讀后續(xù)寫參加馬拉松膝蓋受傷仍不放棄思路點(diǎn)撥課件高三英語二輪復(fù)習(xí)

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WithoneweektogobefortheLonAngelesMarathon,oneofmykneenwasinjured.Thethoughtofmissingthemarathoninfivedaysconcernedmefarmorethanmyphysicalpain.Ihadnotjustgiventhemanathenasmallplaceinmylife,ithadbecomemylife.Thegoodnewswasthatafterathoroughexamination,nothingappearedtobepermanentlydamaged.ThefirstthingIaskedthedoctorwas,"WhenwillIbeabletorunaganin?"Remainingcantious,heexplainedthatassoonastheswellingwentdown,IcoulddowhateverIfeltIcouldtolerate.Laterthatafternoon,myself-confidencebeganioretuntonornaleventhoughmykeenhadn’t.Theinjurydamagedmybody,butnotmyspirit.

Thenextday,Ihobbled(踱行)intoalocalrunningstoreandaskediftherewereanymarathonslaterintheyear.WithallofthetrainingthatIhadputin,IwascentainthatI'dbebackonthestreetswithinacoupleofmoeths."Therearen'tanymoremarathonsuntilthelastpartofNovember,"saidtheclerk."Oh,wait.Thereisonesmallerracenextmonth:theLongBeachMarathon."Arayofhopeemerged.However,theLongBeachMarathonwasonlythereandahalfweeksaway.Impossible.But,Aristotleoncesaid,"Hopeisawakingdream."Mydreamwasonlythreeweeksaway.Thenextmorning,Ibeganaself-madetrainingscheduleunlikeanyyou'llreadaboutinRunner'sWorld,andprobablyit'sthefirttimeanyonehaseverpureparedforamarathonwithoutrunning,Iwasfontumateenoughtobeworkinginahospitalfitnesscenterthathadawidevarietyofstationarybikes,treadmills(跑步機(jī))andfreeweights.Theycouldactuallyhelpmetorecoverandpractice.Overthecourseofthenextweek,theswellinginmykneewentdownasmyfitnesslevelclimbed.Iwasactuallybecomingfitterwithoutputtinginsomuchasamileofrunning.Afterabouttwoandahalfweeks,Igotthedoctor'sapprovaltostartrunningagain.Thefirstdaybackoutonthestreetwasachallenge.____________________________________________________Whentheracedayarrived,Iwasfitandmotivatedtoruntheraceofalifetime.___________________________________________________________________________，雖身體受傷但精神未損。之后得知長灘馬拉松，________________________，自制特殊訓(xùn)練計(jì)劃，借醫(yī)院健身中心設(shè)備鍛煉，約兩周半后_________________________。

洛杉磯馬拉松前一周“我”膝蓋受傷雖時(shí)間緊仍心懷希望獲醫(yī)生許可重新跑步一句話概括主旨情感及情節(jié)發(fā)展GotinjuredinthekneeoneweekbeforetheLosAngelesMarathon.Worriedaboutmissingthemarathon.Therewasnopermanentdamageafterexamination.Hopeful.LearnedabouttheLongBeachMarathon.Tornyethopefulwhenfacingthetightschedule.Madeaspecialself-madetrainingplan.Determinedduringthetrainingperiod..Gotapprovaltorunagainafterabouttwoandahalfweeks.Afeelingofreliefaswellasjoyandexcitement.Summarizetheauthor'scharactertraits.“Thethoughtofmissingthemarathoninfivedaysconcernedmefarmorethanmyphysicalpain.Ihadnotjustgiventhemarathonasmallplaceinmylife,ithadbecomemylife.”“我更擔(dān)心的是五天后錯(cuò)過馬拉松比賽，而不是我身體上的疼痛。我不僅把馬拉松放在了我生活的一個(gè)小角落里，它已經(jīng)成為了我的生活?！薄癟henextmorning,Ibeganaself-madetrainingscheduleunlikeanyyou'llreadaboutinRunner'sWorld,andprobablyit'sthefirsttimeanyonehaseverpreparedforamarathonwithoutrunning.”“第二天早上，我開始了一項(xiàng)自創(chuàng)的訓(xùn)練計(jì)劃，與你在《跑步者世界》雜志上讀到的任何計(jì)劃都不同，而且很可能是第一次有人在準(zhǔn)備馬拉松比賽時(shí)不跑步?！盤ersistentandtenaciousSummarizetheauthor'scharactertraits.“Ihadnotjustgiventhemarathonasmallplaceinmylife,ithadbecomemylife.”“我不僅把馬拉松放在了我生活的一個(gè)小角落里，它已經(jīng)成為了我的生活?！盤assionateaboutsportsSummarizetheauthor'scharactertraits.“However,theLongBeachMarathonwasonlythreeandahalfweeksaway.Impossible.But,Aristotleoncesaid,'Hopeisawakingdream.'Mydreamwasonlythreeweeksaway.”然而，長灘馬拉松只有三個(gè)半星期了。這不可能。但是，亞里士多德曾經(jīng)說過：“希望是清醒的夢(mèng)?！蔽业膲?mèng)想只剩三個(gè)星期了?！癘verthecourseofthenextweek,theswellinginmykneewentdownasmyfitnesslevelclimbed.Iwasactuallybecomingfitterwithoutputtinginsomuchasamileofrunning.”“在接下來的一個(gè)星期里，隨著我的健康水平的提高，我膝蓋上的腫脹消失了。實(shí)際上，我不用跑一英里就變得更健康了。”PositiveandoptimisticThinkingThefirstdaybackoutonthestreetwasachallenge.____________________________________________________Whentheracedayarrived,Iwasfitandmotivatedtoruntheraceofalifetime.____________________________________________Para1:第一天是哪一天？challenge是什么？如何應(yīng)對(duì)？情感如何？Para2：比賽中表現(xiàn)如何？比賽結(jié)果如何？情感如何？觀眾有什么反應(yīng)？Accumulatesentences--挑戰(zhàn)描寫1.Runningonthestreetwashardbecausemykneefeltunstableandeachstepseemedtochallengeitslimit,butIwouldn'tgiveup.（在大街上跑步很難，因?yàn)槲业南ドw感覺不穩(wěn)定，每一步似乎都在挑戰(zhàn)它的極限，但我不會(huì)放棄。）2.Itwasdifficulttogetusedtotheroughpavementwhilerunning.Myinjuredkneehadtochangeallthetime,whichbroughtsomepainandmademequestionmyimprovement.（在跑步時(shí)適應(yīng)不平整的路面很困難。我受傷的膝蓋必須不斷調(diào)整，這帶來了一些疼痛并讓我質(zhì)疑自己的進(jìn)步。）

Accumulatesentences--心理活動(dòng)1.Eachtimemykneeached,Isaidtomyselfthatthiswasonlyapassingobstacle.IhadadvancedsomuchthatIcouldn'tretreat.Themarathonwasmyaim,andIwouldn'tallowabitofpaintostopme.Ipicturedmyselfreachingthefinishline,andthatvisionempoweredmetocarryon.（每次我的膝蓋疼痛時(shí)，我對(duì)自己說這只是一個(gè)短暫的障礙。我已經(jīng)前進(jìn)了這么多，不能退縮。馬拉松是我的目標(biāo)，我不會(huì)讓一點(diǎn)疼痛阻止我。我想象自己到達(dá)終點(diǎn)線，那個(gè)畫面給予我力量繼續(xù)前行。）2.Whenthetirednessandsorenessinmykneeseemedabouttodefeatme,Idoubtedmychoice.ButthenIrememberedalltheeffortIhadputinandhowmuchIlongedtobebackintherace.IknewthatifIgaveupnow,Iwouldregretitforever.SoItookadeepbreathandpushedforward,determinedtoovercomewhateverchallengeslayahead.（當(dāng)我膝蓋的疲勞和酸痛似乎快要打敗我時(shí)，我懷疑自己的選擇。但隨后我回憶起我所做的所有努力以及我多么熱切地渴望重返賽場(chǎng)。我知道如果我現(xiàn)在放棄，我將一輩子懊悔。所以我深吸一口氣，繼續(xù)前進(jìn)，決心克服任何等待著我的困難。）

Accumulatesentences--賽中表現(xiàn)1.Asthestartinggunfired,Isurgedforward,myheartpoundingwithamixofexcitementandnervousness.Thewindwhippedpastmyface,andIfocusedintentlyonmystride,tryingtofindarhythmthatwouldn'tovertaxmyonce-injuredknee.（當(dāng)發(fā)令槍響，我向前沖去，內(nèi)心因興奮與緊張而狂跳。風(fēng)從我的臉龐呼嘯而過，我專注于自己的步伐，努力找到一種不會(huì)讓曾受傷的膝蓋負(fù)擔(dān)過重的節(jié)奏。）2.Midwaythroughtherace,beadsofsweatdrippeddownmyforehead,andmybreathingbecameheavy.ButIkeptmyeyesfixedontherunnersahead,usingthemasmotivationtomaintainmypace,ignoringthefaintacheinmykneethatthreatenedtoslowmedown.（比賽進(jìn)行到一半時(shí)，汗珠從我的額頭滴落，我的呼吸變得沉重。但我緊盯著前方的選手，將他們作為保持速度的動(dòng)力，忽略膝蓋那隱隱約約想要使我減速的疼痛。）

Accumulatesentences--賽中表現(xiàn)3.Witheachpassingkilometer,myconfidencegrew.Imaintainedasteadygait,myfeetlandinglightlyandpurposefully,asiftheyhadamindoftheirown,propellingmeforwardwithincreasingspeedandefficiency,leavingbehindanydoubtsaboutmyknee'sability.（隨著一公里又一公里的過去，我的信心愈發(fā)增強(qiáng)。我保持著穩(wěn)定的步伐，雙腳輕盈且有目的地落地，仿佛它們有自己的想法，以越來越快的速度和效率推動(dòng)我前進(jìn)，將對(duì)膝蓋能力的任何疑慮都拋諸腦后。）4.Nearingthefinalstretch,Idugdeepandfoundanextraburstofenergy.Myarmspumpedvigorously,andmybodyleanedforwardintotherun,cuttingthroughtheairlikeawell-tunedmachine,showingnosignsofthepreviousinjurythathadoncethreatenedtokeepmesidelined.（臨近最后沖刺階段，我全力以赴，爆發(fā)出額外的一股力量。我的雙臂用力擺動(dòng)，身體前傾奔跑，像一臺(tái)調(diào)試良好的機(jī)器劃破空氣，絲毫沒有之前受傷曾可能讓我退賽的跡象。）

Accumulatesentences--觀眾表現(xiàn)1.Thepeoplewatchingonthesidesofthestreetswerealotoffacescheeringandbannerswaving.TheirshoutstocheermeupgotlouderwhenIgotcloser.Theirexcitementmadememoredeterminedtokeepgoingevenwiththepainandfinishtheracewell.（街道兩旁觀看的人們有許多歡呼的面孔和揮舞的旗幟。當(dāng)我靠近時(shí)，他們鼓勵(lì)我的呼喊聲變得更大。他們的興奮讓我更有決心即使帶著疼痛也要繼續(xù)前進(jìn)并好好完成比賽。）2.ThepeoplegotreallyexcitedwhenIranpast.Theirclappingandshoutsofsupportechoedintheair.Littlekidsreachedouttheirhandstogivehigh-fives.Theirsimpleandhappyexcitementmadetheexcitingraceatmosphereevenmorespecial.（當(dāng)我跑過時(shí)，人們變得非常興奮。他們的鼓掌和支持的呼喊聲在空中回響。小孩子們伸出手來擊掌。他們簡單而快樂的興奮讓激動(dòng)人心的比賽氛圍更加特別。）

Accumulatesentences--升華句1.Throughthistoughmarathonjourney,Inotonlyovercamethephysicaldifficultiesbutalsounderstoodthetruemeaningoffirmperseverance.It'sinthesehardtimesthattherealcourageofthehumanspiritisformed.AndIgotanewrealizationthatthepowerinsidecanbreakanybarrierthatseemsimpossibletogetover.（通過這場(chǎng)艱難的馬拉松之旅，我不僅克服了身體上的困難，也明白了堅(jiān)定毅力的真正含義。正是在這些艱難時(shí)刻，人類精神的真正勇氣得以形成。我有了新的認(rèn)識(shí)，即內(nèi)心的力量可以打破任何看似無法逾越的障礙。）2.Thismarathonexperiencewasmorethanjustarace;itwasaproofoftheunbeatablestrengthofthehumanwill.Theinjuries,theproblems,andtheuncertaintiesalldisappearedinthefaceofstrongdetermination.Itmademelearnthatwhenenthusiasmandperseverancecometogether,theycanmakeawaythatleadsnotonlytotheendoftheracebutalsotothediscoveryofone'sendlesspotential.（這次馬拉松經(jīng)歷不僅僅是一場(chǎng)比賽；它是人類意志不可戰(zhàn)勝力量的證明。傷痛、問題和不確定性在強(qiáng)烈的決心面前都消失了。它讓我懂得，當(dāng)熱情與堅(jiān)持匯聚在一起時(shí)，它們能夠創(chuàng)造出一條道路，這條道路不僅通向比賽終點(diǎn)，還通向?qū)ψ陨頍o盡潛力的發(fā)現(xiàn)。）

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Thefirstdaybackoutonthestreetwasachallenge.ItwaswithgreatpainthatIhobbledalongthestreet,with