高考英語寫作練習(xí)(情景作文)課件

1、寫作練習(xí),情景作文,Objectives：At the end of the class, students will be able to,Write a complete composition to describe a process of an activity, making use of correct past tense , different sentence patterns .,假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三（1）班的學(xué)生李華，上學(xué)期你們班在密云學(xué)農(nóng)基地開展了為期一周的學(xué)農(nóng)活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下四幅圖的先后順序，寫一篇英文短文向某中學(xué)生英語報(bào)投稿，介紹你們本次學(xué)農(nóng)活動(dòng)的全過程。,看圖作

2、文寫作技巧,寫作步驟: 1. 審題- 體裁、時(shí)態(tài)、人稱、結(jié)構(gòu) 2. 列要點(diǎn)，細(xì)節(jié)，建立英文語庫為寫作做準(zhǔn)備 3. 組織篇章-合適的連接詞 4. 從句式，用詞上進(jìn)一步修改潤(rùn)色,文章結(jié)構(gòu)：,Beginning: Body: Ending:,General introduction about activity: When, who, what, where, how,Main deeds+ necessary details,Summary / feeling about the activity.,Beginning,When: Who: Where: What: How :,last term

3、,our class,go to Miyun,to work on the farm,spend a whole week,Beginning,Last term, our class went to MiYun to work on the farm. We spent a whole week there.,Body:picture 1,要點(diǎn)：what did they do? tidy the room; clean the room; 細(xì)節(jié)：How did they do this? .make the bed .sweep the floor .wipe the window,tid

4、ied,cleaned,made,swept,wiped,Picture 1,we began to tidy the room. some wiped the window, some swept the floor, and some made the bed.,Please discuss the pictures. 1.What did they do in each process? 2.How did they do ?,Picture 2,要點(diǎn)： what ,when and where did they do? in the fruit yard; begin to work;

5、 細(xì)節(jié)：How did they do this? pick . .carry. .load the basket,began,picked,carried,loaded,Picture 3,要點(diǎn)：what did they do? harvest the corn 細(xì)節(jié)：How did they do? .cut down the corn .pile .put in .,harvested,cut,piled,put,Picture 4,要點(diǎn)：what and where did they do ? get together hold a party in the open air 細(xì)節(jié)：

6、 sing songs dance clap,got,held,sang,danced,clapped,cleaned the room made the bed; swept the floor; wiped the window,came to the fruit yard and began to work; picked apples from the tree; carried and loaded the baskets onto the trucks,harvested the corn; cut the corn down; piled them; put them into

7、the baskets,got together to hold a party; Sang and danced happily; clapped heatedly,Word bank,Ending:,This was really an unforgettable experience for us all!,Feeling about the activity,unforgettable experience a meaning activity valuable experience tired but happy never forget it,Last term, our clas

8、s went to MiYun to work on the farm. We spent a whole week there. We began to tidy the room. Some wiped the window, some swept the floor, and some made the bed. we came to the fruit yard and began to work .Some of us picked apples from the trees, and some carried and loaded the baskets onto the truc

9、ks. we also helped with harvesting the corn. We cut down the corns, piled them and put them into the baskets. we got together to have a party in the open air. We sang and danced to celebrate the activity. Some even clapped heatedly . This was really an unforgettable experience for us all!,第一步修改：加連接詞

10、,表示時(shí)間關(guān)系先后的連詞：when , while, as, as soon as，on (upon), afterwards, then, after, the moment, hardlywhen, no soonerthan on the first day, then, on the last day in the morning, 表示遞進(jìn)關(guān)系的連詞：Besides, furthermore, whats more，,Last term we went to Miyun to work on the farm. We spent a whole week there. As soon

11、 as we arrived at the farm, we began to clean the room. Some wiped the window, some swept the floor, and some made the bed. After getting settled, we went to the fruit yard and began to work at once. Some of us picked apples and others loaded baskets of apples onto the trucks. Afterwards, we also he

12、lped with the corn harvest. We cut the corns off and piled them up and put them into the baskets. On the last day, we held a get-together party in the open air. We sang and danced happily to celebrate the activity. This was really an unforgettable experience for us all.,第二步修改：,簡(jiǎn)單句合并為 : 非限制性定語從句； 非謂語

13、動(dòng)詞形式 使用詞組、習(xí)語來代替一些單詞，以增加文采。 適當(dāng)?shù)穆?lián)想與發(fā)揮。,Last term, we went to Miyun to work on the farm. We spent a whole week there.,Last term, we went to Miyun to work on the farm, where we spent a whole week.,we went to the fruit yard and began to work at once.,We went to the fruit yard and got down to work at once

14、.,_,On the last day, we held a get-together party in the open air. We sang and danced happily to celebrate the activity.,On the last day, we held a get-together party in the open air, singing and dancing happily to celebrate the activity.,This was really an unforgettable experience for us all!,What

15、an unforgettable experience this activity was for us all!,Last term we went to Miyun to work on the farm, where we spent a whole week. As soon as we arrived at the farm, we began to clean the room. Some wiped the window, some swept the floor, and some made the bed. After getting settled, we went to

16、the fruit yard and got down to work at once. Some of us picked apples and others loaded baskets of apples onto the trucks. Afterwards, we also helped with the corn harvest. We cut the corns down ,piled them up and put them into the baskets. On the last day, we got together to held a party in the ope

17、n air, singing and dancing happily to celebrate the activity. What an unforgettable experience this activity was for us all!,Last term we went to Miyun to work on the farm,where we spent a whole week there. Upon our arrival, we were divided into groups of four and each group shared one room. All by

18、ourselves, we wiped the windows, swept the floor and made the bed. After getting settled, we went to the fruit yard and got down to work at once. Some of us picked apples and others loaded baskets of apples onto the trucks. While we were there, we also helped with the corn harvest. We cut the corns off ,piled them up and put them into the baskets. Never in my life had I ever seen so many corns lying about in the field. I felt it was great fun. On the last day, we got together in the open air to have a party,