2013屆高考英語一輪復習寫作專題講座課件：第十七講提綱作文.ppt

1、,題目要求 (2011四川高考)最近，某中學生英文報開設了“Afterclass Activities”的欄目。請你根據以下提示，為該欄目寫一篇英文稿件，并鼓勵同學們積極參加課外活動。 1你校開展課外活動的情況； 2你參加過的課外活動及給你帶來的益處； 3為同學選擇課外活動提出建議； 4為學校開展課外活動提出建議。,注意： 1詞數100左右； 2文中不得提及人名、校名及地名； 3稿件的開頭已為你寫好(不計入總詞數)。 Afterclass Activities Nowadays, afterclass activities are becoming more and more popular

2、in high schools._ _ _ _,技法指導 提綱作文要求考生根據給出的提示性文字，首先確定文章的中心思想，然后緊緊圍繞中心思想展開論述，表達主旨。它的特點是提綱既體現了文章的層次，又規(guī)定了各段大體的內容，為考生提供了一條寫作思路?？忌约铀妓?、計劃、整理即可成文。另外，它的限定性較大?？忌绻焕斫馓峋V所提示的內容，就會感到難以下筆。因此考生要掌握提綱作文的以下寫作技巧：,，,1認真審題和分析所給出的提綱，認清題目和提綱之間的關系，然后確定文章的主題、大致內容以及文體。 2每一個要點可以作為文章的一個段落層次。段落的展開應圍繞提綱的中心和內容，不能偏離，也不能任意增減。 3提綱只

3、是對文章的提示和概括，不是主題句。考生需要根據提綱的性質，寫出完整的、體現提綱主旨的句子，使之成為主題句，然后圍繞主題句進行擴展。,4收集材料支持主題句。材料可以是例證、親身經歷、名人名言、諺語警句等。應當注意的是，所選材料要與文章的主題相符，即要“扣題”，同時要具有典型性，能充分說明問題。在有多個例證的段落中，還要注意各個例證之間的連貫性。,第一步構建框架，清晰行文 謀篇布局,黃金模板 Afterclass Activities Nowadays, afterclass activities are becoming more and more popular in high schools

4、. In our school, there are various kinds of activities, for example, _ (列舉具體活動名稱). We enjoy them very much. _ (具體活動名稱) are my favorites which do me lots of good. Besides _ (益處一), they also _ (益處二),Here I have some suggestions. To students, _ (具體建議一); to schools, _ (具體建議二) Dear friends, please _ (發(fā)出呼

5、吁), which will not only make your school life colourful, but also improve your learning.,第二步打造亮句，增色文章 1在我們學校，擁有各種各樣的課外活動，例如藝術和 體育。 We can take various kinds of activities in our school, such as arts and sports. In our school, there are various kinds of activities, for example, arts and sports.,2踢足球和

6、閱讀故事都是我的最愛，因為它們給我?guī)砗?多好處。 Playing football and reading stories are my favorites which do me lots of good. I like both playing football and reading stories very much, for they do a lot of good to me.,第三步串句成文，保證流暢 Afterclass Activities Nowadays, afterclass activities are becoming more and more popular

7、 in high schools. In our school, there are various kinds of activities, for example, arts and sports. We enjoy them very much. Playing football and reading stories are my favorites which do me lots of good. Besides building my body and enriching my knowledge, they also free me from the heavy work of

8、 study.,Here I have some suggestions. To students, youd better choose the activities which interest you and suit you; to schools, they should organize more activities for students and leave students more time for activities by giving them less homework. Dear friends, please actively take part in aft

9、erclass activities, which will not only make your school life colourful, but also improve your learning.,(2012濟南模擬) 假設你是光明中學的李華，你想參加美國某大學在你校舉行的“赴美交換生”的選拔賽。請你根據以下要點，用英語寫一篇120150詞的自我陳述。要包含以下內容：,1參加目的； 2興趣特長； 3未來打算。 參考詞匯：交換生 exchange student _ _ _ _,參考范文： Dear Sir/ Madam, My name is Li Hua and I am now

10、 in Grade Three, Class Two from Guangming Senior High School. I want to be an exchange student of your school. I would like to apply to join the program. Firstly, my listening and speaking skills on English are good. In class, our English teacher often praises,me for my excellent English capabilities. Secondly, I am very interested in American culture. My parents and I once went to America on a trip and it left me a very good impression and I fell in love with this country. Lastly, as to my personality, I am an openminded young boy who is good at interpersonal rel