2025屆高考英語復(fù)習(xí)讀后續(xù)寫練習(xí)：遲到的陪伴：馬克與母親的重聚+課件

高考英語讀后續(xù)寫語篇練習(xí)遲到的陪伴：馬克與母親的重聚1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫原文Threeyearsago,Markmovedoutofhismother’shouseafterlandingawell-payingjobinanothercity.Hethoughtliving1500milesawayfromhiselderlymother,Cassandra,wouldworkoutbecauseheplannedtovisithermonthly.Markstucktohisvisitingplanduringthefirstyear.However,withtheamountofworkincreasing,hecouldn’tfindtimetovisithismothermonthly.Hestartedtoonlyspeaktoheronthephone,tellingherabouthislife.Soon,MarkbecamebusyandmadeafewphonecallstoCassandra.Hedidn’tevenrememberthelasttimetheyspokeonthephone.Oneday,whileworkinginhisoffice,Markheardhisphonering.“Mom’s70thbirthday!”thereminderonhisphoneread.4續(xù)寫原文“Oh,dear.HowcanIforgetmymom’sbirthdayagain?”Markshookhisheadasheturnedthereminderalarmoff.“Ican’tkeepdisappointingherlikethis.LetmeseehowfastIcangettoherplace.”Aftercheckinghisworkschedule(日程計(jì)劃),Markrealizedthathecouldmakeittohismother’shousebytheeveningifhelefttheofficeinanhour.Hequicklyfinishedtheworkandlefttheofficewithoutwastinganotherminute.Onhisway,hestoppedatastoreandboughthismother’sfavoritecake.Healsoboughtherflowersandafewgifts.Althoughhewantedtocallher,Markthoughtitwouldbebettertosurpriseherbecausehewassurethatshewasn’texpectinghimtovisither.Afterall,thiswasthefirsttimethathehaddonesomethinglikethisinalongtime.5續(xù)寫原文Markfinallyarrivedatthemother’shouse.However,whenheknockedatthedoor,nooneanswered.Puzzled,heopenedthedoorwithhiskeyandentered.Nobodywasthere.Hesearchedthehouseworriedly,onlytofindanenvelopecoveredwithdustonthetable.Recognizinghismother’shandwriting(筆跡),Markopenedtheenvelopeatonce.ItturnedoutthatCassandrahadleftherhouseandjoinedalocalretirementcommunitybecauseshefeltlonely.6段首句Paragraph1：Intheletter,shealsoexpressedherloveforMarkandthehopeofseeinghim.Paragraph2：Afteraskingabouthismotheratthefrontdesk,hewasgladtoknowshewasstillthere.7Part2題目分析8續(xù)寫原文分析9文章講述了三年前，馬克在另一座城市找到高薪工作后搬離母親家，起初每月看望母親，后因工作繁忙逐漸減少聯(lián)系，甚至忘記母親生日。在母親70歲生日時(shí)，他想起此事，匆忙趕去母親家，卻發(fā)現(xiàn)母親因孤獨(dú)搬去了退休社區(qū)。信中母親表達(dá)了對(duì)他的愛和想見他的希望，他滿懷愧疚，決定立刻前往退休社區(qū)。點(diǎn)1：位于續(xù)寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語；點(diǎn)2：位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點(diǎn)3：位于續(xù)寫第二段段首，續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語；點(diǎn)4：文章結(jié)尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強(qiáng)調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點(diǎn)10續(xù)寫思路分析Para1：Intheletter,shealsoexpressedherloveforMarkandthehopeofseeinghim.在信中，她也表達(dá)了對(duì)馬克的愛以及想見他的期望。馬克讀著信，心里滿是愧疚與自責(zé)，眼眶漸漸濕潤了。他回想起過去那些忽略母親的日子，懊悔不已。他深知母親獨(dú)自生活的孤獨(dú)與對(duì)自己的思念，暗暗發(fā)誓一定要彌補(bǔ)過往的缺失。當(dāng)下，他不再猶豫，立刻收拾好情緒，仔細(xì)確認(rèn)了退休社區(qū)的地址，便匆忙出門，朝著那個(gè)能見到母親的地方趕去。一路上，他的腦海里不斷浮現(xiàn)出母親的面容，滿心期待又忐忑不安，只盼著快點(diǎn)見到母親，親口跟她說聲對(duì)不起。11續(xù)寫思路分析Para2：Afteraskingabouthismotheratthefrontdesk,hewasgladtoknowshewasstillthere.在向社區(qū)前臺(tái)詢問了母親的情況后，他很高興得知母親還在那兒。他順著工作人員指引的方向快步走去，心跳也不自覺地加快了。當(dāng)他來到活動(dòng)室門口，一眼就看到母親正坐在一群老人中間，臉上帶著淡淡的微笑，可那笑容里似乎藏著一絲落寞。馬克的喉嚨像是被什么哽住了，他輕輕喊了一聲“媽”。母親聞聲轉(zhuǎn)過頭來，先是一愣，隨后眼中滿是驚喜與激動(dòng)，立刻起身朝他走來。馬克快步迎上去，緊緊抱住了母親，嘴里不停地說著愧疚的話，母親則輕輕拍著他的后背，眼中也閃著淚花，這一刻，兩人的心又緊緊貼在了一起。12Part3范文呈現(xiàn)13范文呈現(xiàn)Intheletter,shealsoexpressedherloveforMarkandthehopeofseeinghim.Markfeltextremelyguiltywhenreadingtheletter.Hiseyesbecamemoistasherecalledallthedayswhenhehadneglectedhismother.Heregretteditdeeply.Knowinghowlonelyhismotherhadbeenlivingaloneandhowmuchshemissedhim,hemadeasilentvowtomakeupforhispastmistakes.Withoutanyhesitation,hequicklypulledhimselftogether,checkedtheaddressoftheretirementcommunitycarefullyandthenrushedouttoheadfortheplacewherehecouldmeethismother.Onhiswaythere,hismother'sfacekeptpoppingupinhismind.Hewaslookingforwardtoseeingherbutalsofeltabitnervous.Allhewantedwastoseehersoonandsaysorrytoherinperson.14范文呈現(xiàn)Afteraskingabouthismotheratthefrontdesk,hewasgladtoknowshewasstillthere.Hewalkedquicklyinthedirectionguidedbythestaff,andhisheartwasbeatingfasterunconsciously.Whenhereachedthedooroftheactivityroom,hesawhismothersittingamongagroupofelderlypeopleataglance.Therewasafaintsmileonherface,butitseemedthattherewasatouchoflonelinessinthatsmile.Mark'sthroatfeltchoked.Hecalledoutsoftly,"Mom."Hismotherturnedherheadatthesound,wasstunnedforamomentatfirst,andthenhereyeswerefilledwithsurpriseandexcitement.Sheimmediatelygotupandwalkedtowardshim.Markrushedforwardandhuggedhertightly,constantlysayingwordsofapology.Hismothergentlypattedhisback,withtearsshininginhereyes.Atthismoment,theirheartswereclosetogetheragain.15升級(jí)版范文呈現(xiàn)Intheletter,shealsoexpressedherloveforMarkandthehopeofseeinghim.Readingtheletter,anoverwhelmingsenseofguiltwashedoverMark.Withhiseyesmoistening,hecouldn'thelprecallingthosedayswhenhehadbeenoblivioustohismother'slonging.Howdeeplyheregrettedit!Awareofthelonelinesshismotherhadenduredwhilelivingaloneandtheyearningshehadforhim,hemadeasolemnvowtorectifyhispastnegligence.Withoutamoment'shesitation,hecomposedhimself,meticulouslyverifiedtheaddressoftheretirementcommunity,andthenhastenedtowardstheplacewherehehopedtoreunitewithher.Onhisway,theimageofhismother'sfacelingeredinhismindceaselessly.Bothanticipationandnervousnessfilledhisheart,asheeagerlyawaitedthemomenttomeetherandofferhissincereapologyinperson.16升級(jí)版范文呈現(xiàn)Afteraskingabouthismotheratthefrontdesk,hewasgladtoknowshewasstillthere.Hasteningalongthedirectionindicatedbythestaff,hisheartracedinvoluntarily.Asheapproachedthedooroftheactivityroom,theresathismotheramongagro