正課課件lesson1-議核心段筆記版

1、段的擴(kuò)：-學(xué)為段的擴(kuò)一篇包括一個(gè)介紹段 ，2-3段和一個(gè)總結(jié)段。一般來說，官最看重的段質(zhì)量，因?yàn)閺淖謹(jǐn)?shù)和內(nèi)容來說都占到了一篇的絕大部分。因此，在段的擴(kuò)：-學(xué)為段的擴(kuò)一篇包括一個(gè)介紹段 ，2-3段和一個(gè)總結(jié)段。一般來說，官最看重的段質(zhì)量，因?yàn)閺淖謹(jǐn)?shù)和內(nèi)容來說都占到了一篇的絕大部分。因此，在學(xué)習(xí)任何一種具體題型之應(yīng)該了如何順暢地?cái)U(kuò)段。從一個(gè)topic sentence到一個(gè)完段的過程很多方法，此課件的任務(wù)和目的就大家如何連貫流暢地把一topic sentence往下降，最終形成閉環(huán)的論證邏輯 1.與題目緊密相關(guān)，不能隨心所欲一般來自原題觀點(diǎn)改寫(不可避免會(huì)重復(fù)，不用擔(dān)心 )或者稍微往下細(xì)化2.必須

2、是一個(gè)自己有把握能擴(kuò)展的 方向，否則寫不動(dòng)3.大部分情況下Topic sentence 只引出一個(gè)具體的idea，然后針對(duì)這個(gè)idea進(jìn)擴(kuò)展。但有的時(shí)候方向給得比較寬，能引出 2個(gè)以上的分論點(diǎn)。這主要是為字?jǐn)?shù)或者回應(yīng)題目的要求1第案最合常用一個(gè)影響/結(jié)果來作TS + 原因解釋/降層解釋 + 舉例（多狀語從句或者修飾名詞 ）+ （如果需要可以重原因解-文化商業(yè)化帶來的第案最合常用一個(gè)影響/結(jié)果來作TS + 原因解釋/降層解釋 + 舉例（多狀語從句或者修飾名詞 ）+ （如果需要可以重原因解-文化商業(yè)化帶來的壞處（牢記背誦Usingtraditionalculturesasmoney-makingt

3、ourist attractions maydestroy(Thisis) because the waythey are originally performedneedstobealteredtotheneedsoftourists Forle,inorderto help audien easilyunderstand happilyenjoythetraditionalMaori Haka danceinNewZealand, the moveshave besimplified andtheesmoreentertaining,which as aresult leads tolos

4、sofauthenticityof thetraditional原因解-鼓勵(lì)學(xué)生給老師評(píng)Encouragingstudentstoradetheirteacherscontributestoimprovingquality. (Thisispartlybecause) compla sfromtheformerhelpthelattereof the defects heir teaching methods. For ex le, if a large proportion of students complain about the difficulty of math classes,

5、the teacher will improve the situation by making more explanation or slowing down the pace of learning. Apart from t, as importantdeci sincludingmeritreviews,payraises,andpromotionsarebasedinparton these evaluations, teachers must treat feedbacks carefully and do everything sible to make improvement

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7、is t children develop faster so lly針對(duì)前面so lly的解釋，省略了Thisisbecause)Theymakefriendsandlearnhowtogetonwithotherchildrenofasimilarage ( 沒有舉例，但是用上學(xué)在家待著作為對(duì)比)Thisisoftennot sibleathome because theyaretheonly child, or because their brothers or sisters are older or younger自己練不可否認(rèn)不同年紀(jì)的人有不同的購(gòu)物 。（這是因?yàn)椋╇S著年紀(jì)增長(zhǎng)，人

8、們的需求和 在不斷變化，這導(dǎo)致他們花錢在完全不同的商品或者服務(wù)上。比潮流的鞋子和衣服。中年人的錢主要被用來改善生活質(zhì)量比如更大的房子和好的汽車，而老年人則只愿意花錢在健康相關(guān)的產(chǎn)品上自己練在家工作效率低 因?yàn)橛蟹中暮透蓴_ 比如說寵物或者小孩3On the other hand, many peop e ve t a good mentality, to a great extent, determines the results of sports competitions More specifically, athletes aiming at winningmedalsmustbeabl

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11、erscanbrowseforaslongastheywithoutpre refromsalesassistants Thismeans tshopperseastute and knowledgeable about the products they are buying Because of the greater competition involved rading within a large market, sellers may have to improve thequalityoftheirproducts 最后并沒有舉例而是針對(duì)前面的三種細(xì)化進(jìn)一步分自己練習(xí)-家長(zhǎng)對(duì)孩子

12、的影不得不承認(rèn)，家長(zhǎng)對(duì)孩子有著巨大的 影響。具體來說，家長(zhǎng)塑造了子的性格，生書而不是玩電和價(jià)值觀 。比如說，如果家長(zhǎng)把空閑時(shí)間用來或者瀏覽社交網(wǎng)絡(luò)，孩子也會(huì)培養(yǎng)閱讀而不是沉迷于虛擬世界4網(wǎng)絡(luò)購(gòu)物讓消費(fèi)者的控制 -具體來說-價(jià)格對(duì)比/購(gòu)物時(shí)間/不受銷售的壓力 比如說，那些要照顧嬰兒們網(wǎng)絡(luò)購(gòu)物讓消費(fèi)者的控制 -具體來說-價(jià)格對(duì)比/購(gòu)物時(shí)間/不受銷售的壓力 比如說，那些要照顧嬰兒們可以第二種方案最簡(jiǎn)單的擴(kuò)展方仍然用一個(gè)影響/結(jié)果來作為TS（因?yàn)檫壿嬜銐蚯逦?，不太需要解釋?+ 直接舉例（多用狀語從句或者修飾名詞） + 再次舉例互聯(lián)網(wǎng)的最大好處（牢記背誦The greatest advantage o

13、f the ernet is t it makes communication much easier bet n people For exle,when studyingabroad, ernationalstudentswillbe less bothered by the problem of homesickness, as they are enabled by instantcommunicationtools,suchasFacetime,totalkwiththeirfami sonadailybasis In addition, people suffering from

14、the same disease are able to establish an online community where they can share inspiring stories of fighting diseases as well asuseful information for 5It is evident t living a simple life makes great contributions to combating environmental challenges For exle,ifpeoplechoosetospendholidaysathome r

15、eading a classic novel rather n having a trip abroad, they will help reduce greenhouse gases emitted by the flights and vehicles used during their journeys Similarly,insteadof pursuingthelatestfashiontrend, peoplewho purchaseclothes and shoes It is evident t living a simple life makes great contribu

16、tions to combating environmental challenges For exle,ifpeoplechoosetospendholidaysathome reading a classic novel rather n having a trip abroad, they will help reduce greenhouse gases emitted by the flights and vehicles used during their journeys Similarly,insteadof pursuingthelatestfashiontrend, peo

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23、eforms 1) Itislikely tourneighboursinspacewouldlendus their far more advanced technologies to solve a series of problems on the Earth For ex le, environmental pollution could be eradicated and life-threatening diseasescouldbecuredifwearetechnologicallyimprovedbyoura nfriends 2) Whatswiththeirhelpand

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26、,andifrelyingonthemselvesitwouldbeim sibleformanyyoungpeopletopay a de it and a mortgage 2) Secondly, people want a better quality of life for their fami s Thismeans tbothparentsusuallyneedtoworkfull-time,andtheydependonsupportfromgrandparentsandbabysittersforchild自己練住在樓的人們享受一些好處。首先，他們有更好的視野景觀。比說，他們

27、可以看到城市的全貌以及城市外面的自然風(fēng)景。其次住享受更好的生活環(huán)境，因?yàn)榧依飼?huì)有更好的光線和 通風(fēng)，這對(duì)保持房間生有很大幫助舉辦奧運(yùn)會(huì)的好（TS有預(yù)告的效果Holding the Olympic Games allows the host country to reap benefits erms of economic grow nd public health With regard to the former , millions of people are attracted to the host county either to watch world-class sports g

28、ames or to experience localculture, bothofwhich bringinbillionsofdollarsincashandcreatealargenumber ofjobopportunities Theothercontributionmadebyhostingthis ernationalevent t an erest in sports will be developed he public as the sports facilities and rodu knowledge of various sports As a result, they wouldemorephysically active andthelevelofhealth eralpopulationc