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1、2021/8/9 星期一1讀寫任務訓練2021/8/9 星期一2一、復習歸納2021/8/9 星期一3 The writer tells us that the parents as well as the pupil and the teacher should do something about education. To start with, parents should provide friendly atmosphere for their children by communicating with them. Next, parents should help their

2、children become more independent. In addition, children should become more responsible with the help of their parents as they grow older. Parents Help Is Important2021/8/9 星期一4 I do agree with what the author says. The parents, the pupil and the teacher should be responsible for childrens education.

3、 Parents should provide their children with friendly atmosphere by listening to their children, talking with them and encouraging them to face difficulty. When I was a little child I often asked my parents questions. Instead of paying no attention, my parents always listened carefully to what I was

4、saying and tried to explain everything by giving many examples. 2021/8/9 星期一5 To sum up, parents are responsible for their children. Parents help is important. 2021/8/9 星期一6讀寫任務型寫作模板 標題第一段:第二段:第三段: 請根據(jù)以上范文歸納讀寫任務型寫作模板:概括所給短文內(nèi)容要點約60字過渡詞引出主題句-自己的觀點-理由 約80字總結(jié)句 約10字2021/8/9 星期一7標題標題是段落中心思想的精練表達形式。根據(jù)所寫短文的

5、內(nèi)容，概括出中心思想然后加以提煉，擬定標題；Is time more valuable than moneyOn SmokingHow to make friendsHappinessIs watching TV a good thing?My view of money / time / pollutionMy attitude toward building a car factory2021/8/9 星期一8第一段：概括所給短文內(nèi)容要點注意：利用原文中所給的語言材料，用自己的話來寫；概括后的文章意思要通順，行文要連貫。寫作具體方法和要求:第一段概括要做到開門見山: 例如: Accordi

6、ng to the passage, we knowThis article is mainly aboutThe writer states that2. 第一段要做到有層次感: 必要時概括段中運用 firstly,secondly,lastly, 或but, so等來列出原文作者觀點或內(nèi)容。3. 第一段概括要抓住要點,語言精練: 2021/8/9 星期一9 The writer tells us that the parents as well as the pupil and the teacher should do something about education. To star

7、t with, parents should provide friendly atmosphere for their children by communicating with them. Next, parents should help their children become more independent. In addition, children should become more responsible with the help of their parents as they grow older. Parents Help Is Important2021/8/

8、9 星期一10第二段:過渡詞引出主題句-自己的觀點-理由開頭用語：I do agree with the authorIn some way, I agree with , butThis opinion sounds right but is hardly practical.It is definitely not like that. As a matter of fact, From my personal angle aloneIn my opinion,From my personal point of viewAs far as Im concerned 2021/8/9 星期一

9、11第三段最后一段 : 總結(jié)句開頭用語：In conclusion,In short,To make a long story short,In general,In a word,In belief,On the whole,All in all,2021/8/9 星期一12Examples:1) All in all, the development of children is not only the responsibility of their parents, but also the responsibility of the whole society.2) In a wor

10、d, smoking harms yourselves as well as your neighbors, so it should be strictly forbidden.3) In conclusion, we value money but cant put money above everything else.2021/8/9 星期一13二、讀寫訓練2021/8/9 星期一14讀寫任務閱讀下面的短文， 然后按照要求寫一篇150詞左右的英語短文Let children learn to judge their own work. A child learning to talk

11、doesnt learn by being corrected all the time; if corrected too much, he will stop talking. He notices a thousand times a day the difference between his language and others language. Bit by bit, he makes the right changes to make his language like other peoples. In the same way, children learn to do

12、all the other things. They learn to talk, run, climb, ride a bicycle by comparing their own behaviors with those of more skilled people, and slowly make the needed changes. But in school teachers never give a child a chance to find out his mistakes for himself, even fewer chances for him to correct

13、himself. They do it all for him. Teachers act as if the student would never notice a mistake if they did not point out it to him. They act as if the student would never correct it unless he was made to. Soon he becomes dependent on the teacher. Let the student do it himself. Let him work out, with t

14、he help of other children if he wants it, what this word means and what the answer is to that problem.寫作內(nèi)容1）概括短文的內(nèi)容要點， 該部分的字數(shù)大約60詞左右2）就“學生的學習錯誤該不該改正”這個主題發(fā)表你的看法，至少包括以下的內(nèi)容要點，該部分的字數(shù)大約60詞左右； a)以英語學習為例，簡述你學習過程經(jīng)常出現(xiàn)的語言錯誤； b)你是如何看待自己的語言錯誤； c)你的老師如何對待你的語言錯誤； d)你對老師的做法持什么看法？為什么？寫作要求你可以使用實例或其他論述方法支持你的論點，也可以參照閱

15、讀材料的內(nèi)容，但不要抄襲閱讀材料中的句子。評分標準 概括的準確性、語言的規(guī)范性、內(nèi)容的合適性以及篇章的連貫性。2021/8/9 星期一15讀寫任務步驟:（一）審讀閱讀材料尋找作者的論點,論據(jù)和結(jié)論（二）概括原文觀點轉(zhuǎn)述作者的論點，論據(jù)和結(jié)論（三）提出自己觀點贊成或反對（四）論證自己觀點用事例論證自己的觀點（五） 得出結(jié)論 2021/8/9 星期一16審讀閱讀材料，整理短文說理思路（找出短文的論點，論據(jù)和結(jié)論）：1.論點：Let children learn to judge their own work.任務（一）審讀閱讀材料2021/8/9 星期一172.論據(jù)：1). A child lea

16、rning to talk doesnt learn by being corrected all the time; if corrected too much, he will stop talking. He notices a thousand times a day the difference between his language and others language. Bit by bit, he makes the right changes to make his language like other peoples. 正面論據(jù)2). In the same way,

17、 children learn to do all the other things. They learn to talk, run, climb, ride a bicycle by comparing their won behaviors with those of more skilled people, and slowly make the needed changes. 正面論據(jù)3). But in school teachers never give a child a chance to find out his mistakes for himself, even few

18、er chances for him to correct himself. They do it all for him. Teachers act as if the student would never notice a mistake if they did not point out it to him. They act as if the student would never correct it unless he was made to. Soon he becomes dependent on the teacher. 反面論據(jù)2021/8/9 星期一183. 結(jié)論：L

19、et the student do it himself. Let him work out, with the help of other children if he wants it, what this word means and what the answer is to that problem.2021/8/9 星期一19任務（二）概括原文觀點-客觀簡要地轉(zhuǎn)述作者的論點，論據(jù)和結(jié)論：論點 Let children learn to judge their own work.Let children learn to decide if they have any learnin

20、g mistakes in their work.Childrens learning mistakes should not be corrected by their teachers.The writer says that childrens learning mistakes should not be corrected by their teachers.2021/8/9 星期一20論據(jù)1).+2). A child learning to talk doesnt learn by being corrected all the time; if corrected too mu

21、ch, he will stop talking. He notices a thousand times a day the difference between his language and others language. Bit by bit, he makes the right changes to make his language like other peoples. In the same way, children learn to do all the other things. They learn to talk, run, climb, ride a bicy

22、cle by comparing their own behaviors with those of more skilled people, and slowly make the needed changes. Children learn by comparing their behaviors, including speech, with those of more skilled people. 2021/8/9 星期一21論據(jù)3). But in school teachers never give a child a chance to find out his mistake

23、s for himself, even fewer chances for him to correct himself. They do it all for him. Teachers act as if the student would never notice a mistake if they did not point out it to him. They act as if the student would never correct it unless he was made to. Soon he becomes dependent on the teacher. Bu

24、t in school teachers point out and correct their students mistakes for them too often, making the students dependent on them.2021/8/9 星期一22結(jié)論Let the student do it himself. Let him work out, with the help of other children if he wants it, what this word means and what the answer is to that problem.So

25、 children should learn by correcting their own mistakes and helping each other instead of having their mistakes corrected by their teachers.2021/8/9 星期一23任務（三）提出自己觀點 -過渡詞引出主題句-自己的觀點(贊成或反對)-理由This opinion sounds right but is hardly practical. In real school learning situations, especially in learning

26、 a foreign language like English, without teachers correction all the way, beginners will repeat their mistakes without realizing it.2021/8/9 星期一24任務（四）論證自己觀點-用事例論證自己的觀點： a)以英語學習為例，簡述你學習過程經(jīng)常出現(xiàn)的語言錯誤； b)你是如何看待自己的語言錯誤； c)你的老師如何對待你的語言錯誤； d)你對老師的做法持什么看法？為什么？I, for example, liked to use words (that are) t

27、oo formal for a students composition. But.Now,2021/8/9 星期一25任務（五） 得出結(jié)論So teachers should be encouraged to correct their students mistakes as soon as possible.2021/8/9 星期一26Students Mistakes Should Be Corrected By Their Teachers From the passage we know that childrens learning mistakes should be corr

28、ected by themselves. Children learn by comparing their behaviors, including their speech, with more skilled people . But in school teachers always point out and correct their students mistakes, making the students dependent on them. So children should learn by correcting their own mistakes and helpi

29、ng each other instead of having their mistakes corrected by their teachers. ( 65 words) 2021/8/9 星期一27 This opinion sounds right but is hardly practical. As far as Im concerned, in real school learning situations, especially in learning a foreign language like English, without teachers correction al

30、l the way, beginners will repeat their mistakes without realizing it. I, for example, liked to use words ( that are ) too formal for a students composition. But I never realized it until my teachers repeatedly replaced them with simple words. Now, I can write naturally in simple English. In conclusi

31、on, teachers should be encouraged to correct their students mistakes as soon as possible. 2021/8/9 星期一28We Need Teachers Help The author says that childrens learning mistakes should not be corrected by their teachers . He takes a child learning to talk as an example . And he believes that children w

32、ould become dependent on the teacher if they were made to correct their mistakes with the teachers help. So children should be allowed to work out their problems all by themselves. It is definitely not like that. As a matter of fact , without the teachers help we cant make rapid progress. For exampl

33、e, my pronunciation was poor. I used to pronounce the word “ work” as “ worker”. I was worried about it very much. My teacher gave me a lot of drills and I made the right change at last. So you see, what it would be like for us to learn English without teachers !2021/8/9 星期一29Should We Judge by Ours

34、elves? The author argues that children should be allowed to learn to judge their own work. Children learn to do all the things by comparing themselves with others, and make some adjustment slowly. However, once corrected to much, they will lose independence. So students should be encouraged to solve

35、 the problems on their own.2021/8/9 星期一30 In my opinion, in a way, the author is right. As far as Im concerned, making language mistakes is inevitable in school. Some of the mistakes, such as forgetting “s” or “ed”, can be easily found and corrected by students. But others, like grammar mistakes, can be c