghisface.Themoon

sheddingitssilverlightonthewoods,Alanwasgreetedbythesoundofbirdsandinsects.

Envelopedbyfragrantair,hefeltasifinthewonderland.

Thenextmorning,theofficeraskedforreports.Othercampersbraggedabouttheiradventure

inthedark一howtheyranintosome“horrible"creaturesandbravelyscaredthemoff.Theofficer,

wearingadoubtfullook,offerednocomments.WhenitwasAlan,sturn,hetoldthetruththatthere

werenoscaιyanimalsbutbreathtakingscenerytobeexplored.Asmileblossomedontheofficer,s

face.Thatwasexactlywhatthecampingwasallabout.Onlyafteroneovercamethefearinhisown

heartcouldheembracetherealbeautyofnature.

【解析】

【導(dǎo)語】本文以人物為線索展開，講述了AIan第一次晚上露營，他很興奮但很緊張。晚飯

過后，長官告訴他們這里晚上會有野生動物出沒，需要志愿者輪流守夜。Alan雖然感覺守

夜很危險，但是在一個女孩自告奮勇后，Alan也申請當(dāng)志愿者。輪到他守夜的時候，他看

到一只大鳥在俯沖下來，且地上有動物的爪EfJ,這讓他感到害怕。

【詳解】1.段落續(xù)寫：

①由第一段首句內(nèi)容“聽到一個聲音，Alan愣住了，感覺黑暗中有什么東西?！笨芍?/p>

一段可描寫Alan在黑夜中探究這個聲音的過程。

②由第二段首句內(nèi)容“第二天早上，長官要求他們作報告?！笨芍?，第二段可描寫Alan和

其他露營者說出自己守夜時的發(fā)現(xiàn)。

2.續(xù)寫線索：

聽到聲音后愣住一一害怕一一尋找聲音——發(fā)現(xiàn)小兔子——不再害怕——享受夜景——作

報告一一感悟

3.詞匯激活

行為類

①前往：makeone'sWaytOZheadfbr

②顫抖：tremble/shake

③包圍：envelope/surround

情緒類

①嚇人的：scary/fearsome/frighten?ng

②令人驚嘆的：breathlaking/amazing

【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1]Acloserlookconvincedhimthatitwasonlyarabbit,whichquickly

disappearedinthedark.（運(yùn)用了which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句）

[高分句型2]WhenitwasAlan'sturn,hetoldthet?uththattherewerenoscaryanimalsbut

breathtakingscenerytobeexplored.（運(yùn)用了when引導(dǎo)的時間狀語從句和that引導(dǎo)的同位語從

句）

2023屆遼寧省丹東市高三一模英語試題

【答案】ParagraphI:

However,whatwesawshockedus.Plasticbagsandsingle-usecontainerslitteredthebeaches,

andwecouldhardlyseeanyunderseacreatureintheoncecrystal-clearsea.Tomakemattersworse,

thewaterwasdarkanddifficulttoseethrough.Becauseoftheunpleasantsmell,Wehadtocoverour

noses.Withtearsblurringourvision,wedesperatelywonderedwhathadhappenedtoourbeloved

village.Lookingatouranxiousfaces,Grandfathersighedwithhisheadbowed.Itwasthosevisitors

whodidhelpusearnmoremoney,buttheyalsobroughtmassiveamountsofrubbish,whichcaused

severepollutionandchangedourbeautifulvillagecompletely.Whiletellingusaboutthechanges,

Grandfathergazedatthesea,hiseyesfilledwithdisappointmentandhelplessness.

Paragraph2:

HearingGrandfather?words,wecoιddn,twaittodosomethingtotacklethepollution.

Withouthesitation,SirinandItookoffourshoesandwalkedneartheseatocollecttherubbishwith

ourbarehands.SeeingwhatWeweredoing,ourfamilyandsomevillagersjoinedusinourefforts.

Somevillagersfetchedhelpfultools,likesticksandnets,whichwerequiteusefulincatchingthe

waste.Ialsopulledoutmymobilephoneandtookphotosoftherubbishfloatingonthesurfaceof

thesea.Bypostingthoseimagesonsocialmedia,Ihopedmorepeoplecouldbeawareofthe

pollutionandlendahelpinghandtoo.Muchtoourrelief,ourjointeffortsmadeadifference.The

seasidebecamecleanoncemore,andthebreezefromtheseasmelledfreshandsweetagain.

【解析】

【導(dǎo)語】本文以事件發(fā)展為線索展開，講述了作者兄弟兩人從小在海邊鄉(xiāng)村快樂地長大，但

是后來被父母帶到城市，接受更優(yōu)良的教育，然而兄弟倆懷念鄉(xiāng)村愜意的生活，返回鄉(xiāng)村尋

找童年的快樂，但是回到鄉(xiāng)村后，兄弟倆對到處的污染感到震驚，決定撿拾海水中的垃圾。

在兩個孩子的帶動下，村民也加入其中，使美麗的海邊鄉(xiāng)村恢復(fù)了美麗。

【詳解】1.段落續(xù)寫：

①由第一段首句內(nèi)容“然而我們看到的一切令我們震驚”可知，第一段可描寫作者兄弟倆發(fā)

現(xiàn)海邊到處都是垃圾，爺爺解釋說是游客帶來的大量垃圾，并露出了無助的眼神。

②由第二段首句內(nèi)容“聽到爺爺?shù)脑挘覀兤炔患按叵胱鳇c(diǎn)什么來解決污染問題”可知，

第二段可描寫作者兄弟倆下海撿拾垃圾，帶動了周邊村民參與其中。兄弟倆還將他們清理垃

圾的圖片發(fā)到網(wǎng)上，倡議游客注意保持環(huán)境衛(wèi)生，恢復(fù)了海邊鄉(xiāng)村的美麗。

2.續(xù)寫線索：震驚一一海邊垃圾一一游客帶來的一一爺爺感到無助一一決定對付污染問題

一撿拾垃圾——村民幫忙一一把照片發(fā)到網(wǎng)上進(jìn)行倡議一一，恢復(fù)了鄉(xiāng)村的美麗一一感悟。

3.詞匯激活

行為類

①看見：see/spot/catchsightof

②捂?。篶over/shelter

③告訴：tell/inform

情緒類

①焦慮的：anxious/nervous/stressed

②有益的：helpful/beneficial

【點(diǎn)睛】［高分句型1］.Tomakemattersworse,thewaterwasdarkanddifficulttoseethrough.（非

謂語動詞作目的狀語）

［高分句型2］.Somevillagersfetchedhelpfultools,likesticksandnets,whichwerequiteusefulin

catchingthewaste.（非限制性定語從句）

2023屆遼寧省撫順市高三一模英語試題

［答案］Onepossibleversion:

Sheputherviolinunderherchin,butshecouldn'trememberevenherfirstnote.Withaflushof

sadness,shecouldn,tholdbackhertearswellingupinhereyes.Sheshuthereyes,hopingtoblink

thetearsaway.Whensheopenedthemagain,everythingseemedmisty.Tohersurprise,itlookedas

ifallthepeopleinthehallhadchangedintoherdollanimals,andsheevensawhersmilingZoeythe

Zebrastandingattheback.Itwasalmostlikebeingathomewithherlovelyfriends.Morerelaxed,

shepickedupherconfidenceandrememberedherpiece.

Assheplayed,the"animals“audienceseemedtobechangingbackintopeople.ButEmilywas

nolongernervousbecausealltheaudiencelookedfriendlynow.Shealsofoundherparents5smiling

eyesfocusedonher,tellinghert?you,realwaysthebesf,.Theaudiencelostthemselvesinhermusic.

Finally,sheplayedthelastnote,putherviolinunderherarmandlookabigbow.Themusiclingered

intheairaftertheperformance,whiletheentireaudiencebrokeintoloudapplause.Shemadeit!She

hadplayedherfirstsolo!

【解析】

【導(dǎo)語】本文以人物為線索展開，講述了主人公EmiIy將要在舞臺上演奏她的小提琴獨(dú)奏曲，

她為此感到特別緊張。上臺后她緊張到快忘了如何去彈奏她的曲目，幸好她及時地調(diào)整了過

來，并為現(xiàn)場的觀眾獻(xiàn)上精彩的表演。

【詳解】1.段落續(xù)寫：

①由第一段首句內(nèi)容“她把小提琴放在下巴下，但她甚至記不起她的第一個音符”可知，第

一段可描寫EmiIy上臺后緊張的情緒以及如何去調(diào)整她的情緒。

②由第二段首句內(nèi)容“當(dāng)她演奏時，“動物”觀眾似乎又變回了人?！笨芍诙慰擅鑼?/p>

EmiIy在把現(xiàn)場觀眾設(shè)想成動物后，她不再那么緊張，盡情表演，獲得大家的認(rèn)可。

2.續(xù)寫線索：即將演奏——緊張——調(diào)整——重拾信心——盡情表演——掌聲雷動——感悟

3.詞匯激活

行為類

①閉上雙眼：shuthereyes/closehereyes

②集中注意力于：focuson/concentrateon

③爆發(fā)出掌聲：burstintoapplause/eruptintoapplause

情緒類

①忍住淚水：holdbackhertears/fightbackhertears

②放松：relaxed/atease

【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型?]Tohersurprise,itlookedasifallthepeopleinthehallhadchangedintoher

dollanimals,andsheevensawhersmilingZoeytheZebrastandingattheback.（運(yùn)用了asif弓∣

導(dǎo)的表語從句）

[高分句型2]Morerelaxed,shepickedupherconfidenceandrememberedherpiece.（運(yùn)用了形

容詞relaxed作狀語）

2023屆遼寧省鞍山市高三一模英語試題

【答案】AsIsatdownonthebench,Ipressedakeyonthepianoandwassurprisedtohearno

sound.Feelingasifthewholeworldwaswatchingme,Iwasstruckdeadwithembarrassment.How

couldIperformthesongwithoutthepiano?IwasonpinsandneedleswhenPhyllisslowlymadeher

waytothefrontofthecrowdofdinnersandannouncedinacomfortingtone,44Thisgirlhascometo

singforusbutthepianoseemstobealittlenervous.^^Almostimmediately,therewasscattered

applauseandseveralpeoplesteppedforwardtohelpmepluginthepianoandsetthemicrophone.

Witheverythingready,Itookadeepbreathandcommencedmyperformance.

NerVoIASneSSmeltedawGyCItldISlaHedioenjo?lheDerlimnanCe卬〃∕?theold.Onewomangotup

andbegantoanimatedlydanceabouttheroom.Someofthepeopleswayedintheirchairstothebeat

ofthemusicwhileotherstappedtheirstoes.Theperformanceendedupwithastormofapplause

fromthecrowd,?realizedthatitwasfarbetterthanapianorecitalbecausealmosteveryoneseemed

totrulyappreciatemymusicandI,mproudthatIhavethepowertospreadkindnesstothem.It

endedupbeingablessingindisguisethattherecitalwascanceled,leadingtomesharingthegiftof

musicwiththosewhoneededitmost.

【解析】

【導(dǎo)語】本文以人物為線索展開，講述了作者喜歡彈鋼琴，也非常喜歡表演自己的歌曲，所

以當(dāng)年度冬季獨(dú)奏會被取消時，作者很失望。然而，媽媽提議去CarriageHoUSe為老年人表

演時，作者欣然同意并為之積極的做準(zhǔn)備。

詳解】1.段落續(xù)寫：

由第一段首句內(nèi)容“當(dāng)我坐在長凳上時，我按下了鋼琴的一個鍵，奇怪的是沒有聽到任何聲

音?！笨芍?，第一段可描寫作者表演時發(fā)現(xiàn)鋼琴沒有聲音的內(nèi)心的緊張以及問題解決后大家

對作者的鼓勵。

由第二段首句內(nèi)容“緊張的情緒消失了，我開始喜歡上了和老人一起的表演?！笨芍?，第二

段可描寫作者的演奏給老人帶來的快樂和作者的感受。

2.續(xù)寫線索：演出時鋼琴出問題——緊張不已——老人鼓勵——緊張消失——融入音樂——

感悟

3.詞匯激活

行為類

①表演：perform/show

②.宣布：announce/declare

情緒類

①.尷尬：embarrassment/awkward

②.緊張的：nervous/intense/beonpinsandneedles

【點(diǎn)睛】

[高分句型?].IwasonpinsandneedleswhenPhyllisslowlymadeherwaytothefrontofthe

crowdofdinnersandannouncedinacomfortingtone（運(yùn)用了when弓∣導(dǎo)的時間狀語從句）

[高分句型2]Ireal