新教材適用2024-2025學(xué)年高中英語Unit3SportsandFitnessSectionⅣ寫作指導(dǎo)學(xué)案新人教版必修第一冊

SectionⅣ寫作指導(dǎo)寫一篇健康報告書寫作儲備閱讀教材P42健康報告，提煉健康報告的寫作特點。Ⅰ.黃金寫作模板Ⅱ.寫作語言特色運用恰當?shù)拿枥L性語言，精確地表達出自己或他人在過去及現(xiàn)在的健康狀況。Ⅲ.寫作常用詞匯1．slimadj.苗條的；單薄的2．weightn．體重3．dietn．飲食4．challengev．挑戰(zhàn)5．refreshedadj.復(fù)原精神的6．energeticadj.充溢活力的7．worryabout擔(dān)憂8．keepfit保持健康9．catchacoldnowandthen時常感冒Ⅳ.寫作常用句型1．Iaddhealthyfoodtomymeals.我把健康食品加到我的飲食中。2．ImadealistofthethingsIlikedaboutmyself.我對自己喜愛的東西列了一個清單。3．Bybeingpositiveaboutmyselfandmybody,Ibecamebothhappierandhealthier.對自己和自己的身體有了主動確定的看法后，我變得更華蜜，更健康了。4．Ireadanarticlethatsaidperformingtaichiwouldmakeadifference.我讀過一篇文章，上面寫道打太極拳會有作用。5．Imakeitaruletogetupearly.早起成了我的一項有規(guī)律的活動。6．Mybodyisbuildingupbyworkingouteveryday.通過每天熬煉，我的身體正在漸漸強壯起來。典例剖析請依據(jù)上面關(guān)于健康報告書的框架結(jié)構(gòu)，寫一篇短文。過去①幼年時期，身體虛弱；常常感冒②不能夠正常上學(xué)轉(zhuǎn)折點讀到一篇關(guān)于早晨慢跑的文章現(xiàn)在①養(yǎng)成早起和慢跑的習(xí)慣②感到精神煥發(fā)，精力充足③身體逐步復(fù)原；日常生活從中受益留意：詞數(shù)80左右。審題謀篇Ⅰ.定框架→好的起先，勝利的一半體裁健康報告書人稱第一人稱時態(tài)一般過去時和一般現(xiàn)在時框架第一段：描述過去狀況其次段：現(xiàn)在狀況第三段：總結(jié)Ⅱ.定要點、關(guān)鍵詞及動詞時態(tài)→打造一篇要點全面、用詞精確得體、時態(tài)多樣的極優(yōu)作文要點一：幼年時期，我身體虛弱。(weak)WhenIwasalittlechild,Iwasweak.要點二：我常常感冒。(catchacold)Icaughtacoldnowandthen.要點三：正常上學(xué)很困難。(動名詞短語作主語；difficult)Goingtoschoolregularlywasdifficult.要點四：我讀到一篇文章。(article)Ireadanarticle.要點五：這篇文章上說早晨慢跑有效果。(jog；makeadifference)Thearticlesaidjogginginthemorningwouldmakearealdifference.要點六：我起得很早；慢跑半個小時。(getup)Igetupearlyandjogforabouthalfanhour.要點七：我感到精神煥發(fā)，精力充足。(refresh；energetic)Ifeelrefreshedandenergetic.要點八：通過每天熬煉，我的身體正在逐步復(fù)原。(buildup；workout)Mybodyisbuildingupbyworkingouteveryday.要點九：它對我的日常生活有極大的好處。(benefit)Itbenefitsmydailylifegreatly.Ⅲ.詞匯、句式升級→創(chuàng)建極優(yōu)作文的倩詞靚句升級句式一：用so...that連接要點一和要點二WhenIwasalittlechild,IwassoweakthatIcaughtacoldnowandthen.升級句式二：用定語從句連接要點四和要點五Ireadanarticle,whichsaidjogginginthemorningwouldmakearealdifference.升級句式三：用makeitaruleto改寫要點六Imakeitaruletogetupearlyandjogforabouthalfanhour.升級句式四：用定語從句連接要點八和要點九Mybodyisbuildingupbyworkingouteveryday,whichbenefitsmydailylifegreatly.Ⅳ.組建極優(yōu)作文→水到渠成的成就感：動力的源泉參考范文：WhenIwasalittlechild,IwassoweakthatIcaughtacoldnowandthen.Asaresult,goingtoschoolregularlywasabigchallengetome.ThenIreadanarticle,whichsaidjogginginthemorningwouldmakearealdifference.SoIfollowtheadviceandputitintopracticeeveryday.Now,Imakeitaruletogetupearlyandjogforabouthalfanhour.Afterthat,Ifeelrefreshedandenergetic.Atpresent,mybodyisbuildingupbyworkingouteveryday,whichbenefitsmydailylifegreatly.J即學(xué)即練你校英語報健康欄目在征文，請你寫一篇稿件參賽。內(nèi)容如下：1．你過去的身體狀況；2．變更歷程；3．現(xiàn)狀。留意：1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右；2．可以適當增加細微環(huán)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。參考范文：Iamahighschoolstudent.InthepastIalwaysfeltworriedaboutmyhealth，becauseIwasoverweight.Ifeltsleepyoftenandfelttired.Ididn'twanttodoanysports.Later，Idecidedtochangethissituation.First,Ichangedmydiet，stoppingeatingjunkfood.Instead，Iatemorefruitandvegetables.Besides，Ibegantotakemoreexercise