初中英語寫作思維導(dǎo)圖,掌握住,英語作文想不得滿分都難

1、中學英語寫作思維導(dǎo)圖，把握住，英語作文想不得滿分都難！一提到寫英 語作文，許多同學都無從下筆， 總是“信手寫來 ”，沒有 規(guī)劃；這樣 做的后果是，作文篇章 結(jié)構(gòu)不清楚，內(nèi)容 選擇 可能會脫離主 題，從而影響作文的 總體得分；老 師為 了幫忙大家解決 這 一難題 ， 帶來了英 語寫作思維導(dǎo)圖 ，讓你以后作文提筆前胸有成竹，次次 穩(wěn)拿滿分！一、寫作時需考慮哪些方面的因素？（ 1 ）本話題所需要的詞塊、語塊；（ 2 ）本話題的寫作模板結(jié)構(gòu)等；（ 3 ）本話題所涉及到的經(jīng)典名句、諺語等；二、困惑與計策困惑 1 ：寫什么？以 howtolearnwell. 為題，寫一篇作文，那么我們應(yīng)當如何入手開頭寫作

2、呢？來看看以下幾張思維導(dǎo)圖，能夠幫你整理好一篇作文的寫作框架；lo classlearn wellcard beginn¡qgspeakingbefore classeadixgstenipg困惑 2 ：如何選材？即使知道了寫作框架，但在補充框架時又會遇到另一個困惑：如何選材？以下是一些關(guān)于寫作選材的建議：1 選定英語思維導(dǎo)圖各區(qū)域所需的詞塊和語塊；2 將各區(qū)域的詞塊和語塊按段落寫成連貫的語篇；3 對比思維導(dǎo)圖自我批改，留意人稱、時態(tài)語態(tài)、句型結(jié)構(gòu)的正確使用；困惑 3 ：如何表達？許多同學在寫作時，使用的句式比較單一，因此文章大多雷同，缺乏個性； 針對這些問題，我們可以從以下幾個方面

3、改進：1 對相同意思，留意不同句式的表達法，選擇更好的句式；2 短文寫作，表達力求精悍、生動、豐富，防止重復(fù)用一樣的句式；3 特殊留意使用承上啟下的詞語和句子；三、思維導(dǎo)圖在英語作文寫作中的應(yīng)用實例寫作流程：1. 審題、理清思路：考慮寫什么（選擇關(guān)鍵詞，搭建作文框架）；2. 選擇詞語：依據(jù)話題和作文框架選用所需要的語料（詞塊和語塊）；3. 遣詞造句：依據(jù)思維導(dǎo)圖中的語料，用合適的句型寫作；4. 語篇定稿：依據(jù)思維導(dǎo)圖修改潤色作文緊扣主題、表達精確，關(guān)聯(lián)自然，語篇流暢；實例 1 ：假如你有兩位同學芳芳和明明，參與了上星期二學校組織的英語演講競賽，他們的不同表現(xiàn)使你深有感受；請你依據(jù)以下表各中的內(nèi)

4、容提示寫一篇英語短文；芳芳明明我1. 認為自己英語好，不需要努力；花費時間選擇競賽用的美麗衣服2. 因預(yù)備不足，太緊急，而沒有完成演講；1. 努力學習，向別人請教；賽前應(yīng)當兩天腿受傷，但向明不舍棄明學2. 在競賽中表現(xiàn)習良好參考詞匯：英語演講競賽english speech contest要求：1. 詞數(shù)： 80100個2. 短文開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)3. 要點齊全，行文連貫，可適當發(fā)揮last tuesday fangfang and mingming entered the english speech contest in our school. what they did make

5、me think deeply.before the contest, fangfang thought .范文 1last tuesday fangfang and mingming entered the english speech contest in our school. what they did make me think deeply.before the contest, fangfang thought her english was the best. so shespent lots oftime picking some beautiful clothes for

6、herself instead of trying to work hard at english for the contest. as a result, she didn't do well in the contest because shehadn't got ready for the contest.but mingmingwasdifferentfromfangfang.he workedhardat englishand asked others for help. especially, his leg was hurt twodaysbeforetheco

7、ntest, but he nevergaveup. intheend, he won the contest.no doubt, from mingming we should learn : no pains, no gains. from now on, i mush learn frommingming.范文 2last tuesday fangfang and mingming entered the english speech contest in our school. what they did make me think deeply.beforethecontest,fa

8、ngfangthoughtshe wasgoodatenglish, and thatshedidn'tneedtospendmoretimeon the contestatall.shealwaysconsideredpicking somebeautiful clothesforthecontest. but mingmingwasdifferent.he worked hardatenglish and askedothersforhelp. though hehad hurt his leg two days before the contest, he never gave

9、up.in the end, fangfang didn't get ready well enough. at the contest,shewas so nervous that sheshefailed. but mingming won because of his efforts.inmyopinion,weshould learnfrommingming:workhardand make progress every day.范文 3lasttuesdayfangfangandmingmingenteredtheenglishspeechcontestdeeply.inou

10、rschool.whattheydidmakemethinkbeforethecontest,fangfangthoughtthatshe wasgoodat english. so it wasn't necessary to spend lots of time preparing forthecontest. whatsheonlythought waswhatclothesshould wear, which makeherselfmorebeautifulatthecontest.atlast, shewas too nervous to finishthecontestbe

11、cause shedidn'tget ready very well.instead,mingminghadbeen workingatenglish and asking others for help. what's more, he had hurt his leg two days beforethe contest. but he had never given up. as the result, he won the contest.ithink weshould learnfrommingming:workhardandnever give up.實例 2 ：生

12、活是豐富多彩的，沒有愛好的人生是不完整的人生；親愛的同學，在生活中，你有什么愛好愛好嗎？這個愛好愛好是怎樣培育起來的？它給你的生活增加了哪些顏色？請你以“ my hobby”為題，結(jié)合自己的親身經(jīng)受寫一篇短文；（詞數(shù)80 個左右）要求：1. 語句通順，合乎規(guī)律，書寫規(guī)范；2. 文中不得顯現(xiàn)真實的姓名和學校名稱；范文 1reading is my hobby. when i was seven years old, one day, i reada comicbookabouthowa girlbeata wolf.i wasmoveddeeply by the girl.from then o

13、n i became interested in reading books.readingcan notonly killthetime, butalso,moreimportantly, helpimprovemyskills.andbookscanteachmehowtobea good person. books can also solve many problems for me.inaword,readingbookscanmakemylifecolorful.iwillread more good books to improve myself in the future.范文 2my favourite hobby is watching movies in the cinema. three years ago, while i was watching the adventure 3d film avatar in the cinema, i was attracted by the beautiful sights. it was so creative that itmade me enj