writing in unit 1

WRITINGINUNIT1,Alifewithoutafriendisalifewithoutasun.,ReadtheletterfromXiaoDongtoMissWangonPage7andanswerthetwoquestions:1.WhatsXiaoDongstrouble?2.WhydoesXiaoDongwritetheletter?,Workwithyourpartnerstomakealistofyourideasandgiveyourreasons.Afterawhile,youwillshowyourworkinclass.,Exchangeyourletterwithyourpartners,anddiscusswiththemtoimproveyourwriting.Maybe,thefollowingstandardscanhelpyou.,高分作文的要求1.緊扣主題2.要點齊全3.詞匯高級4.結構復雜5.銜接緊密6.表達多樣7.基本無誤8.卷面美觀,3.詞匯高級,Whichisbetter?,1.周末我們會有很多作業(yè)要做。,A.Wehaveendlesshomeworktodoattheweekend.B.Wehavealotofhomeworktodoattheweekend.,2.在他的父親下崗以后，他就沒有再上學了。,A.Afterhisfatherlosthisjob,hedidntattendschool.B.Afterhisfatherlosthisjob,hedidntgotoschool.,4.結構復雜他回來晚了，使得父親很生氣。Hecamebackhomelate.Itmadehisfatherangry.Hecamebackhomelate,andmadehisfatherangry.Hecamebackhomelate,makinghisfatherangry.Hecamebackhomelate,whichmadehisfatherangry.,5.銜接緊密（1）表選擇關系或對等關系的連接詞：eitheror，neithernor,or,aswellas,and,bothand。（2）表因果關系或對等關系的連接詞：therefore,so,asaresult,astheresultof，becauseof,dueto,owingto,thanksto等。（3）表時間順序的連接詞：themoment,assoonas,atfirst,then,later,meanwhile,atthebeginning,intheend,beforelong,forthefirst（second）time,theminute等。（4）表轉折關系的連接詞：yet,andyet,but,while,onthecontrary,ontheotherhand,however,atthesametime（然而）等。（5）表解釋說明的連接詞：thatis,thatistosay,inotherwords,suchas,forinstance,andsoon,etc.andthelike等。（6）表遞進關系的連接詞：notonlybut(also),whatsmore,whatsworse,besides,inaddition,worsestill,moreover,aboveall等。（7）表示總結的連接詞：inaword,onthewhole,inshort,briefly,inbrief,tosumup,inall等。.,6.表達多樣A.多樣化的句式；B.多樣化的詞匯.e.g.喜歡like,love,enjoy,befondof,beinterestedin,becrazyabout,8.卷面美觀漂亮的書寫，合理的布局，整潔