作文18 浙江卷-五年（2017-2021）中考英語滿分作文解讀 素材積累

作文18浙江卷2021年浙江中考英語書面表達(dá)假定你是李平，請閱讀以下郵件，接受邀請并回復(fù)。詞數(shù)80左右，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。HiLiPing,Howiseverythinggoingwithyou?NextweekmycousinMikeisstayingwithme.We’rehavingapartynextSaturday.Pleasecome!We’llhavelotsofdrinks.Butifyouremember,canyoubringsomeChinesefood?Thepartywillbestartingat6p.m.Whattimedoyouthinkyou’llbecoming?I’llprobablyneedoneortwopeopletohelpmetidyupaftertheparty.Doyouthinkyou’llbeabletostayandhelp?Anyway,hopeyoucanmakeit.Pleasewritebacktotellmeifyoucancomeornot.Allthebest.MattDearMatt,_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________LiPingDearMatt,It’sgoodtohearfromyou.Everythingisfinewithmehere.Thanksfortheinvitation!Iwilldefinitelycome!ItwillbegoodtomeetMike.I’llarriveataround5:30nextSaturdayandbringsometraditionalChinesefoods,likedumplingsandzongziforyou.Ihopeyouwouldlikethem.Don’tworry.Iwillstayafterthepartytohelpyoucleanup.Thanksagainfortheinvitation.Iamreallylookingforwardtoit!Allthebest.LiPing【詳解】1.題干解讀：該題目屬于應(yīng)用文寫作，但寫作時(shí)要按郵件格式寫。在寫作時(shí)根據(jù)收到的郵件內(nèi)容，接受邀請并回復(fù)，內(nèi)容包括幾點(diǎn)到達(dá)，以及所帶的食物等。2.本文應(yīng)該用第一人稱為主來敘述內(nèi)容；時(shí)態(tài)采用一般將來時(shí)和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)；在寫作時(shí)，力求語言準(zhǔn)確，格式準(zhǔn)確，保證條理清晰。2020年浙江中考英語書面表達(dá)假定你是李平，請閱讀以下郵件并回復(fù)。內(nèi)容包括接受邀請并詢問至少三個(gè)相關(guān)細(xì)節(jié)（如具體地點(diǎn)……）注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右；2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫。DearLiPing,WewouldliketoinviteyoutogiveusatalkonChinesefolkmusic.ThetalkwillbeontheeveningofFriday,July10that7:00.Ifyou’reabletocome,pleasereplyinwritingtothisinvitationbyJuly2nd.Hopeyoucanmakeit!LarrySmithPresidentofForeignStudents’ClubDearLarry,______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiPingDearLarry,Thankyousomuchforyourinvitation.AsabigfanofChinesefolkmusic,it’smygreathonortosharesomethinginterestingwithallofyou.I’mavailableontheFridayevening,July10thandI’llbethereontime.ButIamstillwonderingmoredetailsaboutthetalk.ThefirstquestionIwouldliketoknowiswherethetalkwillbeheld.Moreover,IwillappreciateifyoutellmehowlongthetalkwilllastsothatIcanarrangethecontentofmytalk.Thelastoneiswhowillcometothetalk.Thanksagainforyourinvitation.Lookingforwardtoyourreply!Yours,LiPing【詳解】1.題干解讀：本題為書信作文，要求根據(jù)已有的郵件進(jìn)行回復(fù)，開頭和結(jié)尾己經(jīng)給出。人稱用第一人稱，時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)用現(xiàn)在時(shí)。2.例文點(diǎn)評：例文按照書信格式，采用“感謝并接受邀請——詢問細(xì)節(jié)——再次感謝邀請”結(jié)構(gòu)，其中對三點(diǎn)細(xì)節(jié)的詢問（地點(diǎn)、時(shí)長、參與人員）是本文寫作重點(diǎn)。例文書信格式標(biāo)準(zhǔn)，層次分明，思路清晰，達(dá)到了題目寫作要求，是一篇優(yōu)秀的例文。3.高分亮點(diǎn)：短語：share…with，ontime，thanksfor，lookforwardto。句型：（1）Thankyousomuchforyourinvitation.（thankyoufor…句型）（2）AsabigfanofChinesefolkmusic,it’smygreathonortosharesomethinginterestingwithallofyou.（it作形式主語）（3）Moreover,IwillappreciateifyoutellmehowlongthetalkwilllastsothatIcanarrangethecontentofmytalk.（賓語從句）2019年浙江中考英語書面表達(dá)假定你是李平，最近收到意大利朋友Linda的電子郵件。以下是郵件的一部分，請你閱讀后回復(fù)，詞數(shù)80左右。Subject:From:LindaTo:LiPing…I’mreallylookingforwardtomeetingyourbrotherwhenhecomestoRomeinthesummer.Icanshowhimaroundthecity!Pleasetellmesomethingabouthim!Howoldishe?Whatdoeshelooklike?Whatkindofpersonisheandwhat’sheinterestedin?Hopetohearfromyousoon.Love,LindaSubject:From:LiPingTo:LindaDearLinda,_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiPingDearLinda,ThankyousomuchforagreeingtoshowmybrotheraroundRome.Nowletmetellyousomethingaboutmybrother.Heisthirteenyearsold,easy-goingandhumorous-wegetalongreallywell.Helovesdifferentcultures.Heisinterestedinmuseumsandlikestryinglocalfood.Mybrotherisalsocute.He’sofmediumheightwithshortstraightblackhair.HeisgoodatChinesekungfu,andusuallywearsT-shirtsandjeans.Thanksagainforyourhelp!Yours,LiPing【詳解】這篇作文要求我們對Linda的電子郵件進(jìn)行回復(fù)。寫作前，應(yīng)先閱讀Linda的來信，了解信中她想知道的事情，然后有針對性地給她進(jìn)行介紹。審題可知，Linda在信中提到她想要了解你哥哥的一些情況，她提出了三個(gè)問題，“他多大了”；“他是什么樣子的”；“他是怎樣的人以及他的興趣”，回信中應(yīng)對Linda的這些提問進(jìn)行回答，并根據(jù)表達(dá)的需要，補(bǔ)充一些細(xì)節(jié)內(nèi)容，使文章更加充實(shí)、豐富。短文應(yīng)使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)、第三人稱來敘述，注意謂語動詞的正確形式。寫作時(shí)應(yīng)注意：首先內(nèi)容應(yīng)符合題目要求，并且敘述要注意層次和結(jié)構(gòu)；其次應(yīng)注意英語的表達(dá)問題，應(yīng)符合英文句式的特點(diǎn)以及表達(dá)習(xí)慣，不能寫漢語式的英語?？梢院唵尉浣Y(jié)構(gòu)為主，穿插并列句、復(fù)合句以及其他復(fù)雜句式和結(jié)構(gòu)，提升作文檔次。同時(shí)語句之間使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分，使文意連貫、自然。【點(diǎn)睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，短文中作者以李平的身份給Linda寫了回信，介紹了哥哥的一些情況。首先短文內(nèi)容符合題目要求，按照Linda在來信中的提問，介紹了哥哥的年齡、外貌、興趣愛好等信息。其次短文使用了正確的時(shí)態(tài)和人稱，文章以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)、第三人稱單數(shù)來敘述，符合題目要求，尤其注意了謂語動詞第三人稱單數(shù)形式的變化，這是學(xué)生們學(xué)習(xí)中的一個(gè)難點(diǎn)。句式結(jié)構(gòu)完整，符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。短文中主要使用了簡單句、并列句和復(fù)合句，還使用了非謂語動詞，如動詞不定式、現(xiàn)在分詞等。文章中較好的句型和短語有：ThankyousomuchforagreeingtoshowmybrotheraroundRome.、Heisthirteenyearsold,easy-goingandhumorous-wegetalongreallywell.、Heisinterestedinmuseumsandlikestryinglocalfood.、He’sofmediumheightwithshortstraightblackhair.、HeisgoodatChinesekungfu,andusuallywearsT-shirtsandjeans.等等。2018年浙江中考英語書面表達(dá)假定你是李平(Tel:1361234567),家住濱海市人民路1號。你在美國旅行期間不慎遺失錢包,曾向賓館詢問。以下是賓館的答復(fù)郵件,請你閱讀后進(jìn)行回復(fù),詞數(shù)80左右。From:Mr.Smith,hotelmanagerHiLiPing,Thankyouforyouremailaboutyourlostwallet.Pleasesendmesomemoreinformation.Whendidyoustayinourhotelandwhatroomwereyouin?Pleasedescribeyourwallet.Whatwasinit?Sendmeyouraddressandphonenumber.Allthebest，Mr.SmithToMr.SmithSubject:LostwalletDearMr.Smith,______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiPingDearMr.smith,Thankyousomuchforyourreply.IstayedinyourhotelonJuly6,inRoom106,andIrememberhavingleftmynewblackwalletonthetable.MyIDcard,twocreditcards,aswellasa100-dollarbill,areinmywallet.WouldyoubekindenoughtosendmethewallettoNo.IRenminRoad,Binhai,Chinabymailifyoufindit?Pleasecallmeonmyphonenumber1361234567ifneeded.Thanksagain.Yours,LiPing【解析】本文是書信類文章，要求根據(jù)已有的郵件寫一封回信，信的開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出。因?yàn)橐笫歉鶕?jù)郵件進(jìn)行回復(fù)，所以考生需要對來信的內(nèi)容很好的審核，每個(gè)問題都需要回復(fù)。作文結(jié)構(gòu)為：感謝回復(fù)-清晰回答相關(guān)問題-提出歸還請求-再次感謝。寫作時(shí)一定要注意信件的格式，行文要連貫，表達(dá)要清楚；同時(shí)要注意語言的表述應(yīng)該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣；注意不要犯語法、句法以及搭配性錯(cuò)誤；要使用自己有把握的句式、單詞，詞匯、句式要豐富多樣，避免句式單一。最后檢查所用時(shí)態(tài)、人稱是否符合要求；檢查段落是否完整，句子表達(dá)是否準(zhǔn)確，語法、拼寫、標(biāo)點(diǎn)、移行、大小寫等方面是否有誤等。2017年浙江中考英語書面表達(dá)假定你是李平，請你對意大利交換生

Armino

的郵件進(jìn)行回復(fù)，詞數(shù)80詞左右．

To：Li?Ping

From：Armino

Hi?Li?Ping,

How?are?you？I?hope?you're?fine?and?not?too?busy!I?can't?wait?to?leave?for?China?next?week.But?could?you?tell?me?something?about?Chinese?table?manners？What?places?of?interest?can?I?visit?when?I?am?in?your?city？

See?you?soon!

To：Armino

From：Li?Ping

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Hi?Armino

Li?Ping.Hi?Armino,

IamgladyouwillcometoChina,nowIwilltellyousomethingaboutChinesetablemanners.It'sagoodideatobringagiftwithyou,suchas,somefruits,someflowers.Whenyoueat,youshoulduseyourrighthandwithchopstickstogetandreceivefood,andyouaren'tallowedtostickyourchopsticksintoyourfood.【高分句型一，注意beallowedtodosth,句型的使用】【要點(diǎn)一，中國的餐桌禮儀】

TherearemanyplacesofinterestinBeijing,suchas??TheForbiddenCity,theSummerPalace,theGreatWall,TiananmenSquare,ifyoucomehere,Iwillshowyouaroundtheplacesofinterest

【高分句型二，注意if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語從句的使用】．【要點(diǎn)二，北京的名勝古跡】

Yours,

Li?Ping.【解析】

高分句型一

youaren'tallowedtostickyourchopsticksintoyourfood.不允許你把筷子插入你的食物．beallowedtodosth被允許做某事．

高分句型二

ifyoucomehere,Iwillshowyouaroundtheplacesofinterest.如果你來到這里，我會帶你參觀這些名勝古跡．這是if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語從句，主句是一般將來時(shí)，從句用的是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)．【點(diǎn)評】本篇寫作需注意要求中所提供的要點(diǎn)，不可遺漏．需在平時(shí)積累相關(guān)的詞匯，寫作中注意語義通順，符合邏輯關(guān)系．上下文之間可以適當(dāng)使用連接詞．如but,so,then等．中考英語作文分類好詞好句1.感官活動與思維活動bedelightedindoing…做某事很愉快takeapleasureindoingsth.做某事很高興besickforone’shome懷念家鄉(xiāng)haveastrongdesiretodosth.對做某事有強(qiáng)烈的愿望。lookaroundfor…（在某地）查找/搜尋……catchsightof…看見……takealookat…看一眼…h(huán)aveagoodunderstandingof…對……能很好地理解considersb.（sth.）tobe認(rèn)為某人（某物）…cometoknow…開始認(rèn)識到……realizethat+從句認(rèn)識到……knowthat+從句知道……2.信件開頭常用語Iwasdelightedtoreceiveyourletter.我很高興收到你的來信。Yourlettercametomethismorning.我今天上午收到了你的來信。Itwasagreatpleasuretolearnthat。。。IhavereceivedyourletterofJulythe29th.我已經(jīng)收到了你7月29號的來信。I’mwritingtoyouaboutthelecturetobegivennextMonday.我給你寫信是想打聽下星期一講座的事。I’mwritingtoaskifyoucancomenextweek.我給你寫信是想問你下個(gè)星期能不能來？Howtimeflies！It’sthreemonthssinceIsawyoulast.光陰似箭，我們已經(jīng)三個(gè)月沒見面了。Thankyouforyourletter.謝謝你給我寫信。Inreplytoyourletterabouttheexhibitionthisyear…現(xiàn)在回答你上封信當(dāng)中關(guān)于今年的展覽事宜……Letmetellyouthat…讓我告訴你……3.信件結(jié)尾常用語Tomjoinsmeinsendingallgoodwishestoyouandyourfamily.我和湯姆祝福你們?nèi)摇imaginewe’llseeyouagain，soI’llendfornow.我想我們很快就會見面的，就寫到這兒吧。Pleaseremembermetoyourwholefamily.請代我向你全家問好。Givemybestregards（wishes）toyourmother.請代我向你媽媽致意。Bestwishes.致以最良好的祝愿。Withlove愛你的Wishyouapleasantjourney.祝你旅途愉快。Wishyousuccess.祝你成功。Wishyouthebestofhealth（luck）祝你健康（好運(yùn)）。LookingforwardtoyournextvisittoChina.歡迎您下次再來中國。Expectingtohearfromyouassoonaspossible.希望能盡快收到你的來信。4.其他Thereissomethingwrongwith……有問題。Ithappensthat…碰巧……Ittakesb.sometimetodosth.某人花費(fèi)一些時(shí)間做某事Itissaidthat…據(jù)說…befitfor…適合于…beshortof缺乏havenochoicebuttodosth.除了做某事外，別無選擇Ican’thelpit.我無法抑制自己。beinneedof…需要/缺少……bemistakenabout…把……搞錯(cuò)fallbehind落后于（…）catchupwith…緊跟/追趕……bewelcometodosth.歡迎做某事中考英語寫作滿分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)1、段落分明（文章結(jié)構(gòu)層次清晰）2、要點(diǎn)齊全（所有內(nèi)容不少不漏）3、時(shí)態(tài)恰當(dāng)（主要時(shí)態(tài)使用恰當(dāng)）4、結(jié)構(gòu)正確（句子結(jié)構(gòu)、搭配正確）5、觀點(diǎn)正確（合理的感受、看法、建議等）6、句式多樣（豐富的詞匯及句子結(jié)構(gòu)）7、過渡自然（適當(dāng)?shù)倪^渡詞，行文流暢）8、書寫規(guī)范（整潔清楚、格式規(guī)范）英語書面表達(dá)六步法1、審清題目?？忌鷦庸P前要審閱題目（包括圖畫內(nèi)容），提示詞，明確要求，確定格式。2、編寫提綱（列提綱）。編寫提綱是英語寫作中的重要環(huán)節(jié)，考生動筆前在審好題的基礎(chǔ)上先列好提綱。提綱也就是要點(diǎn)，考生可以列出一些詞組、短語或句型。3、擴(kuò)展成句。依據(jù)提綱，將要點(diǎn)擴(kuò)展成句?？忌M量注意人稱，動詞的時(shí)態(tài)、語態(tài)及詞性的變化。4、連句成篇。運(yùn)用適當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞、過渡性詞語及語句將擴(kuò)展好的句子連成完整的語篇。全文應(yīng)前后照應(yīng)，過渡自然。5、審查修改。完稿后考生要認(rèn)真審查修改，確保內(nèi)容符合題意；語法正確，句子符合英語的表達(dá)法，避免漢語式的英語句子；大小寫、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號準(zhǔn)確無誤。6、抄寫定稿。用清晰規(guī)范的英文字體將作文抄上答題卡，盡可能不要涂改。中考寫作萬能句型【開頭句】1.Ithink/AsfarasIknow/Inmyopinion/asfarasIamconcerned/frommypointofview 我認(rèn)為…Inmyopinion/Frommypointofview,weshouldknowmoreaboutgoodmanners. 在我看來，我們應(yīng)更懂禮貌。2.Itisclearthat/Clearly顯而易見...Itisclear(that)thiscityneedsmoreschools,busesandhospitals.顯然，這個(gè)城市需要更多學(xué)校、公車和醫(yī)院。Clearly,peoplewholaughmorearehealthier!顯然，笑得更多的人更健康！3.Asanoldsayinggoes...俗話說…Asanoldsayinggoes,“Goodhealthisworthmorethanwealth.”俗話說：“健康比財(cái)富更重要?！?.generallyspeaking一般來說；總的來說Generallyspeaking,Ithinklifeisbettertoday.總的來說，我認(rèn)為如今的生活更好了。5.Thetopicof…isbecomingmoreandmorepopularrecently.最近…話題越來越流行Thetopicofshoppingonlineisbecomingmoreandmorepopularre